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    Monica’s Vendetta
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    The Millenia Cataclysm


    Lusaka was alone. She stood in silence as she worked under Tekaru’s old Bedroom. It was evening, and the golden sun started to sink down into the hills. Lusaka had not yet told Roger about her two assassins – Leo and Spyda, who she had hired to take down the AU when they raided the castle. Roger assured her that the V4 would take care of them, but Lusaka reminded him very sternly that Therebus could not leave his confinements at all.

    “He’ll tell his brothers everything; he’ll run!” she recalled herself saying. Roger caved in, as he generally did, and had instead gone to the library to try and persuade his other three sons to fight for him.

    “It’s no use,” Scott snapped. “I’m too weak to summon Delvil.”

    Luke nodded in agreement, having tried the same technique. Poor Karadon lay on a splendid table, many of his bones shattered and broken from Roger’s attack days ago. Since Therebus had gone, Karadon could not get healed.

    “We have to keep trying,” Luke said, getting up again. “Father has got hold of Therebus – who knows what he’s doing to him?”

    “Torturing him for the location of the Wysha Diamond, no doubt,” Karadon replied weakly. Little did they realize, Roger was working for people who knew exactly what the Wysha Diamond did.

    Suddenly, as Luke grunted and tried summoning his spirit, the bookcases surrounding the door all lifted up and drifted across the room in lines. Roger opened the doors magnificently and wandered into the room. He stood proudly, back straight, black boots echoing off the walls. His crisp blue regal clothes looked very grand, with golden shoulder pads.

    “Hello, boys,” he said fatherly, running a finger across his moustache.

    “Where is Therebus!” Luke snapped.

    “I will tell you where he is,” Roger said calmly. “And hand him back over…if you do me one favor.”

    They listened in interest. Scott looked distrusting, and Luke too looked somewhat hesitant about striking a deal with this sewer-rat. Karadon spoke up.

    “What do we need to do?” he asked.

    “The AU is invading the Castle,” Roger began. “I can’t hold them off, and they plan to simply kill me. If you fight for me…I might be able to live. Please, my marriage is so close, and I would never want to perish alone.”

    “What do you think?” Scott asked Luke. Luke felt conflict inside himself. Should he give in to Roger’s demands? Or take the noble path, and defy any of this mans words. As his stomach rumbled, Luke realized the three had no hopes of surviving with no food. And they were all very tired. Luke looked into his Fathers eyes and, although he was disgusted by the man…he could never allow his death.

    “I…” Luke began. Karadon nodded calmly. “I think we should. Ok Roger, we will fight for you.”

    “Ahem,” Roger began. “Call me Father, please. Do you not remember your upbringing?”

    “As it stands now, I’m trying to forget my upbringing,” Luke replied sourly. “I personally disrespect you, Roger, but I will fight for you. You are, after all, family.”

    “Thank you,” Roger said kindly. “I shall heal Karadon for you.”

    Stepping up to the table Karadon laid on, Roger held his hands over the young man. A vivid, pulsing raspberry energy coursed through Rogers’s body and wafted over his son. Karadon instantly sighed in relief as pain leaked from his limbs and he began feeling everything again. Roger took a step back, smiled at him, and wandered to the door.

    “Thank you,” Karadon said breathlessly, leaping off the table.

    “Come up to my private chamber when you have eaten,” Roger explained. “Goodbye for now.”

    Shutting the door, the three brothers exchanged glances. Karadon wandered down in his usual self-proclaimed, busy posture.

    “So?” Luke asked, eager for his older brothers input.

    “You made the right choice,” Karadon sighed. “As long as we remain loyal to Roger we have a home. We have money. I for one dread the idea of working for oneself…and I wouldn’t allow it. Even though he is rude, and a manipulative man…we will do as he asks.”

    “For now, though, right?” Scott barked.

    “We shall see,” Karadon said. “If we earn his trust then we can stab him in the back later. After all, we know where the Wysha Diamond is…and we have plans for it, too.”

    *

    Meanwhile, in the Crufia inn, Salo paced nervously around the room. Zuuki looked concerned for the poor girl, who was very upset about not finding Damien. Chrome, however, simply studied the map in the corner of the room.

    “He’ll be ok!” Zuuki said enthusiastically. “He’s a strong boy.”

    “He got mugged by Seryun before!” Salo cried, thinking back to when the boy was attacked in Perlei. “What if someone does the same here?”

    “You mustn’t think like that,” Zuuki said back. “He’ll be back, don’t worry!”

    She put her hand on Salo’s shoulder, but the girl pulled away.

    “If anything happens to him, I’ll blame you two for not even thinking of helping him!” she cried.

    “I blame you for having no faith in him!” Zuuki said, as loud as Salo. The young girl, who flopped onto the bed, ran her chestnut-brown hair around her finger. “If you really loved him, you’d respect his decision and accept he can defend himself!”

    Salo sniffled slightly.

    “It’s getting late,” Zuuki said. “He’ll be back any time now.”

    “He ran off yesterday,” Salo mumbled.

    “Which means he’ll be missing you so much he’ll be back any day!” Zuuki explained. Just as she said this, the door of their room burst open. The three looked to see Monica, Al, Nat and a figure they did not recognize, who must be Prince Tekaru, charging into the room.

    “Monica!” Zuuki cried. “You’re…here!”

    “Good to see you all,” Chrome said deeply. Monica was gasping for breath. Tekaru seemed rather nervous around everybody, and Nat really didn’t know any of them. Al stepped forward.

    “We’ve been running all night,” he explained. “People in Samyura were working to keep us there. To stop us getting here. We ran all night to make sure we could get here and begin the operation as soon as possible.”

    “Please,” Chrome said, stepping aside. “We have four beds. You can rest for now.”

    “We have already got a room,” Tekaru said, twirling some keys on his finger. Zuuki gave a smirk as she eyed the handsome prince up. “Thank you anyway, Mr…?”

    “Chrome,” the man replied. “I am Chrome.”

    “I am Prince Tekaru,” Tekaru explained. “It is a pleasure to meet the three of you.”

    “I’m Zuukiyasha Dragonfree,” Zuuki said, shaking Tekaru’s hand. “B-But…I just get Zuuki.”

    “And what’s your name?” Tekaru asked, giving Zuuki little acknowledgement and admiring young Salo.

    “Salo Kirke, sir,” Salo mumbled.

    “Well it’s nice to meet you,” Tekaru said kindly. She smiled at him.

    “Hang on,” Al said. “Where is Damien Oak?”

    “Oh,” Zuuki said slowly. “He’s…having a bit of ‘me-time’ right now. His Father was not happy when he left, and he’s been very down since.”

    “Should you let him loose in Crufia?” Nat asked. “With the V4 around?”

    Zuuki gave Nat a disgusted look. Salo beamed at the Justice Quaker.

    “He’s not an infant,” she said snootily. “He can defend himself.”

    “Whatever,” Nat said. “I’m going to crash.”

    “Listen,” Tekaru began. “We’ll all get some sleep, and when we wake up, we shall organize Teams A and B, sort out our strategy and prepare for the attack.”

    “We’ll be waiting,” Chrome said dolefully. As the four left the room, Zukki turned to Salo with an acidic look in her eye.

    “You are SUCH a flirt,” she snapped.





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    In Mahanui, both Lee and Gauld approached the center of town. Gauld had summoned Spirit Sword – the sword with angelic carvings down its blade. Now, however, the blade had changed to a sort of glassy purple colour. Garu was present. He took his shirt off and revealed a well-sculpted body, despite only being young.

    “So, you showed up,” Garu observed. People were gathering in the village.

    “Now, listen to me, Lee,” Gauld muttered. “Everyone in the village will be distracted by this fight. Use that to your advantage. Spend the duration of the fight searching for the location of the Mask of Babylon. We don’t know where it is, but I’ll take as long as I can so you have time to find it.”

    “Right,” Lee said firmly. On the outside, he looked determined and ready. On the inside, however, the young boy was crumbling away to his emotions. Gauld was putting his life on the line for him. But…all he should concentrate on was finding the Mask.

    “Go!” Gauld shouted. Lee dashed off into the crowd of people. He turned, seeing a faint glow around Gauld’s pocket. Inquisition rising, Lee tried forgetting it and kept running. “Ok then Garu…what are the rules?”

    “The rules?” Garu replied, laughing. “Gauld, the rules are simple. One of us dies.”

    Stepping back in shock, Gauld let himself recollect his thoughts and regain a firm demeanor. Gripping the Spirit Sword, he frowned and shot a scathing glare towards his young foe. Garu gripped his sword. He had nothing on his torso, which was skinny, yet somewhat muscular. He was still tanned and handsome, with red scars searing across his face. He swept his messy blonde hair from his eyes.

    “When a twin chime is heard from each sword…that is the signal for us to begin,” Garu explained. Gauld gave a nod. Townspeople gathered around the two, enclosing them in a spacious circle as glittering snow fell from the skies. Each was with their swords out, waiting in silence.

    As seconds turned to minutes, and those minutes sluggishly rattled on, a cold wind picked up and whipped around the two fighters.

    And then it happened.

    A tingling filled the air. Slowly, each sword let out a long, ringing chime. The gentle, soothing melody reverberated around the metal of the sword. Both Gauld and Garu were bathed in this eerie sound.

    “It is time!” Garu roared. Gauld watched firmly, gripping Spirit Sword. “BEGIN!”

    Gauld waited, watching as Garu charged through the air. His sword pulsated with a strong surge of energy, and as the handsome young man leapt high up into the air, the energy dissolved into a fiery blend of oranges, reds and yellows. Slashing downwards, Garu sent the mass of fire down upon Gauld. He dived to the left, landing on his side and skidding through the gritty snow. As the fire smashed into the ground, it melted the snow around, creating a circle of dark earth.

    “You’re a Fire Adept?” Gauld snapped.

    “No,” Garu replied, sneering and charging up energy in his sword again. “Not quite, Gauld…”

    Sending, this time, silver slashes of energy through the air, Garu let out a laugh. As they neared, Gauld used incredible reflexes to deliver counter-slashes to his foes attacks. As each slash of energy neared, Gauld blocked it with his sword. Gauld then started charging up energy.

    “SOL SHINE!” He roared, sending a vertical strip of orange energy sweeping through the air. It gathered speed, snowballing into a wheel of hurtling energy. It smashed right into Garu and ruthlessly tossed him aside. He fell down but got right back up.

    Gripping Soul Sword, Garu let out a roar.

    “FISSURE!”

    The ground shook. Gauld gasped as a huge rip sped through the earth atop Mahanui. As the ever-increasing crowd screamed and ran to either side of the large crack in the earth, Garu smirked and slashed more strips of energy forward.

    How does he do that? Gauld asked himself. Trying to put this aside, Gauld charged up more energy in his sword and slashed feverishly. His attacks soared forward, but Garu slashed his sword upwards, and the attacks flew up that way, before exploding in the sky. Garu then charged at Gauld, sword ready.

    “I’ll hack your head off,” he sneered, getting closer and closer. Gauld just watched. As Garu got nearer, Gauld ducked down, evading Garu’s sword, and swung his sword across, slashing across Garu’s stomach. The man gave a cry as blood wept from his wound.

    “That was cheap!” he snarled. “But you’ll have to do better than that, Gauld…”

    Garu pulled a thick, woolen cloth out from a deep pocket. He tied it around his stomach, tightening it and stemming the flow of blood. He grabbed Soul Sword again and gave a roar.

    “LIGHTENING!” Garu roared, holding a hand in the air. Sparks jumped eagerly around his palm, and up in the sky, dark clouds began swirling together. It was as if Garu was controlling the clouds…provoking a storm…

    And then it happened. A huge bolt of lightening snapped down to the ground. Gauld felt it smash into his body; searing pain flooded his senses, and he became a slave to the extremity and severity of the attack. Falling to the ground, Gauld panted for breath, or perhaps some sort of freedom from this overpowerment.

    “Impressed?” Garu asked, smiling. Gauld lay there, gasping. Being a Metal Edgemaster, Gauld’s attacks generally focused on close-combat and sword mastery. When facing long-distance attacks like the ones Garu was firing at him, Gauld found it difficult.

    “How are you doing that?” Gauld asked weakly. “Your sword seems to summon supernatural strength.”

    “If I told you…” Garu began, pacing forward in his own time. “…then you might be able to stop me.”

    “Then surely you’re altering the odds to our challenge?” Gauld continued. “Is this a true showdown of time if we are unevenly matched?”

    “Yes,” Garu went on, still pacing leisurely to his foe. “You were armed with a sword, but not with the knowledge the sword has. You are, therefore, an unsuitable candidate to represent Spirit Sword. That is nobodies fault but fate. Fate has conspired to arrange this outcome.”

    Gauld gave a shuddering gasp as Garu stood over him. Gauld lay there, looking up at the young man. He smirked, sweeping his messy hair from his face.

    “Time for the final attack…” Garu smirked. “SOUL SWORD! SOUL CATACLYSM!”

    A glow started to envelop Garu’s sword. An eerie, grey glow. Gauld watched in surprise, leaping up and observing. Garu slashed a long streak of energy, grey in colour, which eventually merged into a long, grey beam of spiraling energy. It smashed into Gauld, who was thrown back as the ground tore apart beneath him. All Gauld knew was that the ground literally parted from beneath his feet. As he fell, down into the shadowy abyss, he could clearly see Garu’s cackling, manic face from the top of the large crack. Not knowing how to avert this outcome, Gauld began to panic.

    It was then that he did something rather odd. Holding both hands up, he summoned Faust – his trusted sword which was very large in size. It materialized, and Gauld then jammed it into the side of the rock and clung on tight as he hung halfway down the large gaping crack in the earth.

    “DAMN YOU!” Garu screamed. “Had to live, did you?”

    Gauld then realized something. Where was Spirit Sword? Turning his head sharply, Gauld could see the glimmering blade falling down below him, into the darkening blackness. Down it went, getting smaller and smaller…

    The Metal Edgemaster wondered if it would still be in one piece at the bottom. He hung on tightly, wondering what he should do. As long as Garu believed Spirit Sword to be in Gauld’s possession, then he, Gauld, could continue the fight. He had to destroy Garu.

    But how to get back up?

    It was then that Gauld noticed a feverish warmth in his pocket. Wondering what it was, and wishing he had a free hand to examine his pockets, all he could do was hang there, and think of a solution.

    “HEY! GAULD!” Garu snapped. “Come back up!”

    Gauld said nothing, which seemed to amuse Garu.

    “VERY WELL THEN!” he roared. “GEYSER!”

    Gauld gave a gasp as he stared down. A rumbling could be heard. Knowing what to expect, the man held tight onto Faust as a huge column of water rocketed up from beneath him, pushing him up. Heaving as hard as he could, Gauld wrenched Faust out the rock and felt himself get thrown up to the surface again.

    Soaring high up in the air, Gauld could see the swirling grey clouds of another lightening strike. Obviously Garu was planning this, and by making him wet, Gauld would be even more hurt. Gauld soared back down and landed on the ground. He was tired, and aching, while Garu seemed still rather strong.

    “What are you doing with that sword?” Garu barked. “Where is Spirit Sword?”

    “I have it in reserve,” Gauld said. “I’m going to kill you with my own sword first, then destroy your sword with Spirit Sword.”

    “Liar,” Garu spat, slashing energy at Gauld. He was struck in the chest and stumbled back, giving Garu time to run to the edge of the large chasm and stare down it. Soul Sword glowed as he got to the edge. “My sword detects the presence of yours, all the way down in that chasm.”

    Gauld was lost for words.

    “I’d better just destroy it now, then,” he said absently, his back to Gauld. “And close the chasm up completely.”

    Holding his sword forward, Garu prepared to close up the two fragments of rock, sealing the chasm and shattering Spirit Sword, which lay within. Gauld got up, and gripped his sword tightly.

    “SOL SHINE!”

    Slashing the vertical strip of energy, Gauld watched as it rolled into a wheel of charged power and smashed right into Garu’s back. As Soul Sword flew out his grasp, he fell down the chasm, screaming in pain. Gauld ran forward and watched as Garu descended. Holding a hand forward over the chasm, Gauld began picturing Spirit Sword in his mind. He imagined it…gently soaring upwards…still picturing it, hand quivering with expectancy, Gauld concentrated as hard as he could…

    Finally, Spirit Sword was summoned from the chasm. It soared upwards to the surface, just as Garu flew down. There was a sickening slash, and as Gauld stood there, concentrating deeply, he saw Spirit Sword sweep up out the chasm, Garu’s body impaled on the blade. Gauld stopped his concentration and allowed both to collapse in the snow.

    Gauld gasped as he approached the bloody corpse of Garu. He laid there, blood seeping into the pure snow and tainting it with a pinkish tinge. Gauld wrenched Spirit Sword from his foe’s body, and sent Faust back into badge-form. He turned to face Garu’s sword, Soul Sword, in the ground at an angle.

    “One blow,” Gauld whispered to himself. He began sending all his energy into the blade, holding it with only one hand and approaching Soul Sword. He recalled Garu using an attack called Soul Cataclysm. Perhaps there was an alternative for his sword. Holding his sword back, he felt the words leave his lips…

    “Spirit Cataclysm!”

    A rush of howling wind picked up. The earth shook briefly as a huge beam of energy erupted out of the ground from where Soul Sword was perched. It was thrown up into the air, and shattered due to the intense pressure of the beam. Gauld watched as the sword disintegrated, shards of it sprinkling across the battlefield.

    As the biting winds died down, and the storm clouds disintegrated, Gauld let out a long sigh, and for the first time since he started dueling, took a look at his surroundings. Most of the space they fought on was snow-less. The hard, dark brown earth was charred in many places, and splintered in others. A large fissure in the ground jutted forwards towards the village. The sun was hiding beneath layers of cloud. The village looked empty, but Gauld knew everyone would be in their houses.

    “I did it…” Gauld said to himself. He looked ahead to see Lee running towards him. Excited, Gauld began smiling at the prospect of seeing a new, mask-less Lee, but the boy showed a look of fear on his young face as he ran, half-mask still on, sweat cascading down his face.

    “I killed Garu!” Gauld said. “I defeated him!”

    A group of townsfolk gathered, ranging from the very young, to the very old. Lee still looked somewhat shocked and worried.

    “Are you ok?” Gauld asked him. “What is it?”

    “It’s…the mask…” Lee said slowly.

    “You found it?” asked his mentor. Lee was shaking his head rapidly, gasping… “Answer me!”

    “Oh, he found the mask…” said a low, rumbling voice. Gauld turned. A rather posh looking man, around 40 years of age, wandered through the crowd. With a sneering, pointed face, the man was assisted by the woman Gauld and Lee met in Mahanui itself. After seeing the mans face, Gauld let out a cry of surprise.

    On his face was the other half of the Mask of Babylon.

    “I am Mayor Ihfra, and I’ve been searching…or rather, had people search for me… for the mystical Mask of Babylon so I can get my half off,” the man explained. “As you may or may not know, the mask can only come off, and the scars beneath healed completely, when it is fused with the other half.”

    Lee gave a nod.

    “And now, my dear boy, we have a dilemma,” Ihfra said snootily. “We each need each others half of the mask and our own. The only way to remove the mask, aside from fusing it with the other half, is by killing the one wearing it. Now then…which one of us will be brave and sacrifice ourselves for the other?”

    He turned to the crowd building up.

    “Who should die? This young, irritable ragamuffin? Or a popular, refined Mayor?”

    The crowd was cheering. Lee backed into Gauld as he backtracked in fear. He felt a sudden warmth in Gauld’s pocket…what could it be? Before he had time to think, Gauld slashed a Sol Shine forward and caused the crowd to split. Both Lee and himself ran through the crowd frantically as Ihfra screeched and pointed.

    “RUN!” Gauld cried. They tore around the side of a bakery. Both panting for breath, they turned to see the crowd searching the town for them. Gauld turned to Lee.

    “There is only one option,” he said darkly. “We have to kill Mayor Ihfra.”

