Cool chapter. Too tired to write a long reply right now, but I really liked the plottwists. I figured out that his dad was going to play an important role, but it's cool that something finally appeared in the fic. I wonder what's going to happen next.

How much people are involved with this. Apparantly Whitney didn't want to join this 'scheme'; Jasmine did and I wonder who else is in on this.

Can't wait to see her new boyfriend.

Poor Suzie.

I'm interested in Scyther and his traits. Can't wait for some training session and battle/contest.

Speculating about Milo's future team members. Jake should catch some more aswell. Wait, Paras was cool too.

More chapters!