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17th December 2005, 06:11 AM
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Elite Trainer
Re: Imprison (Humour, one-shot, extremely short)
Lol, that was amusing. And with a touch of black humor, and the whole this-joke-seems-meaningful-but-really-it's-just-random thing. To suit the randomness, two comments: "Imprison" seems too serious as a title to fit the rest of it. But that could be intended, just to surprise readers when they read (although it says humour and all). And the second comment is that I wonder if there are any implications behind "stuck the Eevee into prison for as long as the Vulpix lived." Does it indicate that the Eevee was stuck into prison merely to please the Vulpix? Probably looking too deep into this.
So, my reply is longer than the fic (by fourteen words so far). Better stop now.
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