    “We can’t do that!” Lee hissed. “We’d be…murderers!”

    I would be a murderer,” Gauld corrected him.

    “You’ve taken the plunge for me once before,” Lee began. “Not again! You’re weak from the Cataclysm!”

    “True…” Gauld sighed. “I could use a rest…”

    Lee looked and saw the golden glow in the same pocket where an odd warmth emanated before.

    “What is that?” Lee finally asked.

    “Oh…” Gauld began. “I felt it when I started the fight with Garu. I never examined it…”

    Delving into his pocket, Gauld clasped his hand around the small object and, feeling both the glow and heat in his large hand, he opened up his palm to reveal a shiny, golden AU badge. Lee’s eyes widened in disbelief. Gauld seemed intrigued.

    “You got an AU badge!” he gasped.

    “What purpose does it serve, aside from being a badge?” Gauld asked inquisitively.

    “Well…I have one!” Lee explained, showing Gauld his badges. “I’m in this group called the AU – it stands for Adepts United. We vanquish evil and promote justice. We all started out together…but…well…I don’t understand how you just ‘got’ a badge like that.”

    Gauld raised his eyebrows. He pinned it to his chest.

    “So…I’m in this…AU now?” he asked.

    “Yes, and it’s not really an optional thing,” Lee went on. “I’m just…shocked. A new member to the AU! This is great. Obviously your determination in the fight earned you the badge.”

    “So…what does this all mean?” Gauld asked.

    “When we’re done here, I’ll take you to my Adeptry Mentor, Mortimer. You remember me telling you about him? He’ll perhaps explain a bit better. He’s located in Crufia.”

    “Then it’s settled,” Gauld announced. “First, though…we have an assassination to take care of.”

    Lee looked up at him.

    “Sometimes…” he began. “Good and bad is merely a perspective.”

    Gauld agreed with him, and as Lee repeated the words of Mortimer, he felt an odd twinge that told him something, somewhere, wasn’t right. They pressed tightly against the walls and slipped through the village, avoiding being seen. They had to do this. There was no choice.




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    Ah, glad to see that Lee is in quite the dilemna. Gauld's fight did not seem the greatest, but looking through it as if it was a Soul Caliber Match, it is pretty long. Wow, so Gauld is in the AU too, its kind of cool that they are getting more members. Is Tekaru in the AU yet, or will be one of the traitorous brothers, and lead the AU to its demise.
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    Default Re: Monica's Vendetta: Chapter 16 Up!

    Lee is indeed in a very big dilemma. As for the match, it was quite a good length for a duel, consideirng it was 1-1. The match was, however, a sidequest, and I did not want it taking too much spotlight. More important was Gaulds AU badge and the news that the other half of the mask is on someone elses face. And yes, Tekaru has been in the AU since Chapter 2 :-|

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    Oh, sorry, I forgot Tekaru, well the battle between the swords, or at least the whole meaning behind it seemed too important to make a sidequest. Makes the story sound like a video game.
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    Preview for Ch17:

    -As the groups merge before the raid on the castle, Chrome asks a favour of Tekaru:
    “I’m level 18,” Chrome informed the young man. “And there is something I wish to manipulate into the form of a solid elementa.”


    -Tension escalates in the castle after Roger is introduced to Spyda and Leo:
    “How could you employ two assassins without my consent!” he snapped. Lusaka punched him in the stomach and the rather surprised man dropped to his knees, gasping as the wind was knocked out of him.

    “I am not your employer,” Lusaka rasped. “I do not work for you. Remember that.”



    -Meanwhile, an extra member returns to aid the group:
    “Planning on leaving me behind?”


    -And the fight at Crufia Castle begins!
    Flinging her sword down in a quick snap, Zuuki conjured up a long tongue of flame to snap forward at this odd enemy. The adept leapt up, over the attack, landing on his hands and spinning frantically, kicking Zuuki in the face. Diving forward and beneath Al’s sonique, which consequently hit Zuuki in the ribs, the man slashed at Al’s back and kicked him forward.


    From the other end of the room, another figure emerged. Leo. He ran a thick, masculine hand through his bushy mane and tamed it; he stomped forward and cast his powerful eyes around the arena. “Spyda, get up!”

    The lanky man scuttled to the other man’s side.


    He summoned his weapon, which was, if Al may have thought so, the oddest, if not the most barbaric weapon he had ever laid eyes on. It was a huge, multi-meter long chain, with a devastating, rusty, double-pronged iron hook on the end. Clutching it in his large hands, Leo swung the chain above his head angrily.



    -“[i]NO! NO! Stop it, NO!”

    “Monica?” Al asked, squinting through the darkness to try and decipher what was going on. “I-Is that you?”

    Someone! Someone help me! I can’t do it anymore!



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    Default Re: Monica's Vendetta: Chapter 16 Up!

    ah, the spoilers sound interesting, looks like Monica's group is having a tough time. Sorry about my last post, I was typing on my new laptop and well the keyboard is different, and I was a bit tired too. Hm, wonder what Chrome wants to make into a solid elementa, maybe Tekaru. Ha ha, or make Tekaru's electrity into sharp pins. Have fun.
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    Sorry havent updated in a while.


    Some information for the rest of the fic:


    -The solid, V4 Elementas will be looked at in more detail when Chrome decides to solidify his. Tekaru's 'faith' is also tested in his elementa in the future

    -There is a lot of information on Lusaka and Lilla, and why Lusaka needed her sisters help. You will also learn a lot about the sisters accomplice assassins, Leo and Spyda. They have very big backstories.

    -Gauld and Silver's family secret was going to be told through a series of flashbacks through the 20's Chapters. However they hav been scrapped as they lacked motivation and seemed very boring. A confrntation with an old rival will see the truth come out...to the eagerly listening AU.

    -There will be romance blossoming for some characters during the fic. Perhaps ones you didn't quite expect...

    -A character from Monica's Army will return in this fic. It may not be the most obvious one you are all thinking of, think slightly more discreet and low-key

    -Landmarks offshore from Evayard are visited in the fic

    -Nat finds problems occur with her Pewturn ability (the ability to turn into stone) when it becomes apparent she has little control over it

    -Characters like Greta, Thomas and Berahh (from Agrotatio) and the Ninja 4 will return.

    -There will be at least 2 character deaths in the fic. Not necessarily AU members though!

    -The end of the fic will leave a door open for a possible 4th book

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    Hey Chris, i won't reply to the last chapter, i think the most topical points were laid out by Powarun and i'll hopefully reply to the upcoming chapter. Certain things have been getting in the way of replying, like college assignments and so on, so forgive me for not replying.

    Looking forward to Chapter 17.

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    Monica’s Vendetta
    Seventeen
    A Serene Return




    Monica, Tekaru, Al and Nat spent a considerable amount of time sleeping and recovering from their fight against the Ninja 5. Awaking in the late afternoon of the next day, Monica let out a long stretch and looked around. Tekaru, Al and Nat were waiting for her, milled around the room, smiling graciously.

    “Hello,” Tekaru said softly. “How are you feeling?”

    “I…” Monica began. Her throat felt throbbing and rather raw. “Okay, I guess.”

    Nat’s concerned face broke into a smile.

    “I don’t really remember much,” Monica admitted. “What’s been going on?”

    “Do you remember fainting in Samyura?” Nat asked.

    “Yea…” Monica replied, massaging her throat. “I could barely breathe.”

    “We’re not sure of the exact details,” Al began. “But we think Lilla was working for Roger Megallo. A sprinkler system under the arena released a poisonous gas that you and San Jai inhaled. It was activated only when the word ‘commence’ was spoken, which Lilla said at the start of the match. We think she poisoned you both to buy some time.”

    “And from that, we’ve drawn a conclusion Roger is putting something into action,” Tekaru continued. Al looked rather irritated at the interruption. “So it is vital we launch the attack before he realizes Lilla has still not got us where we cannot intervene.”

    The other three agreed, and, after receiving any other sneaky tidbits of information from her friends, Monica led them out their room, across the hall, and into the room where Chrome, Zuuki and Salo milled around.

    “Monica!” Zuuki said brightly, leaping from the bed. “Hey! How are you?”

    Feeling herself grappled into a friendly hug, Monica gurgled an “Ok” as the group said their hellos and how-do-you-do’s to everyone else. Having not had much of an introduction to everyone else during their brief encounter the day before, the groups merged together and began chatting.

    Al, Monica and Zuuki were chatting to themselves, Zuuki having been very close to Monica during their time in Perlei. Monica recalled how Zuuki was from Bayne, a village around a dormant volcano. Zuuki disobeyed her village’s ways to protect Monica, and was therefore banished from the place she called home. Since then, the young Flame Warrior, who was 17 years old had been traveling across Perlei, earning herself more badges and reaching Level 11. While Monica, Al and Zuuki continued their talk, Zuuki flicking her long, deep red hair back, laughing.

    Meanwhile, Nat took a seat on Damien’s bed, sitting next to Salo. Salo watched her with apparent awe at the Quaker’s appearance. Her sharp eyes, her scraggly black hair, even her slightly intimidating appearance. Nat was aware she was being watched and turned, facing Salo. Salo flinched.

    “Hi,” she muttered.

    “Hey,” Nat said sternly. “It’s…Salo, right?”

    “Y-Yea,” Salo said nervously, trying to keep calm. “A-And you’re Nat…right?”

    Nat gave an empty nod. Salo nodded back, unsure how to continue the conversation. Nat seemed to sense the girls fear, and spoke again.

    “Thanks for helping rescue me,” Nat said kindly. Salo looked surprised, but gave a small laugh.

    “Oh…I didn’t really…I was…”

    “You did come up to Asterid Fortress, didn’t you?” Nat asked. Salo nodded. “Then you did a lot more than other people, Salo. That was a brave thing to do – to face death like that. You took a chance, and it paid off.”

    Salo smiled, but looked somewhat upset. Nat watched as her lip trembled and a tear leaked down from her face.

    “What’s wrong?” Nat asked sincerely.

    “It’s just…” Salo sobbed. “Sid. Sid died up there. I…we…had to watch him die…”

    Nat was surprised at the compassion Salo shared for Sid, whom she had never liked, particularly because she knew Sid as the sadistic enemy who killed her close friend, Victor. She was aware Sid changed his ways, and was even a member of the AU, but she was still somewhat confused.

    “I’m sorry to mention it,” Nat admitted quietly. “You were close with Sid?”

    “Me, Sid and Phoenix,” Salo began. “We traveled together, at first anyway.”

    Nat understood. Salo wiped the tears from her eyes and went on.

    “And I haven’t seen Phoenix for so long,” She pined. “Is he coming to Evayard?”

    Nat couldn’t bear the eager expression on Salo’s face. She did not know where Phoenix was, and seeing

    “I’m…I’m not sure,” she explained.

    “Oh,” Salo replied. She looked somewhat disheartened. “With Damien gone…it feels a bit lonely.”

    “You think so?” Nat asked. “Even with all of us here?”

    “Damien and I were…close,” Salo explained, blushing. “In that way.”

    “Oh, it’s like that, is it?” Nat asked, smirking. Salo saw her.

    “I’m serious!” Salo cried.

    “I know you are,” Nat replied. “I admire you, Salo, for trusting your instincts.”

    “You do?” asked Salo, somewhat precariously; wondering if this could possibly be true. “You don’t think I’m just a silly little school girl?”

    “Of course not,” Nat said sharply. “You’re one of the bravest girls I know of. You’re so young, with so much at stake, yet you want to fight for good. I admire that a lot.”

    Salo seemed touched, and a friendship soon began to develop between Nat and her. As they talked, Chrome and Tekaru were discussing tactics in a corner. Chrome had been intrigued by the elementa of the V4, and wondered how strong one would have to be to be able to use one.

    “I am Level 11, and I have a solid elementa,” Tekaru informed Chrome. “Although it is not advised to try it at a level like mine. In truth, you must be somewhat stronger. I cannot use my elementa often, and am reserving my strength now for when we launch the attack. I may need my elementa then.”

    “I’m level 18,” Chrome informed the young man. “And there is something I wish to manipulate into the form of a solid elementa.”

    “Go on,” Tekaru said keenly.

    “I have with me the guardian of the city of Colina,” Chrome began. “Let me explain. I am, as you may have guessed, a Purist, but one who dons the Ironize ability constantly. It was, at first, a way for me to live a normal life in the land of Perlei, all the while helping those who were banished to the Purity Realm. In Perlei, Purist are utter scum, and are banished to a land underneath the continent. I was their savior. I lived on the surface and was also a renowned, mysterious adept in Colina who protected the innocent. I was given the Guardian of the city to control as my own. Its name is Metametal, and it is a huge, steel golem. I want to use it as an elementa.”

    “Well…” Tekaru said slowly. “If you’d like, we can go outside and practice.”

    “Could we?” Chrome asked, sounding oddly reasonable and human. “So I am ready before the attack on the castle?”

    Tekaru agreed, and after explaining that they both wanted some last-minute training, the two went out of the Inn and into a large paddock outside of it. They were in an enclosed space, but out of view of the castle. They would not be seen. As the group continued to bond, little did they realize things were getting underway in Crufia Castle, too.

    *

    “I’ve told you!” Roger shouted. “I am getting married tomorrow! I cannot be seen fighting my soon to be step-son in the corridors!”

    “If I’m not there, and you’re not there, then it will be chaos,” Lusaka snapped. “You really trust your three sons to fight for you?”

    “I did, but that was before you kidnapped the fourth one!” Roger replied. Lusaka gave him a scathing look.

    “If only we had Seryun and Scabb…” she sighed. “But they are needed elsewhere. And even if the AU learn of what we’re up to…well, it’ll be too late to stop them, won’t it?”

    Roger did not answer.

    “Where are they going?” he snapped.

    “What?” Lusaka asked.

    “I said where are Seryun and that…that Scabb fellow going to?” Roger asked. “I am, as you know, soon to be the KING of this continent!”

    “Fine,” Lusaka said lazily, as if she were finally giving in to a persistent child. “I’ll tell you. Seryun and Scabb, who happens to be a very strong character, so mind your tongue, are going to the location of the Wysha Diamond and are bringing it back here.”

    “What! Here? The Diamond?” Roger barked. “What for?”

    “Oh,” Lusaka said absently. “You’ll see. Oh, and on the subject of revelations, I have two people I’d like you to meet.”

    “You…do?” Roger asked. Lusaka nodded. She clapped her hands, and there were two blinding flashes of light. In the top corner, where a crafty spider spun a web, and in the lower corner, where a tiny mouse nibbled away, two forms began to emerge from the creatures themselves. The first, materializing from the mouse, was the magnificently tall form of Leo. At 6 foot tall, with his shaggy mane of blonde and brown hair, he clenched his thick, masculine fingers angrily and stared at Roger. Meanwhile, from the spider, a very plain figure materialized. The lanky form of Spyda, with his pale, long fingers and deep, hollow eyes scanned the room. He had pointed incisors, which were dirty and yellow. He was in a sort of crouched position, his long arms laid forward as he looked around.

    “My god!” Roger cried.

    “Leo and Spyda are…friends of mine,” Lusaka explained. “From my home town. Unfortunately, our kind are less frequently leaving the sanctuary that is Villimaux. Leo and Spyda, though, would do anything for me.”

    Roger was mortified by this.

    “They are here to help get rid of Tekaru – or any other member of the AU, for that matter,” Lusaka went on. “Leo, Spyda, I want you to go to your stations.”

    In two, bright green sparks, the two simply disappeared. Roger was livid.

    “How could you employ two assassins without my consent!” he snapped. Lusaka punched him in the stomach and the rather surprised man dropped to his knees, gasping as the wind was knocked out of him.

    “I am not your employer,” Lusaka rasped. “I do not work for you. Remember that.”

    She turned to go and check up on Therebus, but she was stopped when there was another similar bright green flash before her eyes. Lusaka gave a gasp and stepped back as Lilla emerged from nothingness.

    “Lilla!” Lusaka snapped. “What are you doing here?”

    “They found me out!” Lilla wept, her face wet with tears. She looked distraught. “They found out everything I did, and accused me…and I tried to stop them but they got away…”

    “So they’re in Crufia now?” Lusaka asked. Lilla sniffled and shrugged, but her older sister did not allow it. Lilla received a sharp slap to the face. “ARE THEY IN CRUFIA NOW?”

    “I don’t know!” Lilla cried. “I…I suspect so…”

    Lusaka grabbed her sister and threw her to the ground. Lilla gave a loud sob as she hit the floor. Roger saw this, still catching his breath, and finally understood where Lusaka got her weapons from. Lilla stole Tevaro swords, sold them, sent the money to Lusaka and sometimes sent her rare items to use herself. Roger also assumed Lilla had been holding the AU back, but it had failed.

    “You have jeopardized EVERYTHING we have worked for!” Lusaka screamed. “EVERYTHING!”

    “I’m sorry!” Lilla cried. “I am! I am!”

    “You have to fight the AU in the castle,” Lusaka rasped. “They’re coming now. We have Leo and Spyda, they just went to their stations, and three of Roger’s sons are also fighting for us. You add that up to six.”

    “But…I…”

    “You pay the price,” Lusaka snapped. “How can you be so careless when so much is at stake?”

    Lilla whimpered as Lusaka suddenly embraced her tightly. Roger looked somewhat surprised, as did Lilla, for he could see the expression on her face. She relaxed and embraced her sister back.

    “Our people are counting on us,” Lusaka said slowly. “You know we have to be precise and accurate in our mission. Please try harder.”

    Lilla looked into her sisters eyes.

    “I will. Don’t worry.”

    “I think we’re all ready,” Lusaka said. “Lilla, go now to the dining hall. Attack anybody in the AU. You know who not to attack so you should be ok. Roger, get going to your Fiancée. You have a big day ahead of you tomorrow.”

    As Roger turned to leave, he caught a glimpse of Lilla disappearing, and Lusaka watching him sternly, as if she was going to make sure everything went smoothly. Roger was unsure how things would fare, and if he would be involved in the fight, but as he wandered away, he told himself it would be over soon.

    *

    It was a few hours before Chrome and Tekaru returned. Both red and patchy in the face, it was evident that it was cold outside. Monica was glad to see the two of them – she was worried that they had been kidnapped, hurt, or even killed as the time drew closer to their departure.

    “Where is Damien?” Al asked, for the fifth time that night. “He should be here now!”

    “Exactly!” Salo cried. “He’s been hurt, I know it!”

    “He is doing what he is known best for,” Chrome began arrogantly. “Running away.”

    “No! You’re wrong!” Salo cried.

    “Ok, ok”, Monica said, standing and ceasing the argument. “We need to split into a group of three and a group of four. How about Me, Nat, Chrome and Tekaru will be Team A. We’ll be the ones who go to the Prison, since Tekaru can get us in no problem. As for you three, you have to go to the top floor and find Roger’s private Chamber. Sleuth around for that tapestry and explore behind it.”

    Al looked rather irritated as Monica and Tekaru started joking about a ‘Team A secret Handshake’. He gritted his teeth watching them laugh together, feeling himself redden in the face. He turned to Zuuki and Salo.

    “Ok Team B!” He said, overly-cheerily. “Ready?”

    Zuuki smirked. Salo just smiled contently.

    “I am!” She replied, her voice somewhat light yet sharp and serious. Zuuki gave a nod and slipped on her seductive silver shades over her pretty eyes.

    “Is everybody ready?” Monica asked darkly. There was a low murmur of agreement. “Then let’s go.”

    The atmosphere was so tense you could feel the buzzing of anticipation in the air. Reminiscing of the familiar feeling they felt when facing Dimitri, Monica marched out of the Inn and across a dying day in Evayard. Through Crufia, the marketplaces began closing for the day, and people often turned to look around at the spectacular array of adepts walking purposefully through the city. From Monica, looking dressed for a funeral, with her hair braided and eyes focused, to Zuuki, with her deep red hair flowing down her back; Chrome, whose metallic body shimmered in the red sunset spreading warmth across the land. Even Nat, who looked rather intimidating and unkempt, staring back at those who gave her looks. The group walked forwards towards the castle when a voice caught their attention.

