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    Default Re: Show-Off - Chapter 11 posted!

    Karen: Looks like we have our 7 letters. Whitney claimed it was her fault...but how did Morty know about it? It's safe to say William's death messed Milo up but I think a lot of it is Milo's own fault really. I wonder, indeed, what Will would think of Milo now. I wonder what he's like....?

    If Milo were to get said ass whooping, I bet he'd learn a whole lot from it. Form a queue, people! Interesting about Jake. He is very loyal to Milo. But what if Milo's money were taken away? Would Jake still be there?

    Personally I always approached Milo's character like he does care. He just has no concept of how to show it. I think he holds great affection for Jake, but is clueless how he goes about being nice.


    Sike: Poor Pichu ;_; I wonder if Jake can get him back? It seems bleak, but you never know.

    Milo's ignorance really shone through in his confrontation with Whitney and Mary. Milo's finally met a girl he can't charm, and you can see how much it wound him up.

    Thanks for reading; Ch12 is up soon.
    Last edited by Chris 2.1; 2nd August 2009 at 03:47 AM.

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