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24th April 2006, 04:21 AM
#17
everyone needs a tiger to love

Advanced Trainer
Re: Metamorphosis (Chapter 3 up!)
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I read the third chapter, and was greatly amused by many things, eg Ian's reaction to the TV, the relationship between "your" parents, the tree climbing escapade... so much so that I was chuckling to myself while reading it... (people around me were probably wondering why I was laughing at the computer..got some odd looks)...
It was a good chapter, with some light hearted humour, I'm really liking all the characters mentioned, even the mother... ^_^ Well written, and the dialogue, is, as usual, very realistic and flows well, it isn't stilted or jumpy.
I use funner all the time..who says it isn't a word? *glares*
I don't mind "you" having a name that's cool.
pretty banner made by wurz ^^

I'm Over the Top! AKIRA SHOCK.

finally I have an asb banner ^^U
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