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    [color=silver]Oo, first to post. Warning, I may ramble... *glowers* s'as good as I can do on a one-night time-limit, alas! ><
    EDIT: Bugger, grammar error

    [color=#b0c4de]Character Copyright Violation Warning: Bear – Qantao
    Own Character Usage Clause: Character #2 – Evri San

    [color=#b0c4de]~Evri San~
    le rapport platonique d'une fille et de son ami mythologique invisible(1)
    [u]ou(2)
    un jeune monsieur beau obtient du côté faux d'un dragon fâché et posessive(3)

    [color=silver]Sauntering down the street, my Evri, always safe under my watchful gaze, stepped carefully over and away from any reflective puddles which loomed large in her path.

    Head, eyes and face shielded from the ominous cloudbank on the horizon, Evri the ever-prepared had donned her mackintosh, wellingtons and hat for an outing to the corner shop for some teabags dramatically run-out-of last night, in a mad tea-drinking frenzy.

    Naturally, I had flown protectively over her head, haunting her steps as I had since the day of her fall. I would never forgive myself if she should come to harm; for Evri has been my lifelong friend. The only one of her race to actually see me, and to communicate with me. Something which has made me very happy over the long years of our relationship. Indeed, my feelings for Evri often stray beyond those friendly feelings to those more often reserved to one’s lover, not to mention one’s own species.

    But now is not the time for discussing my forlorn nature, for I am aware that my love can never be returned. And yet, at times, I wish myself more substance, that I might rend and tear and break those who harm my Evri. Those who shoot lecherous looks through the night, thinking her alone down a dark alley. For those there can be no mercy, for she is an innocent...

    [color=silver]~

    [color=#b0c4de]Promenading down the puddled road with a certain degree of haste and concern, Evri San was entirely unawares of the glances she inadvertently received for her strange garb. For it was true that the day was quite fine, in the history of the week there was barely a cloud haunting the horizon; and yet, she, with some mysterious inner sense, felt the looming and glooming of those as-of-yet non-existent clouds. And she worried.

    Only the lack of tea, that marvellous beverage, would drive Evri out on a day so filled with the portends of cloudliness. Even the sky appeared darkened to her fine-tuned senses. And it was for precious bags of leaf that the hatted one had ventured out, for she found herself unable to begin a day (and middle a day, as well as ending one) without a cup of old faithful. Thé.(4)

    Into a battered purse she had folded a sum of money well-equipped for the purchasing of said brew and toodled out for the meagre journey, entirely unawares of the aforementioned feelings of love confessed by one Dragon guardian, Tooku, yet soon to be made aware of the feelings of a certain handsome young gentleman by the name of Theo, rooted in very different and entirely peculiar circumstances.

    The enchanting and fully mesmerising young fellow twirled his top-hat from the street corner, an enterprising look on his winsome features as he sized up his ‘chances’.
    Waltzing in from yet another, opposite corner, an altogether different gentleman, also enterprising in his looks, if a little on the venerable side, began to cross the street. This old fellow, going by the name Qantao and garbed in flowing robes, flowing hair and flowing beard, strode forward on a collision course with the desired one, just as unawares as she of the imminent danger.

    The innocent tea-purchaser, oblivious of all but the incoming clouds and avoidance of puddlage, walked into the venerable one, whose path had inadvertently crossed with hers in his attempt at traversing the road.

    “Désole!(5)” The maiden exclaimed, suddenly beset by a bizarrely old-looking man, clutching at her mac before falling to the ground. “I mean, sorry!” The man scowled up at Evri from the floor, before holding out a hooked hand for assistance. Hesitantly, Evri clasped the hand of the prune-man, and gave a feeble tug.

    With a great and huffy sigh, the man planted his staff into the ground and hauled himself upright, before patting himself down carefully, probing the depths of his clothing in an attempt to survey the damage.

    “Well, I’ve nothing broken. No thanks to you, young lady.” He gave Evri a stare from under a beetled brow and shook his staff at her menacingly. “If I had been injured...” His words carried a warning, quiet though they were, and they scared Evri no less than a little.

    Gathering up the bright green cloth to his thin body, the man nodded at Evri before shuffling off in the opposite direction, down the street and around the corner.

    “I need tea...” Evri called after him. “Au revoir(6)! Er, goodbye!”

    Now, the aforementioned young man of extremely handsome features had regarded this fiasco from afar with a pensive look etched upon his unblemished face. A smile from under a snappy top hat, and Theo darted in to make his move on the desired Miss San.

    Swooping across the meagre distance between the pair, Theo materialised in Evri’s path, and sketched a long and elegant bow, much to the surprised shriek of the already-unsettled beloved.

    “Ah, mine eyes deceive me, for I do behold a maiden of such extraordinary beauty standing before me that I am sure to be dreaming!” Pressing the back of a milk-white hand to his forehead, Theo affected a swoon, a roguish grin outlining his features and his eyes lit up with mischief.

    “O, my fair lady, do you stray far from home on this fateful day? I have been gazing upon you from afar, dearest maiden, and I would very dearly enjoy making your acquaintance.” Evri, overwhelmed by this sudden proclamation, could only assume that the gentleman wanted her name, which she gave.

    “Je m’appelle(7) Evri...”

    “Ah! A name as beautiful as the stars themselves. My dearest Evri, today is my fortunate day, for I intend to take you for coffee!” Theo proclaimed, flourishing his hat at the end of another fancy bow.

    “I like tea...” Mumbled Evri. “I need tea bags, you know.” She peered out from under the floppy brim of her hat, regarding the skies with suspicion. “Clouds’re coming.”

    “Indeed they are, my love. Clouds of happiness now that I have finally found you, my soul-mate! But allow me to introduce myself; the name is Theo de Veren, and I am much honoured to finally make your acquaintance. But now; to coffee!” De Veren took a hold of the arm of his loved one, and lead her away, bemused and protesting, to a nearby coffee-house of outstanding reputation.

    [color=silver]~

    [color=#b0c4de]And this is the scene which is viewed with jealousy through the eyes (or green eyes) of one imaginary Dragon friend.

    [color=silver]~

    [color=silver]Folding my wings backwards for speed, I soared to the ground in a red fury. A charmer! Molesting my woman! And touching her, no less! Clacking my teeth together, I wished, and not for the first time, that I had the ability to touch those mortals I so despised.

    Oh, for just an hour with this abominable man and I should make him scream and cry and beg for mercy... but no, my dreams shall never be realised, but neither shall his.

    If I cannot have her, then none shall... only alone, with my guidance, is Evri safe. My sharp vision caught his fingers, moving in a gentle caress on her arm as he guided her.

    A possessive caress, that. And one which I intended to remember. For though I could not touch mortals, I found myself, when roused, able to push their thoughts in certain directions of my choosing.

    This one, I snarled, will meet an unpredicted end...

    [color=silver]~

    [color=#b0c4de]The beleaguered beloved found herself safe inside a sheltered and warm coffee-house into which she had never ventured before; and, a large mug of foam pushed into her hands, she floundered in a chair much too soft to be real, trying to make sense of a place in the world where there was no tea. This man, this Theo de Veren, had pushed her in the opposite direction to her tea bags, and Evri was not inclined to think much of a man who separated her from her tea.

    Taking a sip of the foam, she made a disgusted face beneath her hat, much to the consternation of de Veren, whose eyebrows shot up into his hat.

    “Are you not a coffee-lover, my beloved?” Shaking her head vigorously, Evri thought it was high time that he was reminded of her errand.

    “I need tea... I really do... this...this mousse(8)... c’est horrible(9)!” Placing the cup down hard on the square table, Evri made a fastidious face before crossing her arms.

    “I only want some tea-bags...” She mumbled, looking at the floor. De Veren, a look of horror on his face, reached out a finely-boned arm and patted Evri on the hand.

    “Of course you do, my love. That which you drink is named cappuccino, and it is supposed to be, ah, moussey. It is perfectly palatable.” To prove his point, Theo grasped his own large mug and drank down the coffee with gentlemanly noises of enjoyment.

    “But if my love wants tea, then tea she will get!” He declared, flourishing his hat once more. “To the shops!” Pointing wildly in the direction of the door, he scooped the puzzled Miss San to her feet once more and swept her off in the direction of that Mecca which is the corner shop.

    Tugging on his sleeve, Evri pulled herself loose and gesticulated at the ever-darkening sky. “Look!” She panted. “The... c-clouds...” Stuttering to a halt, she pulled the wide hat further down over her face, as if blocking out the sight could make it go away.

    “Why, my dearest Evri! Whatever is the matter?” Shooting him a terrified glance, she pointed at the clouds once more.

    “Look!” She gasped through halted breaths. “Il va pleuvoir!(10)

    A puzzled look clouded Theo’s delicate features as unbidden thoughts came flying into his head.

    -she’s insane...-
    -you don’t love her-
    -SHE’S MINE!-


    This last, a screech similar to that of nails down the proverbial blackboard caused only a wince to mar de Veren’s perfect face, as his long-controlled emotions ‘got a grip’. Shaking his head once and imperceptibly, he gazed upon his beloved in a newly tainted light. Maybe she was insane... All this cloud gibberish.

    -how can someone be afraid of clouds?-

    The question sprang unbidden into his mind, and his lip curled in an expression of contempt. His beloved was insane. Afraid of clouds, rain, and hiding in her waterproofs, she could never love him back.

    A little sadness crept in, a feeling which was instantly dampened; almost by some unseen force. And Theo de Veren looked upon his beloved with disgust in his eyes, and for the merest second, hers met his, startled at what she saw there, Evri turned away in panic, teetering on the edge of hyperventilation.

    Before he had been kind. She had seen love in his eyes, but now. Now, all she wanted to do was escape from him, and the clouds, and the foamy, man-eating-chair house.

    Turning tail, Evri San scarpered. She ran down the puddled street, oblivious for the first time of the looming and glooming clouds.

    “Tooku!” She screeched as she ran, breath coming in huge, sobbing gasps. “Là où êtes vous(11)!?” Materialising in front of her, the glimmering Dragon hid a smile of satisfaction before composing his face into an appropriately worried expression.

    “What is it, my dear?” He rumbled.

    “ Je veux aller à la maison...(12)

    “Then we will go home, my love.” A secret smile lit up Tooku’s face as Evri turned away to begin the walk home.

    “You are mine.” He whispered to himself. “And no-one will take you from me.”

    [color=silver]~

    [color=#b0c4de][[size=1]Guideline no. 4: The post includes a love triangle of which at least one of the characters (loved or lover) is part of.
    Guideline no. 6: One character in the "relationship" is of a different species or ethnicity than the other. This causes a large problem, large being anything from discrimination to questionable legality.]

    Another list of translations.

    (1) The platonic relationship of a girl and her invisible mythological friend
    (2) or
    (3) A handsome young gentleman gets on the wrong side of an angry and possessive dragon
    (4) Tea
    (5) Sorry
    (6) Goodbye
    (7) My name is
    (8) Foam
    (9) It’s horrible!
    (10) It’s going to rain!
    (11) Where are you?
    (12) I want to go home


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    Sorry if the colours make you guys nauceous

    Grey - Caspian (main), Blue - Laguna (Sheila's character = altered history = ruin = sorry! ><), Pink - Iccaheb (just a cameo ^_~)

    Stories from the City, Stories from the Sea


    He took this route every day, and I waited for him now. Maybe I had fallen in love.. I myself would like to entertain the thought that I just wanted to see an old friend. Though if anyone ever asked me.. What could I say? Unfortunately for myself, what I wanted to say and the truth were two very different things, and in matters such as these I couldn’t help but tell the truth. The heart wants what it wants.. Even if the object of desire is such a dangerously foolish thing to lust over.

    A friend I had spoken to remembered that summer so long ago, and had told me she’d seen that boy I had known from North Carolina, and that he was in Chicago now - the city I was coincidentally visiting in May. Before she had mentioned him I had all but forgotten my feelings for him - I was so young back then and consequentially I had been able to convince myself I had never felt anything for him other than attraction. But now.. he was on my mind, and inevitably, I had gotten a little curious. So I had been to see him once or twice since I arrived in the city. Not that he knew it.

    It wasn’t stalking, honestly it wasn’t. I was just wary of people, he was the same, I was sure he would understand, if I ever mentioned it. We both distanced ourselves from people back then, and now it seemed things were no different. It was rare for me to connect to another person, so it was hardly surprising I wanted to see him, was it? And being wary, this seemed the best way to me. I stood on the pave: not anxious, but anticipating. I try not to worry so much, so it was more like excitement. I couldn’t wait for our eyes to meet.. And speak of the devil there he was, right in front of me, mid-Chicago.

    His eyes rose to mine before the collision, and I fell by no coincidence.


    *~*~*

    Rising at dawn he hit the street in the early hours of the morning, whilst the dew still glistened and his footsteps in the hollow, silent city echoed profound. The street barely flinched beneath the beat of his sneakers, for his footsteps were soft and fleet, and he left no impression on the street or with its scant occupants. The whores had gone to bed, and the suits were yet to rise, and even the homeless lay in a dormant snatch of slumber, if only for the merest of minutes before the cold juttered them awake again.

    His casual jog took him down the road, his movements gracious like those of a cat’s padded pawsteps. He took this route everyday, it kept him familiar and in contact with that last chunk of sanity he locked away in his skull so tightly, if only by forced routine. A part of him certainly cherished the silence whilst it lasted, for within seconds the street would erupt with the sounds of prosperity, corruptions and everyday intention. And as it did he kept running, kept jogging, like he had done pretty much every day since he moved to the city, running harder, faster, louder, but his footsteps no longer heard amongst the yells and car pips and the overwhelming bustle of downtown Chicago. Across roads, between parked and stalled cars, through the crowds of children and mothers, and the huddles workmen and briefcases and vendors on the street. They didn’t see him and he didn’t see them, all but for one, and as he felt his mind jolt with an ancient recognition he found himself flying hard to the pave.

    *~*~*

    He hit the sidewalk fast, landing painfully on his butt, but I think the greater surprise was seeing me. He pushed back the sweaty fringe that obscured his vision and stared at me through the legs of the crowd, and I looked back from my likewise seat on the pavement with what I hoped was a vaguely similar look of shock on my face. Then with a smile that was infinitely more real than any fake incredulity I could muster, I clambered to my feet and offered a hand to pull him up; and though he climbed to his feet on his own, once upright he took my hand in his, and we walked together as I had hoped we would.

    It became apparent pretty soon that he wasn’t who I remembered though. I knew what had happened to his family shortly after we met, and in consequence that was why he had left. I had only heard of it from a friend, but I knew the details. He was gone before I saw him again, those five years ago.. Had his parents’ death had an instant impact on him, or had he changed with time? He had always seemed disjointed, but now a little more so, with a little less feeling.. maybe I could help him?

    I didn’t say so but I wanted to try, so we walked to a café. There we talked, and because he had no prior engagements we went to a late showing at the theatre, and there we kissed. Whilst he definately had the capacity to enjoy it, he didn’t seem too interested in that.. He was more intent on conversation, which wasn’t unusual, but if you didn’t know him it was unexpected, because he wasn’t really one to say much. Still, we muttered our way through the whole play, which wasn’t that impressive anyway. The way we talked was kind of like the old days, and maybe I began to fool myself with who he was, for hope is a foolish thing. And after that we went back to my hotel, and sat at the bar, and after that closed we went to my room. And that’s all I can really disclose, to be frank.

    We had met by rare chance; that summer of five years past was scorching, and his parents(who unceasingly traversed the world) had pulled into town for an unusual length of time - a month or two. I myself had been off at camp - my father frequented with work the whole year round had little time to spare for me, summer being no exception. I didn’t hold a grudge, I understood, it was the way it had always been anyway. But I figured a break would be nice.. And was kind of disappointed. Camp sucked, but I reaped the benefits of being sixteen and freelance, exploring the nearby town and spending long summer days in the meadows, sitting in the grass with my lute and making up my own music. He had been a year my senior, fairly attractive, and whilst a fair few girls seemed to like him, he didn’t pay so much attention to them; he was caught up in his own little world, and I saw the slightest of myself reflected in that. So I saw him about town that summer, and sure I was intrigued, but I didn’t talk to him at all to begin with. I’m not so much of a people person, or maybe I just prefer my own company, because I know I can trust it if nothing else.

    But one day something happened, and I found myself sat next to him. He had run from something, and so had I, and I figured if I couldn’t sort my own problems maybe I could help him, and I plunged onwards with reckless abandon. I didn’t regret it until he left, at the very least. We loved to talk, and we did other things too, though looking back now, I think he only considered me a friend, though I know he was attracted to me too. We were in different states of mind, but he enjoyed the conversation and the time we spent together, which was something rare for him. I was his summer, despite everything, and though he admired me for that, after he was gone I remembered why I was so wary to get involved with people.

    His family died in a car crash, like mine, and he never came to me again, until we met today.

    *~*~*

    The saline wind blew in from the sea and it caught in my head, and stirred my thoughts into nausea, pulling me down into the ocean it came from. Down from Illinois, we paused in North Carolina before moving up to Ontario, a mere stutter in the shifting mass of places that was my life. Travelling took it’s toll on developing young minds - I needed a settled environment to grow in, for I wasn’t even that certain in myself yet. I needed to be sure of something.

    I was sitting on the porch of an old town library down on main street, shade sought in one of the few silent havens of the city. Nothing was constant for me, and when my whole world felt shaky I would run somewhere where there was pure silence, and just sit and wrap myself up in my own little world. There, nothing moved.. In here, nothing was susceptible to change. And I would stop and relax and breathe and smile.. Close my eyes. Thank God.

    When the world shudders, what else is there to do? Your only option is to find something stable. When I opened my eyes, she was right there, our eyes touched, and she held that gaze, blue and steady. I couldn’t have asked for more.

    We talked of our lives, and it seemed like things had been pretty shaky for her too. It was a tentative subject, and she wouldn’t tell everything.. so I didn’t ask. We had an understanding, and we were content, and we found safety and resonance within each other’s arms, a permanent place of being. Hell, we both knew she was only here for the summer, a small sojourn in the midst of the school holidays, and myself likewise, but that added to the certainty. Life is full of chance and any one thing can bring it down, especially when you’re least expecting it. We felt we had a timeline set out ahead of us this way; we knew when it would be over, and in result we made the most of it.

    She had overcome the difficulties in her past, and though neither of us knew what difficulties I myself was about to face, she overcame those for me too - in a way. Away from whatever troubles she had when we met, she was carefree and down-to-earth in everyday life, and it took more dire matters to rouse her into worry. Talking to her asserted my sense of self, because she knew me for what I was, my soul was visible to her in a way my parents never saw. I wasn’t an open book to her - I was inside out, and there were no secrets. Instead there were kisses, and on warm days we would stay in each others’ arms and words; and on those that seemed suffocating she would take me to a place even she didn’t know, and make everything okay nevertheless.