    “Planning on leaving me behind?”

    It was a familiar voice, one that caused Monica to spin around in intrigue. Standing on top of a market was their friend Serena! Eyes wide in disbelief at her friend, Monica stared fixedly at the girl, whose beautifully pure blonde hair was bobbed neatly around her face. Sapphire-blue eyes glimmering in happiness, she smiled broadly, dressed in her whites, grays and golds, clutching her scarlet Zanbatou firmly. The sleek, red handle with its dangerous, curved blade on the end looked deadly. Serena ran, leaping up off the market and landing with the group.

    “Serena!” Monica cried, running to her friend. Embracing closely, Monica’s heart soared at news that her friend was not only back, but fighting with them. She swept her hair from her eyes and looked around.

    “Brilliant to see you all!” she cried, focusing on Tekaru. “But…who are you?”

    Tekaru cleared his throat.

    “My name is Tekaru –

    “There’s little time for that,” Al said, butting in. Tekaru seemed somewhat crestfallen and stepped back hastily.

    “Serena, we’ll explain everything back at the Inn. We have a lot going on,” Nat explained.

    Monica scanned the group.

    “You’re with Al, Zuuki and Salo,” she said hurriedly. “Serena, the soon-to-be king of this continent has been trying to keep the AU apart and kill many of us off. We believe he is guilty of hiding something – some sort of plan. My group is releasing Mortimer, Afee and Boko, who are imprisoned. Your group is going to search around for any…imperculiarities. Ok?”

    “I think…” Serena said slowly; evidently she did not understand much of what had been said.

    “We have to go,” Monica began. “Come on.”

    Together, the 8 members of the AU wandered out of Crufia, staring ahead as the Castle loomed into view. Purpose etched into their hearts, each and every one was prepared for what was about to come. Well…except perhaps Serena.

    The gates were open. Huge, golden gates with angelic silver bird statues on the top of the gateposts. A large fence ran around the exotic gardens within. Monica wandered through the gates first, signaling it was ok to continue. The rest followed. To the left and right, a beautiful garden trail was lined with decorated shrubs, powerfully colourful flowers and an assortment of trees. This led around the sides of the main part of the castle, which the group acknowledged and approached. Chrome, Zuuki and Salo each saw the gardens and recalled that horrible memory when they cowered in the gardens while Scott searched for them, narrowly avoiding getting caught.

    The castle itself was huge. Towers jutted up into the heavens themselves, while the sheer scale of it was mind-blowing. Huge doors, with knockers resembling the silver bird on the gate posts could be seen on the impressive, sleek, dark wood of the doors. Monica stepped back and allowed Chrome to race forward and smash right into the elegant doors of the entrance. They smashed and splintered instantly, Chrome charging right into the castle itself. The group followed, Tekaru being the last, having watched this with a sting of regret. He sighed.

    If you ever come back here again, I will kill you.”

    The same words reverberated around his skull and pounded at his insides. He gulped. Fear was washing over him, and he was sweating profusely. But by now, the group were wandering into the main entrance and looking around. He hastily caught up with them. A grand, elegant stone staircase led up the upper floors, while a door to the left was shut and apparently bolted tight. Tekaru explained it was a door leading underground, used in case of quick escapes. There were a series of hidden tunnels and pathways leading to the secret tunnel out of the Castle. He stressed, though, that it had never been used before. Various paintings, tapestries (short ones, unable to conceal corridors) and suits of armor were located in the main entrance, while a very large Persian rug was spread across the floor.

    Tekaru pointed to a small staircase leading downstairs.

    “That is the staircase to the Prisons.” He went on. “My group, we will go down that way. Al, your group must head up the main staircase and keep going until you can go no higher. Proceed left down the corridor and you will see a room at the end of the hall. It is Roger’s private chamber.”

    Al gave a nod.

    “See you soon,” he replied emptily. Tekaru, Monica, Nat and Chrome bode farewell to their allies and soon disappeared down the staircase leading to the prisons. Al, Salo, Zuuki and Serena watched them go.




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    “Ok guys,” Al said firmly. “Everyone get weapons out. We don’t know when, or if, someone will attack us.”

    In collective flashes of light, the group was armed – Al gripped his charcoal black Assassin Blade as it throbbed with a green glow. Salo clutched her sparkling Frost Wand tightly, looking serious; Serena held onto her Zanbatou and Zuuki clutched her precious Flame Sword. This amazing blade was red in colour, with a black hilt. Its shape was like that of flames. When Zuuki commanded it, it instantly turned into real flame and she could really deal some damage.

    Precariously, they made their way up the wide stairs, looking around for any signs of an enemy. As they went, turning on a landing and then continuing up the next set of stairs towards the first floor, they took in the glamorous portraits lining the walls, as well as the Farrimond coat of arms. However, what they didn’t take in was the sinister figure lurking in the shadows, watching them carefully.

    As they got off onto the first floor, the group took a look around each end of the corridor, and could see nothing ambiguous to investigate. They proceeded up the staircase to the next floor.

    On and on it went, going up floor after floor. As it dragged on, and the group spent considerable time wandering up staircase after staircase, the majestic elegance of the castle seemed to wear off. Finally, arriving on the fourth floor, the group was surprised to see a doorway at the top of the stairs.

    “I guess we’d better go through,” Zuuki said. Nobody answered; perhaps due to the sheer obviousness of the idea, or perhaps due to nerves. Precariously, sword ready, Zuuki grabbed the door and opened it. All four of them let out awe-filled gasps.

    They appeared to be in a splendid dining hall. A huge dining table stretched across the room, which had a heated stone floor, the table being able to fit at least 25 people at it. The heads of either end of the table sat in wonderful, throne-like chairs. The sheer size of the room was also rather impressive. Across in one corner, spread out, was a wide area which looked like it was used for ballroom dancing.

    “This is just…” Al uttered.

    “…fantastic,” Serena finished for him. “Utterly fantastic.”

    “I wouldn’t like this sort of materialistic environment,” Salo sniffed.

    “Speak for yourself,” Zuuki rasped. “This is living!”

    “The door is on the other side of the room,” Salo said. “We must go, quickly.”

    Al and Serena agreed. As the four wandered slowly through the room, there was a sudden, loud screech filling the air. Crying out in surprise, Serena and Salo looked around in anticipation for somebody, or something, to emerge. Abruptly, there was a strong gust, and half of the torches went out. As they were contained in old lamps hanging from the ceiling, and candle-lit chandeliers, it was impossible for Zuuki to relight the fire with her natural adeptry. The ceiling was very high indeed.

    “What’s going on?” Salo asked, clutching her weapon.

    “Someone’s here,” Serena muttered. “Obviously they’re trying to scare us to lower our guards. The screech, the lack of light…everyone keep on your guard!”

    Looking around for any sign of life, the four twitched their heads in quick, searching looks. Gripping their weapons, feeling the sweat trickling down their faces…the four were each rather tense and nervous, waiting for an attacker to emerge.

    “We have each side covered,” Al growled, eyes locked ahead of him. “No-one can surprise us.”

    He was wrong.

    The thin, scuttling figure of Spyda leapt from the chandelier, giving a rabid hiss as he did so. The group saw this, some screaming and some leaping aside. The thin, bald man, with his pale face and white clothes, hissed again as he crouched defensively. Thin fingers pressed against the ground, his eyes were bulbous and he scanned the adepts.

    “Just one person?” Zuuki asked. “I’m not complaining. Whiplash!”

    Flinging her sword down in a quick snap, Zuuki conjured up a long tongue of flame to snap forward at this odd enemy. The adept leapt up, over the attack, landing on his hands and spinning frantically, kicking Zuuki in the face. Diving forward and beneath Al’s sonique, which consequently hit Zuuki in the ribs, the man slashed at Al’s back and kicked him forward.

    “Sorry!” Al moaned, as Zuuki felt her ribs ache. Spyda surveyed the scene. Salo was backing away nervously, but Serena looked confident.

    “Frenzy Bolt!” she screamed, clasping both hands on her Zanbatou and holding it out to the side. It glowed an electric blue, and consequently fired a flurry of yellow bolts through the air. Spyda sensed them, leaping to evade each one before diving forward into the inky darkness.

    “He evaded them!” Serena gasped, catching her breath. “Damn!”

    “Who is he?” Al asked.

    “He’s very agile,” Zuuki said, her ribs still sore. “Turning our attacks against us like that!”

    As it was rather dark in the room now, it was hard to find where this mysterious man had gone. Spyda was scuttling silently in the darkness, maneuvering around the room.

    “He went that way,” Al said, pointing forward. “SONIQUE!”

    Slashing a silver streak of energy through the air, Al watched as it illuminated the darkness momentarily and revealed that the figure had indeed disappeared. Turning wildly, Al was somewhat confused when he saw the figure emerge behind Salo.

    “No!” Salo screamed. Spyda clasped his elongated fingers around her arms and wrenched her into the darkness. “GET OFF ME!”

    “Do you need help?” Zuuki asked.

    “Yes!” Salo cried. But it was difficult. Despite the three being strong, they could not fire into the darkness, as they were running the risk that they would hit Salo. No doubt this man was using Salo as a shield.

    “What can we do?” Zuuki hissed. Al was thinking hard. Logic. That was what he was renowned for, his logic. There must be some way to use his logic in this situation. Some way they can outsmart their opponent…

    “I have an idea,” Al murmured. He placed his hand, the sword-free one, in front of him, palm down. Moving it in a circle, he drew a clay brown circle on the ground, and by moving his hand, moved the glowing circle into the darkness. It illuminated the spindly man, clutching Salo tightly, and as Al moved his circle under the both of them, he shouted the attack.

    “Mother –

    Before he could say ‘gaia’, Spyda threw Salo down into the circle and silently ran through the darkness. Almost on cue, Serena sent a bolt of lightening and Zuuki hurled a fireball through the air. Spyda was hit, and gave a sickening scream as he hit the ground. Salo ran over to Al, who smiled.

    “Logic,” Al said, smirking. “Works every time.”

    “Is that so?” came a deep, growling voice. Al jumped. From the other end of the room, another figure emerged. Leo. He ran a thick, masculine hand through his bushy mane and tamed it; he stomped forward and cast his powerful eyes around the arena. “Spyda, get up!”

    The lanky man scuttled to the other man’s side.

    “Yes, it is so,” Al replied firmly. “Who are you to mock my technique?”

    “I am Leo,” the man boomed. “And I am an extremely strong Adept, you stupid little boy. Let’s see if Brains truly do rule over Brawn, shall we?”

    Al stared at him.

    “A 1-1 duel against you?” he asked, readying himself.

    “Not 1-1,” Leo replied thickly. “You…and a friend. Against me. Spyda can take on the other two.”

    Al turned to the group. Salo was probably not the best choice, as this Leo character looked rather intimidating. It came down to Serena’s valuable experience, and Zuuki’s type, which, Al thought, would easily set fire to this overgrown lion.

    “Zuuki,” Al replied firmly, thinking Serena’s experience could benefit Salo. Zuuki walked to Al’s side, both having their swords ready. Serena and Salo stood together against the odd, mystifying Spyda.

    “Very well,” Leo purred. “BEGIN!”

    It all happened very fast. Zuuki hurled two large, football-sized fireballs through the air as Al slashed a sonique. Leo leapt up, grunting heavily, avoiding the attacks and landing back down again. He held a ‘paw’ back, charging up energy in it and hurling the clear white orb forward. Zuuki leapt up to avoid it and landed on the splendid dining table. Al, thinking that staying together was a good option, sent another slash forward and leapt up onto the table, too.

    “If I have one dart, and two targets,” Leo began sagely, holding a hand forward. “I can only hit both at once if the targets are together.”

    He summoned his weapon, which was, if Al may have thought so, the oddest, if not the most barbaric weapon he had ever laid eyes on. It was a huge, multi-meter long chain, with a devastating, rusty, double-pronged iron hook on the end. Clutching it in his large hands, Leo swung the chain above his head angrily.

    “Watch out,” Al said to Zuuki. Sure enough, Leo threw the chain forward, gripping onto his end. The two hooks rocketed at Al and Zuuki, who leapt back in synch at just the right time. The hook smashed right into the table, splintering it and damaging its beautiful exterior. With a huge heave, Leo pulled it back, ripping a large chunk of the table out in the process.

    “Firnado!” Zuuki shouted, spinning her free hand in the air. A gust picked up, wrapping around Leo and controlling him slightly. The wind got faster, and as Zuuki clicked her fingers, fire began to pick up and spread. Leo, however, gave a long roar of anger, leaping through the tornado and at the edge of the table. He smashed the throne away, swinging his weapon and hurling it towards his foes.

    Time after time, Al and Zuuki watched the hooks smash into the wood, and before long they had to abandon the table as Leo leapt onto it and smashed right through it with his animalistic strength.

    “You heard him,” Al hissed. “We have to attack from different sides,”

    Zuuki nodded and ran to the left, ducking under the table. Al ran to the right, around the back of Leo. He seemed rather irritated by them. Swinging his chain out, Leo span on the spot, sending the chain flying around him like a manic copter blade. Al and Zuuki exchanged dark looks as they wondered what to do.

    “Aim for the legs!” Al shouted. “SONIQUE!”

    Slashing the blade of energy into Leo’s legs, the man roared out in pain and his chain flew through the air, clunking into the ground and lying still. Leo ran at Al, fist readied, but Al held his sword forward, as if motioning that Leo would impale himself on the sword should he choose to attack.

    “I’M NO IDIOT!” Leo roared, leaping high into the rafters of the building. He flew back down behind Al, swinging a punch into the side of the boy’s face, causing him to stumble and fall down.

    “AL!” Zuuki cried. She snarled at Leo.

    “You’re next, missy,” He purred. Zuuki gave an empty laugh.

    “Just try it!” she coaxed. Leo nodded, picking up his chain again and swinging it, before firing it forward at Zuuki. She dodged to the left, rolling and watching this colossal beast. Perhaps…perhaps she should finally try her Elementa.

    Readying herself, she briefly saw Salo and Serena running around Spyda. Holding both hands forwards, Zuuki let out a cry.

    “ELEMENTA!” she screamed. Fire began curling around her body, winding around her outstretched hands and collecting at her palms. As the fire deepened in its colour, it was blasted forward in a magnificent beam of fire, sweeping across the table and consequently igniting it, before striking Leo in the chest.

    “No mercy!” Leo roared, getting up and racing at Zuuki. Zuuki gasped – it did hardy any significant damage! She gave a scream as the large chain soared towards her. Leaping up, Zuuki ran across the side of the wall and pounced off, leaping above Leo. Drawing her sword, she ignited the flames on the blade and gave a primal scream.

    “NOW!” gave her cry. She managed to stab him in the eye, causing extreme pain from the man. He gave a long, echoing roar and stumbled back in pain. Zuuki felt the chain smash against her leg after Leo released it. She landed, her leg buckling, watching Leo fall to the ground in agony.

    “MY EYE!” he screamed. “MY EYE!”

    Zuuki was satisfied. As she helped Al back up, who was seemingly hurt, a large bruise on the side of his face, they looked at Leo, on his knees. Suddenly, a figure teleported into the room. Al gave a sharp cry and leapt to his feet. It was, unbeknownst to anybody else, Lilla – the one who poisoned Monica.

    “What are you doing here?” Al shouted. Lilla just smirked, bending over Leo.

    “This will take a second,” she said sweetly, putting her hand over the scorched eye socket. A bloody mass soaked the floor. Within a few seconds, true to her word, Lilla managed to stem the flow of blood. Leo growled. “Come with me. We’ll sort you out.”

    “No!” Al cried, grabbing his sword. “I won’t let you leave after what you did!”

    But it was too late. Lilla and Leo both flashed green and disappeared completely. Al gave a roar of irritation as Zuuki consolidated him.

    “Come on,” she said. “Let’s help the other two.”

    Expecting to see Serena fending Spyda off Salo, they were surprised when they saw Serena lying on the ground, clutching her leg. It had a green-tinged scar down it.

    “H-He slashed me!” Serena cried. “And it’s gone septic!”

    “How is Salo doing?” Al asked, bending down.

    “Ok, I think,” Serena sniffed. As they looked, Salo was leaping back as Spyda aimed a slash at her. “But you should help her.”

    “I could…” Al mumbled. “I have a really sore head…and I feel dizzy…but…I could try.”

    “Listen,” Zuuki said. We need to get to the 6th floor and investigate that tapestry. Besides Leo and Spyda, we have Lilla and the V4 to contend with. They want to stop us, and we have to stop them stopping us! I think me and Serena should go on. You and Salo stay and fight. When you beat Spyda, hurry after us before anyone else can come.”

    “Fine,” Al said, gripping his sword. Zuuki helped Serena up, but she didn’t need any help. Waving her hand from left to right, Serena summoned a soft, flurry cloud which she then leapt up on and hovered in the air. Zuuki seemed impressed.

    “I won’t need to use my legs,” Serena explained. “Come on, let’s go.”

    Zuuki nodded, running across the dining hall as Serena floated by her side. Al smirked, recalling Serena doing that often, but turned back to the battle at hand. Spyda silently leapt back into the darkness. Salo backed away.

    “Let me handle this,” she muttered. “ORACLE OF WATER!”

    From Salo’s small frame came a water-built figure, resembling a beautiful woman. The woman formed out of Salo’s body and swept forward, splashing into Spyda and dousing him. Or so they thought.

    With no sound, Spyda leapt from their left and wrapped his legs around Al’s neck. He span around and threw Al down into the ground. He leapt up, before soaring back down and aiming a devastating attack down on Al. Al rolled out of the way and kicked Spyda up, who leapt back into the shadows. Salo ran to Al’s side, summoning her Frost Wand again. It sparkled silvery blue.

    “Icy wind!” Salo cried, as a horrible chill picked up. Icy particles swept from the Pearl atop her wand, encircling Spyda and throttling him with their bitterness. Spyda gave an unimpressed cry.

    “Now, Al!” Salo shouted. Al crossed his arms and charged up energy. Blades formed from his wrists, moving down to his elbows. Al leapt through the air, bladed arms ready. He approached Spyda and gave him a double slash to the face. Spyda leapt at Al and, wrapping his legs around Al’s body, began scratching furiously at his face.

    “Salo!” Al cried, stumbling back. “Get him off me!”

    “Okay!” Salo cried. She held her hand forward. “Water spout!”

    A blast of water flew forward, but Spyda leapt up off Al and Al was struck, falling on his backside. Salo muttered an apology, but Spyda landed behind Salo and kicked her down on her front. She turned, gasping, as Spyda’s pointed teeth extended and he stared down at her.

    “NO!” she cried. “DON’T BITE ME!”

    Spyda gave a sniff, picking up a scent, and moved down towards Salo, who was paralyzed with fear. Al got up, grabbing his sword and slashing a Sonique through the air. Spyda let the attack hit him, holding a hand forward and squirting some foul liquid from his pores on his palm into Al’s face. He gave a scream and dropped to his knees. His vision was blurred…he could barely see…had he been blinded? As Al toppled backwards, he heard a voice in his head…

    NO! NO! Stop it, NO!”

    “Monica?” Al asked, squinting through the darkness to try and decipher what was going on. “I-Is that you?”

    Someone! Someone help me! I can’t do it anymore!

    Monica’s worried voice flooded Al’s senses.

    “MONICA?” Al roared. What was going on? His senses were sharp, his breathing fast and desperate, and sweat was trickling down his forehead. He began crying; tears spilled down his face as, unable to see, thoughts of a scared and worried Monica flashed across his mind…

    “Al?” Salo asked, her voice floating in through Monica’s screams. “Al? Are you ok?”

    Al suddenly blinked and looked up. Salo was standing over him. She looked deeply concerned for him.

    “Al? Are you ok?” she asked again. “You were curled in a ball…and you were crying out for someone.”

