Karin: Hmm the mysterious Mr Mitchelson. I wonder where he is, though; Goldenrod? I think Michael Mitchelson is a very interesting character. Jasmine's mission is a bit vague, but it did seem as if she took a Pokemon from the guy she killed. But I wonder why he was firing a gun.

I am quite fond of Gina. As with Milo initially, I haven't really shown enough of her for people to endear themselves to or really be that interested in her. But she's a great character. Lots of backstory, and her losing Seel will show a new side to her definitely.

Milo = definitely homophobic. Look back in Ch2 at his pointless uncomfortableness around Jake. It's sheer ignorance in that Milo hasn't really met any gay people before so he is just adjusting and learning I suppose. Next chapter, Milo's ignorance goes a bit too far. He comes back from everything in a better state of mind though. Thanks again for reading!


Sike: How handy would a) Telekinesis and b) Refresh be in real life? I'm not saying I pee on myself XD I'm just saying it would definitely be useful. I'm glad to see the return of TPML's infamous HSM! Just what is going on with Jasmine? What did she do, and why does she work for Milo's Dad?


MLG: More light is being shed on Milo's Dad. Its about time we met him. There's more to learn about the group Jasmine is in, too, and targetting Whitney for recruitment was quite important. There's a definite sense of unease in Goldenrod City. I don't think anyone knows who to trust.

Scyther's cool. Kinda timid. Jake and Milo's teams both undergo major changes soon.



The next chapter is not going to be up for a while since I am only really breaking into Chapter 12 - and as you lovely people know, I like to put a chapter up when I have a chapter 'in reserve'.

Feel free to any questions, discuss any of the fic that you are intrigued about, or anything like that! I'd be very keen to learn what Pokemon you think the cast might get.