    When the world spun too fast, we sat there on that porch and described the scent of our homelands to each other. With that I was home, and with her soft fingers wrapped in mine she was there with me.

    It was just a shame I never loved her. I guess I never really had any real emotions.

    So tonight I left her hotel room whilst she slept with no remorse.

    *~*~*

    The days of May still shone golden five years later, and an ice cream vendor was a dependable thing on the streets of Chicago, whether you were outside city skyscrapers or suburb schools. Iccaheb strolled down the street at a warm day’s pace, lapping at a wafer-cone a la mode and catching the swelling beads of cerulean cream before they fell to the dirt. It wasn’t such a bad day, one reflected, when all you had to worry about was dripping ice-cream. He did stop, however, upon hearing his name called (“Ike-cah!”), and he turned with his mouth slightly agape, bubblegum-blue lips parted with curiosity. He wondered who would call him by that name..

    Now when Iccaheb had been told at school that he wasn’t meant to talk to strangers, he had rolled his eyes with a disdain unworthy of such a small child - he didn’t talk to anyone, never mind evil-intending abductees, so no problem there. But now he stood a little chary, and looked around uncertainly for his heckler. When he saw her he wrinkled his nose with thought, and when he remembered her face he just smiled his sweet smile.

    Laguna jogged across the street after looking both ways, and tilted her head gently at the fallen ice-cream. Iccaheb rocked a little with glee, snow cone forgotten, and hopped in his happiness of seeing her. It had been a million years, and he but practically an infant.

    “Hey, it’s good to see you too, Iccaheb,” She greeted him in return of his smile, placing a hand gently on his shoulder and looking him all the way up and down, choosing not to comment on his unusual girlish attire. “But, ah, I was wondering..” She said, kneeling down to his height and fishing briefly in her dress pouch. Iccaheb looked at her confused as she pulled out a small lilac envelope, and he peered around her. A car was parked on the opposite pave: boot wide open and propped up, boxes littered inside. He caught a glance of home-paintings with butterflies and a long ornate woven case - a lute no doubt placed preciously inside. Reckoning she hadn’t changed her spirit so much, Iccaheb thought it safe to assume the car was definitely hers, and that she was going somewhere.

    “I just dropped into town for a little while. I guess I’m dropping out again..” Laguna shrugged, and flicked a long strand of satin black hair over her shoulder. “It’s no big deal, so don’t worry about me. Just give this to Cas, will you?” Iccaheb tucked the envelope slowly but carefully into the left of his saffron socks, and nodded truthfully. Not knowing what else to do, and feeling that this brief encounter was at an end already, he pecked her sweetly on the cheek and began to walk away backwards, keeping his big hazel eyes on her for as long as he could, before fully turning and half-skipping, half-running down the street to his home.

    “See you around, fuzzy.” Laguna murmured, brushing her cheek with a hand and effectively wiping the bright blue ice-cream from her skin. She shut her boot, got into the passenger seat, and decided that it was definitely time to return to New York. Home would be a nice place to go.

    From the street corner Iccaheb saw her turn off down the road and (unseen) waved her goodbye.

    See you around, Lah-guna..

    *~*~*

    Cas didn’t hear the door go. That was the weird thing about his brother (or one of them), silent as a ghost he was, though Caspian was careful not to think of such things in such terms. As he ground his teeth in annoyance with more trivial matters, he did not see nor sound the small boy approach. Instead he leaned in further - the black and white man in his banana-yellow marigolds - for there was unicorn hair in the sink again. As he made a mental note to scold the louse that plagued his apartment with sparkle-horned ponies and glittering bears of cuddly countenances, the devil himself dropped off his mail with nought but a flutter and a soft air of self-satisfaction. He had really quite enjoyed his job of courier-for-the-day.

    Before Cas had turned he was gone, and Caspian remained rooted to the spot anyway, raising only an eyebrow and flicking a pupil to the left, where the soft purple stationary sat soaking on the draining board with the plates. Instinctively seeing that action was required, he yanked off the washing-up gloves and snatched up the envelope - not even stopping to curse the boy - before whipping the parchment out from inside. Once he had spotted that only the merest of corners had been dampened and that the ink was intact, his interest took a dismal plummet, and he slouched into one of the wooden kitchen chairs with the barest of intrigue and his usual cold features back in place. He stared emotionless and read the letter through, and whether the words had any impact or not, it was not clear. He recognised the writing, and at least did Laguna the honour of listening to what she had to say.

    She spoke of the day when they met, and (for the first time in all the years since they had met) she explained what she had been running from that first day they saw each other in Carolina. And that she couldn’t let it rule her world. Caspian sat and reflected. Perhaps she had noticed his emotions were somewhat AWOL since 'the incident', but she certainly knew what to expect in way of change, so no hopes would be damaged. He had read, and that was enough. It was all she could have asked for.

    No reaction spawned upon his face, he still sat there expressionless. His dark pupils were ever ghost-like, his tie straight and suit orderly; and no thought ran through his mind or sentiment in his soul, for he screwed up that letter and tossed it neatly into the trash with last night’s leftovers. In with the garbage.

    *~*~*

    The car engine revved as I turned the key, the radio burst into life, and a familiar name I knew sang a good song.

    We all have our sanctuary. As I wrote that letter and as I drove away, I truly hoped that he would find his, for better or for worse.

    *~*~*



    As Caspian went to stand up his face twitched into a wraith of a smile, for a vague smell of prairie peonies had just flitted across his senses.. He felt warm hands on his own and, for a moment, felt safe.


    I'm sorry for doing that to your character Miss Rae ;_;

    THE ALTERNATE ENTRY:

    Black furled fur as soft as a lambkin’s fleece with cheery bead eyes to match, Caspian found that he often thought of Mr Nanas in a desirable way. Indeed, about that suede grey visage complete with rag-a-tag smile; there was a sense of romance, and the heady scent of nostalgia.. at least for said Rupert in any case. If other people didn’t feel that way about inanimate objects, then that was their own screwy fault, he figured.

    Maybe if he would wish upon a star, one day his dream would just come true..


    Snigger-cackle.

    EDIT: Did i say ocean in Indiana? I meant.. ah.. ah.. SILENCE! I'm not American so leave me alone! Being English i don't have to abide by your screwy geography *renames half the states and floods Indiana*

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    Wow, this is such a sharp contrast to Vulpix.ck's post. o.o Oh, and my character says to j00: "Thank you for helping me find romance and true love! I've never been so happy! But...the pain of distance! ;_;"

    As per regulatio, I must use Laguna:
    Name: Laguna Riviera
    Race: human
    Gender: female
    Age: 16
    Appearance: She is a little short for her age, standing at about 5’4”. Her skin is slightly tanned, naturally. Her black hair is braided into two braids that go all the way down her back. Her eyes are a very deep and rich blue, like the depth of the ocean. Laguna's face is sharp and her features are chiseled, but her youth is given away in her cheeks. Her figure is supple and she does not look to be very athletic, but her legs are long in proportion to the rest of her body, making her agile and flexible. There is a very small black butterfly tattoo are the outside of her right ankle with 記憶 (kioku) very small under the butterfly (will be explained in history). Her whole body is somewhat bony, especially her arms and long fingers.

    Clothing and Gear: Laguna wears an Asian style shirt with cap sleeves. It is black with flowers and dragons embroidered on it with red thread. The fabric crosses over from the shoulder, with black buttons. The collar comes up a little, and all the edges on the shirt are lined with black silk binding. She has black pants that stop a little bit past her knees. They taper near the knees and then bell out. A red strip goes down the side of each leg. She often carries her lute with her in a large, black canvas case, with a thick strap that crosses over her right shoulder. The design in the case is a silver crescent moon with an Egyptian-esque eye in the crook. The case itself looks like a rounded square in shape, and though it may look like a burden, it hardly feels like a weight on her back. She wears brown, leather sandals with softer, tanned straps that criss-cross like a lattice on her legs and then are tied in a bow on her shin.

    Personality: Laguna is carefree and independent for the most part. She has learned that worrying about things too much in life will only make them worse. Although she is agile and quick-witted in the face of danger, she would prefer not to fight and only defend herself it that is what’s necessary. She is friendly to everyone, but she doesn’t have that many friends because she has been betrayed by them in the past, and she doesn’t want any new ones to do the same. She rather greet everything as it comes with a smiling face and hope for the best. Despite her relaxed and simple nature, she can be serious when the time calls for it. Although she may seem simpleminded, Laguna can play almost any musical instrument decently. She usually keeps her playing and singing on a private basis because she thinks people will not like her music. She is not really afraid of anything and will stand up in against a fatal threat if someone is by her side. Going along with her “no-worries” doctrine, she rarely gets angry, especially over trivial incidents. She dreams of teaching the world happiness, but she has no idea as to how to go about this, and therefore she tries to help individuals when she can.

    History: Miss Riviera grew up in New York City with music in her life. At a young age, she learned to play the lute, being taught by her older sister Kaede. She became very proficient, and now that is her favourite instrument and her “specialty.” Kaede also taught her flute and the cello. Her mother was very musical as well, and taught Laguna and her sister piano, violin(/viola). Her father tried to indulge in playing the guitar and percussion, but he was always very busy at his job and almost never saw his family. When she was in kindergarten, Laguna brought her lute for show and tell, and all of the children were touching it and plucking the strings and not seeming to have any kind of respect, like Laguna didn’t really mean anything. Since that incident, she has kept her music limited to her house and private chambers as much as possible. Still, Laguna loved Kaede and her mother. When she was only ten, the two were involved in a head-on car crash. Her father took her to the scene of the accident; she saw white cloths cover them, and they were wheeled away on stretchers...and she never saw then again. She lived in grief for almost the next two years. In spite of losing half his family, her father still worked as long of hours as always, forcing Laguna into a more independent life. She lived in grief for nearly two years, until one day someone on the street handed her a pendant that looked like two wings rising from an open box. She never saw the person’s face or heard their voice, but she felt that they were a part of her. She dreamed she that was with them, but whenever she awoke, she could never remember what they looked like or what she did with them; all she had was the reassuring feeling that lingered. That prompted her to live life a different way, for what she is now, not those who passed. When Laguna was twelve, four years after Kaede and her mother had died, she passed a car accident on her way home from school. That aroused the sadness in her, but she decided it wouldn’t control her life again. Instead, she got a tattoo of a butterfly labeled with 記憶 as an everlasting memory of Kaede and her mother. She had become more familiar with New York City, Manhattan in particular, and she basically did what she wanted whenever she wanted...she was free, yet in confined at the same time.

    Talents: (Musical talents mentioned above). In the original RPG, the characters had the power of words. Her word was Malaak, meaning faith. Using its power, Laguna could create a shield or levitate herself and those touching her (for a reasonable period of time, namely to protect herself and others from harm plaguing the ground).
    Other: Hmm…I don’t think that this is necessary for this character.
    RPG Title: Kotoba Masters//Light in the Darkness (created and mastered by me)
    Also, in Mire, there are supposed to be living souls who are the deceased loved ones of characters; it’s neither heaven nor hell nor purgatory, but rather than ghosts that held regret in their life and therefore cannot move on, there are people who are still alive who cannot let go of them. (Or something like that…even though I made the plot, we didn’t get that far in the game, and I don’t remember. ^^


    Featuring: SuperSonicMewtwo's Justin Bailey! Modifications for better plausibility:
    Age: Now 18
    Minor history alteration: He still grew up in a rural town, but when he hit his teenage years, his family moved to NYC. He often travelled around the state, however, to chase storms.
    (You're lucky I'm not using Nikita, or he'd so be dead. XD)
    Name: Justin Bailey
    Gender: Male
    Age: 22 Earth Years
    Appearance: Justin is nearly six and a half feet tall, and is built like a football player. His eyes are a deep brown, and he has short, black hair, spiked up with gel. He usually has a smile on his face, so he does not appear intimidating. Sometimes wears goggles (for when riding a motorcycle in the wind).
    Clothing and Gear: A sleeveless orange shirt and khaki pants make up Justin's main clothing. He wears a necklace of shark teeth, and has many different pairs of sneakers (they usually get destroyed, so he needs many). Justin always carries retractable metal staves, as well as a large quantity of weather equipment. He rides around on a motorcycle with a trailer attached to the back, used to transport a large amount of weather predicting equipment, ranging from barometers to advanced radar. Justin also has a cell phone, for its most basic purpose, communication.
    Personality: Justin is carefree and loyal. He always tries to help any friend in any way he can. His attitude, and one he assumes his friends have (even though he may be wrong) is that one should never give up; if they continue to push for a goal, they WILL make it. Justin may get himself into a situation he believe he can push through, when in reality he cannot, or, a friend of his may be in a situation where Justin assumes they will do fine because they can push through the problem, and the friend does not need his help, when really, it's Justin’s help they need most of all. Justin only loses his happy disposition if he becomes aware that a friend is truly in trouble (where Justin then puts forth all effort into helping), or if his flexibility is brought up as a conversation topic.
    History: Justin was raised in a rural community. His hometown was often on the receiving end of extreme thunderstorms, many with tornados. Justin developed a fascination with the natural cyclone, and has focused his life on it, up through higher education. Justin wanted to become a weatherman as his career, but at the moment he is a freelance storm chaser (not that he is complaining). One time as a child, Justin saw the result of a tornado sending an ordinary stick through a block of concrete, and the awesome power exhibited convinced him to begin training in the martial arts of wielding a long staff (of which he now holds major skill). It was during Justin's training that he discovered his gift of extreme flexibility. However, Justin found great displeasure in the ways he could stretch and contort his body, which he related to female gymnasts, and wishes to avoid. While Justin instinctively uses his flexibility while fighting, if someone mentions notice of this, Justin will become insecure and begin relying only on his brute strength, which often makes the fight all the more tougher. This applies to any normal activity as well; Justin will become distracted and not perform as well on anything if he is busy trying to make sure that he doesn't use his flexibility. Justin now travels around to different cities, offering his expertise as a tornado chaser and storm watcher to different weather agencies.
    Talents: Justin is extremely skilled with the prediction and observation of weather, most especially thunderstorms and tornados. He can estimate humidity simply by the feel of the wind, predict the direction of a tornado or storm that appears unpredictable, and can produce solid answers once he starts breaking out his weather equipment. Justin is extremely fit, and likes to fight with a metal staff, of which Justin is quite good with. Justin's fitness extends to his possession of extreme flexibility. He is self-conscious about this trait, and often wishes no one would notice, or that he never had it.
    Other: While his flexibility makes Justin feel feminine for he compares it to women’s’ gymnastics, Justin is not sexist and has nothing against girls (he's straight, so yeah, he likes them); he just doesn't want to be that much like them. Justin also goes through a large quantity of tennis shoes, for he often ends up in the middle of a rainy and muddy storm that destroys the shoes he had currently been wearing.

    Elements
    1. Large Amount of Gear - Weather Equipment
    2. Tragic Personality Flaw - Never-give-up attitude, always push on through, no matter what.
    3. Desirable Trait Character Deplores - Extreme flexibility.


    Note that I don't know NYC very well; I've only been there once for a couple of days, so much of the stuff regarding the city I made up. ^^;

    *_Laguna Riviera_* These Same Faces
    I do not refute that at times, I do feel very lonesome. It is a part of me, just as it is a part of everyone else. I suppose that for me, I am occupied enough that I can evade dwelling in loneliness. Nevertheless, I am rather secure in being alone.

    I didn't want to go. Ever since the third grade, I never wanted to go to music class anymore. It wasn't music at all, but just a bunch of children singing songs that made them sound cute and banging on simplistic percussion instruments. While my classmates squeaked false tones out of flute-o-phones, I sat in the fetal position. I didn't want to, but I started to cry again. I was good at hiding it, though.

    My best friend, Sarah, called to me. "C'mon, Laguna! Come play Hot Cross Buns with us!"

    I remained sessile and declined quietly. Sarah stole a peek at my face; her expression scared me a little. It looked like she was scrutinizing an insect. "What? Don't tell me you're crying again. We can never have fun anymore. Jeez, I know your sister died and all, but you need to get over it already. Come back when you get some backbone."

    Another girl whispered to her, "You know, her mother was killed, too." The two of them turned their backs and returned to the cacophony.

    ~~~~

    It had been such a cold day; the wind swirled the snowflakes around wildly, pelting my eyeballs like tiny daggers of ice. A bit of snot dripped from my left nostril. I was really, really cold, so I hugged my best friend, Stephie, as we walked home school. Stephie was different; she could hear some things that I never could, such as the alleged laughter of our peers. That day, in the cold, I found out what it was like to be frozen inside:

    "Eww, stop. Why do you hug me all the time, anyways?" she asked. It was 'anyway.' I paused, thinking of what I could say that would make sense to her. "Hello, I asked you a question."

    "I never know when I'll see you again."

    "Yes, you do. You see at school every day, for crying out loud. I can understand if friends hug each other when it's their birthday or if they're going away for a while, but not all the time. I see your other friend, that KK, hanging on you all the time, and you enjoy it. What are you, a fucking lesbian, or something? I told you before that I can't be your friend if you're a lesbian."

    "I'm not," I said meagerly in my defense.

    "Yes, you are, seriously. Go away. And stop wearing such stupid hats."

    Silently, I watched three years of friendship, like the snowflakes, blown to the ground without an inkling of remorse.

    ~~~~

    My best friend, KK, she didn’t mind. We would hug and hold hands all the time, and it was okay because we were close friends. She treasured our friendship. I mean, she was really happy to have me as a friend. For a little while, she restored my faith in people my own age.

    We shared everything together. Often, her mother would take us to Massachusetts or New Jersey, and we would go to a beach or a huge arcade. For the first time, I understood what a "best friend" really was. As long as we had each other, nothing else mattered.

    KK was brilliant; she had political genius, was a wonderful cook, and dutifully studied winemaking. She used to show me the stories she wrote as a little kid. They were silly, entirely far-fetched murder mysteries, with the main character being an obvious alter ego to her. When she was tired sometimes, perhaps on a car drive home, she'd lay her head on my shoulder and fall asleep. I was so touched; I was happy that I could at least be a pillow for her. A lot of people were interested in her, but she chose me to be her friend, the oddest one of all. That's why abandonment by her hurt so much more.

    All of our promises had mattered to her, except for one. "We'll never let a boy come between us." I admit, the wording was indeed ambiguous, but it shouldn't've mattered. She really loved Cody, though; he could be so much more for her than I could. Back then, I had picked up the shattered fragments of that promise and hid them somewhere. I can't remember where that place was now.

