Wow, nice!

The way you make these different characters "work" together, it's great! So now at least, they don't have to float anymore...

I don't know if it's too much to ask for you to reread your writing once before posting? It's just that sometimes, something is written a bit odd, like where they're running back to the cockpit and Myra says something before turning around, I think you could have included double quotes or something.