    “W-Who was it?” Al asked, embarrassed.

    “I couldn’t tell,” Salo admitted. “But don’t worry – I stopped that Spyda character.”

    She pointed to the wall, which Spyda had been frozen against.

    “I used some more Water Spouts to soak him, knocked him against the wall and unleashed another Icy Wind,” she explained, seemingly very happy with how she did. “Shall we go?”

    “Yea…” Al murmured.

    The two then proceeded to walk to the door of the Dining Hall. Al cast a look across the charred, splintered table, the blood-splattered floor, the iced-over wall, and was impressed by the scale of their battle. He opened the door, arriving in a corridor with Salo, and headed up the next staircase to catch up with Zuuki and Serena.

    Meanwhile, a figure appeared from the other end of the corridor. They watched until Al and Salo were out of sight, before dashing into the Dining Hall and approaching Spyda’s frozen figure. Pulling out a pair of small daggers, the figure wandered to Spyda and began hacking away at the ice, muttering to himself as shards of ice flew into his handsome blue ponytail. When the ice was chipped away, the limp figure of Spyda fell to the floor.

    “Get up,” Karadon snarled. “You have work to do, and so do I.”

    He flicked ice shards from his hair.

    “I need to find Monica…”



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    Adding Karadon made the ending of this chapter interesting, I thought they were going to betray daddy, and fight with the AU. It is kind of sad that I have seen and read so many stories that I kept on to the details through the chapter, wondering when the crossover to Lee's mission was going to start, and ended up confused when I read the end. Adding a blind Al in there would have been interesting, along with stopping Lilia from showing up and trying to heal that ******* Leo. I hope he gets more than sword in the eye, which was pretty smart thinking. Sadly I am reminded of this one fan fic that was discontinued and it too featured an Eye being taken out, but it was written so much more sicker.

    good job, can't wait for the next one. Another sad change is I am no longer reading these at school, for some reason I just quit checking at school and just do it at home.
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    Man this place is quiet.


    My other fic is keeping me busy but I'm taking a short break from it very soon to continue working on this. Whoever's out of there....hi!



    Powarun: Yea, I kinda wanted to show how Karadon has to put what he wants below what he has to do for his father to achieve what he wants. Lee doesn't meet the group just yet - he has some pretty interesting things in store!

    I did actually contemplate a member of the AU (very possibly Al) to be blind, but I felt despite adding a lot to the drama it would take a lot away. It would be interesting though. Hmm Lilla appearing to aid Leo means she's not doing what her sister asks! Lusaka said Lilla would have to battle, yet she's sneaked away from that.

    Lusaka and Lilla's relationship will develop over the next few chapters but it will be some time before we see just what their true motives are.

    Leo is certainly a bad person. He's also a very interesting character and is involved in a fantastic battle around Chapter 23.







    Monica’s Vendetta
    Eighteen
    Tekaru’s Worst Nightmare

    Meanwhile, while chaos broke loose in Crufia Castle, Therebus stood in the small room that he was situated in. Furious with whoever the woman was he could hear on the other side of the walls, Therebus had tried and failed to get out of the small room he was locked in.

    The door opened. Therebus gasped as Lusaka entered. She wandered into the dark room, looking around at the dingy place with intrigue. She smirked at Therebus, closing the door.

    “How are you?” she asked. Therebus did not answer. Lusaka wandered around the room, taking in what little there was to be taken in at all. “I know it’s been a while.”

    “Let me out,” Therebus said hoarsely. “What did I even do wrong?”

    “You don’t know?” Lusaka laughed. “Therebus, you became a liability. You learned too much.”

    “Like?” asked Therebus.

    “Seryun was to be arriving at a place called Brinstead Dock,” Lusaka began. “For you see, that is his first stop on the way to the Unitan Settlement. That is the location of the Wysha Diamond.”

    Therebus gasped.

    “Of course,” he said lightly. “So…he’s gone to get it now? H-He’s on his way?”

    “Yes,” Lusaka replied. “We had to make sure you didn’t stop him. That’s why we kidnapped you. But now, you know about me, and you must have overheard some talks I had with your Father…”

    Therebus was shaking. It was a mixture of the common fear he often had, added with an unusual rising of anger in his head.

    “Is it true then?” Therebus hissed angrily. “Roger supported Dimitri?”

    “Oh yes,” Lusaka said, smiling. Therebus gave an odd twitch.

    “And he murdered Splinter, that old accomplice of Seryun?” he continued.

    “Yup,” Lusaka replied, a grin on her face. Therebus gulped.

    “A-And what…what about my mother?” he asked weakly. “I-Is it true she died from…grief? A-After learning his secret?”

    Lusaka enjoyed the weak expression Therebus wore. Slowly and surely, she nodded her head, eyes closed and smile broader than ever.

    Therebus fell to his knees. Tears began leaking out the sides of his eyes as he sobbed uncontrollably. Roger had told Therebus and his brothers that their mother, Yuwana, had fallen ill to a horrific illness. But to think she died of a broken heart…and Splinters murder, too…why had Roger done it?

    Rising to his standing position again, Therebus wiped the tears away and stared at Lusaka coldly.

    You started all of this,” he snapped. “It was YOU!”

    Lusaka retreated.

    “How dare you talk to me like that!” she snapped back. “Your Father is an independent man.”

    “He was,” Therebus began fondly. “Before he aligned himself with the likes of you!”

    “And that was probably before you were even born!” Lusaka spat. She stepped forward. “If you dare make accusations, mark my words, I will kill you on the spot. Roger wants you alive, but I don’t give a damn about you at all.”

    She looked utterly furious. Therebus was angry – sweat trickled down his forehead and mixed with the tears making their way down his cheek. Finally unleashing an anger that had been locked away for his entire life, Therebus began daring as he parted his lips to speak to Lusaka.

    “Go on then,” he muttered. “Kill me now.”

    Lusaka watched him inquisitively.

    “Go on!” Therebus shouted. “Do it!”

    “No,” Lusaka snapped. “I can’t.”

    “You’re too weak,” Therebus taunted her.

    “No I’m not,” Lusaka replied.

    “You’re too worried my Father will find out,” Therebus went on.

    “I don’t care what he thinks or how he acts,” Lusaka explained.

    “Kill me then! You bloody coward,” Therebus hissed. This did it. Eyebrows raising suddenly, eyes widening, Lusaka took a step back. Therebus enjoyed the startled look on her face.

    “I – am – no – coward!” Lusaka screamed, charging energy up in her hands. “I’LL SHOW YOU!”

    Hurling an orb of silver energy through the air, Lusaka’s face was utter malice as she watched. Therebus stood there, smirking as the orb got closer. Giving a high, cold laugh, Lusaka watched with glee. However, at the last second, Therebus held his wrists up, and the attack smashed against the two devices on his wrists that disabled his adeptry. The devices shattered instantly, and although Therebus was driven back by the attack, he gave a quiet laugh as Lusaka watched in horror.

    “You tricked me,” she growled.

    “Yes,” Therebus hissed, summoning his crossbow. “Get against the wall.”

    Lusaka complied, sliding into the corner. She didn’t look scared, but still knew the consequences if she tried fighting Therebus right now. A bolt through the neck, no doubt. She watched him.

    “Stay there,” Therebus replied. He paced towards the door, and Lusaka could only watch helplessly. She knew he was going to lock her in here, and without Roger around, how would she get out?

    “Nice knowing you,” Therebus growled, in an oddly malicious voice. He slammed the big, thick door shut, plunging Lusaka into semi darkness. She heard the lock clicking thickly on the other side, and desperately threw herself to the ground to look for any cracks that she, as an Animaux Adept could fit through as, say, a mouse. But alas, it was all tightly sealed off.

    Fuming, Lusaka sank into the corner and was lost for a few moments. What could she do? She heard Therebus scrambling up the ladder towards the surface, probably going to alert the AU of her existence, stop the V4 from fighting…

    But did it matter? Lusaka thought not. All that was important was that Seryun was on his way to the Wysha Diamond…

    *

    In the castle, the other group, consisting of Monica, Nat, Chrome and Tekaru wandered down the staircase towards the prisons. Tekaru led the way, having the group’s full respect and attention. He did not speak, but instead only walked further onwards.

    They came to a large, square-shaped room with a door on each side. The walls and floor was still stone, but the doors were a sleek, elegant mahogany. It was rather cold. Tekaru made his way forward to the door on the left, but it opened abruptly and a green force field projected Tekaru backwards.

    “Luke!” Tekaru shouted. His soon-to-be step-brother stood there, grinning. He had used an outburst attack on the door, flinging it open and throwing Tekaru backwards. Monica, Nat and Chrome all gasped upon seeing him.

    “Hello,” he said calmly, a thick axe in his grip, comprised of black stone. “Nice thought, wasn’t it? Breaking in, taking the captives, and running back out. There’s a slight problem. Me.”

    “Don’t forget me,” came a voice behind them. From the opposite door (originally the door on the right) Scott wandered out. He was already cloaked in red-hot flames, giving off an aura of heat all around. The cold temperature disappeared.

    “Not you too?” Tekaru whined. “Fine. Are you ready, Chrome?”

    “Yes,” Chrome replied.

    “I’ll take on Scott, you take on Luke. Understood?”

    “Yes,” Chrome repeated.

    “RISE!” Tekaru roared. The ground glowed beneath him as the large, golden cross rose up, Tekaru once again on the right arm of the cross. Luke looked bewildered, and even Scott gave an impressed gasp.

    “Rise! Metametal!” Chrome cried out. From a glowing pendant around his neck, the huge steel golem morphed into the room. With its rounded head, with an odd circle of Braille in the center, almost like a single eye, Metametal swung its metal claws and gave an odd hissing noise. Chrome leapt up, jacket billowing, and landed on its head.

    “Forrai!” Luke snapped. “Rise!”

    From an orb of glowing green energy morphed the odd tree demon. With its bark-like complexion, clawed feet, thin body and four arms, Forrai’s red bulging eyes locked onto Tekaru with intrigue. He (presumably a male) flapped its insect-like wings.

    “Delvil!” Scott cried out. “Rise!”

    From the heat Scott gave off, the odd devilish spirit materialized in the room, too. Its long, sneering face, with thin eyes and pointed teeth was reminiscent to Monica and Nat of the day the V4 summoned these creatures to fight. But they had never actually seen them do so.

    Delvil waited for Scott, who leapt up onto its shoulder and pointed at Tekaru and his Crucifix.

    “GO!” Tekaru cried. “That door!”

    Monica and Nat ran forward, wrenching the door open and heading down the long spiral staircase. Meanwhile, a massive fight ensured, Tekaru VS Scott and Chrome VS Luke. Forrai gave a screech and slashed forward at Metametal, who leapt back (making the ground shake) and slashed strips of energy forward. Forrai charged up a glowing orb of energy, sending green sparks all over it before shooting it forward at Chrome and Metametal.

    “Go for it!” Chrome said. “Alchemist Dragon!”

    From the Braille-like eye on Metametal’s face, an eruption of silvery metal burst forth. Forming into a dragons head, the beam wound up into the rafters of the room and then swept down at Forrai. Forrai tried to block the attack, but it smashed into Forrai’s stomach and splintered its body.

    “Forrai, use Gaia!” Luke roared. Forrai held all four hands forward, and from each an array of glowing boulders flew out. Being comprised of metal, this did not really hurt Metametal. Chrome felt himself get pushed back somewhat, though.

    “Metal Claw!” he roared. Metametal swiped angrily at Forrai and left a large gash in its stomach. Forrai flapped back, rising slightly into the air and kicking at Metametal with its huge legs.

    Meanwhile, Tekaru and Scott’s fight was becoming severely one-sided. Tekaru’s moveable, yet inanimate crucifix was firing off lightening bolts at Delvil, but the fire demon was simply avoiding them and pummeling the crucifix with its fists.

    “You were always weaker than us,” Scott taunted, as a flaming fist slammed into the metal crucifix. “My Father always said to you, didn’t he? ‘Never use an inanimate object as your Elementa’, but you never listened to him, did you?”

    This time, a flaming kick swung up and smashed into Tekaru’s elementa. Tekaru gave a shuddering cry of pain as he stumbled on his Elementa’s arm. Sending a surge of electricity through the air at Delvil, Tekaru watched as another flaming kick rocketed into his Elementa and dealt huge damage. Tekaru hung onto his elementa tightly, praying Monica and Nat would return soon.

    *

    The two girls were, in fact, wandering down a tightly wound spiral staircase, Nat in front, her Raegan Blade drawn. Thumps and Roars were heard above them – it sounded like Tekaru and Chrome had finally begun their duel against Luke and Scott. Monica’s heart thumped rebelliously against her ribcage as she neared Mortimer once again. She found the man, who was much older than her was a source of comfort, support, but mostly strength. Mortimer, being a Ghost Prophet (the highest level of Ghost Adept) drew much respect from Monica, who was a class below as a Ghost Mage. The thought of releasing Mortimer and seeing him again was tantalizing for Monica.

    It was a long trip down the stairs. Monica felt her thighs hurting and aching from the constant jogging down the long flight of steps. Nat seemed ok about it – she was definitely stronger physically. Her arms and legs were discreetly muscled.

    The spiral stairs wound to a close, and both Monica and Nat ran across a thin walkway, with dark, echoing chasms beneath them. Nat suddenly stopped, picking up a small pebble, and dropping it down the chasm. A long, loud clunking reverberated around the long room.

    “It’s a long way down,” Nat said grimly.

    Monica nodded, running across the room and reaching the next door. Wrenching it open, she stared at a stone staircase running down towards the cells. She eagerly ran down them, leaping off the last five and staring around. And there, to her left, watching her darkly through the bars was Mortimer.

    “Mortimer!” she cried softly, running to the cell.

    “Monica,” Mortimer said rudely. “Do what you must do first.”

    “R-Right,” Monica said nervously, smiling. “You mean break you out, right?”

    “What else?” Afee asked, appearing by Mortimer’s side.

    “Indeed,” Mortimer said lazily.

    “Stay back, Mon,” Nat said firmly. Monica darted to the side as Nat’s charged up blade hummed with energy. “SONIQUE!”

    The deep slash of energy smashed against the bars. It dented them deeply, but Nat seemed to know more force was needed. Another heavy slash rocketed forwards and hit the bars. They broke into two, allowing Mortimer, Afee and Boko (who had been towards the back of the cell) time to walk out.

    The light shining through the small windows cast its gaze over Mortimer. He was thin as ever, the weeks in prison not really helping. His purple and black robes were like that of a ninja, folded here and there, but somewhat loose. His once jet-black hair was streaked with flicks of silver and grey – evidently time was taking its toll on Mortimer. The few lines on his forehead and at the sides of his mouth were only really evident when the light hit his face – other than that, they were discreet and his face retained some youth.

    “How good it is to see you again,” Mortimer said wholesomely, shaking Monica’s hand. “How good indeed.”

    As Mortimer went to greet Nat, Afee emerged from the cell. Monica smiled at him as he held a hand out. Afee was younger than Mortimer, but still something of a veteran, perhaps being in his late thirties of early forties. He was a Purist – this was evident by his charcoal-black skin. His eyes looked somewhat whiter than usual, probably because they were against the colour of his skin. His eyes were a dull green, while his hair was black and by no means short, but still remaining well taken care of and neat. He wore a sort of formal gown that made him appear somewhat regal – it was white and silver with a black trim. Monica shook his hand.

    “Thank you for your efforts,” he simpered. Afee’s voice was high and when speaking in a friendly manner, he often sounded somewhat odd. Afee greeted Nat, and Monica was confronted by Boko. The Flame Champion, who was big and muscled, stepped out the cell and grasped Monica’s hand in one of his. He shook it vigorously and smiled at her.

    Boko was a big, hulking man. His hair was short and fuzzy; a dark ginger in colour, but it was rarely seen. He wore a battle helmet which was very good at stopping blows to his head. He had dark blue clothes on, with a heavy gold belt and dark trousers. His boots were thick and heavy, his hands encased in gauntlets. Boko had been a very sullen man when Monica last saw him – Boko’s best friend, a Water Adept named Reef, was struck dead by Dimitri himself. Boko had lost a part of himself, but it seemed, since then, he had overcome it.

    “Is everybody ok?” Nat asked urgently.

    “We are all fine,” Mortimer said lightly.

    “Chrome and Tekaru are fighting two of the V4 upstairs,” Monica explained. “Be prepared to fight, or at least distract them with attacks.”

    Monica then gave a thick, heavy cough and doubled over as she hacked loudly. Afee stepped back, pulling a face; Nat patted her on the back and helped her back up.

    “Are you alright?” she asked.

    “Y-Yea…fine,” Monica gasped. She had a horrible, choking feeling for a brief second. Was this the result of what she had inhaled at the Samyura Gym? That…gaseous toxin Lilla released? Monica put the thoughts aside as she led the group out of the prisons.

    They went up the staircase, pushing open the doors and arriving in the room with the two gaping chasms either side. Suddenly, as they arrived, five sparks ignited into existence and guards materialized, brandishing swords.

    “Guards!” Nat cried.

    “Teresa must know you’re here,” Mortimer gasped.

    “Get back in them cells, scum,” one guard rasped. He ran full-pelt at the group, who split from their tight knot. Nat ran at him, slashing her blade against his, snarling and overthrowing him. Knocking his sword down the chasm, she grabbed him, headbutted him in the face and pushed him down the chasm.

    Monica did a side-step to avoid a slash from her guard. Holding her hands forward as a plate of purple energy was created; Monica blasted the beam of energy into her guard and knocked him flat.

    Afee was smirking and toying around with his guard like a cat might toy with an injured mouse. As the guard slashed his sword down, Afee teleported and appeared behind him. Turning, the guard tried another slash, only to find Afee had teleported again. Eventually, as he was getting tired of his opponent, Afee raked both his hands forward, the nails of which were slightly too long for a male, sinking them into the guard. As Afee roared loudly, sparkling black energy jolted into the man through Afee’s hands. While he screeched and screamed in pain, Afee executed a fantastic blast of energy which threw the guard off him and down the chasm.

    Boko swung his intimidating scythe downwards, having it clash with his foes sword. Sending a burning sensation through his body, Boko’s scythe burst into elongated flame and his foe leapt back His scythe turning back into energy that swept onto the badge beneath Boko’s jacket, the muscled adept stomped forward angrily. Snapping his fingers, a flame formed on his open palm. Boko let it grow and feed off the oxygen, growing in size. He then hurled it forward, where it hit the guard. His chest ignited and he screamed for help.

    “Here’s your help,” Boko snapped, grabbing the man and throwing him down the chasm.

    Mortimer leapt back eagerly as his guard approached. Mortimer charged up a shadow ball, watching it increase in size, before throwing it at his guard and knocking the wind right out of him. He fell on his buttocks, looking around at the five adepts.

    “You do not have a chance, young man,” Mortimer rasped. “Just go and stay in the Cell Room until we are gone.”

    The young man nodded and ran, full-pelt, down the steps and into Mortimer’s old cell. Mortimer gave a smirk, and the group, led by Monica, ran towards the next door. Wrenching it open, Monica led the group up the long spiral staircase up towards the main part of the castle. Taking the lead, with Boko bringing up an aggressive behind, Monica ran onwards towards the battle between Tekaru, Chrome, Luke and Scott.

    *

    Meanwhile, Al and Salo were running up the stairs after Zuuki and Serena. They finally caught up to them as they were on the landing of the fifth floor. Serena’s leg still looked in bad shape, but everyone else was fine.

    They were on the fifth floor landing when a figure arrived from the 6th floor. Looking up, everyone except Serena recognized Therebus as he ran down the stairs quickly. He looked worried, eyeing the group with intrigue.

    “Therebus!” Al snarled, drawing his sword.

    “W-What are you doing here?” Therebus asked weakly. Zuuki snorted.

    “Like you don’t know,” she snapped. “We’re trying to find out what Roger’s up to. We fought Leo and Spyda…are you next?”