    "Guess what!" she'd exclaim excitedly. I hadn't heard that much enthusiasm from her since I had first agreed, reluctantly, to be her friend, all that time ago. "Cody and I stayed up til two last night on the phone. He said the cutest things to me! Wow, I'm so happy he came into my life."

    "But KK…we have always spent Friday nights talking together in the phone into the wee hours. I was getting worried when you didn't call."

    "Oh, sorry. Don't worry about it. Things change, so we can move it to Saturday night, k?"

    Gradually, she stopped hugging me, and when I hugged her, she'd break away earnestly. I saw a lot less of her, until it become nothing at all:

    "KK, let's go to the mall and play DDR tonight."

    "Sorry, I'm busy. You don't need to ask me to make plans all the time. I'll let you know when I'm open."

    "But, we always used to do things together, all the time! Don't you miss being with friends? Don't you feel lonely?" Had I been emulating myself in that question? Either way, it was the first time I had really pushed forth an effort to keep one of my friends.

    "Well, it's okay. I have Cody now,
    so I don't need you."

    I know she didn't mean it that way, but it penetrated me so deeply. Even after they broke up, she didn't need me to help her through it. She was in her own world of grief, and my calls could not reach her there.


    To me, loneliness seems like the much better option.

    -----------

    "Please enjoy!" I said with a cordial smile as I handed a bowl of soup I had just ladled to a little girl dressed in rags. Seeing homeless people is sad, but you learn to accept it and do you best to help them. Yesterday, I had been busy at the soup kitchen, packing bags of nonperishable Thanksgiving meals in preparation for the holiday. Today, clad in my olive drab bandana, I had been assigned a ladler again.

    While I was stirring the broth, waiting for the line to advance, a young man walked in. He was carrying a bunch of unwieldy equipment, but it didn't seem to burden him any. Nonchalantly, he took snapshots of everything in sight it seemed. "Smile!" he said to me, and I gave the best picture smile I knew how. Then he said to Helen, the chairperson of the kitchen, "This is a really nice operation you have here." He departed before the 'thank you' had even left her lips.

    Then she called to us, "We're going to close up soon, everyone!" We dished soup for the few remaining people and then stored the leftovers. I took the pots and ladles to the sink area and began to wash them. Helen appeared at my shoulder and said, "Good job today, as always. You go on home; I'll take over here." I thanked her and began to walk home.

    Outside the soup kitchen, the guy with the equipment was arranging it in a trailer that was hitched to a motorcycle. I was surprised that he found a spot to park that thing. As I passed by, he said to me, "Hey there. I'm Justin Bailey. It's very nice to meet you."

    Surprised by this sudden introduction, I responded, "Hi, I'm Laguna. It's nice to meet you…too…" Past that, though, I didn't think anything of it.

    When I arrived home, I was quite hungry, but I knew that I had to clean up the kitchen first. Mom always liked coming home to an uncluttered apartment. I suppose the habit had been instilled in me since I was a little kid. Unless messes were a pet peeve of mine, it didn't really matter. Yesterday morning, Dad had boarded a plane…to Milan. It was for business, and he would be gone for a month…a whole month. I was used to it, though. He had left $1000 for me to support myself during his leave. The excess was in case the toilet broke and I needed to call a plumber or something like that, or if I wanted to take a cab somewhere out of the city, or I wanted to go to a café for lunch. I didn't have a job of my own, as I preferred to spend my labour hours volunteering, and Dad made plenty of money. Of course, his career was the chief sacrifice of his time.

    I scrubbed the sink and put away all of the dishes. I often imagined myself as a maid for someone I loved, some faceless person. I wish I had one of those cute little black and white outfits to wear, but I was content with what I had. When I had finally finished the tidying of the kitchen, I put in a frozen dinner; I was really too tired to prepare anything real. It was fettuccini Alfredo, my favourite. This was the cheap kind, though. I think it's a trait that I inherited from my mother, but I've always been frugal, despite the surplus of money in our family. While the pasta was in the microwave, I put the newspaper back together. Then suddenly, I remembered that I had to straighten up the coffee table in the living room. As I rushed to stack the papers, I then recalled that I didn't have to. The microwave beeped, so I took out the carton and stirred its contents methodically, like a witch and her cauldron of radiation-green potion. This sort of fettuccini needed more sauce, and it didn't have enough moisture. I guess that's what you get for buying the cheap kind.

    -----

    The next day, I was walking to school, PS 47. It was a pretty nice school. I mean, the school was, but not the people. I thought about my contemporaries a lot. I wondered what went through their heads, about their goals and dreams, and if they thought about the same thing. As simplistic as they are, they're wicked difficult to understand.

    It was a brisk day, but not too cold. The breeze felt good, like a cool washcloth after a bout of exercise. After I passed 33rd Street, I noticed that the Justin I had met the was behind me. He was very conspicuous with the clanking of his equipment, which sounded like the weak triumph of distant thunder. I decided to pretend to be oblivious for the time being; New York was a busy city, and it was quite possible that he had business along the same route.

    When I reached the grimy steps of PS 47, I turned and looked at him. In a taciturn voice, I asked, "Why did you follow me here?"

    "Don't worry, I just wanted to walk you to school." I thought it to be a highly unusual response. Nevertheless, I gave a carefree smile. I thought maybe it would scare him, as it's scared my classmates in the past.

    After that time before school, I didn't see much of him for a week or so. (However, that doesn't mean that he didn't see me.) Soon, though, I felt like I was seeing him everywhere. It would be just a quick glance out of the corner of my eye, as if he would be a fleeting bird. I never looked back, though, but the sound of his gear would always give him away. It was really silly to carry that stuff around all the time, I though.

    Eventually, I happened upon Justin again, face-to-face. He was smiling, but I said sternly, "Why are you always following me?"

    He answered, "Who says I'm following you?" With those words, a cloud of gloom descended upon me. If he said anything more, I did not hear it, for I was storming away. In my mind, I congratulated myself for attracting a stalker.

    The same routine of noticing Justin's presence—but not acknowledging it—continued for the next couple of weeks or so. I tried to ignore it; I was usually good at that kind of thing, but his stalking seemed to evade my defenses against unhappiness, or perhaps just hid behind them.

    On an unseasonably balmy Saturday, I spent a large slice of time reading in Central Park. Many of the leaves had fallen, but the tree I was sitting under appeared to be ablaze. The fallen foliage blanketed the rustic bench upon which I was sitting. At first, it was very relaxing, but the story of Catcher in the Rye soon became mere words on a page. The surrounding air felt so unsettling that I could nearly taste its unpalatable molecules.

    Without averting my gaze, I said, "Justin, I know you're there."

    He came out from behind the tree trunk and replied, "Ah, I know you have a good ear. You found me."

    "No, you found me. I don't understand, but leave alone, please." I almost hated to sound so curt.

    "What? It's okay…I'm not hurting anyone."

    I bolted to my feet, spun around, and shouted, "Please, just leave me alone! I don't even know what you want! Go away and leave me alone!" I was so scared that I just kept running with my head down. I wanted to be invisible so that he wouldn't follow me anymore. Even more, I wanted to be an illusion, just a figment of his imagination that would dissipate when he got too close.

    I got home and cried. Although I was in my bed, I felt so lost.

    -------

    The day after the Central Park incident, I went to the soup kitchen like I did every Sunday. When I arrived, Helen and a few of the other regular volunteers were conversing. I hung my jacket and lute case on the wooden peg and sighed; I just didn't feel like myself. Upon seeing my arrival, Helen said to me, "So, we heard about your little 'secret admirer.'" Her voice sounded like an awkward attempt to tease me.

    "It's more than that," I said heavily. "I'm thinking of filing a restraining order."

    "You know it's not that easy, honey," she replied. "If you're under 18, you have to have a parent file it in your name."

    The frightening feeling was like a wave about to crash, and I was the immobile beach. Dad wouldn't be home for at least another week, and I had submitted to living in fear. I hated how smiling had become something that took effort.

    I didn't need for him to be waiting outside my building when I got home. He was either really persistent or a poor listener. I tried to ignore him, but he spoke to me: "I want to talk with you. Please—"

    "No! I told you to leave me alone!"

    "Just a little bit of time—"

    "NO! I told you no! I said to leave me alone and go away, so please do!"

    "Please, in Kaede's name, give me a chance."

    I felt like I had just been struck by a wall of water and then fell back into the eye of the storm, and I had been thoroughly drenched, deep into my soul. "Okay," I murmured.

    "Here's my address. Meet me tomorrow afternoon at whenever is convenient for you. I have a lot of little brothers and sisters, and I'm a lousy babysitter, so there's always someone around." I understood.

    There were so many questions circuiting through my mind—How did Justin know Kaede? Why had he not he not mentioned her sooner? What was all the equipment he always had? Why had I not given him a chance sooner?—but I did not ask a single one.

    ------

    He lived in the north side of town. It always seemed colder up there, less inhabited. The buildings were so stark that they seemed to me to radiate iciness. The day, too, was rather cold and blistery, and I was afraid that my nose might bleed.

    He answered the intercom and then answered the door after my ascent in the elevator. Two young children were chasing each other, one with a teddy bear, when I walked in. He led me to his room, and we exchanged no words.

    I was amazed by a room full of dimension and life, despite its tiny size. Half of it seemed to be filled with the same equipment he always carried. Notes and scraps of paper were scattered on a desk, as if they were blessings that had rained down from heaven. On the wall nearest his bed, there was a collage composed of photos of me. There I was, in the park reading, walking to school, sitting in a café, entering my building, shopping at the drugstore. All of the pictures were from weird angles, and I was never looking directly at the camera, except for one. Right in the center was the picture of me at the soup kitchen, clad in my olive drab bandana, with an eye-closed smile. It was rudimentarily framed with violet construction paper, offsetting it from the others. Had I not known myself, I would've thought that girl with the little braids was so happy just to be alive.

    I knew that Justin was a stalker, but one could say that I was dumbfounded. The photos sparked memories of my everyday life and gave me a better idea of who I really was: a girl who smiled for the sake of smiling.

    As I reveled, I thought that he could've known that I had a deceased sister named Kaede from information he had obtained through stalking. Yet, I had not heard Kaede's name spoken for so long. After she died, she faded and merely became 'your sister.'

    He finally spoke, saying, "You look so much like her, you know."

    "Ka…Kaede?"

    "Yes. Apparently, you never knew me, but I was a student of hers for a short time, less than a year, probably. I was one those kids forced to take piano lessons by their mother. I kicked and screamed, but after I met her, my mindset changed."

    I was listening, but I started to play with the seam on the bottom of my shirt. The black stitches, even in size and perfectly in row, reminded me of a line of black ants, but they looked strange. Someone had eroded them with the fierceness of contempt, and they had been uniformly disfigured.

    He continued, "Foremost, her playing was inspirational. You thought to yourself, 'I'd give anything to move people's hearts the way she moves mine.' And then, when she taught you how to play, she guided your hands with hers. Her hands…were so soft, and her fingers were long and bony, but so graceful. Not only was she young, but she could speak to you in so many ways, often not with words."

    I felt like I was going to cry. He described my sister so perfectly, that I could feel her hand in mine as we crossed the street together, or when she helped me up after I fell and skinned my knees, tears like waterfalls. You could feel the power of her heart when you were in pain or suffering, no matter how much it burdened her. I suppose I don't have any regrets, but one thing still remains: she didn't deserve to die.

    "I'm sorry…am I making you sad?" he asked with a look of concern.

    "No, I'm fine," I replied with a smile.

    "Well, I hope that you will truly accept my apologies. I didn't mean to scare you or make you uncomfortable. When I saw you that day when you were walking into the soup kitchen, I thought it was Kaede's ghost. It didn't seem possible, but I was entranced nonetheless. Then I found out that you were her younger sister, and I remembered that she had once told me she had a little sister, and she taught you everything she knew. I really am sorry. Will you forgive me?"

    "Yeah." I realized something else. I felt like crying because I had been so impatient and insensitive to someone to whom I was connected. My hasty conclusions hurt someone so unnecessarily. I then blindly broached a non sequitur: "What is all this stuff?"

    "Oh, I'm a storm chaser," he answered. "It's equipment for tracking weather and measuring intensity and so on." I nodded in acknowledgement. "Ah, um, do you know who gave you that necklace?"

    I figured that pendant around my neck; it looked like wings ascending from an open box. "No, I don't. A stranger gave it to me a number of years ago. I never even saw their face."

    Slowly, he pulled out a silver chain that was largely hidden by his sleeveless shirt and dropped it beside his shark tooth band. Blinking, I literally couldn't believe my eyes. It was a necklace identical to mine.

    "My older sister had given it to me that morning," he explained. "She had said, 'Give it to a girl so she won't cry. Keep the other to remember her by.' I saw you in the park that afternoon, curled up and crying. You must've been wearing a silly hat or something, because I obviously didn't think you looked like Kaede. I just didn't want you to cry anymore."

    "Yeah, I had a thing for silly hats when I was younger." It was such a stupid thing to say.

    "It may be too much to ask, but could you play a song for me on your lute?"

    "Sure."

    I unpacked my precious instrument carefully and tuned it quietly. This song wasn't meant for the lute; a mandolin would've been better. Yet, it seemed to have a sense of nostalgic finality, and that's why I chose it.


    [color=skyblue]"I have continued searching for you,
    though I know not your name
    because I wanted to share
    this feeling with you.

    Time envelops both love and pain,
    until they fade away.
    But I still remember them
    and always will….

    Though I cannot remember when,
    A whisper began echoing
    Deep within my heart,
    Fainter than drops of evening dew.

    May this prayer I spin
    Weave through the darkness of my frozen stars
    And reach the skies above you,
    So far away."

    Guidelines: main focus on #1, with bits of #3 and #4.

    Song credit: The song's actually an excerpt from the english version Radical Dreamers from Chrono Cross by Yasunori Mitsuda. I was going to make up my own thing, but...no. XD

    Yeah, and I suck at undetailed time passage, but oh well. And if I'm forgetting something, my apologies...my mom's a nazi and a half.

    always think...

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    Yay round three is my kinda thing ^v^ I so love writing the tragic romance lol
    Entering the first corner, weighing in at approx 150lbs, the debut of my character!
    Name: Shayliino Neruff
    Race: Lupegryph, like a gryffin only the lion part is replaced by wolf. Though sentient, the vast majority of them arent very smart and therefore sometimes "employed" by humans as transportation. Its rumored that at one time they were the most intellegent race on the planet but long ago something happened to them to make them little more than beasts of burden.
    Gender: Male
    Age: 3 1\2 (equivalent to humans age 9, they live to be in their 20s at most)
    Appearance: Like all Lupegryphs, he has a wolf head and body/back legs, eagle talons for the front paws that end about midway up into feathers that blend with the fur, long eagle wings and a feathered wolf tail. His fur is pure black with the exception of a dark silver stripe down his side and the feathers on him are pure white. Has strange, almost human looking blue eyes. From their shoulder to the ground they are typically 5 foot, but since he is just a child his shoulder only comes up to around 4 foot. Mainly a quadruped but they can sit up on their back paws easily if need be.
    Clothing and Gear: He does wear some sort of clothing, brown shorts that allow for movement and a hole for his tail (he has dignity you know!) and he has a pack hes secured to his back to carry around his handheld computer, analyzing equipment and binocular/molecular/holographic goggles. Wears the translator he made himself on his wrist, and a sort of harness around his neck which he uses to pull his hovercraft transport. He keeps a mini lab in there as well as many books.
    Personality: Is not only intellegent for his age, but also for his race. He breezes through mathmatics and sciences of all kinds, has been through medical college already (it only took him 2 months) and has a firm grasp on technology, computers and how to build things. Has begun to study into his race's apparent lack of intellegence, believing that somehow humans have caused it to happen. Though he doesnt hate humans for it, he just wants to be able to converse with his own kind. Feels like hes not accepted anywhere due to the fact that hes not human and he cant meaningfully communicate with members of his own kind. Mostly mellow, he rarely if ever lets anything bother him outwardly, and hes very into his studies, not knowing much about social interactions and the like.
    History: He was born to ordinary Lupegryph parents, but it was apparent from early on that he was something different. He showed curiousity in the "Why" of things from early on, and even learned sign language when he was only a week old. Seeing this, his parents keepers sent him to school like a human child, where for a while he was brutally teased. Rather than allow himself to become upset, he pitied the human children instead, and soon demonstrated that his knowledge of things far exceeded theirs. This caused the majority of children to leave him alone, while some still believed he was just a stupid animal. Eventually he came to private study, and was often seen at the library or with a book or two outside. Lives currently in the college he pretty much grew up in and spends his time inventing things and studying.
    Talents: Knows sign language and is like Macgyver when it comes to building things with technology. Very intellegent and of course can fly.
    Other: Cant think of other right now, will get back to you on that
    RPG Title: None, but Im thinking I may make one later lol not anytime soon though

    1. Physical- That age one, hes far too young to be as smart as he is
    2. Physical-Hes not humanoid in the least lol
    3. Misc. The transport one lol The character carries an abnormally large amount of gear for one reason or another and may have some sort of transport for this.

    And in the second corner, the dude who chases the wind (and sometimes catches it) SSM's character!

