OK, so Ada beat me to it then. ^^

Another two very good chapters, dude. I thought the emotion in chapter 3 was quite well done - and even though Jane was being pretty melodramatic, it didn't feel like it was out of place. Sometimes melodrama does happen, after all. I thought it was good to see that side of Dave's life, and his frustration at Jean (and Jane, for that matter), and his drinking, contrasted with his public appearance of being a very smooth talker. It makes him a more realistic character.

I enjoyed reading chapter 4, too, though it was slightly unclear to me why they were sitting in darkness - I'm sure it's probably because I'm tired. Anyway, I like the way the political/religious side of this fic is developing - I thought it was pretty clever how you manipulated the Bible to fit into the context of a pokémon world. And the now that Isaac's mob are intent on taking out Dave, that seems to be setting the plot in motion. Exciting stuff.

Oh, and I feel really sorry for Gabriel. I also get the feeling that Katherine is going to end up being fairly sarcastic as we see more of her character.

There were a couple of spelling mistakes or typos I think (somewhere there was a 'the' that I'm sure was meant to be a 'that', but I can't find it now) - but honestly, if that's the main criticism I have of these last two chapters, you can be pretty proud of your fic at this stage. I'm enjoying reading this a lot, and I'll be waiting to see what happens next chapter!

Cheers!