The untold stories….

[Charles Legend]

~Prologue

‘Ah, now lets see who I can drop from the Pay roll that my sweet dreariest mother left behind after her sudden death, Ah yes Dan, The Magikarp salesman’ thought Giovanni as the new leader of team rocket poured a glass of red wine.

“You wanted to see me Sir?” Asked Dan as he was dragged in to Giovanni’s office by two of the newsiest recruits.

“Yes I did, Dan, As of now your officially fired, I find your methods of making money rather useless, and I don’t see why mother had even bothered to have you on her pay roll anyways….Giovanni snarled., as he held his liter to Dan’s contact, then threw it in to the waste bin.

“But, sir, I have been one of madam boss….. But before Dan could finish the male grunt punched his lights out.

“Throw the bum out and then report to the helicopter that well take you to the Training facility on five island.” Giovanni said then, took a sip of his red wine. As he thought ‘Sheer Dan was useful for my mother’s plans but as of late Dan as well as some of the top Admins have been getting rather annoying and ussless for my plans.’
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Any replies and Suggestions would be nice, even the harsh of critics saying I suck and should just give up trying to write fanfics... =/

~Charles legend

[darktyranitar]

Um, nice starting? ;^_^

Anyway, I think this chapter is way too short. A lot of thing are unanswered in the first chapter, so maybe you would post it in the next chapter?

I will wait for the next chapter to see how this story goes. BTW Charles Legend, if you want to write a good fanfic, you must not give up even though you get not so good comments for your fanfic. Well, keep writing! :smilie:

[Charles Legend]

Um, nice starting? ;^_^

Anyway, I think this chapter is way too short. A lot of thing are unanswered in the first chapter, so maybe you would post it in the next chapter?

I will wait for the next chapter to see how this story goes. BTW Charles Legend, if you want to write a good fanfic, you must not give up even though you get not so good comments for your fanfic. Well, keep writing! :smilie:

why thank you, yes I know it is Short however, that was only the Prologue, Chapter one is a little longer but not much. for you see I want to keep the Mysterious aura to my fanfic, besides that if I revealed to much I would not have any good cliffhangers you see.

Thanks, but the truth is I not giving up anytime soon, I was just annoyed thats all.

~Charles Legend

[Charles Legend]

Chapter 1 (rated Pg for vilence)

“Ah, I can’t believe my Parents want me to marry that Witch!’ James sighed as he was walking down the poorest side of Celadon city with his pet Growlithe.

Just then a man with black messy hair wearing very worn out cloths that looked as thought they were old rages sown together. Blocked James’ path.

“Hey you look like a bright young man, Do I have a deal for you! I well sell you a Koffing for $500.00 there revered as one of the strongest pokémon known to mankind, believe me kid this is one pokémon that we set you on your way to become a powerful trainer….” the man said to James.

“Well, if Koffing are as powerful as you say they are perhaps it well help me get rid of my little witch problem at home.” James said as he pulled a 500.00 bill out of his wallet and gave to the man who handed him a Pokéball.

“Oh, I am sorry I forgot to intrudes myself I am Dan, and as you can see I am nothing more then a homeless bum…” Dan said as he was really thinking ’Ha so hen really fell for it, what an idiot.’

“Thanks Dan…”James said.

“Oh, no I the one who should be thanking you, Michael Jackson. Dan said with a grin on his face and walked away.

My name not Michael Jackson! James yelled after the salesman named Dan.

James sighed and walked to the park and a Bellsprout walked out of a bush in a drunken maner.

James then thought he should give his new Koffing a try, however when James threw the ball it landed on the grass un opened, the Bellsprout then started to examine the ball then ate it and some how got absorbed in to the ball.

James then realized that Dan had tricked him. but never the less he caught his first wild pokémon with out the help of his Parents or that Annoying witch. And picked the pokéball up.

James then herd someone clapping so he turned around and was surprised at who he saw…

‘No, not her. I have enough on my mind with ot that witch showing up with a picnic basket.’ James thought as he looked with pure annoyances at a young woman in a very expensive looking dress.

“Ah, James I well make a man out of you yet or die trying” the young woman named Jessibell said as she set up a blanket on the Ground and made James sit down.

Just as James was about to take a bit out of his sandwich, heavy footsteps shook the ground and when James looked behind Jessibell he saw a very large and very filthy looking Snorlax, who sat down on top of Jessibell trapping her under it as it began to eat the food she had made for James including the sandwich that had been in James’ hand.

The snorlax then used a mega pouch on James and he went flying in to a bush just as a man riding a mortar cycle showed up.

“He, things are going according to plans” the man said and threw an Ultra ball at the very filth snorlax then after it was captured, the man told Jessibell that her usefulness has ended and the man sent out his Persian to tare her to shreds . After about five minutes the man recalled his Persian and rode away somewhere in the city.

James was then a waken by a some one punching his jaw.

“How could you murder her James?” Yelled Jessibell’s brother.

“first of all Botch, I was knocked unconscious by a very filthy snorlax, second of all I may not love her but I would never dream of commenting murder.” James protested as he sat up and faced his rival Butch square in the eyes.

“My names not Botch, and you know it, Michael Jackson!” Butch Sneered at James.

James slowly got up and thought Butch was still yelling at him as he walked away.

Little d9id ether of them realize that a being that looked sort of like a tree kangaroo had seen and herd every thing, the ghostly Kangaroo, decided to bring Jessibell back to life for the time being, however it well come at a very high price…

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Hehe, yeah James is an Idoit at times, however he was luck to be alive. oh and jessie and Meowth well show up soon its just that I need to adress some things consering his past befor he joins Team rocket....

~Charles legend