    Name: Justin Bailey
    Gender: Male
    Age: 22 Earth Years
    Appearance: Justin is nearly six and a half feet tall, and is built like a football player. His eyes are a deep brown, and he has short, black hair, spiked up with gel. He usually has a smile on his face, so he does not appear intimidating. Sometimes wears goggles (for when riding a motorcycle in the wind).
    Clothing and Gear: A sleeveless orange shirt and khaki pants make up Justin's main clothing. He wears a necklace of shark teeth, and has many different pairs of sneakers (they usually get destroyed, so he needs many). Justin always carries retractable metal staves, as well as a large quantity of weather equipment. He rides around on a motorcycle with a trailer attached to the back, used to transport a large amount of weather predicting equipment, ranging from barometers to advanced radar. Justin also has a cell phone, for its most basic purpose, communication.
    Personality: Justin is carefree and loyal. He always tries to help any friend in any way he can. His attitude, and one he assumes his friends have (even though he may be wrong) is that one should never give up; if they continue to push for a goal, they WILL make it. Justin may get himself into a situation he believe he can push through, when in reality he cannot, or, a friend of his may be in a situation where Justin assumes they will do fine because they can push through the problem, and the friend does not need his help, when really, it's Justin’s help they need most of all. Justin only loses his happy disposition if he becomes aware that a friend is truly in trouble (where Justin then puts forth all effort into helping), or if his flexibility is brought up as a conversation topic.
    History: Justin was raised in a rural community. His hometown was often on the receiving end of extreme thunderstorms, many with tornados. Justin developed a fascination with the natural cyclone, and has focused his life on it, up through higher education. Justin wanted to become a weatherman as his career, but at the moment he is a freelance storm chaser (not that he is complaining). One time as a child, Justin saw the result of a tornado sending an ordinary stick through a block of concrete, and the awesome power exhibited convinced him to begin training in the martial arts of wielding a long staff (of which he now holds major skill). It was during Justin's training that he discovered his gift of extreme flexibility. However, Justin found great displeasure in the ways he could stretch and contort his body, which he related to female gymnasts, and wishes to avoid. While Justin instinctively uses his flexibility while fighting, if someone mentions notice of this, Justin will become insecure and begin relying only on his brute strength, which often makes the fight all the more tougher. This applies to any normal activity as well; Justin will become distracted and not perform as well on anything if he is busy trying to make sure that he doesn't use his flexibility. Justin now travels around to different cities, offering his expertise as a tornado chaser and storm watcher to different weather agencies.
    Talents: Justin is extremely skilled with the prediction and observation of weather, most especially thunderstorms and tornados. He can estimate humidity simply by the feel of the wind, predict the direction of a tornado or storm that appears unpredictable, and can produce solid answers once he starts breaking out his weather equipment. Justin is extremely fit, and likes to fight with a metal staff, of which Justin is quite good with. Justin's fitness extends to his possession of extreme flexibility. He is self-conscious about this trait, and often wishes no one would notice, or that he never had it.
    Other: While his flexibility makes Justin feel feminine for he compares it to women’s’ gymnastics, Justin is not sexist and has nothing against girls (he's straight, so yeah, he likes them); he just doesn't want to be that much like them. Justin also goes through a large quantity of tennis shoes, for he often ends up in the middle of a rainy and muddy storm that destroys the shoes he had currently been wearing.

    And now for the post! DING!

    Shayliino Neruff
    You, who taught me everything and more, I love you.

    From the beginning, she was always there.
    Since the moment I was born.
    I know.
    I remember...


    Even before the moment I hatched from my egg, I felt her prescence. I was told my egg was found outside the next of straw and wood my parents had made inside the barn. Cast aside to die, for what reason I will never know. But for some reason, out of some great act of kindness, she was there. Rather than seeing it as destined that I die before I was born, she cradled my egg in her arms. I was blind to these events as I lay within the thick shell, but even so I knew I was warm and protected. I heard, no, felt her heartbeat thump from within as she cradled me to her breast, and it was then, though I was half-formed and knew not the words for such a thing, that I learned what love was. But it wasnt until a few weeks later that I would finally see the object of so much love.

    The sun was setting, a glorious sunset of golds and reds, painting the sky with the visual definition of joy. I had cast off the remnents of my shell an hour ago, blind and helpless I felt those arms lift me up and hold me close, rubbing my wet fur and feathers with a towel. She had planted a kiss on my nose, and it was then I opened my eyes for the first time. The golden sunlight shone upon her hair, and it gleamed like the sun. Her playful green eyes from that day foreward would remind me of the fresh spring day of my birth. Setting me on her lap she signed to me, and though at the time I could not understand what she said to me, I would come to learn the meaning: -I can tell you are special, Shayliino.-

    She was the one who was special. She, whose society had labeled her useless due to her lack of hearing, took the time to teach an 'animal' sign language. The first thing I learned was the sign I would come to treasure: I love you. She taught me to read, and every day she would come to the little 'office' she had set up in the barn to bring me books, and teach me something new. Her eyes seemed to glow as she read to me, those eyes were never condencending, they were always gentle and full of love. She told me many stories about her family, about her parents and older brother, and I saw the love in her eyes towards them as her fingers and hands moved through the air gracefully, weaving a wordless tapestry just for me. She told me stories about love, and confided to me her dreams of marriage and a family of her own.

    -What is marriage?-: I signed to her, my blue eyes riveted into hers. The way she described it it sounded wonderful, and she seemed to want it more than anything. A soft smile graced her lips, and she closed her eyes, her hands moving slowly as she told me. -Its when two people care for each other, and want to be with each other forever.- I shifted my back legs and wagged my tail with joy. Such a thing sounded wonderful, it was no wonder she wanted it so much. But the mood was broken as she sighed. Putting one hand to her face briefly she told me in sorrow, -But it will never happen for me...-
    -Why not?- I signed with alarm. I never wanted to see her unhappy, and my heart sank thinking I might have been the one to make her so. She stared at her hands for a long while before gazing at me with a brave smile. -Im not pretty at all..- Not pretty? Who could look at this object of pure life and joy, the purest soul, and say such a thing? -You're not pretty- I signed simply. Before the shock could register on her kind face I continued.
    -You're the most beautiful thing Ive ever seen....-

    Over the weeks I continued to grow, along with my love for her. Soon it came to the day when I would turn One Month old, and for weeks I worked hard on a special project. I had discovered I had a certain knack for technology, and in secret I had been working on an invention for her. My nerves rattled as I approached her, she was sitting on the fence her face to the sun. I stared in awe for a moment, taking in her beauty as she soaked in the morning rays. Then, breaking the spell I placed my taloned hand upon hers, but before I could sign my burning question she looked to me with joyful eyes. Throwing her arms around my thick furry neck I melted into her, breathing in her gentle scent. All my fears were allayed in that moment, but releasing me to look into my face it seemed something was on her mind too. -Shay,- she started, her face alight, a sight that always made me happy. -You've gotten so big, Im so happy!- I wiggled with excitement, I wanted to hold her close but I couldnt and talk to her at the same time, so I waited with anticipation at what she had to say. -I want you to come on a picnic with me today. Its a special picnic.-
    My heart leapt as I saw those beautiful words play out before me. I thought about the surprise I had in my knapsack around my back. This picnic was the perfect time to give it to her, to show her exactly how I felt. -I'll come,- I signed without hesitation.

    The moment seemed to take forever to come but soon she had packed the lunch and all was ready. It was the first time Id ever left the farms I had always called home, and the first time she would ride upon my back as I flew through the air towards our destination. The feeling of her straddling my back, her arms wrapped around my neck, sent ripples of pleasure though me. Her laugh, though she could not hear it, was beautiful. It was pure joy in liquid form, the sound of a sunbeam on a warm spring day. My heart felt close to bursting, I had no idea I could ever feel this strongly in my short life.
    The magical ride came to an end as we landed in a grassy field she pointed out. A dirt road ran nearby, and reeds grew beside it, high enough to obscure it partially. The wind blew gently, sending the sounds of summer insects to my ears. Suddenly a roaring sound broke the tranquil moment, the sound of machenery. She could not hear it, but she saw my ears stand up and focus on the sound, and jumping up she ran towards the road. Confusion swirled within me, and I followed with an uncertain trot. As I made it to the road, the gritty bits of rock digging into my paws, I saw a sight that stopped me short.

    She...she had her arms around someone else, a young human man with black fur just like mine. My heart froze at the sight, and it was then I learned something else. I learned what the bitter, icy stab of jealousy was. But I would not hurt her, perhaps it was a common gesture among humans to hug. Perhaps this human was one of the friends she often spoke about going to see. Surely she would not invite me along if she wished to be alone with this human male. The three of us sat upon the blanket, the two humans sitting together in a closeness that made me uncomfortable nonetheless. -This is Justin,- she signed to me, a certain joy in her eyes that iced my blood. I reguarded Justin with a wary lupine stare as I reluctantly signed -Hello-.
    "Its amazing that you could teach him that," Justin spoke to her, facing her so she could read his lips. "You're an amazing person." Hearing my own words coming from this human caused me to choke back a growl. This new feeling burned, and it was not at all pleasant. Seeing his praise and gazing into his eyes, her cheeks reddened and a bright smile graced her lips. She closed her eyes shyly...the way she used to when she told me stories. The way she did when she spoke of marriage. Justin shifted his dirty sneakers off the blanket and leaned forward, placing his hand on her chin gently and raising her eyes to gaze into his. He stared at her for a long while, his deep brown eyes searching her face, taking in all her features, before he spoke softly. "You're so beautiful..."
    It was at this moment that I ceased to exist. She only saw HIM, I was nowhere to be found. She only saw his eyes as she gasped at what he said, only felt his hand, his HUMAN hand on her face. His lips upon hers were the only thing she knew. I stared numbly as they kissed, as he did the one thing I wished I could but knew I never would. As their bodies moved closer together I couldn't see anymore. I was blind, like the day I was born. I was blind, only the love that was all around me then was directed towards this human, this stranger. This man who came on the motorcycle and took away my love, the most important thing in my life. I turned away, my wings trembling with restrained emotions, trembling with this new empty hollowness that filled my being. The shadow of my sorrow swallowed up the sunrise that was her, I suffered so to watch them. But she didnt know, she was awash in pure bliss. One that I could not give her.

    I threw down the small metal disk I had held so dear, the gift that would have been hers but now never could. She pulled away as I began to leave, and made a small sound to get my attention. -What's wrong?- she signed, completely unaware of what she did to me. That hurt even more. -You said you loved me!- I signed so fast I could barely keep up. -You told me you did, you told me you were happy with me. You....said......you.......- My hands faltered as I put them to my face to hide my eyes. I didnt want her to see the pain within them, I loved her more than anything, and I knew it would only upset her to see. Suddenly I heard a click, peering through my taloned hands I saw her watching the hologram that was my gift.

    It was a poem in signs. Admist my hands signing there was a sunrise, golden and beautiful, just like her.
    The sun rises upon us, my golden light
    You are a sight, the most beautiful thing I've ever seen.
    I long for us to be together, to make your dream come true
    I want you to marry me.

    It didn't rhyme but it didnt't have to. The signs for it flowed evenly and expressed the pure innocent love I held for her. It would have been perfect, but now it was just painful to watch. It ripped at my heart with every motion. The human man laughed slightly and looked at me incredulously, a confused look in his eyes. "Are you serious? You're only a month old and you want to get married? I hate to break it to you but she's a human." He seemed concerned as he placed a hand on my furry muscular shoulder, but it was like the hand of a betrayer. "Listen, you want her to be happy right? She can't possibly be happy married to an animal, no matter how smart. You're life is too short to pine away for someone you can never have."
    Life was too short. That was what she always said. -Life was too short to waste time being unhappy.- She had signed to me one day. -Even if the cards we are dealt in life try to make us unhappy, we must strive for happiness. That is what makes life worth living.- Beautiful words, but then she always had beautiful words. It became too much emotion to go through, too much to look upon Justin's concerned face, and too much to see the tears forming in her eyes. I flew, far away from them, despite her wordless cry, despite his calling. They would have a fine picnic without me. A fine life without me.

    Life was too short to be unhappy.

    This was the moment when I learned what heartbreak was.

    A few weeks later I wrote her a letter from the school I was attending. I had learned much, not just about the world, but about life, and love. I did want her to be happy more than anything else.

    I'm sorry about what happened at the picnic. I want you to know that I wish you and Justin the best, and I want you to do whatever makes you happy. Know that I will always love you, and you will always hold a special place in my heart no matter what happens.
    -Shay

    My heart still ached at the thought but I managed bravery now. I knew now that love meant sacrifice, my love for her was deeper than anything I ever could experience. I loved her more than I cared for my own happiness, and so I gave them my blessing, and just before my first year they were married. She always said she wasn't pretty, that no man would ever want her. But she was wrong, two men wanted her, and one could make her happy. I was happy for her, and in her happiness I found a small glimmer of my own.

    Her name was Dawn, and she shone like the sun.
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    3. A character (loved or lover) is the mentor or teacher of another.
    4. The post involves a love triangle of which at least one of the characters (loved or lover) is part of.
    6. One character in the "relationship" is of a different species or ethnicity than the other. This causes a large problem, large being anything from discrimination to questionable legality.

    Number 5 is iffy at best so I left it out lol

    Sorry if its a little sucky, Im sleepy lol I know of a few mistakes Ive probably made but all I can do is apologise, next time the deadline needs to be on a weekend lol I have work in the morn!


    And damn as I was writing I see someone else used the same player char as me x.x please dont kill me ;.;
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    The deadline has already passed as it is. I just wanted to apologize to everyone for not having posted this round. It's the first week of the semester, and I'm extremely busy trying to get everything into a groove. It's been fun participating, but I doubt I would have won anyway. Thanks, and see you next time!
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    You might want to reconsider, Bear. The deadline has now been extended to August 28th at 11:59 AM CST. All those who have already posted entries are free to edit them as they wish until that time. All those who have not posted for this round yet will not be counted late as long as they post by the new deadline. Have a pleasant day, everyone.


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    Gah, I just can't do it. I'm sorry, but I'll have to follow Ace's steps and withdraw from this tournament. With the semester in full swing, and me trying desperately to finish my degree this year, I just don't have time to sit and post. Even now I should be reading. It's been fun up to this point, and I look forward to the next one. I like the format, and the judging. Keep me posted, and good luck to everyone else!
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    *sigh* even with the extended time, I found it hard to finish this. i apologize in advance for what is not my greatest work. but it's something.

    i've used my Justin Bailey, and Weasel Overlord's Evri San.

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    Groggily, I opened my eyes. Rubbing my palm over my forehead, I looked around. Once again, as with all of the other days, I had awoken upon a couch. Not that this was bad or anything, but the fact that it was this specific couch in this specific home that bugged me. And things usually didn’t bug me.

    It was then that Evri walked into the room.

    I don’t know how long I had been living with Evri. No, we aren’t together… I don’t think… But the things are odd. I can’t really remember NOT living with Evri. Her, her habits, everything, I felt like I had endured me entire life. I was used to it, and not used to it. Evri was one of my only friends. I’m sure she regarded me as more than. But I couldn’t feel the same way back… things fascinated me too much…

    I watched as Evri began to turn toward a window. I jumped up, and went to close the blinds.

    “Evri, can you start on breakfast? I’m starving.” I said, quickly, rubbing my stomach. “I’m a big guy and I need a lot of food!” I looked down to Evri, and she looked up to me. She smiled. I was taken aback. I always was. Evri never smiled. Yet she would smile at me. Again, it was confusing, how I would know what thing, and know another, and the two made little sense together. While I stood in confusion, Evri left to the kitchen. I sighed, and turned toward the window. I was fascinated with clouds, I loved them, especially thunderstorms. The more destructive, the better. Evri, however, was deathly afraid of the faintest hint of fog.

    We were quite the odd couple.

    I went and sat down at the kitchen table, and saw food in front of me. I looked up to smile at Evri, who gave another (creepy) smile back. I looked down to my plate again, and the food was gone. I felt full. Did I just eat?

    “I saw it last night.” I looked up to Evri. “That griffin came to me while I was in bed again.” If there was one thing that DID make sense about Evri, it was that she always seemed to meet with these mystical and mythical creatures. I don’t know how, or exactly when, she did it, but that was something I knew as a constant about Evri. Not that I believed it… But it made her happy. Evri seemed like she had longed for someone to talk to about these experiences of hers, and I guess she enjoyed talking to me about it. Maybe that’s why she smiled at me. I listened when others wouldn’t.

    “Let’s go for a walk.”

    And that’s how my life was. I’d wake up with Evri. We’d go outside. I always had to bring a large umbrella with me, to block away any clouds Evri might see. Sometimes the walk would go well. By well, I mean that Evri would stop by pedestrians, and try to convince them of the creatures she had meant the night before. She’d then mention me, and how I believed her. If anything, mentioning me seemed to be the icing on the cake; people Evri talked to, for some reason, didn’t want to believe I was standing next to her. Maybe they disliked her so much that they couldn’t stand the idea of anyone tolerating her. That was wrong.

    Sometimes the walk would go badly. By badly, I mean that she noticed clouds. Maybe a drop of rain would fall. Or a slight cackle of thunder would go softly through the air. Or, 10 miles in the distance, a wisp of nimbus clouds would trail the sky. Evri would FREAK OUT. I mean FREAK. I had to run with her, and cover her with the umbrella, back to her flat, where she would run to her room and lock the door. This always worried me, for she sounded like she had trouble breathing. I was afraid she would get hurt. One day, when she had one of her worst episodes, I began to feel woozy too. Things began to spin and fade around me, but then I awoke the next morning, on the couch.

    This was my life, day in and day out.

    Again, I awoke. Evri walked in, and smiled. I had made sure to close the blinds on the window ahead of time. It was enough, though. I knew Evri felt strongly toward me. If I made a stand, therefore, maybe I could convince her otherwise?

    “Evri? We need to talk.” She returned from the kitchen, and looked up into me, giving a piercing look of seeing into me. I wanted to step back, but didn’t. “I… I can’t live like this. I need to see the world! I need to see the storms! Gah.. I don’t know what’s with my life… It’s like, whenever I start to wonder about things, time just passes by. It’s like, whenever I try to do something on my own, it’s over and done with. It’s like, all I’m here for is a comforter, for you! It’s like…” it was then that I noticed Evri had tears falling from her eyes. I had let loose an outburst that I shouldn’t have. I immediately went to wipe away a tear, but my finger passed right through the tears. I blinked, and looked at my hand. It was becoming transparent.

    “You were the only one… who ever believed me.” She said, looking up to me. “I love you… why can’t you feel the same?”

    “Evri… what’s going on?” I felt light headed. I fell to my knees. I felt Evri put her hands on my head, and lean me up against her.

    “You were real, too. But you can’t be now.” Nothing made sense... I fell onto the ground, and began to have trouble breathing... I could see the griffin, and a dragon, and other animals approaching me, before I finally faded out.

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    People and Pokémon alike be very afraid. I am unstoppable &amp; unbeatable. I laugh in the face of danger, eat when I&#039;m hungry, and belch in your face. Bow before me or face my wrath, for I am SuperSonicMewtwo, Master of all Pokémon and those who are annoying!

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    Scores? ;.;




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    Scores should be up tomorrow, My Internet doesnt like Text Heavy pages so I am doing most of this via Cell ;.;

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    Quote Originally Posted by Roy Karrde
    Scores should be up tomorrow, My Internet doesnt like Text Heavy pages so I am doing most of this via Cell ;.;
    It may be of more an issue of your browser. Do you use Firefox?

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    Scores for Round 3 are now up! Close, very close, this round: Round 4 will be up soon.