    “Those must be the animaux adepts…” Therebus mumbled, recalling the names mentioned by Lusaka. “That woman…she mentioned those names…”

    “What are you on about?” Serena asked. Therebus looked at them.

    “I…” Therebus muttered. “It is irrelevant.”

    “You look in bad shape,” Salo commented. “What happened?”

    “Your friend,” Therebus said weakly. “Damien. I heard them talking about him. S-Seryun Kotsuro went to get him.”

    “What?” Salo asked. “Damien?”

    “And as for Roger…he still doesn’t know…”

    “Know what?” Al asked. Therebus eyed him.

    “When you go to his Chamber,” Therebus hissed. “Look at the portrait on the way. Leave the Chamber – Roger emptied anything important away when he knew we were onto him. Just look at the portrait. If you’re as clever as you look, you might be able to stop Roger with us.”

    “With you?” Zuuki said.

    “The V4 have been manipulated once too often,” Therebus explained. “And before I was – ahem…erm b-before now, that is, my brothers and I, we decided to work against him, and we are doing just that.”

    “Are you asking for some form of cooperation?” Al asked.

    “Not here!” he cried. “When you are out the castle, and everything here has stopped, we will contact you. I have to go, in case they find me again.”

    He turned to run, but before doing so, walked forward to Serena. Pressing his hands on her wounded leg, Therebus began chanting to himself. The crystal pendant he wore was glowing a pure blue colour as Serena’s leg fully healed.

    And Therebus ran off.

    “Stop!” Salo cried.

    “Thank you!” Serena shouted.

    “What was his problem?” Zuuki asked.

    “He knew about Damien! I’m going after him!” Salo shouted. Al grabbed her arm.

    “No! We have a job. Therebus said we would talk afterwards. Once we’re done here, we will sort out what – if anything – has happened to Damien.”

    The group was somewhat confused by the apparent dementia of Therebus. Nevertheless, they ploughed on up the wide, gradual staircase to the 6th floor, where they may finally find some answers. Remembering Tekaru’s directions, they ran down the corridor, noticing, as they went, there were no portraits or pictures.

    “Hey!” Zuuki cried out. “There’s one!”

    And, as they approached Roger’s chamber they noticed, on the wall, a small portrait. It was of a woman weeping over a dead flower and was very well done. Zuuki looked at it, staring into it, trying to decipher what it might mean…

    “Maybe it means Roger’s dying?” Salo mumbled. Serena snorted with laughter, but tried to make it sound like a cough.

    “I have no idea what this means…” Zuuki continued. “Like, how is this relevant?”

    Al was staring, too, but not at the portrait. Instead, he took a step back and looked at the slightly crooked angle it hung at. Musing things over, Al came to the conclusion that, in a place like this, nothing would be left crooked – everything was pristine. He reached up and took it down from the wall.

    “What are you doing?” Serena asked. Al simply did not answer, turning the frame over and noticing that, tucked behind the frame to lodge it in place were a series of pages from a book. Al slipped them out and began reading them.

    “Al, how did you know?” Zuuki asked. Salo nodded eagerly as if she, too, wanted to know Al’s knack for working things out.

    “Al has a gift,” Serena explained, smiling. “He is so…clever. You’d be surprised how much logic he has.”

    “I’m glad you were with us, Al,” Salo said happily.

    “Al? Are you ok?” Zuuki asked. But he didn’t answer.

    “Al?” Serena cried. “What’s wrong?”

    His face was empty and lifeless. Staring in shock at the words on the pages, Al simply stuttered and was unable to answer.

    “What does it say?” Zuuki barked. Al gave a jump.

    “J-Just look at this,” he mumbled. Zuuki, Serena and Salo each began reading it, Serena being the fastest and taking another page for herself to examine while Zuuki and Salo caught up.

    “The Wysha Diamiond?” Serena said slowly.

    “I know,” replied the Quaker. “This is what Roger’s been looking for. This is why he wanted the AU out of the way.”

    “This is big,” Zuuki said suddenly, having caught up. “But who could he have in mind?”

    “I’m not sure,” Al replied. “Come on, we need to get back as soon as we can.”

    He folded the papers up and pocketed them.

    “Come on.”

    And just as soon as they ran there, the group ran back towards the staircase again. Fear pounding at their chests, minds swarming with possibility and bewilderment, the group ran back to the entrance of the Castle. It was essential they found everybody. And fast.

    *

    “Still alive?” Scott taunted, ramming into the Crucifix with Delvil. Weary, Tekaru clung on tightly. He was drained of energy and had no idea how he could get out of the situation. Chrome and Metametal were doing fine but Tekaru, only level 11, was finding that maintaining his elementa was difficult.

    A fist slammed into the base and Tekaru gave a gasp. The crucifix died away in a wisp of golden smoke as the young Prince fell to the ground, groaning in pain. Like a giant, Delvil stood over Tekaru menacingly, Scott enjoying everything very much. Tekaru tried summoning his hammer, but it was no use. He lay there feebly as Scott thudded forward.

    And then, a door burst open. Instantly jets of various coloured light swept around the room, mainly into Delvil. Mortimer sent a Night Shade, Monica an Elementa, Nat a Sonique, Boko a fireball (although it did very little) but Afee watched his brother.

    “Afee?” Chrome gasped.

    “It is I!” Afee cried jubilantly, impressed by his brothers control over Metametal. “Keep it up!”

    “Oh no,” Scott groaned. “Delvil! Ember Assault!”

    But as Delvil cast the attack, Nat ran forward with a Halo Blade attack. The swinging sword charged up and was slashed ruthlessly into Delvils leg, causing the beast to give an almighty roar of pain. It lurched forward and by doing so, the group fired another assault forward and struck the giant down. Delvil slowly faded into smoke and haze as Scott landed neatly on the ground.

    “Luke! Help me!” Scott snapped. Luke and Forrai smashed four fists into Metametal and knocked Chrome off. Forrai disappeared into Luke’s body again as the young man landed. Chrome recalled Metametal and fell on his back.

    Now that the giants were indeed out of the way, Scott and Luke watched as the other 7 members of the AU rounded up on them. Each of the AU members stared angrily into the eyes of Scott or Luke. It was their actions which had an impact on all of them.

    “This is pretty satisfying,” Monica said angrily, pacing forwards. “I hope you two never get up again after all the pain and suffering you’ve caused us. You killed Alan. He did nothing to you.”

    “Calm down,” said a voice. Teleporting by his brother’s side was Karadon, who swept dirt and grime from his cloak. “Please, settle down!”

    Monica stepped back.

    “Don’t you tell me -

    “We need to talk,” Karadon explained, glancing sideways, as if to check for someone. “I am sorry, but we had to fight you tonight. We are doing everything we can to regain Roger’s trust.”

    Re-gain?” Mortimer asked. “What did you do to lose it, I wonder?”

    “Well,” Luke began. “He was so secretive with us. So we demanded answers and he…got a bit angry.”

    “Since then, Therebus has disappeared, and we know Roger is behind it. We think he is working with other people. He explained to us if we helped defend the castle tonight, then he would tell us where Therebus was.” Karadon continued. His tone, for once, did not sound mighty and in-control. It sounded scared.

    “I see,” Mortimer replied. “Is our other group being…attacked tonight?”

    “Yes,” Karadon replied. “But not by us. Two adepts by the names of Leo and Spyda are also aiding us. They are, by nature, brutal and don’t seem to be under any…force to help us out. They are fighting to kill. Your friends must be careful. They are doing this because they are strong.”

    “They’ll be fine,” Nat growled. “Our bunch are strong.”

    “D-Do you know if a girl named Lilla has been working with Roger?” Monica asked. Karadon frowned.

    “I can’t say the name rings a bell,” he admitted.

    “Oh,” Monica replied, crestfallen. “She was in Samyura, and seemed desperate to try and stop us getting here.”

    “Then it sounds as if Roger has got others working for him,” Luke said. “I doubt he would have told us about someone stationed elsewhere.”

    “We should go,” Mortimer announced. “We are grateful for your information. But we should go. Before anything happens.”

    “Yes, you should do that,” Karadon said. “We are going to get out of the way.”

    He paused.

    “We are no longer the V4,” he explained. “Violence is not a technique we solely rely on. From now on, our path for justice will earn us the name J4 – or Justice 4.”

    “I am glad to hear you have reformed your ways,” Mortimer said kindly, as if the two were talking about bullying, or stealing, or something small and innocent. “Good bye.”

    And off they went. In three bright green flashes, the 3 members of the J4 disappeared into the atmosphere. Mortimer gave a nod. The door directly ahead, across the other side of the room was the way out.

    As they ran, Monica’s mind was buzzing. The V4 had reformed…they only attacked to trick Roger…they were turning against him…and Al was in trouble, which worried Monica more than she expected. Would the other group fare ok against these powerful adepts Karadon mentioned?

    Just then, Mortimer felt a tingling in his head. Afee looked at him, then at the door ahead, and nodded in silent agreement. Boko saw the two exchanging worried looks. Suddenly, the door was blown right off its hinges and Monica, Tekaru and Nat were thrown back into Chrome. Sensing something was wrong; Mortimer backed away and ran towards the door on the right. Afee and Boko followed, and together the three slammed it shut, listening keenly for news on what was happening.

    Monica got up.

    “Where is Mortimer?” she asked.

    “Oh, I’ll tell you where Mortimer is,” came a voice. Monica gasped and looked up. Standing in the doorway was a man and woman, both looking flustered and angry. The woman, whose long, flowing hair was the same colour as Tekaru’s was somewhat upset. Five guards swarmed around the group, clutching swords. They all stared at the 4 adepts, who were wondering where on earth Mortimer had gone. Roger was in the flesh, from his balding hear, to his stiff moustache and irritable golden shoulder pads to his shiny black boots.

    “Mother!” Tekaru cried. “Roger!”

    “Tekaru!” Teresa cried.

    “This is Roger?” Nat snapped.

    “Mortimer is waiting to be killed,” Roger continued. “Him and his friends are locked up in the cells, ready to be trialed this afternoon! They are horrible traitors onto this beautiful land.”

    “You’re wrong!” Tekaru shouted. “WRONG!”

    “Tekaru!” Lady Teresa shouted impatiently. “Stop this revolution at once! You know the three were found with evidence plotting to overthrow me!”

    “I know Roger got his sons to frame treason,” Tekaru drawled. “And I also know WE were attacked by Roger’s sons in Saffron City!”

    “Oh Tekaru…” Teresa said softly. Monica was in awe of her beauty – her skin looked so soft and gentle, and she seemed such a lovely woman…but she had flared up and looked both distraught and disgusted. “You promised me the lies would stop when you came back!”

    “And instead you bring together a gang of ruffians to try and kill me?” Roger barked.

    “Tekaru!” Teresa cried. Tears began spilling down her face. “No! No…”

    “He is a bad man!” Tekaru cried back. “HE IS A BAD MAN!”

    “YOU ARE WRONG!” Teresa shrieked. Everybody fell silent. “STOP TWISTING EVERYTHING, TEKARU! YOU CAN NEVER BRING YOUR FATHER BACK!”

    If possible, the room went even quieter. An awkward silence lingered in the air like a circling bird looking for prey. Tekaru was stunned. His face was blank, empty and void.

    “You are breaking my heart with these lies!” Teresa wept. “Breaking – my – heart! Tomorrow is the day I am to be getting married to this man you…you incessantly slander! I cannot do this any more, Tekaru!”

    “Mother…” Tekaru said fondly, a single, glassy tear rolling down his cheek.

    “If you make me choose, then you cannot win,” Teresa said softly. She jerked her head away, burying her head in her hand. The other pointed at the group. “Go on. Do it.”

    “W-What’s going on?” Tekaru asked wildly, as the guards advanced.

    “You made me d-do this!” Teresa wept, uncontrollably crying as she battled with her actions. “Please…don’t come back again!”

    “No!” Tekaru cried, falling to his knees. “No!”

    “YES!” Teresa shrieked. “Don’t come back…”

    The guards delved into their pockets. Each drew a device looking like a grenade. It was a green colour. Monica, Tekaru, Nat and Chrome looked around wildly. Roger’s face was twisted with fury.

    Teresa turned and ran up the staircase. Tears spilled down her face as she cried loudly. Roger stared at the group.

    “I might not be able to live up to my promise now, Tekaru,” he said coldly. “But if you don’t stop now, this could all end horribly.”

    “YOU CRUEL BASTARD!” Monica shouted. “You COWARD!”

    Roger eyed her.

    “This ‘coward’ will be King of Evayard tomorrow. Try not to cross me again.”

    He looked at the guards.

    “NOW!”

    Each guard threw the capsule-like grenades forward. They hit the ground and each guard ran full-pelt after Roger, who had run out of the room quickly. The capsules burst open and released a horrible green gas. Monica looked as the gas circulated around the room. It was ensnaring her senses…her eyes felt heavy, and everything lost focus. To her left, the exhausted Tekaru and Chrome fell to the ground, unable to fight it any longer.

    “N-Nat…” Monica gurgled. She looked around, feeling blindly for her friend. But she could not see nor hear Nat. Monica felt herself give up as she tipped backwards and knew no more.

    “That smells like sleeping gas,” Afee said, sniffing eagerly. “We must get away before it reaches us!”

    “We have to fight them!” Boko hissed. “We cannot just…run away!”

    ”We cannot fight all those guards,” Mortimer said hopelessly. “We can’t portray the image we are bad people. Teresa would think badly of it.”

    “She is clearly brainwashed as it is!” Boko snapped.

    “The Crufia Marketplace,” Mortimer said dolefully. “We will all teleport there.”

    “Shadow…” Afee said slowly, his hand on the door that separated him from his unconscious brother. “…I shall be the one who saves you.”

    And with that, the three teleported away in a flash of green sparks.









    Next Chapter: Phoenix the Fallagen

    Phoenix's quest for answers leads him to a small island in the center of Kralakorn Lake, where he finally meets his distant father, Tohweid. Tohweid teaches Phoenix all about his families ancient ancestry and his complicated Adeptry Alignment which he must earn instead of simply have in his blood.

    When Monica fails to return from the Castle, Al fears his hallucination has come true. Luckily, Al, Zuuki, Salo and Serena have recovered the textbook extract Therebus left for them on the top floor of Roger's Corridor. Anxiously, they explain to the group everything they know about The Wysha Diamond, and the consequences it will have for them all...

    And Pyrites selects Seryun Kotsuro as his next victim. With Scabb assisting him, and Damien accompanying him (through no choice of his own), will Seryun become another victim to the Soul Adept?

    And, in Evayard, Keri's work for Silva is finally unveiled. What hurt Silva so badly that was necessary for the experiment? And will the results prove beneficial?

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    This fic has really gotten old. I want to finish it before I leave so I'm going to start writing again.

    This chapter is quite a ground breaker and will set the tone for a lot of future plots. Obviously it's been a while so here is relevant information to understand the chapter:

    (I'd suggest re-reading some bits)

    -The Adepts United are on the continent of Evayard. It is ruled by Queen Teresa, whose son Tekaru (A Storm Tamer) has joined the AU. She is to be wed to Roger Megallo, a man with hidden motives and four powerful sons. Karadon (Water adept) and Behemoth the water golem; Therebus, the cold, rattling Ghost Adept with a powerful scorn (and his spirit, Spirit of Mother, a manifestation of his mother's love). There is Luke, the earth adept with his spirit Forrai, the tree nymph and Scott, the Fire adept and his devstating fire demon, Delvil. The brothers, known as the V4, are distanced from their father.

    -the AU split up to raid the castle. Monica (Ghost), Nat(Earth), Tekaru (Electric) and Chrome (Purist) broke Mortimer (Ghost), Afee (Purist, brother of Chrome) and Boko (Fire) out the prison (where Roger had imprisoned them in a bid to pick off the AU in small groups), but were caught and taken away by the Guards.

    -Al (Earth), Zuuki (Fire) and Salo (Water) met up with Serena (Electric), an AU member who had been absent of late. She joined their quest to explore the castle.

    -Al's group duelled with Spyda and Leo, two animalistic adepts that had been hired to kill Tekaru. They were hired by Lusaka, who seems to be the one giving Roger orders. She is an enemy of the AU.

    -Al's group obtained some notes taken from a book by Therebus, the ghostly son of Roger. They seem important.

    -Phoenix, after twice failing to kill Dimitri (who was eventually killed by Nat, his sister), is on a quest to find his Father, Tohweid, to understand his connection with the odd Dimitri.

    -Monica was previously captured by a woman named Silva, who needed to find a disc-like amulet that would restore her natural adeptry (sapped by a genetic disposition). Monica ran away, but Silva managed to salvage some hair, skin and nails which she took to a laboratory. An old friend, Keri, got to work on them.

    -Silva's brother, Gauld, is a fantastic sword weilder. He met Lee, a ghost member of the AU in his personal quest to remove a cursed mask from his face. They duelled in a fantastic battle against a psychotic sword weilder and won. Lee's mask was removed.








    Monica’s Vendetta
    Nineteen
    Phoenix the Fallagen

    Mortimer, Afee and Boko arrived in Crufia within moments and looked around. It was almost daybreak, and a golden line of sunlight was drawn across the tops of the mountains around Mahanui. Mortimer wondered how Lee was doing up there, and when he would return.

    “Should we head to the Inn and wait there?” Afee asked. Mortimer gave a brief shake of his head.

    “No,” he replied. “We wait here for Al and his group.”

    And after about five minutes, Al led his group as they ran from the Castle frantically. They ran across the courtyard, each looking fearful and scared. Al led the way, gripping his black Assassin blade in his hand. To his left, Zuuki raced alongside, hands ignited with orange flames. Salo was on Al’s right, running slightly behind, while Serena ran to Zuuki’s left.

    “Good to see you,” Al replied.

    “Serena!” Mortimer cried. “To what do I owe this pleasant surprise?”

    “Nice to see you again,” Serena said happily, as the group stopped and milled around them. “I’m here ‘till the end now.”

    “That is excellent,” Mortimer replied briskly. Al looked bursting to speak, but Mortimer intervened.

    “We will go to the Inn,” Mortimer said. “You have rooms, I assume?”

    They nodded.

    “What about Monica?” Al asked. Mortimer turned.

    “She knows where we are,” he replied. “But we need to talk. Come.”

    And feeling like children who had been told off, Al, Zuuki, Salo and Serena traipsed after Mortimer, Boko and Afee as they were led to the Inn. Turning back at the castle, Al was filled with a slightly ominous feeling, and remembered that…vision (was it a vision?) he experienced when he was fighting Spyda.

    *

    At the Inn, the members of the AU were spaced around. Zuuki sat on the windowsill, staring outside. Salo sat on her bed, staring up at Mortimer. Al stood by the door, watching Mortimer too. Serena stood with Al, albeit somewhat more relaxed than the tense Quaker was. Boko sat on a bed with Afee, and Mortimer stood, looking around at them all.

    “We have many issues to deal with,” he began, making eye contact with everyone as he said the words. “You will have noticed we were freed successfully, but there have been some complications.”

    Mortimer went through everything that happened when Roger and Teresa appeared. He explained how Monica’s group was knocked out with gas, and how their group teleported away before it reached them. The group took this easily; most understood the situation was inescapable, and there was nobody to blame. Al however, thought differently.

    “So where is Monica?” Al snapped.

    “We have a few assumptions,” Mortimer explained. Afee rose at this point.

    “It is important to know there were a lot of guards present. They could have been escorted anywhere in the castle without the force of the sleep gas, so we are assuming, for now, that they have been transported somewhere.” He told them.

    “But where?” Al whined.

    “We can’t be sure,” Afee told the irritated young man. “In the morning we will attempt to contact Monica’s group via a pathian – although we cannot be sure it will work. For example, if they are still asleep from the gas, they cannot connect to the pathian link. Thus, we must attempt the pathian as many times as we can.”

    “So Monica, Chrome, Nat and…and…” Serena mumbled, forgetting the Prince’s name.

