Interesting chapter, but I have a request.

Stop using Block Capitals!

I think Bold would be more apporpriate. I reckon' that Marty will catch a Mewtwo, but after it's legal. BTW, can Mewtwo battle in pokemon battles? Can they train themselves? That's be interesting, like the first eppisode of Pokemon with Togepi where Meowth is his own trainer. "Mewtwo use Psybeam!"
"Yessir mister Mewtwo sir!"