    SCORES
    First place is a tie this round, between - Asilynne
    Creativity - 13/15
    Requirements - 12.5/15
    Linguistics - 13/15
    Entertainment Level - 4.25/5
    Total - 42.75/50

    And Vulpix.ck
    Creativity - 13.75/15
    Requirements - 12/15
    Linguistics - 14.25/15
    Entertainment Level - 2.75/5
    Total - 42.75/50

    In second this round is - Weasel Overlord
    Creativity - 13/15
    Requirements - 10.5/15
    Linguistics - 13.75/15
    Entertainment Level - 3.5/5
    Total - 40.75/50

    In third this round is - Sheila Rae
    Creativity - 11.5/15
    Requirements - 12.5/15
    Linguistics - 12.5/15
    Entertainment Level - 3/5
    Total - 39.5/50

    4. SuperSonicMewtwo
    Creativity - 11.5/15
    Requirements - 13/15
    Linguistics - 12/15
    Entertainment Level - 2.75/5
    Total - 39.25/50

    COMPOSITE SCORES (Out of 140)
    1st place - Vulpix.ck - 123.25 pts.
    2nd place - Weasel Overlord - 119.25 pts.
    3rd place - Sheila Rae - 113 pts.
    4th - Asilynne - 107.25 pts.
    5th - SuperSonicMewtwo - 105.25 pts.


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    I sent Roy a PM but he might not have gotten it so Id like to subscribe to his judge comments ^-~ Everyone gets Plantaes but someone said Roy only sends his out if they are asked for so Im asking for them ok?




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    Quote Originally Posted by Asilynne
    I sent Roy a PM but he might not have gotten it so Id like to subscribe to his judge comments ^-~ Everyone gets Plantaes but someone said Roy only sends his out if they are asked for so Im asking for them ok?
    I'd also like to request this. ^^;

    Have you received a reply from him yet, Asilynne?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sheila Rae
    I'd also like to request this. ^^;

    Have you received a reply from him yet, Asilynne?
    No not even a "Im too busy right now here is the date you should have it:" kind of message. Im sure it would only take a few seconds to jot them down, much shorter than the 3 hours it took me to write my post lol (yes I type slow) lol




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    Alright I already typed this out once and the net killed it so I am going to keep it short. I bought Yahoo AT&T DSL, for the last half month, this thing works, and when it hits text heavy or picture heavy web pages. It kills it, same with outflow info. It's becuase of the phone lines of this place. So I am stuck waiting for Cable to come tomorrow. It is not becuase I do not have enough time. It is becuase I had to do the last round half via cell, half becuase I was lucky enough to access the page.

    So if I have enough time tomorrow or late tomorrow night at home, I will try to do it. If not I will just go on and wait till the next round.

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    Ok, but you can understand why Im impatient seeing as your net problems didnt stop you from starting 2 new RPGs lol comments take less time and or energy than that, or here better yet let me get on MSN ^-~




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    Compare the text on any of those two RPGs to the text size on the last page and you will understand. One is little and easy on these 50 year old Phone Lines and loads up instantly. The other kills it. So really the point doesn't work.

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    Well in any case get on MSN ^-~

    BTW who said anything about having a point? lol Stop taking yourself so seriously *slaps*




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    Quote Originally Posted by Roy Karrde
    Alright I already typed this out once and the net killed it so I am going to keep it short. I bought Yahoo AT&T DSL, for the last half month, this thing works, and when it hits text heavy or picture heavy web pages. It kills it, same with outflow info. It's becuase of the phone lines of this place. So I am stuck waiting for Cable to come tomorrow. It is not becuase I do not have enough time. It is becuase I had to do the last round half via cell, half becuase I was lucky enough to access the page.

    So if I have enough time tomorrow or late tomorrow night at home, I will try to do it. If not I will just go on and wait till the next round.
    It's okay. Luckily, vB has a very nice mobile interface. ^_^ Just don't forget about us. ;D

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    Round 4 is up, I hope I did it correctly. Sorry for it taking so long, Plantae was busy over the week but him and I finally got it hammered out!

    Edit: You need two Requirements, and the deadline is in 1 Week at 11:59 PM. I know everyone is still getting settled in to College. If you need a extention tell me or Plantae.

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    I apologize for my latency. I have recently contracted a cold and have been being appropriately sloth all day. The two newest guidelines, the deadline of September 22nd, and all other necessary information is now in the first post. Note that you only have to use one guideline, not two.


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    The deadline has been extended to September 24th at 11:59 PM CST. Now get a move on, all of you.


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    I hold firm by the belief that it's not stealing unless you have that intention in mind.

    I choose 3,4 and 10 for Iccaheb. Oh, and Evri San.


    Iccaheb's Trial

    Iccaheb peered at the soggy limp thing in his hands, its brim wilted and dripping. Who would abandon such a fabulous head adornment, to a puddle? It must have blown off, he decided. I’ll put it somewhere safe in case they come back. And with that in mind, he set off to find a good place away from the wind, and away from the sleet.

    The first place he found was a nook in a tree, but the headgear wouldn’t fit. The second place was a mailbox, but what if the owner came out and took it in with their mail, thinking it some lovely gift? The third place was a brightly coloured tunnel suspended three feet off the tarmac in a children’s playground. He slipped inside and put the brimmed-thing down on the cold metal. Satisfaction.

    The perfect place, Iccaheb thought. No squirrels or doggywogs or filching grown ups will get it here. And so he trundled back to school, the subtle notion that perhaps the brimmed-thing's owner would not find it either failing to occur to him.

    And though Iccaheb felt he had done a good thing that morning, from then onwards he felt an accusing stare on the back of his neck, and soon his vain self-approval slipped from his mind to be completely replaced with a paranoid concern. It followed him from the outside of the playground to school (during sports around the field), and watched him from the outskirts of the school grounds at break time. Many a time he raised his head from his desk to see something flicker and sheer away from the little square window set in the door, or to disappear hastily behind a lamppost, or dip evasively under a picnic table. He even saw leaves rustle as a bronze-tinted scale slipped amongst them, and Iccaheb promptly scowled in that tree’s direction.

    During the final break of the day, in between third and fourth lesson, he was walking out to the Science Building when he was all of a sudden bowled over by a large draconic presence.

    “I’ve got him Evri!” the thing cried, and Iccaheb spun around on the ground to see a large slender dragon advancing on him. Iccaheb’s eyes widened to dark-brown saucers as he scrambled backwards across the concrete, scuffing his palms and dress on the rough, filth-ridden ground. A girl-like woman ran over, mousey hair flickering in the breeze, her eyes as anxious as the dragon’s were angry. She looked at Iccaheb doubtfully, and gasped as the dragon galloped towards the fleeing child. Iccaheb tripped and went flying again, bloodying his knee and finding himself cornered against the wall of the kindergarten group’s playground fence. His mouth gaped wide, catching astonished snatches of air; he had never met a dragon before, and this one was as mad as any he could have imagined. Sparks flew from its eyes as it glared at Iccaheb, and the young boy pressed himself frozen to the railing.

    ~
    “Who are you?” He whispered, eyes ever huge as the dragon closed in.

    “My name is Tooku.” The scaled creature said dismissively, casting his name away with a gnarled foot as if it were of no importance. “Where is Evri San’s hat?”

    “H-hat? I don’t kn-know..”

    The pressured Iccaheb mumbled along in his state of shock, barely thinking of and forgetting the object he had hidden in the playground’s tunnel that morning. Tooku snarled at his seeming lies and lunged at Iccah, who desparately rolled aside, absentmindedly wishing Messier Sparklehorn was real and there to help him.

    “You stink of Evri hat, boy-child!” The dragon roared. “Tell me the truth!” As he leapt at Iccaheb with his teeth bared viciously, the girl cried ‘Tooku!’ in shock, and the Iccaheb jumped away from where he had knelt before, panicking as he felt Tooku’s fangs rake through the tattered frills of his dress. Hasty in pursuit, the dragon would not let him escape so easily, and the two scuffled madly on the floor before Iccaheb swung his lunch box - hitting the dragon on the side of his head with a clang!. Tooku fell sideways dazed, and shook his head of stars before recoiling sinuous like a cobra, tensing up and shooting at Iccaheb with a vengeance. Hitting him with the snub end of his nose, he collided with Iccaheb’s face, and more noticeably his lip. A flow of blood gushed into Iccah’s mouth and trickled down his face - his hair tumbled down in front of his eyes and he swayed with his defeat; he had lost their brief fight, and Evri San recalled her dragon, forcing him to heel with her repeated protests.

    “Leave him Tooku, I will talk to him!” She cried in distress, and nervously turned to Iccaheb, whose eyes were swimming with tears. She petted a small bag at her waist, seeming to take comfort in it, before drawing up the courage to speak.

    “Desole.. I am sorry for mon cher, mais do you know where my hat is? It is most important to me,” She pressed softly, and Iccah could only shake his head, droplets falling thick and fast from his eyes. He wiped his bloodied lip on a kleenex she produced from a pocket, only wishing that he could explain to her that he had not a clue.. but he could not say ‘no’ to his fellow humans, nor any other word he wished, for they never seemed to hear him, never mind even see his lips form the words, it had been that way since the accident.. Instead his eyes pleaded with hers, unsuccessful though for as clouds began to appear upon the horizon Evri became increasingly persistent, and Iccaheb shrunk fearfully as she pelted him with questions. She did so not cruelly, and Iccah knew she only wanted back her prized possession (whatever it may be), but nevertheless..

    “Sil vous plait! Took says you do, il vous a vu, he can smell it on you!” She said. “Tell me where mon chapeau is, you know, et vous savent, don’t you!? Didn’t you?! Please I want mon chapeau..!”

    “You smell like Evri hat, 'fess up boy-child!”

    “Là où est mon chapeau? Pourquoi won’t you tell me?”

    “You took it from her head with a yoink, didn’t you, I heard you!”

    As the dragon cried madly in accusation, Iccah’s ears rang with the final blame of something he hadn’t done and - reaching breaking point - he lashed out.

    “I DIDN’T TAKE YOUR STUPID HAT!” He finally cried out in frustration, and with his eyes scrunched up he kicked her hard in the leg. As tears began to well up in her eyes likewise and the dragon swooped again, he heard a loud yell from behind him.

    “Mr Rupert what ARE you doing?! A sharp clawed hand grabbed him by his scrawny wrist, yanking his arm and consequentially the rest of his person back to the main school. “It’s to the principal for you, boy.”

    Miss Evri straggled after them, mumbling weakly now: “My hat, mon chapeau, miss.. It’s going to rain..”, whilst peering at the afternoon sky, and its ominous bank of cumulonimbus..

    Poor Iccaheb could barely refuse as he was swept along by the angry teacher-on-patrol, lost and confused and bloodied by dragons, yet mostly astonished that Evri had heard him.

    -----------------------------------

    “Stealing and fighting? Attacking a random pedestrian?

    “Have you nothing to say in your defence, Mr Rupert?” The principal inquired, peering sternly over the top of his reading spectacles.

    Iccaheb raised his eyes from his rainbow shoe straps and stared at his headmaster, who quickly grew uncomfortable. He shuffled his papers hastily and, clearing his throat, jammed them back into Iccaheb’s file.

    “Well, I can see you’re not going to comply with this matter..” He said, before hesitating and sighing. He took his glasses off (folded them and inserted them in his pocket), and fixed Iccaheb with a concerned look.

    “Look Son, now I know you’ve had a hard time over the last few years, what with your parents.. Tragic.. Most tragic.. And your aunt’s death.. And coming to grips with it all, but you’ve got to start taking responsibility for your actions.”

    Iccaheb stared with detest into the anxious gaze, feeling himself growing hot under the collar, his sharp little fingernails digging into the armrest foam. This had nothing to do with that! But how could he defend himself?! No-one ever listened, ever heard.. He curled his toes in his shoes to try and stress off his rage as the fool-man waffled on.

    “Now we’ve been sympathetic, and perhaps we’ve let you get away with a little too much.” He continued, his eyes flicking over Iccah’s dress. “We’re as much to blame as you, and we’ll do our part in rectifying that. But you’ve got to help us too. Now we haven’t said anything about your clothing habits before now, but the fact of the matter is, they are rather unsuitable, and we would like to see you in a more fitting attire when you return to school next Monday. Do you hear me now, Mr Rupert? No more of this sillyness. Something more gentlemanly, okay? I’ll be writing a letter home to your guardian.. you live with an uncle, yes..?”

    Iccaheb glowered scathingly and thought softly: “My brother.”

    The headmaster seemingly fumbled for a second before following with: “Or a sibling, was it..?”

    “Well, anyway, we trust him to respond for your own good.. Now all that is left is for you to apologise to Miss San, and then you can go home to start your suspension.”

    Iccaheb gaped at him, open mouthed - what was he, an absolute idiot? Reluctantly Iccah slid off the chair seat, and slumped out of the door begrudgingly. Outside in the hall there sat Miss Evri, nervously sipping tea and peering fearfully out of the long corridor windows. Beside her sat Tooku the dragon, strangely snug in the visitor armchair, and regarding Iccah with a stern glare.. Though Iccaheb thought it looked more protective than reprimanding, and began to forgive the blasted creature.

    “Well Iccaheb,” Prompted the principal, after several inevitable quiet moments, “What do you have to say..?” Iccaheb blinked reproachfully at the tall man behind him, before turning softly to Tooku and saying earnestly ‘Sorry for fighting with you. I really didn’t steal Evri’s hat.’ It was an exchange of words that occurred only in the imagination, between them. ‘And I’m sorry for calling it stupid, I’m sure it was really cool, and I think maybe a jabberwocky took it.’

    “Mr Rupert, don’t keep her waiti-” The Principal started (clearly oblivious of the apology to the mythological creature) but was cut off as Miss Evri San stood up after hearing something quite special.

    “You are forgiven,” She said, and nodded to the headmaster. “Thank you for your help, messier. Now I must depart avant la pluie..” She turned and began to walk away, before the confuzzled man could even start to reply. He watched her retreat, a little exasperated, then turned back to look at Iccaheb, and jumped to find him staring pointedly at him. He got the meaning, quick.

    “Yes yes, you are.. dismissed, I suppose.”

    Iccaheb grabbed his hello kitty bag and lunchbox from the floor and ran after Miss Evri. He did not speak a word, but she managed to hear him calling her somehow, from all the way down the hall. Iccaheb thought she was quite special after all, and not so bad in the least.

    He took her hand and led her to his locker, from whereupon he pulled out a bright blue umbrella with a shiny red handle. Evri san looked tentatively at it, before taking it in her hand and opening it with glee. Iccaheb grinned, and tugged on her smockish t-shirt for attention.

    'If you don’t mind going outside with only the umbrella, I don’t know where your hat is, but I found this really cool brimmy thing this morning.. it might suffice until the Jabberwocky gives it back.'

    “That would be lovely," Evri San beamed. "You can never trust those Jabberwockies after all..”

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    Usage of Guidelines; 3, 4 and 5... Oh, and Shayliino Neruff, the Lupegryf, property of Asilynne. Thankee-sai! ^___^

    [color=#3e7f24]~Koehwyn Orion
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    Winter’s end, the most important time of the year, in the mind of the Dirvon king. This was the time when the hunt ran freely through the great forest, baying in the spring and melting the blanket of snow which had filled his heart with winter all season-long.

    Spring was coming; and all the tiny shoots and plants knew it, tender saplings grew upwards, embracing the chilly sunlight which was the preamble to the warming spring heat. New leaves unfurled; roots, buried for so long during the winter depths thrust out their young, hopeful buds, welcoming spring’s touch with their leafy splendour.

    It was through this calming scene Koehwyn’s hunt charged, lead by the brassy tones of his mighty horn ringing through the crisp air until the very trees reverberated with it’s sound. Galloping through the trees, cloak fluttering behind, the king lead his hunt, dogs baying, hooves clattering and eyes sparkling in the excitement of it all. And this Spring, there was a non-Dirvon addition to the Hunt’s splendour, going by the extended name of Shayliino Neruff. Though only a Hunt researcher, the Lupegryph, loved by most of the young Dirvon, seemed to fit right in; even though he was a little quieter and more reserved than the boisterously excited youths. It seemed that the young Shayliino had gone a’searchin for a race similar to his own with whom he could converse, and the Dirvon were excellent candidates, not only providing intelligent debate, but also a diverse religion and culture which Neruff was anxious to learn about.

    And so, bag and pack secured, he followed at a safe distance, to record, for his own amusement, and a set of detailed and exciting memoirs under his name, the precise details of the Spring Hunt, and the beliefs surrounding it.

    The yearly hunt was the event most anticipated by young Dirvons. They strived all winterlong to attract Orion’s attentions, vying for the best places within his hunt, the privilege of running beside the king himself - for he was the most fearsome fighter, even if the rumour went that he was showing the signs of age more clearly these days. Even if the rumour went that he could no longer string his own longbow, his muscles were wasted so. None of the fresh young ones believed such rumours, dismissing them in an instant, as any who had run with Koehwyn knew the extent of his fitness. In fact, among the younglings, rumour went that Koehwyn Orion was nigh unkillable, and none cared to experiment with the truthfulness of this rumour, for when incited, his wrath was a terrifying sight to see. Even if he was getting on in years, at a mighty three hundred and fifty seven.

    [color=#61b339]Aye, the rumour that the strength of Koehwyn Orion was waning in some permanent way had even reached the very ends of the forest, travelling along the borders like a destructive wildfire. And the border-dwellers were not as heedful of the king’s strength, which naturally lead to speculation, honing of skills and patient awaiting-of-the-right-moment. For, though he was much beloved in his own territory, Orion had acquired enemies of the most dangerous variety - those who were not afraid of death; nay, they near worshipped it. Almost cult-like in their behaviour. And it is to one such member of this cult, if you will, that our attention is called to.

    [color=#546c4a]One Fenris Fenrir had sharpened his claws since the Spring hunt that previous year, having espied Koehwyn himself, alone and unchaperoned, kneeling in a glade of particular beauty and clutching his heart with a pained expression etched upon his noble face. This experience was enough to convince Fenris that the rumours were indeed founded in some truth, and not mere wisps of gossip thrown about by bored Dirvon to while away the time of a dull winter.

    A snarl in the darkened cave of his home, and Fenrir was away, leaping through the darkness and lightly off boulders and obstacles, claws making deep scars in the wood.

    The sound of Orion’s famed hunting horn rang through the air, giving away his position perfectly to the maddened ears of Fenris Fenrir. Belly down, he crawled forward, inch by painful inch as his prey grew nearer. If his suspicions were correct, and they most often were, the king would be nearing the limit of his physical endurance by now; yearning to pause for a rest, too weary to put up much of a fight.

    And if his blood instincts were correct, which, even while misted by glazed red blood-lust, they most often were, he would be alone, a delicacy ripe for the taking by a hungry hunter.