    “Tekaru,” Zuuki hissed, smirking.

    “A-And Tekaru,” Serena continued. “They’re the ones who are gone.”

    “Yes,” Mortimer replied. “Did you find anything of intrigue?”

    “Yes,” Al replied sternly. “But before we show you, we need to explain everything that happened. Therebus – we met him. He said to us he had been kidnapped by Roger and…someone else. Because he knew something. He mentioned about Damien; he told us Seryun Kotsoru took him away somewhere but didn’t mention anything else.”

    “Seryun?” Mortimer asked. Al nodded. “Please, continue.”

    “Therebus also told us the V4 were not working directly with Roger –

    “Indeed, Karadon said they were fighting us tonight simply to gain Roger’s trust. They are not going to call themselves V4 any longer, as Violence is not what they stand for.” Mortimer interrupted.

    Al looked somewhat irritated.

    “Anyway,” Al went on. “We have something even more surprising then that. Therebus gave these pages to us. This is what Roger is looking for.”

    Al handed the pages to Mortimer and Mortimer read them.

    “The Wysha Diamond,” Al said darkly, enjoying the surprised looks on their faces. “A huge Diamond just brimming with dark energy. It’s location is unknown, but this potent source of Adeptry has incredible powers. When Ghost Adepts or Purists absorb the energy of the diamond, they are granted with new powers and change class. They are given the class of Ghost Necromancer or Pure Necromancer.”

    Mortimer gasped.

    “That’s right,” Al muttered. “The Wysha Diamond grants the user Necromancy. The ability to bring life to the dead.”

    “Good god,” Mortimer exclaimed.

    “Roger wants to bring somebody back from the dead?” Salo asked.

    “That seems to be the case,” Mortimer evaluated.

    “We have to find that Diamond and destroy it,” Al snarled. Serena intervened.

    “Hang on,” she began. “Is it really our duty to destroy it? We don’t know who he is bringing back from the dead. We don’t know why, either. I suggest we find out what he’s planning first.”

    “It can only be bad news,” Boko told Serena.

    “I thought so, too,” Serena began airily. “But then again, I was one of the ones who tries to stop you getting those artifacts in Altonia and coming to Evayard in the first place! Back then, your motive was twisted and you were all bad people to me. But when we found out why you were doing it, we realized how wrong we were.”

    The group, particularly Mortimer, Afee and Boko, were shocked.

    “Do you see my point?” Serena asked.

    “I suppose so,” Mortimer replied, giving in. “We should assess the situation before leaping in.”

    “Although what about Seryun?” Zuuki asked. “He kidnapped Damien. What is that all about?”

    “Obviously there is something about Damien Seryun wants to exploit,” Mortimer began. “I don’t know what we should do.”

    “Obviously get some sleep,” Serena said. Zuuki seemed glad of the authority Serena was having among ‘the three veterans’ – Mortimer, Afee and Boko. It seemed she felt as important as them, for she was being rather imperative.

    “Yes,” Mortimer said. “We shall go to Monica’s room, and you can all sleep in here.”

    Al was not all too convinced that the AU had a hold on the situation. Yes, they all knew Roger was planning to resurrect somebody from the dead. But what worried him the most was that they had no leads, Monica was missing, and things would get worse before they could get better. Finally getting into bed, Al sighed as the golden light of the sun beamed overhead. Something wasn’t right.

    *

    Meanwhile, across the plains of Evayard, Seryun, Damien and Scabb wandered onwards towards a little dock on the East side of the continent. Seryun wandered in silence, Katana drawn. Scabb brought up the rear behind Damien.

    A figure was walking towards them. Seryun caused the group to stop and watched keenly. None of them had ever seen the figure before, with his hair hanging to his eyes, his silk gloves on his perfectly sculpted hands, and his violet cloak on. His white shirt looked magnificently crisp.

    “Greetings,” the man said.

    “Yes?” Seryun snapped.

    “Seryun Kotsoru, am I right?” the man asked.

    “Yes,” Seryun said, looking suspicious. “Who are you?”

    “My name is Pyrites,” replied the man. “I am a Soul Adept and…forgive me. I was drawn here by the negative aura you were giving off.”

    “Negative aura? Get real,” Seryun replied. “I have no ‘aura’, negative or otherwise.”

    “But…” Pyrites said softly, giving an airy smirk. “I can sense it. Seryun…you’re not the same anymore.”

    “Explain yourself or be shredded!” Seryun snapped, sword pointing at Pyrites. “Go on!”

    “Very well,” Pyrites said softly. “You are not the same anymore. Ever since Splinter was murdered, you’ve been struck with fury at Roger, yet you’re powerless to stop him.”

    Seryun’s eyes widened.

    “H-How do you…?”

    “Know?” Pyrites chuckled. “I am a Soul Adept. I can sense the Darkness in your Heart. Seryun, you are overpowered by fear – that is why you’re aligning yourself with Roger, is it not?”

    “Shut up!” Seryun barked. “NOW!”

    “You asked me to explain myself!” Pyrites cried incredulously, feeling offended. “And there you have it. Once a popular Storm Tamer…then you met Splinter and became a thief…oh, and then you started working for Roger, you know, to get a little bit of money. And then, oh, it’s so sad…then you sunk deeper in your life of crime.”

    “SHUT UP!” Seryun screamed. He raced forward, ready to deal a fatal blow to Pyrites. Pyrites summoned a powerful Katana – Placid Storm, the one he stole from Tevaro, and countered Seryun’s slash with one of his own.

    “No,” Pyrites snapped. Sword pointed forward, he eyed Seryun with disgust. “Seryun, you disgusting boy. You have not only become a thief, you are now an unbalanced youth with nothing to gain!”

    “You…” Seryun growled. Pyrites turned away.

    “If you ever do want any advice…” he said slowly. Take my card.”

    With a bright flash, the mystical man was gone. In his wake was a golden card, shiny and bearing silver letters. Seryun crept over to it, picking it up rather hastily and reading the words.

    Pyrites – the Soul Adept.
    Come to me to heal the darkness in your heart.


    On the reverse were instructions.

    Simply mutter the following:
    ‘I wish to clear the darkness in my heart’
    And I will appear.


    Seryun slipped the card in his pocket. Scabb watched animatedly, while Damien seemed intrigued.

    The three walked onwards, Seryun plagued with intrigue and confusion as he tried to comprehend what was going on. Did he need help? Counseling for what he was feeling? Pyrites was right – he did regret working for Roger. But what could he do? Sighing, he pressed the group on.

    They reached Marishore – their destination. The very tiny village was scrambled around the impressive docks. Beautiful ships lined the shoreline, their masts billowing in the wind. It was light now, but still very early morning. Seryun told Scabb to watch Damien as he entered a small hut.

    “Hello,” Seryun said softly, approaching a woman behind a desk. “I’m looking to borrow a ship.”

    The woman, with blonde hair in rigid curls, looked somewhat surprised. She was rather overweight and had thin glasses on.

    “I-I’m sorry sir,” she began. “But these ships are not for rental. They are all part of the visiting Duke Montgomery’s fleet. He is visiting for the Royal Wedding tomorrow.”

    “Oh,” Seryun said lightly. He almost forgot that tomorrow was the day Roger married Teresa. Naturally, people from all over would be flocking to see this marriage. “Well, you see, this is very important.”

    “Well you cannot steal one of the Duke’s ships,” The lady informed him. Seryun suddenly held his sword forward, having it touch the woman’s throat dangerously. She gave a gulp as Seryun’s face was twisted with anger.

    “Watch – me.”

    And with that, Seryun slashed the woman’s throat. She gave another gasp as her head came clean off. A shower of blood spurt upwards from her neck as Seryun was dabbled with specks of crimson. The head thumped against the floor, the body fell back too, and Seryun slipped his sword in the sheath.

    Throwing the door of the hut open, Seryun pointed to the most elegant boat, directly ahead of them on Pier 6. It was a fantastic mahogany colour, with a pearly white mast. There was a mermaid on the front, hands across her chest, wearing an expression of utter pleasure.

    “We’ll go on this one,” he snapped.

    “Y-You killed her!” Damien cried, white as the masts. “Why?”

    Seryun turned instantly.

    “Button it,” he growled. “Unless you want me to pay Salo a visit?”

    Damien shuddered as he felt his emotions overcoming him. He had gone. So far, the AU had not been able to find him. They would come soon, he told himself…soon. Salo would be worrying so much while Chrome…well Damien imagined Chrome to be nonchalant about it. What would everyone say when they found out Damien had been kidnapped?

    They went across the pier, Damien glancing back at the small village of Marishore as he left the small, pokey houses which littered the docks. Everyone was still asleep…it was only just daybreak…

    They walked up the gangplank. Seryun stopped. The white transparent shield around the ship was still up. This prevented people entering the boat and acted as a security device. Seryun gave a sigh and leapt off the gangplank onto the pier.

    “Scabb, go for it,” he snapped. Scabb nodded, lifting his hood down. He pushed Damien out of the way and approached the shield. Pulling his sleeve back on his left arm, Damien saw something utterly revolting and gave a petrified scream.

    Instead of a fleshy arm, Scabb had an arm comprised of metal. His fingers, his palm, his wrist…all the way up to his shoulder was a steel arm which looked impressive and very strong. Damien wondered how it had happened.

    Scabb sent his steel arm flying into the shield. It made contact, and as Scabb charged up energy, his steel arm conducted the energy and sent it into the shield. Concentrating hard, Scabb’s face soon shone with sweat. The shield began to fade away, losing its passion and its energy. The energy of the shield was slowly being sapped. He stepped back, pulling the sleeve of his cloak back down and turning to Seryun.

    “Good job,” Seryun rasped. He leapt up onto the boat and beckoned Damien to follow. The young man wandered up onto the ship. Scabb, who had also boarded, grabbed the gangplank and threw it onto the pier.

    Seryun looked around.

    “Scabb, get up into the crows nest,” Seryun snapped. Scabb nodded and proceeded to climb up the impressive mast. The young Storm Tamer then turned to face Damien.

    “Well?” he barked. “Get up to the Captains wheel.”

    Kicking Damien in the back, Seryun watched as his prisoner walked up to the wheel and grabbed hold firmly. The wheel, and Damien’s hands, began pulsating a blue colour. Seryun watched with glee. The boat started to shudder and gently slid out of the dock.

    Damien steered the ship out of the dock. Seryun handed him some directions and explained where they were going.

    “We’re aiming for the Unitan Settlement on that Island,” he told Damien.

    “Right,” Damien muttered.

    “I know my bearings, so if you try and steer us somewhere else, I’ll know,” threatened Seryun. Damien gave a doleful nod and turned, almost eagerly, to see if anybody from the AU was running along the dock, trying to save him…

    But it was not so. Nobody was there. Nobody was going to help him. Nobody knew where he was. Damien could have broken down in tears as his predicament worsened. And that was that. As the boat sailed cleanly out of Marishore Dock, Damien felt his positive outlook leave him.

    *

    It had been a long time, a long time indeed since Silva arrived at the LaTrousse Laboratory and attacked Keri. Since then, Keri had been very busy doing work under Silva’s watchful eye. The two were rivals, as it were, not through their abilities but primarily because of their families. Silva’s family and Keri’s family were both very wealthy and very ambitious. But the two families were bound together unwillingly by a dark secret. One they did not want to come out.

    Silva was sleeping on a single bed in the corner of the laboratory. Keri, her lab coat on, worked furiously as she used the adeptry she was born with to help aid her. Keri’s adeptry was an odd one, and a very discreet one at that. She had a number of peculiar elements in her blood which allowed her to heal magnificently. She could, for example, heal a wound by the use of her hands; she could clot blood so, if one was bleeding heavily there would be no problem. Similarly, she could exert both heat and chilled air from her fingertips at will. These abilities in particular were much weaker versions of the weather-based attacks Serena and any other Cloudina-raised Storm Sage could use. Keri also used her adeptry which, to her knowledge, did not have a name to help Silva with the collection of DNA she collected previously.

    “Silva?” Keri asked weakly, approaching her slowly. Silva stirred. “Silva? I-It’s ready…”

    Silva slowly got up.

    “Not it,” she growled. “She. She is ready.”

    “Y-Yes,” Keri said, voice trembling as Silva gently got up and walked across the room. Keri saw there was a degree of pain between the woman’s legs as she walked. She nodded in understanding.

    “I must say, Keri,” Silva said slowly. “I was very surprised at your quickness. Your Adeptry is sharp.”

    “Well I had a good upraising,” Keri said, slightly more stubborn now.

    “Didn’t we all,” Silva drawled. “Where is she?”

    Keri pointed to a large, cylindrical chamber set half into the wall. It was a frosted tint, so all that could be seen was the dim shadow floating in the sloshed waters within. Silva looked intrigued.

    “I’m excited,” Silva said energetically. Keri wandered to a control panel and tapped in a code. There was a mechanical clunk and a whirring noise. The cylinder started to rotate around, the frosted part of the glass surface moving with the cylinder and showing a now clear surface. There was a figure floating in the water, wires coming from the thick glass to the figures various limbs. It was still shadowy and hard to determine what gender the figure was.

    Keri eyed Silva momentarily before turning back to the control panel and submitting another seven-digit code. There was another mechanical, dull thud as a plug swirled open and drained the water. The limp, shadowy figure now hung only from some of the wires attached to its arms, legs; there were wires going into the chest and stomach, too. Another code was entered, and a light from beneath the cylinder flashed into life, beaming up onto the figure.

    She was only young, but as Silva stared at the naked figure, wires all over her, she let out a small triumphant laugh.

    “As you can see,” Keri began. “We didn’t have enough of Monica’s DNA to make a complete clone…but since we took an egg from you we were able to produce a human being well enough. And as you got skin tissue from parts of Monica, we were able to replicate her to an extent.”

    Silva felt the sting between her legs and understood. She looked at the young girl, as Keri was helping her out the chamber and toweling her dry. A set of clothes were already here. Silva was watching the girl with intrigue.

    The girl’s hair was long and black. Her eyes were a pretty dark blue colour, and her cheekbones were high. She looked very attractive. Silva eyed her with intrigue. Keri walked up to the girl and clothed her. After she was given basic clothes like a t-shirt, bra, and underwear, Keri gave the girl a purple zip-up jacket to go over her t-shirt. She then put on a pair of black trousers and black shoes. To top it off, Silva got out a silver visor and put it around the girls head. Her eyes were now not visible. The silvery glass across the girl’s eyes and around the back of her head gave her an odd look.

    “Can you hear me?” Silva asked firmly. The girl looked up at her.

    “Yes,” she replied. Her voice was sensual and deep. It was not like Monica’s at all.

    “I am Silva – your Mistress,” Silva explained. “Nod if you understand.”

    The girl gave a nod.

    “Your name is Mona,” Silva went on. “And you will answer to me and me only.”

    Again, the girl named Mona gave a firm nod.

    “You are a Level 11 Ghost Mage,” Silva told Mona. “And you have an array of strong attacks. Here is your weapon.”

    Silva took the Pistol from her pocket and handed it to Mona. Mona looked at it curiously, and as Silva handed her a holster, Mona strapped it on and slipped the Pistol inside. Mona then stared at Silva longingly. While Silva could not see the girl’s eyes, she knew they were pressing against her.

    “Your first mission,” Silva began. “Is to deal as much pain as you can to Keri.”

    By the computer, Keri gave a scream and ran across the room. In a flash, Mona grabbed her gun and raced at Keri, shooting bullets of solid adeptry furiously. Keri felt the adeptry pierce her skin and she gave a long moan. Mona chased after her.

    “SILVA!” Keri sobbed, as Mona began shooting at her again. “Why?”

    Silva watched from the other side of the room. Her face was set. Meanwhile, Mona shot Keri in the back and the woman fell to the ground, sobbing as blood leaked onto her once-clean lab coat.

    Mona stood over Keri, the gun pointed at her forehead.

    “It has to be done,” Silva explained. “You are the only one who knows both our families secret…except me, of course. Our parents would not want you to tell it to anyone…least of all my brother, Gauld.”

    Keri was panting. Mona swung her fist into Keri and caused a fantastic waterfall of thick, dripping blood to cascade down the woman’s face. Mona brushed her knuckles on Keri’s shirt and swung a kick.

    “Gauld needs to know the truth,” Keri said weakly. “You call yourself a ‘good sister’, when you lie and hide from the truth like this?”

    “Shut up,” Silva snapped, nodding to Mona. The girl picked Keri up by the scruff of her neck and brutally threw her into a console. There was a smash, a crackle and a flash of electricity as Keri gave a long cry of pain. Mona leapt back and blasted a night shade through the air.

    “Come, Mona,” Silva said calmly. Mona turned from Keri’s bloodied body and leapt to her Mistress’ side. The two walked out the door of the Laboratory and out into Evayard. “Our next destination is Tatami Lake, for my Destiny Amulet. I might not be able to be aided by the real Monica…but having you is even better, Mona.”

    And with that, Keri’s last words washed away from Silva’s mind as she walked through the night with her new accomplice.

    *

    For many days now, Phoenix had been wandering through Altonia. After his Mother and her student, Serena left him in Gritzwald Graveyard; the young man decided it best to walk to his next destination in his quest to find his Father. In his opinion, the walk would make it all the more worthwhile – merely flying there on his Violini would seem…cheap.

    Having visited many locations along the way to Kralakorn Dock, such as the fiery town of Balazaar (where Victor, Sid and Boko reigned from originally), Phoenix was now anticipating the meeting with his Father.

    As he wandered into the docks, he saw a lot of people hanging around. Some simply watched the docked boats, or else booked tickets for the tour boats that often sailed around the gigantic lake. Phoenix, however, was looking for a rowing boat he could use to sail to the small island where his Father was supposed to be.

    Phoenix walked along the docks and down a pier. While wandering down the wide, long pier, hearing his boots thud and clank against the wood, the young man stepped on a plank and gasped as it dropped from beneath him, landing in the water below. Bending down, Phoenix looked under the pier and saw, tied to the very end with a thick rope was a small, wet, wooden rowing boat. Grinning, Phoenix walked to the end of the pier nonchalantly. He had to be discreet. He then leapt off the edge and landed securely in the boat. It wobbled precariously.

    “Off I go,” he sighed, gripping each oar and rowing firmly. Soon the boat slipped out of the dock and Phoenix was away, sailing across the lake to find the small Island. His mind was buzzing with questions he had to ask his Father as he sailed onwards, feeling his arms soon heat up and ache longingly. They protested this sailing lark. It was not long before Phoenix could see the Island getting closer and closer.

    Before long, the shores of a very small Island greeted the young man. The Island was small indeed – the size of a large house perhaps. There were a few trees forming a tight knot of shade towards the other end of the Island. Phoenix leapt off the boat and onto the shore. There were various spears in the sand. There was a wooden rack with a few clothes drying on it, and a man sitting by a roaring bonfire, legs crossed, eyes closed.

    Phoenix recognized the man as his father at once. Tohweid. Obviously looking older than when Phoenix last met him, perhaps arriving in his late fifties, his old black cloak was now thin and tatty looking, hanging off his slightly bonier frame. His grey hair, looking as silvery as Phoenix’s did, was tied back in a ponytail and his scruffy grey beard (again, retaining slivers of silver) wrapped around his thick, full lips. Phoenix stared at him from across the fire, and Tohweid stared back with his thin, sharp eyes.

    “You made it,” Tohweid said, staring into the fire.

    “I did,” Phoenix replied. “What are you doing here?”

    “Perfecting my inner mind,” Tohweid said calmly, as if this were normal. “Focusing. This place is quiet, it is perfect. That is why I chose it.”

    Phoenix did not really know what to say. “Good,” was all he mustered.

    “Please, sit down,” Tohweid said, standing and raising his hand over the fire. As if he were pushing it, the flames compressed and lowered, until the fire was small and not looking out of place in a home. It was an unimpressive size compared to the roaring one, tall as a man that Phoenix had seen previously. But the power Tohweid used was incredible. Tohweid sat down again.

