I was amused by the fact that Milo seemed to actually think he could beat someone to a destination when said someone was teleporting there but he wasn't. X3

And while I personally do not enjoy being ignored and talked over in a conversation the way that Mia and Meredith were just completely shutting Milo out, I still couldn't help but find it funny, especially since they were shutting him out in favor of talking about frelling dresses. XD

Oh, and I really enjoyed the interactions between Milo and Mia. XD Entertaining stuff, there. ^^

Highlights

“Get off your arse, Chuck.”
That line made me laugh. XD

“I don’t know,” came the reply again. Milo wondered if Chuck might know more if he didn’t spend his time sitting on a rock.
Heh, quite possibly so, I reckon. X3

Medicham casually flicked her finger, banishing the shirt to the wash room upstairs .
Dammit, now I want a Medicham around the house to keep things tidy. X3

“Now Mia honey, I’ve just got a message from Julia, my friend from Goldenrod. Did I tell you about my friend from Goldenrod?”

“Wait, what did Dad say?” Milo asked.

“No, I don’t know who Julia is,” Mia replied.

“Well she says she is hosting a ball at the Goldenrod Casino on the 17th…if you want, we can get tickets for it. I could take you shopping for a new dress?”

“Sounds good to me!” Mia grinned, beaming with excitement.

“Hang on, Mum, listen to me,” Milo interrupted. “I need help with Chuck. What does Dad know about it?”

“I like the sort of patterned ones they have in Goldenrod,” Mia noted. “Remember when we went at Christmas? But also the block colours are still in…”

“I have a gorgeous one from a boutique in Blackthorn,” Meredith said. “The fashion in Blackthorn is a cut above some of the other stuff here. Milo, are you ok?”

“Yes,” I want to know what’s going on with this Gym Leader overhaul thing,” he said angrily. “Chuck mentored me for years - he’s a good friend! And if Dad can help me out…”

“Milo nobody cares about some scabby guy in some crappy Gym! Me and Mom are talking dresses, so if you’re not coming with us, buzz off,” said Mia. Milo took a look at his sister and narrowed his eyes, walking away from the pool and back through the house, furious at the lack of attention.
Again, I thought that part was funny. XD

Milo sat in the living room as Medicham did some basic routine yoga, despite Milo’s suspicion she was using telekinesis to cheat somewhat.
XD Tsk, tsk, Medicham. X3

Medicham leapt up into the air and avoided Ninetales, landing in the centre of the temporary arena. Ninetales turned and unleashed a series of shimmering, golden stars; they tore through the air and span wildly, but Medicham held a hand out and the stars began to slow down. They travelled with less speed, spinning slower and slower, until they were frozen in mid-air, hanging like decorations between the elegant fox and the astute psychic Pokemon.
Nice visuals there. ^^

Milo’s command was empty and lifeless, because the technique was used so often. Medicham used her PSI to move the stars, encasing them around her fist like a glove. She leapt forward and punched Ninetales in the face, causing the stars to shatter and the foe to stagger back across the arena.
Cool move. ^^

Medicham used her psychic prowess to boost herself up into the air - rather like a powered jump. Soaring up after the shadow ball she created delicate crystals of ice around her palm, gently moving towards the shadow ball and decreasing the temperature around her. Due to the lack of aggression in the punch, the shadow ball was not destroyed. Instead, the coldness surrounding it caused the weak membrane to glaze over with a shimmering frost; sparkles from within made the attack look like a grim Christmas decoration.
And there's some more great visuals. ^^



That was a nice start to something I think I'm really going to enjoy reading throughout its course. Congrats on the launching of a new fic, and I look forward to the next chapter! ^^