Quote Originally Posted by darktyranitar
The story is taking a dark turn...

So, it seem that Surge and his Raichu are quite evil... Didn't know they could be that bad. I hope they received what they deserved for their crime.

It's quite interesting to see that Ash's grandfather is Blaine. He seems to be a lot more different than the one in the anime series. He seem to have some agenda of his own. Wonder if he would produce more clone, hence starting a clone war.

Anyway, I am also wondering on where this story would go to. I hope you could come up with a better plot than the last time you wrote this fic. Oh yeah, watch out for spelling and grammars too. Keep up writing this fic!

On different note, do you want to battle me on ASB? :p If you're interested, I'll PM you the detail.

And nice banner for the Fanfic. And thanks for sticking to my fic, really appreciated. :smilie:
hey darktyranitar thanks for dropping by, yeah I want it it be a lot darker then both the Anime and Mega.

Yes it is very true that Lt. Surge and his Raichu are quite evil, and this was only the tip of the iceberg wait until you see what happens when Ash meets and battles them for the thunder badge, and maybe more... And don't worry they well when the time comes.

I am glad you like the Idea of Blain being Ash's Grandfather, the reasoning why I have him as Ash’s Grandfather is because I felt that if Gary had a Grandfather then Ash should have one to, besides that the Idea fits nicely with the plot. To true Blaine is very different than the one in the anime series namely because I have not watched the episodes he is in I have just read the summaries of them. Now as far as his own agenda goes some of it well be reviled in the next chapter, and he dose make another clone. However all I well tell you it's not for the reasons you may think... And is it even his own agenda to start with Blaine could be working for someone beside Giovanni you know…

oh and about the clone wars part, well it has a lot to do with Genetic and DNA that and all the rocket grunts running around....

Yeah I well watch out for them, yeah I was not planning on quitting on this any time soon, I in fact have plans on a possible sequel to this namely to deal with the true villains of this fic, if you think team rocket of Kanto are evil wait until you see them under the headship of the Mask of Ice and Black Widow...

I have also been thinking of doing a comic to go along with this story, my thinking is it may help explain what's happing a little better like where was that grunt that the mask of ice attacked which was route 22 btw...

Of course I want to have a match with you... I have not had much luck as of late, and I could use the points.... *kicks Cam down below deck to battle all the Rattata and Ratacate.* Oh yeah I forgot to tell you that I have a custom arena called the Phantom Galleon. But yeah any arena is fine by me.

And thanks, the banner has some clues on it if you look hard enough. And no it is you, who I should be thanking darktyranitar. So thank you for being a faithful reader to my fic, really appreciated because it shows me that even if it is only one person that reads and replies to my work, it means to me that I am not as bad as I think I am….

Oh and speaking of the next chapter, here it is...

please take note that the Lance in my fanfic has nothing to do with the lance in ether the crystal league or Lisa the legend other then looking the same and training dragons… --;;

Chapter four: Vs. Magcargo

“Fine Lance. I well battle you however on one condition. You well have to battle my grandson first.” Blaine said as he handed ash a Pokéball and whispered in ash’s ear it’s my Megby. While thinking ‘yeah the one that always causing trouble here on Cinnabar, and who keeps beating up my Magcargo and Rapidash.’

“Fine I well! Go Lavatar, Rockslide!” Lance said coldly.

A ring of seatmates fell around ash trapping him.

“Well there you go you old fossil I have defeated your grandson as well. Now battle me or say goodbye to your grandson!” Lance said coldly then pointed to a lone seatmate above ash’s head.

Then Lance’s Lavatar started to glow then quickly evolved in to a Pupitar.

“I see you have been training hard Since we last met lance. But I thought your home town was Viridian city not Four island? Anyways this well be a one on one since I have stuff to do, Go Yawning sun!” Blaine said.

“It’s true that my home town is Viridian city, however when my parents got a divorce... Wait a second you old fossil stop distracting me, Pupitar use Earthquake!” Lance said in annoyance as he just now realized that Blaine had tricked him.