    “Please, sit down,” he said again. Phoenix obliged. “What did you think of what I just did? Impressive, isn’t it?”

    “Very,” Phoenix said.

    “Once you leave my care you will know how to do that, too,” Tohweid told Phoenix. “You are here because I need to tell you something about yourself that will change how you think. It is time for you, as you have proven to be quite capable of holding this information, to find out who you are. Why you are, and how you are.”

    Phoenix stayed silent.

    “I know that all your life you were told you belonged to two adeptry groups – electric and ghost. Your mother, Madeline, was a Storm Sage, while I was a Ghost Adept. That is a lie. I am not a Ghost Adept, but there were abilities I possessed, such as the ability to teleport, which were passed down to you without you being taught.”

    Clearing his throat, Tohweid stared at his son.

    “Phoenix, you are a Fallagen. Fallagen’s are people with supernatural potential and awe-inspiring adeptry. The word Fallagen comes from Fallen Angel, and –

    “Angel?” Phoenix asked.

    “Yes, Angel,” Tohweid said. “You, myself, my father, his father and so on – we are direct descendants from Angels.”

    Phoenix felt a thick, heavy lump in his throat he could not fully explain. His Father watched with intrigue before speaking again.

    “Did you ever wonder about the wings you could summon from your shoulder blades?” asked Tohweid.

    “I thought they were the wings of eagles,” Phoenix admitted. “Or some sort of bird, to tie in with my name…”

    “No, they are not,” Tohweid told his son. “They are the sign of a Fallagen. Furthermore, you are blessed with incredible ability.”

    “No I’m not,” Phoenix admitted. “I’m strong, maybe, but…I can’t do anything supernatural like a Fallagen.”

    Tohweid smirked.

    “That’s because you never knew you were a Fallagen!” he cried. “If you did not know you could possess incredible ability, you would not be able to use it! Don’t you see? Now I am here to tell you that you do have potential of such an extensive nature you will become something beyond an adept.”

    Phoenix was bursting to speak but…when he found himself unable to think of anything to say, he merely gave a nod and asked for his Father to continue.

    “You know this information,” Tohweid said. “And it is time for you to become someone great. Time to become a hero.”

    “Why now?” Phoenix asked. “I came to you now only because –

    “Because you have failed in your past two attempts,” Tohweid finished for him.

    “Failed?” asked Phoenix. “Failed in what? Failed what twice?”

    Tohweid just stared at him with his inviting eyes. Phoenix wanted an answer, but was getting no such thing – his father watched him still, inviting him…challenging him, almost, to work it out for himself…

    “I…I don’t know what I’ve failed in,” Phoenix stuttered.

    “Why did you come and find me in the first place…” muttered Tohweid.

    “I told you,” Phoenix murmured. “I wanted to find out who you were, and what powers you had.”

    “That wasn’t the only reason,” Tohweid said softly. “Think…”

    “It is the only reason,” Phoenix snapped, rather impatient. His father gave a wry smile. Phoenix saw this. “It IS!”

    “Calm yourself,” Tohweid went on. “Because you are wrong. Think, Phoenix! You wanted to find out about me, because…”

    And then it hit Phoenix.

    “Because it would help me,” The young man began. “It would help me to learn about my families past…and…and…”

    His next words were matched with the ones coming out of Tohweid’s mouth.

    “…the connection to our family and Dimitri.”

    Phoenix stared at his Father.

    “What does my being a Fallagen have to do with Dimitri?” Phoenix demanded. “Was Dimitri a Fallagen, too?”

    Tohweid smirked.

    “Very close,” he said. “But not quite. Dimitri possesses several qualities like those of a Fallagen – but he was not a Fallagen, nor was any of his ancestors. Dimitri’s ancestors, dating back hundreds of years now, were part of a small society called Tainted Hunters. This group devoted their lives to enhancing their power. Exposing themselves to dangerous chemicals, practicing incredible attacks, perfecting knowledge of adeptry itself – they even strengthened themselves mentally and spiritually…these people managed to learn so very much about Adeptry that their journals and notebooks were handed down generation to generation, sometimes rewritten when the originals faded into the sands of time. They were, in time, combined into a large book called the Hunters Log, left by the Tainted Hunters for generations to practice and perfect.”

    Phoenix listened with intrigue.

    “Over the decades, members of Dimitri’s family still strived to achieve much more control over Adeptry. Many decades ago, one of Dimitri’s ancestors, named Mousell, challenged locals to fights to demonstrate his adeptry. Unfortunately, he managed to challenge one of our ancestors – A Fallagen. Needless to say, Mousell was taken care of quite easily. His family were outraged – what power had this person demonstrated to destroy their loved one? Can you guess what they tried to do after that?”

    Phoenix shook his head.

    “They tried to create adeptry to rival the strength of Fallagen Adeptry. Nearly a decade was spent perfecting this new, man-made form of adeptry –

    “Can I ask you something?” Phoenix began. “Sorry to interrupt, but how can you create adeptry?”

    “Good question,” Tohweid began. “It isn’t creating it as such – more like manipulating existing adeptry. I mentioned to you how the Tainted Hunters strengthened themselves mentally – this helped as they could manipulate their attacks and change them using their minds. For example, if you had a beam elementa, they would be able to make into an orb, or move it around them in a manner of fantastic shapes. By doing this, they altered their attacks both in potency and shape. The Tainted Hunters essentially created their own attacks in this way.”

    “I understand,” Phoenix said quietly.

    “A lot of time was spent perfecting this ‘natural’ adeptry until, one day, a child was born. This child’s birth killed his mother – a bad omen, I think you’ll agree. She was in so much pain, and the child was incredibly ugly. This child was to be Dimitri’s grandfather. Little did people realize, Dimitri’s Grandfather (named Tosk) was going to be an adeptral prodigy. Already born with the basic powers of the Tainted Hunters, Tosk learned to take the teachings of the Hunters Log even further, developing the content within as he struggled to contain his power. As you know, Dimitri’s grandfather learned to use levitation, as he levitated Asteroid Fortress and was the one who built the Fortress itself. Those with the blood of the Tainted Hunters in their veins would keep it aloft, for only they contained the unique adeptry that made levitation possible. There were many other physics-defying acts of adeptry that Tosk performed, and learned, updating the Hunters Log as he went. Thus, when his son, John, was born, who you know was Natasha’s Father; he intended to pass down his knowledge.”

    “But he didn’t…did he?” asked Phoenix. “John was normal…”

    “Yes,” Tohweid said. “Unlike his ancestors, John did not wish to have such…dominating power. Perhaps his personality was inherited from a female ancestor, for every other male seemed to want to learn the ways of the Hunters Log. But John chose not to and, as I am sure you know, was heartbroken when his son, Dimitri, wished to learn the ways that John himself did not adhere to. Dimitri, despite being only 14 at the time, felt his parents had too tight a hold on him and left to Asterid Fortress, remaining loyal to both his grandfather and his origins.”

    “So that caused John and Annie, who was pregnant with Nat at the time, to leave Obola and relocate to another area.” Recollected Phoenix, who had recalled Nat explaining this story after they had defeated Dimitri. At that point, she explained about how she learned she was Dimitri’s sister, and that Dimitri told her how her parents had covered him up.

    “Exactly,” Tohweid told Phoenix. “So Dimitri went to live with his Grandfather. And for a few years they were in harmony, floating above Yilliap Island and focusing their strengths. However, before long, Dimitri’s Grandfather was murdered.”

    “By whom?” Phoenix asked.

    “By me,” Tohweid said raptly. “As a Fallagen it was my duty to try and defeat Tosk, for he is a Tainted Hunter. You see, when the Tainted Hunters began perfecting their adeptry, it was to make sure they were not defeated by a Fallagen ever again. I managed to kill Tosk, and Dimitri witnessed the entire thing.”

    “You’ve met Dimitri?” Phoenix asked, impressed.

    “Yes, but only as a young lad,” Tohweid admitted. “But I did what I had to do - what my abilities asked of me. From then on, Dimitri, who knew that those who defeated Tainted Hunters in the past went by the name Fallagen, researched on the rare adeptry we have and aimed to learn as much as he could about us.”

    “So when I fought Dimitri…he knew that I was a Fallagen?” asked Phoenix. His father nodded. “Then the connection between us is that I am the son of his grandfather’s killer.”

    “Not so correct,” Tohweid said. “True, yes, but the connection between you was that you were able to kill Dimitri. He knew you were able to, given the knowledge, but by your mannerisms you gave him a weapon. That you didn’t know you were a Fallagen. Dimitri now knew without proper Fallagen abilities he would not be killed by you.”

    “I see,” Phoenix said softly. But before he could ask more questions, Tohweid went on.

    “You fought Dimitri two times. Both times, you did not kill him.” He said.

    “Well I didn’t need to, Natasha did,” Phoenix said irritably.

    “I wish it were that simple…” Tohweid said softly. “But it is far from it. Phoenix, my son, Dimitri’s Noble Servants are regrouping. Some have fallen, but some are still alive. They have been plotting, ever since their master’s downfall, a way to bring him back. They are doing so by utilizing the Wysha Diamond – the powers this large diamond contains grants the user the ability to use necromancy. With the power of the diamond, the Noble Servants will summon Dimitri back to accomplish what he could not do beforehand.”

    “Domination?” Phoenix asked. “Or producing a child?”

    “Unfortunately, I do not know,” Tohweid sighed. “I cannot get into the mind of Dimitri, or his servants, so the reasons are unknown to me. It could be either or both. But when he rises, you must rise too – rise to the challenge and take him on in a final showdown.”

    “Why can Natasha not kill him?” asked Phoenix. But then it struck him. “When Nat killed Dimitri…she said something about how her family were never there for her, and her family were the people she lived with and cared about. Not Dimitri.”

    Tohweid nodded.

    “Is it possible that by saying that, Nat lost her ‘connection’ with Dimitri? That is to say, as he is no longer considered family, her attacks won’t kill him?”

    “It is safe to assume so, yes,” said Tohweid gravely. “This is why we must train you, Phoenix. We must train you to the status of Fallagen so you can take on Dimitri and defeat him. He does not know that you know now. We can use this to our advantage.”

    Looking at his son, Tohweid broke into a smile.

    “You live up to your name,” he said fondly. “Rising up from the ashes of defeat…rising up and learning from the past…”

    “What are we to do first?” asked Phoenix, slightly more focused than his father at this time.

    “Recover the Hunters Log,” Tohweid said raptly. “The Log contains information on how to channel and fuel adeptry. My thinking is that we can apply it to your training, Phoenix, so you have abilities equal to or greater than Dimitri’s.”

    “Ok,” Phoenix said firmly. “Where can we find the Log?”

    “It was well-protected from damage, having an adeptry shield around it. So when Asterid Fortress fell into the sea, the log was intact. Luckily it was salvaged, by a man who had no family, no money, no food or no life. A lonely fisherman out at sea, he managed to recover the Log, and since then, he has transformed. A lot stronger, he has new powers and has found a name as a famous thief. I believe you met him once before, terrorizing the land of Altonia with his cruel, twisted ways.”

    Phoenix thought for a brief moment. And then it made sense.

    “You don’t mean…Thorrus?”








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    Huzzah, you posted another chapter!

    Very good chapter overall, though I had to reread the others cause I kinda forgot. ^_^; I really like the character development of Seryun...I'd be mad too if my follower got killed, heheh. Very nice story with the Fallagens and Phoenix, giving more history to Adeptry and what not. Provides a very nice setup for future chapters.

    I don't have much to say on the part of Mona...there's so many things Silva could do with her. I hope you update this more often -- your other fic is good, but I'm always a sucker for fantasy.

    Stop trembling
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    Release your own time! Shootin’ star going towards the future!
    Draw the arch of light
    You’ll reach it, if you keep believing
    When the voice that calls for you
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    Sorry for being so absent with the fic. I know readers have dwindled but this is for anyone who is out there! This is a standalone chapter in that Monica etc are not in it.










    Monica’s Vendetta
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    It was a big day today - not only for Roger Megallo and Teresa Farrimond, but a big day for the entire of Evayard. Today they would have a new King to the throne, having not had one for ten years now. Ever since Teresa’s husband (and Tekaru’s Father) King Duncan passed away, Teresa had led the country by herself. That would soon end. The Royal Wedding was highly anticipated by well-respected individuals from all over. Little did Monica realize, her old friend Tory McCaullie, who was in fact a member of Monica’s Army, was visiting. He was the adopted son of the King and Queen of Altonia, but since then both had died. The King was murdered, and the Queen ebbed away with grief. Despite being 18 years old, Tory was a formidable King. However, because of the circumstances, Monica would not meet Tory. She was far away, with Nat, Tekaru and Chrome, still unconscious from the sleep gas.

    Of the two, Roger was clearly the one of the couple who was a bag of nerves. This was seemingly due to the fact he was hiding so many skeletons in his closet, so many secrets Teresa did not know…and Roger felt simply awful inside. An ill feeling ate away – this was his conscience, something he was familiar with. Over the years, despite having a good will, Roger Megallo was a deceptive man and was used to his conscience making itself noticed. Luckily for him, he had also begun fighting back against the guilt. He was now perhaps considered immoral for his lack of emotion and grief towards the situation, but as far as he was concerned, he was doing what needed to be done.

    “As you know, you were to stop off at Brinstead Dock,” Roger began, contacting Seryun through a pathian connection. “That can’t happen anymore.”

    “Why?” asked Seryun, intrigued and oddly frustrated.

    “Brinstead Island is mainly desserted,” Roger went on. “Except for the small area around the dock. The large overgrowth is hard to navigate. When the AU raided the castle we caught four of them and Teresa decided they should be sent there. It is difficult to escape.”

    “Damnit!” snapped Seryun. “We need to stop off somewhere! We have to dock at Brinstead.”

    “You can’t!” Roger cried. “If the AU see you…”

    “But you just told me it’s ‘hard to navigate’ Roger. We’ll be at the dock. They’ll be in the jungle.”

    “I would prefer that you didn’t cross paths so closely!” barked the man. “It is cutting it very fine…”

    “Damien will collapse with exhaustion if we keep going much farther,” Seryun explained thickly. “If he faints, we’re stuck in the middle of the ocean. And we can’t get the diamond.”

    “Stop off at the Helga Settlement,” Roger suggested. “It isn’t far from Brinstead.”

    Seryun, however, was not ready to admit defeat.

    “Does Lusaka know about this?” he asked. Roger coughed.

    “N-No, no she doesn’t. No. But Lusaka won’t be king in mere hours! So watch the attitude.”

    “Until you give me a legitimate explanation as to why Splinter died, I will give you as MUCH attitude as I want. GOT IT?”

    “Yes,” Roger said curtly, clearly not intimidated. “Now be gone. And don’t stop off at Brinstead.”

    And with that, the connection dropped. Seryun angrily told Damien to steer them to Brinstead, insisting Roger was off his rocker. Damien continued to steer, watching Scabb with intrigue. The man had a metal arm…this mysterious character was so intriguing, yet Damien could not ask any questions. Not if he wanted to see Salo again.

    Seryun watched Damien sail, pondering in his head whether or not he should believe the mysterious Pyrites or not. The card was in his hand, and the young Storm Tamer examined it carefully as he began considering his options.

    In Crufia, Roger sat nervously, waiting to be called down for the ceremony. He was in a small room just off from the grand entrance of the castle, which was where the wedding would be held. Only members of the court, such as the advisor, the doctors, and the other staff would be there with other kings, queens, dukes, duchesses, or friends and family, including the newly named J4. Each were wearing suits of a rather formal nature, sitting proudly (albeit suspiciously) in the Entrance Hall.

    Roger was ready. It was time. Nervously he turned to go to the door, wandering forward, preparing himself for the biggest moment of his life. The moment in which he would be crowned King of Evayard.

    *

    “SOMEONE, PLEASE!” screamed Lusaka. Smashing her fists against the door of her cell, bellowing loudly, tears streaming down her face, the girl had been locked here since the early hours of yesterday morning. Where was Lilla? Leo? Spyda? Had all three been killed by the AU? And why hadn’t Roger come down to see her?

    Gasping for breath, she slumped onto the floor. Therebus had smartly angered her – he must have planned his escape. A clever young man, Lusaka thought to herself, but too clever to be an enemy.

    As she sniffed tears back, she sat staring at the wall ahead. Nobody knew she was here. Well, Scabb and Seryun did, but they were sailing towards the Wysha Diamond. Roger knew, but he was at the wedding. Leo, Spyda and Lilla knew, but where were they?

    She gave a weak sob and looked around. The dismal, grey brick walls were dark due to the lack of light. She felt her heart thumping wildly against her chest. Was all lost? Would this scupper her plans?

    Apparently not.

    There was a light, scraping noise. A crash. Eyes widening, Lusaka wished so very much that she could see what was causing the crash. Who was here? A guard? A burglar? Either way Lusaka knew someone who knew of this secret chamber beneath Tekaru’s bedroom would not be this loud.

    Lusaka heard a thump against the door, followed by a scraping noise. Her eyes darted around – should she hide? She darted to the corner of the room as the door was banged against once, twice, three times…

    A lock clicked. Lusaka jumped. The handle turned and slowly the door was pushed open. Lusaka gave a gasp as she saw a figure standing there against the light from the chamber. With wires still leading out his body, scars across his arms, chest and legs, the figure watched. Their breathing was heavy.

    “I-It’s…you!” Lusaka cried, breaking into a smile. The figure stepped back, motioning for her to walk out. “What are you doing up?”

    The young man named Ray gave a smirk. He swept a hand through his brown hair and turned back to the chamber. He was only wearing a pair of shorts. His body looked very worn – cuts and scars littered him, particularly a nasty scar leading around an area which must have been near his heart. He looked much older now, with a better built frame. Trailing from the wires was a silver tray which had got caught in the wires as Ray got up.

    “Are you ok?” Lusaka asked, having got no response from the 18-year old. “D-Do you feel ok now you’re walking?”

    “Yes,” Ray replied. “I feel just fine.”

    “Do you remember what I told you?” asked Lusaka. Ray nodded. “Good, because we have a very tight schedule to meet. Get dressed and get ready. We’re going to crash the wedding.”

    *

    “Do you, Teresa Farrimond, take this man to be your lawfully wedded husband?” asked the reverend. Teresa had tears streaming down her face. She looked into her fiancées eyes and smiled.

    “I do,” she said firmly, weakly, shaking with happiness.

    “And do you, Roger Megallo, take this woman to be your lawfully wedded wife?”

    Roger smiled weakly, blinking furiously. His mind stung with guilt as he stammered, trying to get the words out. He saw his sons, each furious with their father after Therebus returned from his kidnap. All the boys believed Roger to be a cruel manipulative man…if only they knew he hadn’t kidnapped Therebus at all. If only they knew the truth…

    Roger turned back to Teresa. That beautiful woman…her face shone like a beacon of beauty. Her face reminded him of someone…someone he would rather forget. His dead wife, Yuwana…memories of his marriage day with her blossomed in his mind, but a rather disturbing memory flashed before his eyes…


    ”Y-Y-You told me…” Yuwana wept, in the corner of a darkened room. She was sobbing heavily onto her black dress. “You told me it w-was over, Roger…”

    “Yuwana, don’t believe any of it!” cried a much younger Roger.

    “I KNOW THE TRUTH!” shrieked Yuwana, cowering as she shook with fury and grief. “You’re working with Dimitri! I know Roger. I know you’re one of his underlings…I know you do horrible things…”

    Roger stood there, in the darkened room, tears down his face.

    “I now know who you really are,” she said sadly, face stained with mascara that ran down her face. “I thought you a kind, gentle man. A loving man…but you’re a terrorist! A sadistic bastard who hurts others for fun –”

    But Yuwana was cut short. Roger grabbed her wrist and dragged her up. She gave a slight scream but Roger surveyed her, angrily scanning her with his narrow eyes.

