thx Chris, its nice to get feed back from and exped fanficer like yourself.
anyways, i willl try to follow ur advice, i just felt that i needed a chapter for developing relashonships
also dont forget that just because Noah is trying to make it into the Pokemon Leauge dosnt meen he will make it. Im planning on making the plot take a veary sharp turn. Yes i smell plot twist, stay tuned to find out.
Also i am going to do my best to orginize a ASB give-a-way within my fan fic, where ppl would send in art of what they think the charecters look like, or Awnser a quiz or somthing like that. The prizes would be points or eggs.