    Fenrir’s blood sang with the joy of the hunt; belly down in the long grass he espied the ragtag ends of the hunt, those not important (or good) enough to be up front with the king himself. They trailed about, sniffing the air in delight and chattering among themselves, deliciously unaware of the presence of the hunter in the grass. Their very presence almost tipped him over the edge of the precariously balanced sanity which was all that remained of a once-sharp mind. But he resisted. Fenris Fenrir lived only for this moment. The moment of the death of one of the most feared Dirvon of the forest.

    His mind sang back to those deep-hidden memories; misted in their details by the mere passage of time. He saw the great king himself tear through the glade which was his puphood home. His mother, father, siblings, torn and trampled beneath the uncaring hooves of Dirvon both young and old, as they laughed and shouted in the glory of the hunt and oncoming spring. Life for the crops, death for his family… Scarlet blood to fertilise the hard, cold ground.

    And Fenris vowed revenge from that day; he had merely been waiting for the opportune moment. Winters had been hard and long, food scarce and the first signs of spring had been welcome, as usual. Only this one brought the dark promise of death…

    [color=#61b339]Indeed the winter of Fenris’ youth had been a particularly hard one, the blizzards had ripped through his homely cave, coating his child-fur with glittering frost which froze to what skin it could find, tearing at it like a hungry wolf at a carcass. His parents, lone and expelled from their long-dead pack, eked out what living they could in the cave; picking at whatever animal came near, the male hunting for hours with often no resulting sustenance. Three pups of the Fenrir family starved to death that bitter winter; and his mother, forced out into the open by the howling winds and the promise of spring, died with her only remaining offspring dangling from her mouth. The father, hearing her final howl, arrived in time to see his only living pup seemingly dead in his mother’s mouth. If ever an animal can feel sorrow; and it is sure that wolves can indeed feel pain at the death of a pack member, let alone their own kin; well, his pained howling drew the hunt to that dreadful scene, just before the father fell to the ground, the toll of the winter and now the death of his lifelong mate and pups too much to take.

    The young Fenris, far too young to understand, watched this all through baby-lidded eyes. Viewed the hunt charge through the clearing, unseeing and with no awareness of the bodies they trampled so overtaken were they by the joys of an oncoming spring after such a hard winter.

    His only thought, for he was too young to understand, yet old enough to think; was of sadness. Sadness and anger, for though spring was here, and he would have no trouble fending for himself, being already weaned, he was left alone and family-less. Seemingly the fault of the Spring Hunt and the Dirvon King.

    [color=#546c4a]And so, Fenris Fenrir waited.

    The limits of his patience knew no bounds as he awaited the passing of the Hunt, knowing that his prey was near.

    A lick of the lips, a glint of the eye, and he was gone, tail waving as he crouched through the swaying grasses. No tiger was he, but he evaded notice from a mere lack of attention by the intoxicated Dirvon.

    To the next clearing he crept, keeping to the shadows beneath newly-leafing trees, under huge, ingrained roots until the object of his crazed desire lay in the sight of his red-misted vision.

    Maddened by a lack of food, cold and his thirst for revenge, Fenris’ only coherent thoughts were those deep instinctual ones.

    crouch
    leap
    [b]kill


    Claws outstretched, teeth bared, he leapt…

    [color=#3e7f24]Koehwyn, knelt on the grass for a brief respite, and painfully alone in his vulnerability, sensed the attack before it even happened; ears pricked forward slightly and head cocked he listened.

    The flying, bedraggled mess of wolf connected with his bare neck, unprotected by cloak long since shed, Koehwyn Orion keeled over sideways under the bulk of the now-skinny wolf.

    Kicking up his hooves in surprise, he rolled, a first instinct, before tearing at his throat where the maddened Fenris clung, claws entwined in long hair and teeth snapping at exposed flesh.

    Heaving himself upright, Orion shook himself, grunted once, and lifted his once-great arms to tear away the wolf and fling him to the ground. Reaching for his discarded longbow, his fingers nearly tightened about the wood when he was flung off-balance once more by the hurtling wolf.

    Bleeding from a dozen tooth- and claw-inflicted wounds, Koehwyn’s hands had began to shake slightly and his normally straight-backed stance held a slight tremor.

    Fenris crouched in a corner, teeth bared in a bloody grimace and eyes shining with battle-lust. Scrabbling at the ground for purchase, the enraged wolf tensed then leapt once more; as Koehwyn, eyes catching the slight telltale movement, swerved out of the way.

    He balled one of his hands into a fist and punched out as well as he could, into the exposed right side of the leaping Fenris. His fingers peeled away to reveal a tiny knife, embedded deep between the ribs, only the hilt showing.

    Fenris crumpled with the blow, twisting mid-leap to come crashing to the ground in a cloud of dust. He lay in a heap, blood streaking his silvered coat and tongue lolling out. The Dirvon King crouched beside Fenris Fenrir, his wise eyes filled with compassion and questioning.

    He laid a hand upon the knife, pulling it out in a quick movement so as not to cause the creature too much pain. A wince, and he lowered his head in deference to the fierce fighter, though he knew not why they had fought, the wolf had been a worthy opponent. Closing his eyes for a moment, he uttered a soft prayer under his breath, before being thrust backwards by the force of the wolf’s final leap.

    His eyes opened in shock and meeting with the blood red eyes of Fenris Fenrir, Koehwyn knew fear for the first time since he had taken to his throne.

    This maddened wolf, his teeth and claws sunk in his throat, had killed him. He knew not the reason, could think of none.

    Scarlet droplets flecked the trees about the great bodies. One, a king. Once mighty, now as lowly as any other poor dead thing; the other lowly and driven by a single, desperate need for revenge.

    Their deaths gave life to the growing seedlings beneath them.

    Death for you; life for my crop.

    [I]You have - broken through my armour and I don’t have an answer
    I love you all the same

    But you stole the sun from my heart
    You stole the sun from my heart


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    The young girl called Carolina came to me again and again. Even as I poured my wisdom into her gradually, I did not forget any part of my life. She is little enough to fit through the small opening between my mind and heart and explore both as a whole. My resolve does not matter now, as Carolina dilutes it ever so gently in her search for knowledge. However, since the first story recounting Aeryn, I have been trying to tell accounts of lesser intensity, after seeing her devastation. Never a day went by when she did not come to see me, only so that a memory of mine could linger inertly in the sacred air between us before it became another tool to shape her expanding worldview.

    With the way she sat in before those days, listening intently, rarely blinking, my heart was moved to feel the emotional gravity of some memories I have tucked away. Last night, for example, I slept in my old bedroom, despite the dust. And here now I sit, gazing out the lightly tinted window, sessile for the day. A knock comes from the front door of my earthy domicile. Placidly, I rise and float to answer it, finding Carolina there. I smile gently, admiring her for a moment, my eyes softening.

    "I'm sorry, Nikita! I hope it is okay to came to your house today without notice. You weren't at Seekers, so I didn't know…"

    "It is fine. I would have not divulged my address if I did not want you to ever visit."

    I lead her to my old bedroom, and she follows obediently, though I have given no command. When we enter, she immediately falls into a fit of coughing. Holding her diaphragm with one arm and holding a fist over her mouth with the other hand, she sputters air and saliva, the irritation of her lungs causing her face to turn red and hot tears to paint her cheeks. I watch silently, patiently waiting for the end of the fit induced by dust.

    She wipes her face and inhales deeply. Regaining her composure, she presently looks about the room, her expression morphing to one of awe. This room is dimly lit, the only light hailing from the small, old window with splintering panes and billowy cobwebs. Lined on its pitted sill are vases of varying sizes, colours, and designs, each one empty and equidistantly apart. Collaboratively, they cast multicolor shadows upon the floorboards, creaking oak with diverse patterns from the rings of trees from which they came. Under the window, against the wall, a jar of sea glass is placed, half empty, and covered with dust. The north end of the room has the highest ceiling, and it slopes evenly until the edge where I would no longer be able to stand up.

    From the ceiling, all sorts of knick-knacks are strung on nylon strands. There are panels of glass, each one a different colour of the rainbow, and a mesh bag handing after the purple one with the bottom broken out. A windsock, a crocheted scarf, a beaded necklace, a clay pendant: all of this dangling from the nylon, and all rainbow coloured. Also, there is also a flower there, a single dahlia that has been dried, and now the petals are cracking, lined with dust.

    On the smallest wall, the darkest part of the room, narrow shelves are decked full with all shapes and sizes of optical prisms. The spheres, pyramids, rectangles…all of their edges appeared softened by dust. Together they create a surreal nightmare of geometry, the wooden shelves bravely bearing their weight. Some of them had chips that were merely a consequence of time.

    As Carolina gazes about the room, I close the door behind me. It is battered with holes that look like they are a woodpecker's handiwork. In the majority of these cavities are filled with marbles that differ as widely as the holes themselves. The door thus becomes a refuge for the plethora of lost childhoods, though not a single marble touches another.

    The bed, which had not been slept in for years before last night, has a horrible slant and sags like tired shoulders under an eternal burden. The headboard is of a dark wood, though I cannot remember what its name is, and a sun pattern carved it the center of it. On the top of it are stout candles of every colour, the wax whitening, and the wicks long burned away, their scents tired. Now, the room only smells like dust.

    "What is all of this?" Carolina asks with shining curiosity.

    "This is my collection," I reply.

    "Why? I mean, other than the colours, these items don't seem to have any correlation…"

    "I am presuming that you are awaiting the story," I offer.

    "If it's okay, please tell me," she answers with a spark of eagerness. For a moment, I think about the magnitude of this chapter in my history, wondering if now is the time to release the seal I had placed upon such stories that could harm the young mind of Carolina.

    Inhaling, I first speak slowly. "First, you must learn an iota of history. About 200 years ago, the doctrine of communism was developed by a half-elf named Leowyn Haäs. It was in the midst of an era when half-elves were extensively oppressed for the sake of the economic gains of full-blooded elves and humans, especially the wealthy. At that time, communism was like a beacon for weary travelers, and was readily embraced, and the works of Haäs were widely published. Those who lived then failed to see that although it was theory that looked like calligraphy on paper, in practice, it put too much faith into humanity, and hence was its tragic flaw. For the people to share their land, their wages, and their lives, was something not thought through completely, for the ostensible end of oppression dazzled them.

    "In a largely half-elf region called Samaria, a growing group of rebels earnestly adopted the doctrine and successfully staged a coup d'état. A bloody civil war ensued, between the communists and the traditionalists, though it endured for but a year. Rising to power were the communist rebels, but mismanagement and corruption caused the state to collapse just a few years later. Samaria was consequently swallowed up by neighboring Krymia."

    Carolina opens her mouth and a small breathe escapes. It seems as if she is about to speak, but instead, she closes her lips and shifts her footing.

    "We should sit," I suggest, motioning to the bed with a broken vertebrae. I then continue, "Nearly a hundred years later, the infamous dogma of communism that was thought to be a relic of the past was revived. The neo-communists, as they were so called, tried their hands at many a velvet revolution, but they were largely unsuccessful. Still, they remained a persistent faction in the political landscape around the world. With a reinterpretation of the communism of old, they wished to make the world free of oppression for everyone who lived in it.

    "There rose in opposition, however, a clandestine faction called the Normals, masterminded by a man named Dr. Kranchik. The military commando and the face of the organization, though, was Xavier Lionheart. The Normals worked furtively, sometimes sabotaging the efforts of the neo-communists, or perhaps distributing harassment to those whom they thought to be sympathizers.

    "My cousin, Lilia, was indeed a neo-communist. At that time, Mother had lost herself, and her feckless searching proved fruitless. I had gone to live with Lilia in order to escape the whirling rages that afflicted my senile mother. Lilia…that name that felt like a breeze carrying fallen petals on my lips. She was so beautiful, with the white threads of her hair resting around her face, her large eyes a deep purple, though they looked so wise…"

    "Like your earrings," Carolina states.

    She has truly caught me off guard. "Eh?"

    "You told me before that your earrings didn't have any special meaning, but they are the colour of Lilia's eyes," she says. Carefully, I take my crescent earring out of my right ear and balance the hook on my fingertip. Appraising it, I hold it up to the feeble light.

    "I suppose you are right, though I have never though about it before now," I reply. She nods, so I continue. "Her smiles were always full of energy, and no matter how much weight burdened her heart, that smile would remain. Although her frame looked so supple, her resolve and strength were incredible, but her powers of verbal persuasion dominated all. Those nights we would stay awake talking until dawn are instilled in my memory. Even though I didn't understand all of the neo-communist jargon, I could still realize that she was working so hard for the benefit of the masses. More than anything, she protected me as if I were a lover, as if I were her own daughter…"

    The bed creaks under our combined weight, so I rise and lean against the dusty wall, motioning for Carolina to remain seated. She beams with curiosity, gazing up at me.

    "Terrorism of the Normals had been on the rise. Even common civilians were starting to live in fear. Before long, there was an attack in Acadia, Lilia's town—miraculously, we both emerged unscathed. After that incident, I would go on errands with her, but we were denied entrance to anti-communist shops—the Normals' propaganda targeted the Acadia chapter of neo-communists specifically. Our daily life utterly disrupted, I vowed to fight Lionheart. While at that time I didn't understand the gravity of death that either side had caused, I still promised vengeance unto him."

    I pause so that my voice will not crack and my heart will not race. My finger traces a shaky line in the dust on the windowsill until it comes upon the fist vase. "I first had to find a way to go about fighting this Lionheart; the Normals were not by any means an openly operating organization. After laborious investigation and a bit of assistance from neo-communist spies, I was able to deliver a message directly to Lionheart, setting a place and time. In hindsight, it is very evident that I never thought through this plan entirely, as I never secured a means that would assure his presence at our fight. As I believed then, I was fortunate that he did indeed show.

    "Needless to say, my plan was a secret from Lilia, so I had the fight in a small clearing in the Lathene forest, a small woodlot on the far western outskirts of Acadia. To be trifling, the anti-communist sentiment was likely stronger in the western prefects of the town, although it is impossible to measure for sure. I was so certain then that Lilia would never encounter me there.

    "Xavier Lionheart stood before in typical military garb, adorned with bulky, gold jewelry. 'You will pay!' I shouted, clenching my fists. 'You damn neo-communists insist on a wretched, backwards society. Go to hell.' He spat on the ground in front of me, and that was all he said. His words blinding me with rage, a charged him with quick punches, though my scrawny knuckles merely deflected off his firm and abundant muscles. The recoil seemed to hurt me more than my jabs hurt him. He remained still with arms crossed while I kicked and futilely thrashed, cursing my own incompetence.

    "When my flailing ceased to be entertaining to him, he seized my wrist and flung me upon the ground. Even that single blow was too much for me. I felt as though I were a bag of osseous fragments, and that my insides would soon disintegrate. I could only moan to let what I felt to be the last sounds of life depart my body. He then clamped his burly hand about my neck, lifted me up by it, and sent a fist straight into my chest, as to demonstrate the power of a properly executed punch. My body skid to the edge of the clearing. It indeed felt like my skull was cleaved, so upon touching it with my fractured hand, sticky blood stained my hair and fingertips.

    "'Nikita!' Lilia burst into the clearing, first confronting Lionheart so that he did not further contribute to my maim. Upon recognizing her, he drew his bladed Sai, and Lilia placed a hand on the sheath of her long sword. The battle that ensued consisted of quick flashes of metal and the flinging of limbs. Lilia was so graceful, being the experienced fighter that she was. All I could do was lay there was I watched the dearest person to me become a murderer.

    "With a thrust of finality, Lilia's long sword pierced the heart of Xavier Lionheart, and he fell backwards into a pool of his own blood. The reputed sound of the hoof beats associated with the mounted police approached quickly. 'Run, Nikita!' she cried, but I answered feebly, 'No, go. I'll catch up.' Still breathing, I was found by the masked officers and promptly arrested.

    "My short stay in a jail cell is but a blur now. In the interest of my freedom, Lilia completely confessed to Lionheart's murder, so no trial followed. I knew that she would never abandon me. She was taken to a penitentiary in the Gorrah region, a Normals stronghold. A potential execution was still pending, as countless appeals from the neo-communists halted speedy judgment. After a couple months of recovery, I was finally able to go there and visit her.

    "Gorrah had been rooted against communism since its birth, but they had increasingly moderated their views. Still, the sentiment I experienced there was unbelievable. So many were lamenting the loss of Lionheart, the hero. As I approached Olympia castle, where Lilia was being held, the guard spoke with me briefly: 'Girl, I want only that you understand how the assassination of Bear Lionheart has shattered the hope of so many people. With a force against neo-communism, we had the chance to farm our own land, move up in the social class…but now with that opposition as unstable as it is, we are just as uncertain.'"

    I shifted my aimless gaze to Carolina, who was watching me intently, with a hint of a crestfallen expression.

    "As he escorted me, I began to wander in thought. I know now, of course, that my life has been full of poor choices. He led me to one of the loftiest rooms in the Olympia castle, the abandoned home of the ancient Zillah royal dynasty. Lilia's cell was formerly the princess's chambers, so though it was spacious and retained many of its decorations, the furniture had been removed. Ironically, the garland above the doorframe was a wreath of lilies. The stonework was beautiful, and there was even a glassless window, though any escapees would meet a certain death.

    "'Lilia…' I murmured. 'How are they treating you here?' She responded, 'Despite the boredom, it isn't too bad. It gets cold at night sometimes, though.' Warmly, I put my arms around her, nestling into her side. Although I denied it at the time, I was young, and I didn't want to be alone. 'Why can't I stay with you forever, Lilia?'

    "She floated across the room like a windblown spirit, picking up a small triangular prism that was surely once one of the princess's treasures. 'We are too different,' she explained. 'You are this prism.' She held it up to the window, turning it between her fingers. 'You refract all the light that hits you even more beautifully, but—' she eclipsed the sun with the palm of her hand—'When darkness strikes you, weak and vulnerable you become, a fragile specimen of life.' She gently took my hand, opened it, placed the prism in it, and closed my fingers about it. I breathed in awe, and gazed at her as she moved forth. On the windowsill stood a lone vase. It was composed of many coloured shards, like the window of a cathedral, a glassblower's final masterpiece. With an invisible swipe, she knocked it to the stone floor. It sounded like the sky had shattered and fallen.

    "'And I, I am this vase: a once-beautiful amalgamation of miscellaneous shards that don't fit back together anymore, looking for pieces of myself that no longer exist, for they have been lost to eternity.' With the tip of her steel-toed boot, she crushed an azure fragment into dust. The flower that had lived in vase, a scarlet dahlia, lay upon the stone floor. When Lilia bent to pick it up, the petals fell from it and drifted into the loose cracks. 'And I can't even protect the single flower that remains in my life. Together, we are that distant rainbow that appears only when there is more sunlight than there are raindrops, the rainbow without a pot of gold at the end, the one that fades before enough people can behold its beauty.'

