That was a good chapter. Some of the stuff that Stella said cracked me up, especially about the baby part . Aww, isn’t Ian being very thoughtful? Wonder if “your” mother would let “you” keep Ian after this.

No major complain on typos. Everything else is looking all right. And about the favourite line, I’ll make a guess, is it “Sometimes wishes do come true”?

Sorry, my mind is a bit blank at this moment, which is why I have little to comment about. But be assured, that I enjoyed this chapter.