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30th June 2007, 12:59 AM
#1
Im your sheild and sword

Junior Trainer
Re: Urban Chaos (Pokemon ASB fanfiction)
srry about all the trouble, but really guys if u veiw plz post your thots.
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Chapter 2
Free Ride
Croagunk and Noah looked circled the truck trying to find a way in. Croagunk gave a quite but clear croak. As Noah went around to the right of the truck where Croagunk was patting the passenger side door with his webbed hands. The rusty red door was sligtly cracked open.
Noah bent down to look in the dusty side mirror attached just infront for the window. Noah never did worry about apearences but it wasnt his face he was looking at, It was his right hand. The scar didnt look anymore healed then it did 1 hour ago. Croagunk began to glare at Noah, a sign that he had to focus.
Noah blushed a bit as he quickly took his hand and his face away from the mirror. Then refocused he wispered to Crogunk still emotionlessly awaiting instructions from his huiman partner. "Use poison jab to squeze your hand thru the opening and force the door open." Croagunks hand glowed purple and forced itself thru the opening. He then used his strength to open the door. "Yes!" Noah wispered.
Noah then assesed what had happen so far. Noah did have the tendency to think stratigily when a reward was on the line. They had spent to much time trying to get in, the driver would be coming back in a few minutes. Noah and croagunk got in the truck. The passenger seat had stains on it and hamburger rappers, and cups where littered across the floor.
Noah surveyed the area for a way to get in the back. He saw a steel door. Connecting the drivers area to the storage area in the back . He opened it and him and Crogund jumped into the snack filled heaven.The back was about the size of a car with rusted steel with one giant grey tarp over the floor, a couple tarp covered objects, and the snack machines that Noah craved. Noah couldnt believe that he had made it this far. Noah's mouth drewled at the sight, even Croagunk leeked purple poison from his mouth. Right as Noah went over to a machine containing fried chicken, to find a way to get the chicken from the machine to his mouth the truck rumbled.
Enginges roared to life. Noah new the truck must be starting, and he was not going to leve the blessing that had been bestowed upon him. Then he becan to sweat intensly and his pulse beated up. The metal door conecting the back of the truck to the front, he hadnt closed it. He didnt belive in god, but he prayed to somone that the driver wouldnt notice. He and croagunk crouched behind a tarp covered object. The truck becan to move. After about 10 minutes he poked his head out from behind the tarp. The door was closed. Noah and Croagunk let out deep sighs of releif. Noah wondered, was it possible for croagunk to of understood what was going on?
Noah cralled over to the fried chicken maching he had had his eyes on since he first peered insided the truck. He found a place that croagunk could use brick break on and get the food out. "Crogunk i ne-".
The truck took a sharp turn and the machine tipped over, the shadow of it grew larger and larger over Noah, Noah couldnt react, he was to stuned, sudenly croagunk jumped sprang and tackled Noah out of the way. Noah and Croagunk flew threw the air. Noah didnt know why but he wispered "Thank you, Friend" It seemed like they where in the air forever, finaly they hit somthing, somthing hard. Noah's felt as if somone had punched him in his head, he was not having trouble breathing though, and he could still feel his legs and arms, but he felt tired. Noah's vision lasted long enogh so that he could see Croagunk who apeared to be sleeping on the floor with blood coming out of his mouth. The blood was bubbling though, that was good, it meant Croagunk was breathing. Then Noah's vision faded from blurry, to black.
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Thank you to the following people for suporting me, giving me feedback, or helping me learn the rules: mr_pikachu , Charles Legend.
Keep the feedback coming
I will be adding more main charecters soon and if u would like me to make you a main charecter just reply saying what you think of my fanfic, and what kind of charecter you would like to be
Last edited by Unsolved Puzzle; 30th June 2007 at 01:36 AM.
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30th June 2007, 02:02 AM
#2
Im your sheild and sword

Junior Trainer
Re: Urban Chaos (Pokemon ASB fanfiction)
hi guys, chapter 3, after i get enogh replys i will make a release schedule
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Chapter 3
My Stop
Noah groned. He felt his head bump the floor of...what was it he was in agin? Noah opened his eyes, he remembered. Croagunk! Was he ok? The raggady looking boy scurryed to his feat. Looked around and sure enogh there was his webbed foot friend laying aginst a the same wall but farther down. Crogunk had purplish-red blood around his mouth. Noah shook Croagunk. Noah relaxed once he was awnsered with a rough croak.
Noah manuvered his way to the back of the truck around machines, and objects. He looked out the same small glass window he had looked thru the first time he saw the glorious inside of the truck, filled with food.
He was in some sort of town.
He then ganced at Croakunk once more. Croagunk wouldnt be such a good situation if his injuries wor't treated. He considered waited the rest of the ride, but then he would have to sneak out of the truck carrying his injured poket monster.
He looked out the window agin, they where at a stop light. He also noticed a big red building with a pokeball symboll at the top. He had seen a structure similar to that one before, somewhere? What where they called? Oh yes Pokemon Centers, they treated injured pokemon.
An idea formed in Noah's head. He rushed over to croagunk and shook him. "Croagunk wake up. I need you to do one more thing for me" Croagunk responded by weakly standing up. He used his hand to wipe the blood from his mouth. Noah told his shaking friend "Croagunk i need you to break open the back door to the truck with you brick break."
Croagunk collected the last of his strength to deliver a powerfull punch to the back door. It dented it but no break. Croagunk droped to the floor. They where running out of time. Noah looked at the machine that had nearly crushed him. He wanted to get out of the truck, and he wanted revenge.
He pushed the machine so that is was across from them back door, and rammed it with all his strength. It moved in to the door, and satisfiingly enough, the door gave way with a high pitched screetch and a loud bang. Noah quickly grabed Croagunk and jumped out of the truck over the machine and into the streets. The city wasnt anything like Kerning, it was clean, the air smelled nice, there where many large buildings and many people drove in cars along the paved streets or walked on the side walks. As he ran across the intersection cars honked, and people cursed at him. His first reaction was "Croagunk u-". He looked down at his unconsious friend. Just as the the light changed to green. A boy that looked like he had been wearing the same clothes forever and been in fights every day of his life carrying a Croagunk ran towords the Pokemon Center.
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Thank you to the following people for suporting me, giving me feedback, or helping me learn the rules: mr_pikachu , Charles Legend, Magmar, Chris2.0
Keep the feedback coming
I will be adding more main charecters soon and if u would like me to make you a main charecter just reply saying what you think of my fanfic, and what kind of charecter you would like to be
Last edited by Unsolved Puzzle; 1st July 2007 at 02:22 AM.
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