Thank you on the spelling. Sorry I don't like being mean when I rate people's storys I tell what I think but try not to get all ROAR. And they were walking on the road and they seen people by a lake and there was aband and fire works nothing fancy. The reason why I didn't make Joey nervouse was because she really likes Dan and she doesn't care. I think I said somewhere about her liking him. IM not sure. Well people keep up posting thanks and ill go a lil harsher on you if I have to Powarun! LoL See ya later