    "I breathed deeply, shifting my gaze from the shards to Lilia's perfect eyes. Standing on my tiptoes, I reached up to caress the lacerations on her cheek. They had yet to mature into scars. 'I'm so sorry!' I burst. 'If I had only been a little stronger, I would've run away with you, and then no one would know who really killed Lionheart! And you wouldn't be here! I'm so sorry!'

    "She put her arms around me, consoling me, easing my sobs. 'I am glad to feel that you are okay,' she whispered to me, 'but there are still many who believe that you are Lionheart's assassin, and they will not hesitate to castigate you as they see fit. You must go now, leave this region, and travel for a long, long time. You cannot remain in one place for too long. You must forget about me. You must.'
    "That is the only time I have ever disobeyed her. I looked into her eyes a final time, and under my breath, I murmured, 'Farewell, Lilia.'"

    The sun is now sinking into the occidental sky. I turn to Carolina, watching the dance of the shadows upon her face. She is slow to speak. "Do you…do you know where Lilia is now?"

    "Alas, I do not. I have heard nothing of her since we said goodbye."

    "Shall we go on a search for her, someday," she suggests.

    The unorthodox words draw a smile on my lips. "Yes, we shall. One day."

    The girl pauses and finds her words. "Miss Sangmira, do you believe that fighting is inevitable? I mean, that people will always fight because of their race, appearance, or philosophy?"

    "When I was amidst the innocence of youth, I would have said that with reason, people can be perfect…yet now, with my jaded perspective of life, I know that people will always fight, for there is no best solution that they may have the power to choose. It is such a sad truth that our lives are an unending battle, one that most of us cannot win."

    I pick up a tall green vase, but it falls from my trembling hands. Its shattering pierces my eardrums. I gather the pieces, and the blood trickles from my fingers and palms. Twilight seeps through my window, but only can I hold the smooth, cold, and silent fragments that are called broken memories.


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    *cracks knuckles* I chose my character and the other persons character very carefully for this round.....
    My chosen char for this round is.......
    Name: Aeryn McFallon
    Race: Human, Electro-Psi
    Gender: Female
    Age: 19
    Appearance: Medium length black hair, blue gray eyes. About 5'8" with a slim but muscular body structure. Her mother was Japanese and her father was Irish so she looks like a mix between the two. Despite this and some of the cultural things she shares with her parents she is all american lol
    Clothing and Gear: . Likes to wear shirts that show her stomach, and flare jeans or medium length shorts with japanese style sandals. Has her white and gray striped cat Sushi with her always
    Personality: Optimistic and uplifting, she always has a song in her mind. Loves to sing as loud as she wants reguardless of whos around. Has a melodic voice that reminds people of a sweet summer day, the warm sun and a cool breeze. She feels emotions strongly, and sometimes the air around her becomes charged with electricity because of it (a warm buzzing feeling in those around her if shes happy or excited and a tense staticy feeling when shes pensive or upset) Likes her life to be well ordered and peaceful and when its not, it unbalances her completely. When shes stressed she gets moody and withdrawn, choosing to avoid her friends rather than let them see her in that state. Has a temper if she feels she is being held down or made to do things she deems pointless or not necissary. Likes her freedom ^v^
    History: She grew up on a quiet suburban street, enjoying what some would call the good life. Her parents werent rich, but they were still very well off, but despite this she didnt grow up spoiled. Her parents both came from poor families, and, not wanting to raise a child that took things for granted, made her work for everything she has. Because of this she gets slightly embarrassed when people see how well off they are, she doesnt like feeling like people will treat her differently for it. She enjoys using her Electro-Psi powers but mostly just uses it on instinct. Because of its potentially harmful nature to humans, she doesnt really practice shooting bolts of electricity at things, and shes not much into technology because she tends to break it with the static. Likes to use it to pick up radio stations in her mind though lol One summer day when she was ten, she was outside on a cloudy day before a thunderstorm singing, T storms always gave her a thrill. During a high point in the song (crescendo or something) a bolt of lightning came down and struck her. She discovered her powers when instead of dying she absorbed it like nothing happened and didnt even know anything happened except for the warm tingly feeling she felt. Let me clarify this a bit. When she sings to her its an emotional thing, she FEELS the music ^-~ Singing thrills her as much as thunderstorms so when she was singing the electricity power in her acted as a lightning rod and attracted the bolt which struck her ^v~ Shes not the type who shoves singing in other peoples face or thinks she is the best singer ever, she just feels good when she sings so she does it. It makes her feel at peace with the world, when she sings outside it makes her feel attuned to nature. (I know some people got the wrong Idea about this character before because of that ^-~)Is currently attending the local state college, in which she is majoring in animal care/veterinary studies.
    Talents: Electricity manipulation, her body produces it due to her electro psi nature, can sing well, knows some martial arts and just plain brawling if need be, and she likes to cook.
    Other: Other: *Pets other* I wuv you other you are my frieeeeend! LOL OMG She loves cats and the cats seem to like the static electricty that comes from her petting their fur. A lot of her shirts tend to have something called the 'sushi neko' on them LOL
    RPG Title: The Psi, by Virtualplay

    And the other char is Ace64's very own.....
    Name: Birth Name- Anthony Kirlack. Alias- Ricardo the Merchant.
    Race: Human
    Gender: Male
    Age: 48
    Appearance: About 5'7'',medium size not too tall, not too large. His eyes are a greyish-brown, with a head of salt-and-pepper hair cut short. His right eye is a milky white, the result of a birth defect, but he prefers not to cover it up, though he does own an eyepatch.He isn't particularly athletic, but neither is he a weakling at all. Besides his eye, he appears to be perfectly average, nothing outstanding at all. He appears to be wealthy, but judging by his clothes...his preferred method of travel...can one be sure?
    Clothing and Gear: Ricardo wears a grey trenchcoat and a dapper black hat, which just covers his eyes. A number of rings cover his fingers, with jewels of differing worth perched atop them. His merchandise is kept in a large, covered wagon, driven by two large black stallions, named Thunder and Lightning. He carries a variety of products,just about anything one might find useful, from weapons to knick-knacks to appliances to clothing. He seems to have something for everyone. In addition, he carries some merchandise on his person, hidden in his coat.
    Personality: Ricardo is a charming and charismatic character- every word that comes out of his mouth seems to have been planned, designed to create a certain effect on the subject. He's very observant, gauging the effect his speech has on another and tailoring his conversation to whatever end. Some say that it is cunning to be able to sell heat in the south and ice in the north, but one wouldn't dream of calling Ricardo a con man. Heavens, no!He's a salesman after all, only looking out for your best interest. Yet, Ricardo has few close friends despite these qualities. The merchant is a only a facade- no one has ever glimpsed Ricardo's true mind- though there have been suspicions. Ricardo despises generousity of any sort, and believes selfishness is a valuable characteristic, one which he honors to no degree. Yet, no one would accuse him of being selfish. How curious. He has the peculiar honor of being one of the few merchants with a caravan who has never once been attacked by thugs or raiders. In fact, he doesn't even employ a guard.
    History: Anthony was the son of a poor, widowed . He grew up poor, but he never once despised his station, or his lot in life. He simply set out to make the most of himself with the skills he was given- quick wits and a silver tongue. He began as a cashier in a local drug store- through a combination of opportunistic luck, networking and calculation, he soon took over the store with the previous owner's 'untimely' death. From there, he introduced several new drugs into the market, and the rest is history. He made sure his father was taken care of, paying off their debts and securing a life for his father, not out of kindness but out of familial duty. Aside from his father, Ricardo has no other relatives. Eventually, he took to the road, traveling far and wide to peddle his goods. He's recognized, but never expected- his path is never the same twice.
    Talents: Charisma and speech skills, along with uncommon wealth and the knowledge needed to use it correctly.
    Other:

    1. Blind in his right eye, which affects his depth perception. However, he's learned to compensate for this handicap, since he's lived with it all his life.
    2. Treasures selfishness over generousity- apt to favor those who share this view over those who do not.
    3. His horses, Thunder and Lightning- they don't seem to struggle at all at carrying the wagon, no matter how much merchandise he loads up. When asked were he acquired the horses, he answers only with an enigmatic smile.

    I would like to say off the bat that I apologise to Mike (VP) for this post. Im not sure what plans he had (if any) for the end of The Psi, but I sure as hell know he probably didnt want this to happen XD So for the purpose of this round lets just call this an alternate ending/dimension ^-~
    Oh and while reading, or after or before reading, here is the song I used so you can get a feel of the sound ^-~
    http://youtube.com/watch?v=vHcBfWQ57WE

    ~~Areyn McFallon~~
    ......==...beyond the sea......somewhere....===..aiting for me.......
    ====....==.lover stands on golden sands.....==....watches the ships....that go sailing.....====


    A jazzy oldies tune rang through my head, like a knife slicing through a steak. The static rended my already aching head, the song sounded far away but was at once unshakable. Slowly I worked up the energy to open my burning eyes, wincing with every burst of static, groaning with every brass note. My five senses were on fire, and opening my eyes didnt help in the least.
    My first impression of the room was white. Everything was white, from the almost glowing white walls down to the clothes I was wearing. As I tried to stand up I realised I was strapped to a chair, and having not the energy to try to release my bonds I could do nothing but sit and accept it. But why? A thought floated through my head. Why was I here? Where was here? I gasped as I came to another realisation. Who was I? Holding my head to stop the throbbing I tried vainly to remember something, anything. Where was I from, what was my name? What was my favorite food? It was no use, every thought in that direction hurt my head, I couldnt concentrate on anything. My thoughts scattered as soon as they entered my head, and a burning began to rise within me. Something was wrong, that vague impression alone was all that I knew. This wasnt where I belonged.
    Suddenly movement in the room. One of the white walls in front of me began turning slowly, revealing a large flat TV screen. The world began to spin, but I tried to focus upon the only thing in the room that was no longer white, willing myself to stay consious. But as the screen lit up I wished I would pass out, for it began to display horrible images of blood and death and torture. I felt vomit rise in my throat, there was a woman being raped and murdered, a small boy being abused and cruelly drowned by an unseen attacker, and all the while that maddenly peaceful song was playing, the static slowly ripping my mind to shreds. Why was I seeing this? Who was out there, because part of me knew despite the rape my senses were going through, that there had to be someone around. And then the screen flashed again.
    Confess!
    Through the horrifying images that one word flashed, driving its point home. Confess? What had I done? I tried once more to remember but nothing came, save for the song and the pain in my head. Panic rose within me, but it quickly turned to anger and for a moment my mind was clear. "I d...I didnt do anything!" I yelled, finding my voice which although hoarse, managed to drown out the song and the static. "I didnt do anything wrong! Let me out!"
    Confess!
    I tried to look away but it prevented me somehow, my eyes were drawn to the one thing that was different in the room and without anything else to stare at they would drift over to watch against my will. When I shut my eyes I still saw it, dancing admist the darkness, flashing with more frequency than what was actually on the screen. My head throbbed intensly, and tears came unbidden to my eyes. "No..." I began vainly. But what was the point? No one was there to hear me. And even if they were, how could I convince them I had done nothing wrong if I didnt even know who I was?
    Confess!
    The kaleidascope of colors and images made my mind spin, my thoughts were tumbling around in my head at an alarming rate. I felt a sense of vertigo and I began to throw up on the floor, wishing that it would change the floor to a different color so there would be something, anything else to look at. But I never got to see, for it wasnt long after that I passed out.....

    ....When I awoke the song was still playing, but it was a distant presence, because as I opened my eyes I realised there was someone in the room with me. It was a middle aged man with one eye pure white, just like the room. Feeling my vomit rise up again I avoided looking into that eye, and instead took to glaring into his other one. The strange part was he looked kind, and was walking towards me nonchalantly with a pleasant grin on his face. With my mind already fragmented I didnt know what to make of him. Was he the one doing this to me? I wasnt sure but it seemed unlikely as he was a very disarming person. With a wince I realised he placed his hand on me and was now whispering into my ear.
    "I know you are innocent, I know you've done nothing wrong."
    This sent me into shock. Could this man be telling the truth? Does he actually know me? My mind struggled with posibilities, and I began to think a little clearer. I shouldnt be so quick to trust him... part of me said. "If thats so who am I? And who are you? Why am I here?"
    He chuckled a bit and patted my arm. "There isnt much time to answer all of those questions, theyll be coming to check on you soon. But you may call me Ricardo, and know that Im doing everything possible to help you." With that he tipped his hat and began walking away.
    "W....aiit...." I started to say, when the fuzziness of my mind began to return. I watched the dark shape that was Ricardo melt off into the whiteness of the room but before I could see where the door was he was leaving from, my mind melted into darkness. When I awoke again sometime later the screen was back, flashing that maddening word and those horrible images. What was the point? My aching mind screamed. Why do this, what purpose did it serve? I began to wonder if I really had done something wrong, and if Ricardo was just my mind playing tricks on me, giving me some sort of fleeting hope when there really wasnt one. Maybe I really did do something horrible, maybe I was insane. Maybe....

    Time didnt seem to exist, but I was sure that it must have been a couple of days at least since I woke up in this white room. I became slightly accustomed to the cycle of things, the TV would come on and I would reel with the images and pass out. Upon awaking Ricardo would be there, and he would tell me more about himself and about me, although he would always leave me with questions. And he could never answer why, just smile and tip his hat, while that dead white eye would stare into the white nothingness around me, no matter how much I tried not to look. And then he would disappear as I passed out again, leaving me wondering if he was even there at all. But at least I knew my name now. It was Aeryn. I hung onto that like a life preserver on a stormy ocean.
    But still the images and that red word persisted. And through it all that staticy song played, the only times where it played uninterrupted by static was when Ricardo came to visit, what this meant I didnt know. If it meant anything. I began to wish for it all to end, if I did confess to whatever crime I was accused of, maybe they would kill me and this madness could end. Eternal sleep, darkness, no more white. That started to sound good to me.
    ...===...I know......beyond a doubt===......===========
    Suddenly the song was gone. The static persisted for a few seconds and then it too was gone. I gave a silent cheer, for once in all this time Id been here it was finally quiet. No music, no static, no bloody screams, nothing. The silence was sweet. And then I saw a door open out of the white, and Ricardo stepping through it towards me, with a big pleased grin on his face. As he neared me, instead of placing his hand upon me as he did all the other times, he reached down and unlocked my bonds which had held me to the chair. I couldnt believe it, I was free. Ricardo had come through, he wasnt my imagination after all. I stood up for the first time in what seemed like forever and I threw my arms around him. I loved this man, and as I cried into his gray suit I told him so, I told him he was my savior, he was god. He was an angel who swept me up out of hell with brilliant salt and pepper wings.
    But it soon became apparent it wasnt as easy as that. Taking off his hat and placing it lightly on his chest he pulled me back to look at me, with a kind of pitying but hopeful gaze. "Now my dear Aeryn, you are not completely free yet. Ive done my best to get you out of here, and have almost convinced them of your innocence. But still they dont believe, they must prove you are on their side, so theyve set up a chance for you to prove you are not with the criminals." He bowed with a flourish, before placing his hat neatly upon his head once more. "You must fight and kill a criminal in a one on one battle. If you do it will prove that you are not allied with such scum. I know you can do it Aeryn, innocence is on your side." A mixture of thoughts flowed through my head, vaguely I felt this was wrong but there was the stronger motivation of being able to walk free of this horrible place. And surely killing a criminal wasnt bad, surely it would be a service to the world. And I was innocent, wasnt I? Though I still didnt know what this crime was I was accused of, I knew I had to be innocent. Ricardo believed in me.
    He sat waiting for my answer, smiling as if knowing I would do the right thing. He seemed patient enough but I felt if I waited any longer he would change his mind, and they would lock me up again to watch the horrible video, and listen to that maddening music. So in a panicked, almost desperate voice I choked, "Yes Ill do it. Theyll see, theyll see your right." I grabbed his arm and held it tightly as I spoke, desperate to feel something real, to prove to myself it wasnt my crazy mind at work. He smiled and offered his arm like a gentleman. "Shall we go then m'lady?"

    The room was much like the one I had been in, save for the chair and the TV. Everything had that sanitary white washed look, but high above the vaulted ceilings I could make out small patches of silver. Windows. Whoever was doing this would be watching us. Watching me. Nervousness flowed among the other strained emotions in my head but I steeled myself for what was to come. Theyll let you out... a voice kept running through my head. Free...
    Ricardo excused himself, wishing me luck, and then I was alone in the room. I waited for what seemed like an agonizing forever, and then a door slid away from the walls, revealing a boy about my age. He was as tall as me but very lanky, almost like he wasnt well fed. What crime did he commit? I thought as he eyed me suspiciously. Though he looked almost unapproachable he didnt look like someone who would commit a crime. But neither do you, and yet you could have possibly done something horrible. Looks can be decieving, give him no pity. Hes a criminal... It seemed like a stranger inside my own head, but what could I do? If I didnt win I would most surely die, else go back to the way it was before. The latter was not an option.
    After a tense couple of minutes we eyed each other warily. We knew what had to happen, we knew only one of us would live. No doubt he was promised parole if he won, although something about all this didnt make sense. And then seemingly without human thought, he lunged.
    He took me by surprise, grabbing onto my slender female shoulders and shoving me to the ground. I hit the marble floor with a thud and a grunt, the wind knocked out of me. As I panted to catch my breath he hesitated for a moment, staring down at me as if realising for the first time he was fighting a girl. My survival insticts kicking in I took that moment to lodge my foot straight into his groin, dropping him to the ground. A pained shout belted out of him, and I scrabbled on the hard floor to gain back my footing. Holding my ribs as I got to my feet, I threw my foot forward to land another kick, this time in his kidneys. Somehow I knew the weaknesses of the human body, and I was surefooted enough to make my kicks land true. Kickboxing....? a vague thought drifted through my head. But it was lost in the now, lost to the survival insticts of the fight.
    He cried out again as my foot connected, but as I went for another kick in the same spot he recovered enough to grab my foot and twist. I found myself hurtling towards the ground, my black hair sprawling across the floor as I cracked my skull. A scream echoed the room as I held my head, and it took a few seconds to register that it was me screaming. I kicked randomly in his direction, desperate to shake that skinny but surprisingly strong hand that still gripped my ankle like the hand of death. As I kicked and flailed I managed to sweep my other foot into the backs of his knees, and as he went down I dove on him, punching, kicking, gouging at his face, all the while screaming profanities of the like I have never heard, let alone expected from myself. I scratched and clawed at him, raking him across the face, uncaring for the blood I was drawing, ignoring the fact that I was knowingly injuring another human being. I wanted to survive, but most of all, I wanted to be free. And if this scrawny boy was standing in my way he would have to go.
    If I had been thinking rationally I probably would have been apalled that I was having these thoughts. But there existed nothing else but the fight and the will to survive by any means necissary. I continued to pour all my pent up frustrations and fears unto beating him bloody. I ripped at his shirt, trying illogically to pierce his heart with my hands. To be free he had to die. That was the only truth I knew. My instincts told me to attack something soft, something vunerable. Something that could kill. And so my hands went to his eyes, to drive them deep, to blind him, cause him great pain. He would bleed out, and enough hits to the head would do the job.
    But as I went for his eyes something snapped within him. I felt his body beneath me grow rigid, and his eyes opened wide and stared into me, and suddenly I couldnt take a deep breath save to give a single gasp. Looking down I saw his arm extended, a thick gnarled branch of a tree putruding from his fist. The branch led straight into my heart, and with a sense of surprise I stared at it as it dripped with my blood, staining the white floor. With wide eyes he let go, the leaves on the branch beginning almost immediately to turn brown and shrivel, and I staggered backwards on my knees. I could do nothing but stare with shock at the thing that he created, at the thing that ended this battle. He killed me....but how.....?