However Pupitar was fast asleep, and sat there and did nothing but snore as Magcargo was charging up a ball of solar energy in it’s mouth do to a ball off bright fire energy up in the air among the seatmates.

Pupitar then was hit by the powerful beam of grass energy, knocking it out with one hit.

“Pupitar return!” Lance said in annoyance, as he recalled his Pupitar back in to it‘s heavy ball.

“You have a lot of Spunk Lance, are you sheer you are reedy to face your Father when you get to Viridian city?” Blaine asked.

“Of course I am, what do you take me for you old fossil! Go Kingdra Hydro pump!” Lance said knowing full well that he had just cheated but could care less about playing fair he had things to do and need not waste time for the likes of cots like Blain or his very own father.

Magcargo did however and slid back against ash’s Stalagmite prison fainted and wet.

“Very well Lance I commend you on your grate strategy, however I got the last laugh.” Blaine laughed and handed Lance the volcano badge.

“Ha, I think not you old fossil, Kendra Dragon dance hyper beam combo aim at that Ditto trapped in the Stalagmite prison!” Lance said coldly with an evil grin.

Five geysers erupted out of the ground around Kingdra and started to spin around him, they also seemed to have ripples of Dragon energy with in them. After the Geysers reseeded Kingdra quickly formed a ball of Orange and black energy in it’s snout and fired it at Blaine’s Ditto who was impersonating Blaine’s Grandson.

The hyper beam destroyed the Stalagmite prison and fainted the Ditto and reverting it to his true form.

“Ha if that was your best you got you old fossil, then I would hate to see you at your worst…” Lance laughed coldly and returned his Kingdra and left the cave and called out his Dragonite and flew north.

Blaine just rubbed his bold head and retuned his Ditto, and was glad he had made Ash stay the night at the pokemon center. then went over to his computer and made a phone call.

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“Blaine why hell did you call me at three in the morning, it had better be very important.” Giovanni growled angrily.

“Your son Lance just creamed me and is on his way to your gym,” Blaine said.

“Oh is that all, I was expecting a progress report on the Mew project from you and Fuji… Not something I had already known from my three Rocket Elites, Who also had their own butts hand to them at the hands of my very own son.” Giovanni said proudly at what lance has accomplished so far, then crush the cell phone ending the phone call.
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6:00 am

Blaine was fast asleep when the phone rang…

“Blaine, I know you just got off the phone with Giovanni three hours ago. What did he want this time?” asked a man in a red hooded robe, the man’s face was completely hidden only his golden eyes that shown like the sun could be seen.

“Well I just informed him that his son Lance was on his way to his gym, although he did want to know how the Mew project was coming along. However he still has no Idea that Mewtwo has been born already, although he is still just a child, Blaine explained to the man in the red hooded robe..

“Just remember that you and Fuji must allow Amber and Mewtwo to become best friends if the prophecy is to be fulfilled, speaking of which have you acquired the Pichu DNA as I requested yet?” Asked Red robe as he petted his Pikachu on the head who thunder shocked him.

“Yes I did boss, however I just ran a test on it a few hours ago, apparently it’s incomplete and corrupt. Thus if I even attempted to create a clone it would die as soon as it came out of the Pokemon replication unit,” Blaine said.

“It’s just as I foreseen, thus I well send you the necessary Dna samples to complete the Pichu clone, however you must add the boy’s Dna as well if the Prophecy is to come to pass.” Red robe said as a golden feather that seemed to change it’s color depending on what angle light hit it. and a syringe full of blood mineralized in the teleported unit…

“As you wish Boss, it’s just a shame that you can’t be there in August when he leaves on his pokemon journey,” Blaine said.

“Maybe, maybe not, however I have my ways. Anyways I well talk to you later Blaine, a challenger has just arrived here at the Indigo plateau, he has already defeated the other three members… ” Red robe said, then hung up.

Blaine then put the DNA in to the Pokemon replication unit, just as Ash walked in to the cave.

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Who is this Mysterious Red robe who is apparently a part of the elite four and what connections dose he with, Blaine, Ash and the legendry bird Ho-oh, and why is he always wearing a hooded robe, you well find out more next time in VS Magby look for it soon…

~Charles legend