Loved the chapter, Saffire. Poor 'you'...always one more predicament, and the way you broke up the chapter only adds to the suspense. What's going to happen to Ian after the party? Tune in next week...
And I don't mind Ian's name, makes sense how you explained it. Still, giving 'you' a name...I dunno. If anything, I think that should happen at the end of the story. Giving it away right now would kind of...ruin the effect? I dunno. Your decision.

You can put me on the PM list too.