    “Don’t you dare call me any of those things - EVER!” He roared, throwing his wife back into the corner. She hit the wall limply and sobbed to herself, crumpled up like an old rag doll. Her dress was torn and her black hair long and scraggly. “I AM A CHANGED MAN, YUWANA! I AM NOT WHO YOU THINK I AM!”

    She watched him, trembling.

    “I HAVE CHANGED! I AM DIFFERENT! I AM NO LONGER A MINION TO DIMITRI!” he went on. “Don’t you dare talk to me like that.”



    Roger sighed. Yuwana had loved him…until she learned the truth. In his past, Roger had been one of Dimitri’s servants. He had tried to wriggle free from the life of crime, and he had thought that he had got away with it…he thought that surely when he ran from his past life, it would stay away…

    “Roger?” Teresa asked timidly. Roger had been quiet for some time. “Are you ok?”

    “I…what? Oh…” Roger said suddenly. “I-I’m just…very nervous.”

    Teresa smiled.

    “Do you take this woman to be your wife?” asked the reverend. Roger emptied his head of all thought relating to Yuwana and his last marriage. He had to empty his mind of Dimitri…

    “I do,” he said firmly, smiling at Teresa.

    “You may now kiss the bride,” said the Reverend, and the two kissed each other romantically, the guests smiling and applauding. The J4 watched with hard, firm expressions on their faces. Still not content with their father, and after hearing what Therebus told them, they lost all respect for Roger altogether.

    When Lusaka and Roger had argued, Lusaka brought up the point that Roger’s faith (or lack of) was what broke his marriage up and brought his wife to deaths door. Therebus heard that much from the locked room and was quick to tell his brothers. Both curious and furious, the brothers decided that, as they knew the powers which the Wysha Diamond had, they would use it to bring back Yuwana from the dead. Despite being fragile, she was a powerful Ghost Adept. Yuwana would be able to put a stop to Roger.

    Roger and Teresa were to soon lead the reception out the doors of the Castle and down a red carpet leading from the castle. Crowds were piled around either side of the carpet, waiting to see their new King, but Roger and Teresa were to walk to their carriage and visit some of the towns and cities in Evayard today. The group had a few minutes to chat and talk about the wedding before going out to the public. Roger took this chance to speak to his sons and hopefully clear the air. He knew, from the expressions they wore, that Therebus had overhead Lusaka’s argument and told his brothers everything.

    “Hello boys,” Roger said cheerfully. “Well…you’re all princes now!”

    “Congratulations,” Luke said bitterly. He contained his fury, Scott too, who was clenching his fists with anger. His eyebrows pressed down firmly, and his teeth were gritted tightly. Therebus stayed silent, blank, expressionless, watching, but Karadon could not do that.

    “Is it true?” he asked weakly. “And don’t lie. Is it true that our Mother died because of your dark past?”

    Roger’s heart plummeted. How did his sons know about his…past? Had they pieced it together, or had Lusaka told Therebus things that he, Roger, did not know about? Wondering how he could cover it up, Roger mumbled while calculating an answer. His weariness and fear was quelled, however, when Luke spoke up.

    “What did you do to send Mother into so much grief and self-denial?”

    Sighing, the King could not help but feel somewhat happy. They did not know his previous alignment with Dimitri…

    “This is very awkward,” Roger said. “And has come at a bad time. I will be spending much of today traveling, but when I am finished, tomorrow, I will come and tell you everything you need to know.”

    “No,” Karadon snapped. “Tell us now.”

    “Admit what you did to our Mother!” Luke hissed. “Or none of us shall ever trust you again.”

    “We defended the castle for you when the AU raided it,” Scott barked. “And this is how you repay us? More unanswered questions…”

    “Please, boys,” Roger said, smiling as he saw people watch their heated argument with intrigue. “Later.”

    “Why did Therebus get kidnapped?” Luke snapped. Roger’s eyes widened. His sons stared maliciously at him – Karadon and Luke were voicing their anger more than Therebus, who was silent. Scott flexed his fingers and cracked his knuckles.

    “Now look,” Roger growled, voice low, serious and somehow deadly. “I did not kidnap Therebus. There are people that employed me – against my wishes, I assure you, and the reason Therebus was kidnapped was because he saw a map which illustrated my boss’s plans. The people I work for…they are hostile and incredibly powerful. I am going to try and use my position as King to turn the tables on them soon enough…but until then…”

    Roger suddenly looked emotional.

    “…please leave Crufia. Leave Evayard if you can. Once I turn against those I work for, they will try to hurt me in any way possible. I think they will try and target you. You could fight them, I know it, but they have other ways of killing you, other ways you could not possibly imagine. Please take heed.”

    Karadon watched him. Luke spoke up.

    “I’m sorry,” he rasped. “But I don’t believe you.”

    “All I saw was a map, with Brinstead Island circled and ‘Seryun’ scribbled underneath it,” Therebus said quietly.

    “And we figured out that Seryun was going there solely on his way to the Unitan Settlement,” Luke added.

    “Going there to get the Wysha Diamond,” Karadon concluded. Roger nearly leapt up in shock.

    “H-H-How do you? -”

    “We read up on the Wysha Diamond, Father,” Karadon replied. “We knew it was at the Unitan Settlement all this time.”

    “What does it do?” Roger asked weakly. “Please, you must tell me. What does the Wysha Diamond do?”

    The four boys of the J4 exchanged mysterious glances. Should they finally tell Roger what he wanted to know? Or would his distrust and lack of loyalty earn no answers to his questions?

    “We will tell you,” Karadon sighed, sweeping his aquamarine hair away. “The Wysha Diamond is the only relic known to man which contains such high doses of energy. Located at the Unitan Settlement, it gives you the power to bring people back from the dead.”

    Roger looked paler by the second. He seemed to find it hard to speak.

    “It seems to be a form of Necromancy,” explained Therebus quietly.

    “Do you have any idea of its relevance?” asked Luke.

    “We first thought – you know…you might want to bring Mum back,” Scott said thickly. “But…since you’re not the one after the diamond…”

    But the King was still in silent awe. Of course....Roger’s memory flashed back to when he arrived at Obola - Dimitri’s City - in Perlei, crumbled down and dilapidated. No sky scrapers anymore – each large tower was at least half its original length. Large chunks of land debris scattered the place.

    Roger had been expecting Lusaka, Ray, Scabb and Tobias (Ray’s Father) to come and meet him some time ago after the death of Dimitri. Lusaka had explained, over pathian connection, that the Noble Servants old and new must regroup to try and do what Dimitri died upon trying to do. Conquer Perlei. They contacted Keisha and Roger first, but Roger never had them arrive in Crufia. Wondering what could have happened, Roger traveled to Perlei, hoping to find them. Arriving in Obola, he saw the entire city collapsed. Keisha dead, her blood splattered across slabs of concrete. After searching for the fellow servants, using his adeptry to locate them, Roger located Lusaka, Ray and Scabb – eventually.

    But they were worse for wear. Scabb’s arm was white, limp and apparently dead. He had broken ribs and gashes across his chest. Lusaka had a broken ankle and arm but was otherwise unharmed physically, while Ray had been the worse. Bordering on death, the young man had a large cut across his forehead and a patch of cracked blood on his neck. Face pale, he was out cold for months. Roger had put Ray on a life-support machine and he had been there ever since. Roger thought back to when Ray had woken – only a few times, it had to be said, the young man had stirred from his unconscious state. Hidden behind a tapestry in Roger’s chamber, Ray’s deep breathing was one thing which stirred intrigue among his four sons. Quickly sensing Ray may be discovered, Roger moved him down in a secret room beneath Tekaru’s bedroom. Ray recovered there, while Lusaka and Scabb were also treated down there, too. Lusaka was not too bad – her sister Lilla had healing powers and soon dealt with the broken bones. Scabb, meanwhile, needed an amputation of his dead arm, having it replaced with a big, hulking metal arm instead.

    “Father?”

    Roger was jerked back into reality.

    “Do you know who the diamond’s powers are being used on?” asked Luke.

    Yes, thought Roger. Lusaka, Ray and Scabb would only want one person resurrected at the moment. Yes, there were an endless list of people, but ultimately, if the powers of the diamond did not last forever, then they would want to bring their master, Dimitri, back from the dead to achieve what he could not before.

    “Y-Yes,” Roger mumbled, fear creeping over his shoulders.

    “Sir?” came a voice. Turning, Roger saw a guard ready to open the doors. It was time for Roger and Teresa to greet the Crufia people as a married couple – as King and Queen. Teresa walked over, taking Rogers hand in her own, and smiling up at his worried expression.

    “It’s ok,” she cooed. “It’s just nerves.”

    But as Roger was lead away from his sons, he knew that it wasn’t just nerves. Dimitri was coming back. When, he did not know, but all he could think about was that he had become King at just the wrong time.

    “We won’t be able to speak to him for a while,” Karadon said to his brothers. “But we need to know what we are up against.”

    The other three agreed. The entire wedding reception, led by Roger and Teresa, walked through the doors of the Castle and into the grounds. A tremendous applause met their ears, and as they walked down the red carpet, people screamed and roared in appreciation all around them. Both the Royal Couple waved and smiled at fans, wandering across the carpet of their courtyard.

    “I am so happy today, Roger,” Teresa said quietly, so only her husband could hear. “This Kingdom is going to thrive under our joined efforts.”

    She looked up to the sky, where a beautiful lilac coloured bird flapped across the sky, a letter in its talons. These magnificent creatures were Raegix – Royal birds. Teresa had many of them, using them as her personal messengers, and had sent this one off with a letter addressed to Tekaru, explaining everything that had happened. It brought a tear to her eye, but things needed to be taken care of.

    Roger watched the crowd, each smiling at him, beaming, cheering and crying…everyone was so happy for him. His weak smile was almost stuck on his face – he didn’t feel happy enough to grin for all. His eyes raked across the buildings of the courtyard and he saw, horrorstruck, two figures standing on the North turret. He had no idea what they were doing there, but they looked familiar…

    Eyes darting back to his crowd, Roger smiled and waved, kissing Teresa on the cheek. Then it happened. In a sudden flash, a searing bolt of lightening smashed through the air and struck Roger in the chest. The King was thrown off his feet, flying up into the air and hitting the ground some feet back. A wave of groans, shrieks and cries could be heard as Teresa gave a loud cry of shock. Running to her husband, Teresa bent down to see him. A huge wound on his chest leaked thick, crimson blood.

    “SOMEONE GET HELP!” she screamed, as other members of the reception crowded around to see what the commotion was. The J4 saw the attack, noticed the figures standing on the North turret and had to act.

    “This must be the ones Father was working for!” Karadon snapped. “Scott, Luke, go.”

    In an instant, Scott and Luke leapt upon Forrai, Luke’s elementa, and they flew through the air at Ray and Lusaka. Scott charged a huge fireball, while Luke simply drew his axe. Forrai flapped his large wings and clenched his four wooden fists as they landed on the top of the North turret.

    “Forrai! Elementa!” Luke cried, as a beam of green energy flew forward. Lusaka dived out the way, while Ray leapt over the huge beam. Luke leapt off Forrai, absorbing the energy, and raced at Ray with his axe. He swung down but Ray blocked with his sword, the Jupiter Edge. Sending electricity coursing through his sword, Ray overthrew Luke and pushed him back. Luke was surprised to see Lusaka was no older than himself, while Ray was easily younger. Were these people the ones who controlled their strong, influential Father?

    Scott threw the fireball at Lusaka, who was hurled back. Skidding across the turret, she leapt to her feet straight away. She then threw a flurry of golden stars towards Scott, who ducked as they slashed at his torso. The force was pushing him back slightly, but he clenched his fists and endured the attacks. As fire engulfed his body, he gave a shuddering roar and tackled Lusaka to the ground.

    Ray slashed a yellow blade of energy forward, but Luke dodged. The blade flew down towards the courtyard.

    “WHY DID YOU ATTACK OUR FATHER?” Luke roared, as the winds were high. Ray slashed forward angrily and just smirked. Lusaka threw more stars at both of them. Scott was thrown off her and up into the air. In a split second he began to plummet off the edge of the turret…

    “Scott!” Luke cried. Scott summoned one of his metal claws and used it to grab onto the edge of the turret for dear life. Lusaka smirked, summoning a blade not unlike the one Pyrites had and holding it ready as energy charged up in the tip, sending a whooshing wind around her. As she had been in Samyura, Lilla had stolen a sword for Lusaka from the craftsman, Tevaro. Lusaka held it ready.

    “No!”

    Luke threw a ball of mud at Lusaka, which sloshed into her face and threw her off course. Scott leapt up and snapped at Lusaka’s sword with his claws, but the sword did not break, being made from a metal that was very durable. Lusaka threw him off.

    Ray held his hand forward and a multitude of smaller bolts all flew up high into the air. They arched back down, combining together and forming a bigger, golden bolt which whooshed as it soared down at Luke.

    Luke watched. It smashed into him and threw him back. He stumbled, holding his hands forward and blasting a shimmering, leaf-green coloured beam right at Ray. It smashed into him. Luke fell from the turret but managed to summon up Forrai to land on. He flew back up to the turret as Lusaka and Ray stood close and fired two black arrow-headed beams of energy. They both soared at Scott, who held his arms up in self-defense. Scott was thrown back, falling from the tower. Luke caught him on Forrai, and the two swooped up to face Lusaka and Ray.

    “Why did you attack him?” shouted Luke.

    “We have bigger things to accomplish,” Lusaka spoke. “Roger Megallo did not want to join us again, and he knows so much…well, we didn’t want him talking.”

    “As soon as he wakes up he’ll spill the beans,” Luke retorted. “And we’ll stop you!”

    “You were the ones who he worked for…” Scott growled. “And we know you’re after the Wysha Diamond. We’ll get it first.”

    “Don’t be so stupid,” Ray snapped. He stepped forward. “We have people picking it up right now. Even if you set off now, you’d never catch them.”

    “We’ll see,” Scott snapped. “Luke, let’s go.”

    Forrai turned and began to fly back down to Roger, but as they did so, there was a tremendous roar behind them. Scott turned, gasping in surprise, as Ray stood there on a huge, long, sinewy Chinese dragon. Lusaka was nowhere to be seen.

    “Animaux Adeptry at its strongest,” Ray snarled. The dragon flew up high, high into the clouds, swinging its tail and smashing it into Luke, Scott and Forrai. As the dragon seemingly disappeared, Luke and Scott felt themselves falling down towards the ground as Forrai disappeared…

    As they fell, the two brothers were caught in the hands of Therebus’ elementa, Spirit of Mother. The large woman, a rather grim, gaunt looking Yuwana, helped the boys down to the ground as Therebus ran over.

    “That was her!” Therebus hissed. “The woman who kidnapped me!”

    “Where is Karadon?” asked Luke.

    “He is with Father,” Therebus said quietly. “He is bleeding a lot, and is in immense pain, but my healing won’t work against him. The thunderbolt seemed to have something in it which stops Roger getting healed.”

    The three ran back to the Courtyard, where Karadon and Teresa were crouched by Roger’s side. Teresa was muttering words of encouragement to him as he laid there, eyes half-shut, breathing thick and deep as blood poured out a wound on his chest, staining his regal blue suit.

    “Father!” Luke cried desperately. “We tried fighting them…but they got away…”

    “It doesn’t…ma-matter,” Roger gasped, only so his sons could hear. “J-Just promise me something…”

    The J4 watched.

    “P-Promise me you’ll finish them off for me,” he said constrictively. “Stop them. The Unitan Settlement is where Seryun has gone for the Wysha Diamond. Get there first. You can beat him together.”

    “The Unitan Settlement?” Luke asked, who was good at directions. “We will head there.”

    “Go now…” Roger wheezed. “I am…s-so proud of you all…”

    “Father?” Scott asked firmly, as his fathers head rolled slightly to the left. His breathing was slower, and his eyes began to shut…“FATHER!”

    “He’s dying!” Therebus cried quietly.

    “Don’t die, Father!” Karadon shouted.

    “Roger, NO!” Teresa wept. “Please, Roger, Roger! Stay with me. Stay with me…come on Roger…”

    But the King’s eyelids looked as if they were being pulled down by an invisible force and soon his eyes were shut. His chest stopped rising and falling, and as the blood trickled down his chest, Roger Megallo eventually passed away.

    “NO!” Teresa shrieked, falling to his side. “NO!”

    There was frenzy all around. People crowded around to try and catch a glimpse – was it true that their new King was dead? Karadon pulled himself together, stepped back and stood with his three brothers. People were taking pictures for the paper, some of the Crufia people wept in grief, although most the buzz of conversation and the worried, tense shouting was drowned out by Teresa’s long, hard sobs.

    “He knew something,” Karadon said firmly. “And those people didn’t want him to tell us. That’s why they killed him.”

    “We have to do something,” Luke said, determined as he always was.

    “Get to the Diamond, obviously,” said Scott impatiently.

    “We can fly there on Forrai,” Luke said, his voice trembling. “I-I can’t believe he’s dead…”

    “Nor can I,” Therebus whispered.

    “All we can do is –

    “Get the Wysha Diamond first, and revive Father,” Scott said. “That’s what we’ll do.”

    “Bring him back?” Luke asked. He looked up to his eldest brother, Karadon, for advice.

    “We cannot bring back both Father and Mother,” he said sagely. “The power required could drain you beyond repair, Therebus. That means that, if we wanted to, we could bring back Mother or Father.”

    “Father,” Scott snapped at once. “He died from a cowardly assault!”

    “Mother,” Luke replied. “She died from grief. Nobody deserves to die of a broken heart.”

    “I believe I’m the one who would be resurrecting,” Therebus said, in an oddly orderly voice. “Surely the decision rests with me?”

    “If you ask me,” Karadon said firmly. “We should bring back neither.”

    The other three brothers watched in astonishment. Karadon watched their awe with a smirk and decided to press on.

    “In my opinion, death draws a white line whenever it occurs. As humans we are not supposed to cross that line. If someone dies, be it from an attack, a well-fought duel, a deadly illness or worse, they have died and have died for a reason. It is not, therefore, our duty to reach over this line and pull back those who we wish to see again. I know that I will see Mother and Father again – when I myself die. Be it tomorrow, one year or ten years into the future, so be it.”

    After a long silence, in which the group absorbed Karadon’s views, Luke spoke up.

    “I agree with Karadon,” he said openly.

    “I, too, agree,” Therebus added. Scott remained unconvinced. He watched his three brothers, his thick, orange spiky hair shooting out his head. He stroked his chin and shrugged.

    “I suppose we’ll stick to the moral view,” he said, in a bored voice.

    “This is the type of thing that can tear people apart,” Karadon explained. “We have to fight this urge.”

    Turning from his dead Father, he stared up to the sky.

    Luke, prepare Forrai. We have a Settlement to visit.”

    In no time the large tree guardian emerged. The J4 leapt upon it and Luke commanded it up. The four flew up and soared off into the distance, Teresa weeping over Rogers’s body all the while.

    “Why did I send you away, Tekaru?” she wept. “I wish you were here with me…”

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    Wow, a lot happened. Its wierd from reading your work for years now, I can say that your grammar has improved and that you storylines are wicked. Now some dissapointments I found in the chapter had nothing to do with the plot, but when you described Lusaka's blade being made out of durable metal, I had to scoff a little. That just doesn't sound right nor does it sound majestic, it sounds like a weak excuse to defend something. I thought you made an interesting decision with having Roger's eyes slowly close instead of having them just be lifeless like many others would prefer to include. I really enjoyed reading the chapter before this with Phoenix, it helped describe a lot, and help pronounce Phoenix as special. Though now you are setting yourself up to have many teams after one goal and well lets see what side tracks them. Also your description of Ray was sweet, I felt that he was more pronounced as a hero than a ravaged, recovered monster that he can be thought to be.

    Also its a real pain trying to get reregistered for this forum now adays. I had to register for my old email account which expired to come back. Hope all is well Chris.
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