    As the synapses of my brain fired, and the drugs that had laced my blood all this time oozed out from the hole in my chest, I began to remember. I remembered who these captors of mine were, I remembered how I got here. There was no great crime we comitted, there was no prison. We werent criminals here, we were the Psi-10s, the only ones who didnt lose their Psi powers when the Psi-less Epidemic hit. The answers to all my questions, all the things that didnt make sense leaped to my mind all at once, information poured though my brain at the speed of light as I seemed to fall to the ground in slow motion.
    They finally caught us, the ones who caused it all...

    We were the only ones who could stop them so we had to be destroyed. They caught us, one by one. They caught us...

    Everything was a test, everything was to make sure they could stop our powers too, just like the others, in case any more of our kind surfaced to threaten them. Thats why the static....
    The song......

    I remembered what the song meant too, it had been my subconsious mind's way to tell me who I was. It was the song my father sang to my mother when they first courted, the sweet tenor voice with the irish accent I had always loved as a child. I was picking it up on a radio signal as I often did, everytime it was staticy they were trying to block my power, every time it was clear....
    I could have used my power to escape....

    But it was too late now, they had us. And though he won he would share my fate, no doubt. Because he was one of the Psi-10 too, Teran, my brother. Teran, whose gentle soul would never let him hurt a fly, this madness they put him through drove him to kill his sister. I wondered, as he watched my dying breaths, if he remembered. If he could remember in time and use his powers to free himself, because it was too late for me. Already I could feel the edges of my vision growing dark, I could feel a burning in the pit of my stomach. It was too late for me, but I prayed it wouldnt take something like this for him to know himself again, because though he was my killer, he was my brother. And I hoped to God that it wouldnt end like this. Whether I was the last or the first to die, it couldnt end like this.
    With my last breath I tried to tell my brother who I was, but my faint voice was drowned out by a charismatic voice I had grown to know well.
    "Well done Teran! I knew you were innocent, I knew it all along, and now they know it too."
    It was too late for us after all.....

    ====....===.....And never again....Ill go sailing.......=================================
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    2. Your character's opponent is someone that they are related to or in love with.
    3. Your character loses the fight.
    5. Your character is killed during the fight.
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    Okay, I've had a TON of college work, and again I don't believe this is my best, but it's at least better than the last submission, thanks to all the delays

    I am using my SSM:
    Name: SuperSonicMewtwo, aka SSM
    Race: A cross of genetic structures between human and Mewtwo.
    Gender: Male
    Age: 19 Pokémon Universe Earth Years
    Appearance: Human, approx. six feet tall. SSM has blackish brown hair that comes down over his green eyes. He is physically fit, but due to use of his powers (which means he doesn't always work his body out), his muscles are averaged sized, not as large as an athlete’s.
    Clothing and Gear: SSM wears a loose fitting navy blue t-shirt with blue jeans and white tennis shoes. His jeans are held up with a black leather belt, which bears 6 empty Pokéballs. He wears glasses with black frames, which while he cannot see perfectly without them, they are not required for him to do simple activities involving eyesight. On top of everything else, SSM wears a black cloak that drapes over his body (think Batman's cape). SSM doesn't carry around food or tools; he relies on himself and the environment to get what he needs.
    Personality: SSM is serious person, not one for making jokes. He is generally impatient with others' slowness, and prepares for worst-case scenarios. He can generally keep his cool, but if he IS angered, he can rush into something unplanned. He looks at Pokémon training as slavery in most cases. SSM prefers to work alone, and does not initially trust others, but someone who does earn SSM's trust has a lifelong ally whom will back them up every step of the way. Also, anyone who gets close to SSM will find he is secretly a romantic at heart, but refuses to let it out.
    History: SSM was originally a Pokémon trainer named Michael Leiver. He thwarted Team Rocket plans throughout his training, but in the midst of Indigo League battles, was captured by the group. In captivity for three years, Michael's genetic make-up was modified to be a cross between human and Mewtwo’s, giving him psychic powers as well as speed exceeding that of any normal human. Michael attempted escape three times, and succeeded on the last time. Upon becoming free, Michael renamed himself SuperSonicMewtwo, to coincide with his new life and powers. He now fights against crime, Team Rocket, and his main antagonist, Chris, to free the world of evil.
    Talents: SSM was trained by Team Rocket, who also gave him his powers. SSM has assorted psychic powers, including telepathy, telekinesis over objects (the strength of this varies indirectly with an object’s mass; the bigger the object, the less SSM can move it, if at all) and flight, as well as all of Mewtwo's attacks (as naturally received when training Mewtwo up and as seen in the movies). SSM can also fly and run at speeds faster than any normal human, but he is still easily outpaced by a man-made vehicle. The psychic power coursing through SSM's body gives him augmented physical abilities beyond those of someone with his build, but he rarely uses this strength for any more than simply punching an opponent. His belt can be used as a last ditch whip-weapon if need be.
    Other: SSM's powers can increase substantially when he is angered, but he may become blinded by his anger, and unable to control his actions.
    RPG Title: Mewtations 1-4, and the revived Mewtations.


    As well as Asilynne's Aeryn McFallon.



    I've had to change Aeryn a bit, nothing drastic, just she's a bit more... let's say, assertive.
    It wasn’t even my fault.

    Really. I blame the media. They mess things up. I do good things back in Kanto. People, however, feel fear for what they don’t understand. It spreads around the population, and soon, despite the crime rate going down, overall safety of the people going up, the media still warps every little event.

    I guess it spreads to other nations as well.

    I was requested to come to the Americas as part of a study on the control of energy and matter. The hours of the study were relatively short, so I had much time on my hands, and preferred to walk through the streets and take in the scenery of the city I was in.

    It was just another day, and I was strolling along with the rest of the pedestrians when someone yelled out to me from a car.

    “Hey, you, you damn freak! Go back to your own country, we don’t want your kind here! All you’ll do is tear this place apart! Get out of here before you destroy out city!”

    I turned toward the car. The driver was giving me the finger. This is why I blame the media… it’s their warped news that made this driver take his eyes off the road and onto me. I was too surprised by the outburst to stop it-the car began to swerve, clipped another car, and then ran into an intersection, colliding with another vehicle heading the opposite direction. The breaks on cars running perpendicular to the collision squealed, but some weren’t strong enough. Metal and glass began to fly from the intersection as more cars piled up. A semi came rolling in, flipped onto its side, and hit a traffic light and electrical pole. Both began to fall down, and it was by this time that I took in what was going on and acted.

    I teleported into the intersection, and generated a shield above the cars. The two poles fell down upon my shield. The traffic light’s pole was metal, and thus bent and fell off to the side, harmless. The electrical pole, however, was wood, and shattered, sending the power-lines flying outward. I jumped back out of harms way, and examined the damage. It was far worse than one would imagine, there was twisted metal lying about everywhere, people were crying, moaning… I knew that things couldn’t be left this way. I reached out and grabbed the bumper of a car, and began to pull it out from the rubble.

    “Freeze!”

    “Let go of the car, and turn around!”

    “Hands in the air!” I turned my head to see a number of cops, each pointing their gun at me.

    “Don’t cause any more trouble, just put your hands in the air!” I turned fully toward the police, and glared.
    ‘You think I did this?’ I asked, gesturing toward the debris. ‘You must be mistaken. I didn’t cause this.’

    “We’ll tell you one last time, hands in the air!” I sighed. I wasn’t going to deal with this. I raised my right hand in the air, and used telekinesis to pull the guns out of the cops’ hands and toward me. I let my hand fall limp, and the guns fell to the ground.

    ‘I am going to walk away now. If you follow me, then you will be dealt with appropriately.’ I turned around and began walking my way out of rubble when I sensed an intense electromagnetic force. On instinct alone I created a barrier, and felt surprised and astonished when a very powerful Thunderbolt collided with me. Not that it did any damage, but I was pushed back a few feet. I turned toward the source, and saw a girl, a few inches shorter than myself, glaring at me.

    “I won’t let you get away with this! I’ve heard about you, SuperSonicMewtwo, and what you’ve done! Destroying roads, buildings, hurting people, and now you want to bring that destruction here?! No. I won’t let you!” I arched an eyebrow toward the girl.

    “Who is she? I thought to myself. I found myself taken aback when the girl stomped over to the electric wires I had dodged before, and took hold of them.

    “You may be a destroyer of things, SuperSonicMewtwo, but I am Aeryn McFallon, and I save things, and help people. And now, I will help this world be rid of you!” I again felt a growing electromagnetic force, only now I knew what it was. Or well, who it was… This girl, Aeryn, could absorb electricity as well as launch it at an opponent. And here she had a fresh supply to juice her up. Greeeeeeat.

    ‘You want to stop me from destruction, yet you’re ready to destroy in your own city? That sounds pretty hypocritical.’

    “We’re not going to fight here. We’ll fight where no more people will be harmed!” For the third time in less than 10 minutes, I was surprised, when Aeryn launched herself at me at a speed faster than I could imagine, and delivered a punch of which I can’t say I’ve felt very often. All I saw was rush of black hair, I felt a powerful discharge of electricity into my check, and suddenly everything around me was flying. Just as quickly, it all stopped; I felt something holding me by the collar of my shirt. I looked up to see Aeryn holding me in the air. I looked around… We were in a grassy region, with trees and some rolling hills. The city was far off in the distance.

    “Now, leave this place!” My head was level with Aeryn’s waistline, and I saw her shirt rise up a bit to reveal her navel… she was raising her arm into the air. Again, I could sense intense electricity.

    ‘What you need to understand is that I haven’t caused any of the destruction you’ve heard about, not intentionally. I fight to rid this world of evil, but often, evil has power that it uses against people. It exploits a saviors’ weakness, hurting others, and then the saviors gets the blame.’

    “Oh, so you’re a savior now? I have a hard time believing that. You just hurt people.”

    ‘Like you’re planning to do to me?’

    “It’s not the same! Shut up! No more. This ends it.” Aeryn easily lifted me high into the air, to where I was level with her. I could now easily see her hand. It was flashing through the electromagnetic spectrum… different colors, x-ray, gamma… Just how much energy did this girl have inside her?

    “Now, die!” I had little time to think, for that hand curled into a fist and rammed toward my face. I was prepared, however, and this time teleported out of Aeryn’s path, and back a few yards.

    ‘You are not the only one who can control energy, Aeryn. You see, I am a psychic, and thus, given ample preparation, I can take control of any energy. Like that wave of power you threw at me a few minutes ago?’ I raised my arm into the air, and pushed forth my own psychic energy. I created my own Thunderbolt, and made sure to raise it above the intensity of the attack Aeryn had just attempted to use on me. ‘I can do that too. You see, I’m actually here to help scientists learn more about these energies and-’

    “Just shut up. I don’t care. So what, if you release power like I can. That doesn’t mean you can absorb it!” Aeryn pointed a finger at me, and I watched as the building power from my Thunderbolt began to arc over to her hand. I watched, in awe. This was not like my Recover attack, this was not a donation of another life form’s energy, but a hostile theft!

    Aeryn took a step closer to me. “You’re already within my grasp. Now that I’ve gotten a hold of you, there’s no turning back. I can’t say I’ve done this before; ordinary people don’t have a power like you. But because you have this energy you keep droning on about, similar to mine, it seems I can just take it away. And there’s nothing you can do about it.” By now, my electric attack had faded, and the arcing power was coming directly from my arm. I tried to stand firm in my place, but there was no hiding it, that Aeryn was draining my power. She walked closer to me, and took my hands in hers. She looked me in the eyes.

    “You’ve brought out the worst in me, you know that? People know me for being uplifting, and happy. And here, you’ve made me angry. So I guess I can do one last thing that’s really different, before I take your life.”

    I… I was supposed to be scared. But I didn’t have the energy to. My knees began to buckle, and I leaned into Aeryn just to stand up. I couldn’t control my muscles much more, and I found all I could do was stare into Aeryn’s eyes as I grew weaker and weaker.

    “How about I call this… The kiss of death?” Aeryn leaned forward, and pulled me toward her. With my last bit of energy, I thought about what I’d been through.

    This couldn’t be my end!

    I felt her lips touch mine…

    And in a quick zap of electricity, I was thrown back one way, and Aeryn the other. I felt all of the energy back in me, and I coughed and hyperventilated as I got up off the ground. Aeryn seemed to be in the same situation, only she tripped trying to get up. We were both surprised. She looked at me, and her eyes welled with tears.

    “I saw it… I saw it all. They say your life flashes before your eyes before you die? I saw that flash… I’m sorry…”

    So that was it.

    That kiss transferred my thoughts, as well as my last bit of energy. And somehow in the confusion of things, she shot forth energy back into me. I tried to regain my composure, and dusted myself off.

    ‘Well… er… now do you understand? I am not as bad as they make me out to be.’ I shrugged. Aeryn blushed a bit.

    “You’re personality is astounding. You go through pain, you get so close to death, and you literally shrug it off. And you’ve been doing that you’re whole life? I am so sorry. Here… I don’t really know what I can do for you right now… Let’s just walk back to the city, and figure this out there?”

    ‘Er… yes. Of course.’ What else could I do? I was coming to both the realization of how close to death I had come, and also, the possibility that this girl might have just seen everything in my life. Somehow. I wasn’t sure that made much sense, or how it could be… but it seemed to be the case, and it was a bit uncomfortable. A walk to think things over… that have been just the thing I needed.

    ‘So… exactly what did you just see?

    “Well… everything. I can’t explain it. But… It was like watching a movie of someone’s life. Needless to say, I’m a bit impressed. You’re quite the romantic!”

    ‘What?!... When was that from?' Now I blushed some.

    “I’m not telling!” Aeryn replied in a sing-song voice. I heaved a sigh. I’d much rather deal with a physical battle than try to figure a woman out now. But something in me said I should just be quiet and enjoy the walk.

    I complied.


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    I would just like to say that I have really enjoyed reading everyone's posts thus far. You are all really good players. To me, it's interesting how certain prompts enhance the strengths and weaknesses of each of you as writers. Keep up the nice work, everyone.

    And let's hope for some scores soon! ^^;

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    Amen sister! Amen to it all, especially the last part XD
    I check this every day waiting for scores >.<




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    I appologize to everyone about these scores not being up. Plantae and I have both been incredibly busy. Especially last week where I had a project that I needed to do. Tonight I am free so I expect they will be done then.

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    *poke* Plantae is done with his scores, lets see some scores

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    [color=silver]I agree, we're always waiting for you, Royboy. Get your arse in gear boyo. Doing one entry scores per night or somet wouldn't take up half an hour of your time. Jees, I'm at uni now and I could have got them done quicker >_<

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    Sorry about that, I havnt really seen Plantae on these last few days, either way he will have them tonight and we will be preparing for the next round. I just have to drive home tonight, but that will give me plenty of time to think and decide!

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    [color=silver]So far that's two in-thread promises of having them 'tonight', none have appeared, and then there's the many promises of more 'having them done tonight' in conversations. I am thoroughly sick of this. Get on with it, Roy. Seriously. We all know that Plantae'd finished his ages ago, and for some bizzare reason his post saying so was deleted.

    The last time you said they'd be done was the 8th, it's now the 12th. At this rate, we're waiting like, a month before we can even start thinking about the next round and as I've already said, I (and everyone else), am heartily sick of this delay.


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    Plantae lost his scores, they were deleted when his computer crashed and I wasn't able to contact him till two days ago about him. He has now asked me to send my scores today so that he can average them. So don't think it is just me Wease XP

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    Scores for Round 4 are now up! As close as the last: Round 5 will be up soon.

    SCORES
    In first this round is – Weasel Overlord
    Creativity – 13.5/15
    Requirements – 12.75/15
    Linguistics – 13.5/15
    Entertainment Level – 3.5/5
    Total – 43.25/50

    In second this round is – Sheila Rae
    Creativity - 13/15
    Requirements – 12.5/15
    Linguistics - 14/15
    Entertainment Level – 3.25/5
    Total – 42.75/50

    In third this round is – Vulpix.ck
    Vulpix.ck
    Creativity – 12.5/15
    Requirements – 12.5/15
    Linguistics - 14/15
    Entertainment Level - 3/5
    Total - 42/50

    4. Asilynne
    Creativity – 12.5/15
    Requirements – 11.5/15
    Linguistics – 12.5/15
    Entertainment Level – 3/5
    Total – 39.5/50

    5. SuperSonicMewtwo
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    Creativity – 12/15
    Requirements – 11.5/15
    Linguistics – 12/15
    Entertainment Level – 3/5
    Total – 38.5/50

    COMPOSITE SCORES (Out of 190)
    1st place - Vulpix.ck - 165.25 pts.
    2nd place - Weasel Overlord - 162.5 pts.
    3rd place - Sheila Rae – 155.75 pts.
    4th - Asilynne – 146.75 pts.
    5th - SuperSonicMewtwo – 143.75 pts.


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    Is it too late to request comments? It's okay if you guys are too busy.

    always think...

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    Default Re: The RPG Tournament of 2006 Commences

    I wont be able to do comments tonight since I have a test to study for, but I can and will do some this weekend for you.

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    Default Re: The RPG Tournament of 2006 Commences

    I want some too when you can, also for all the rest of therounds so Im not asking a million times lol




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