Originally posted by Little_Pikachu
Yay, I'm in! Thanks! ^_^

I'm no decent fic critic, but your writing seems to be improving with every chapter, keep it up and by the end of this thing we're gonna have somehting special! And make sure Suzie keeps kicking ***
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This is the first time I've ever seen LP post in Fanfic. Uuuuuuhhhh... yeah keep it up. Your fic is improving, but your going to run out of colors soon. I recommend normal colors so that it's easy to read.