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    Default Re: KINGDOM HEARTLESS [M] V .:. August 01

    Puppy, can you do me a favour?

    Would you please stop trying to kill Mr Sexy Pants?! D: kthx <3

    It is interesting that Ryou and Ai share the same doctor... I'm very interested to know what exactly her illness is too... Oh wait... My mind just clicked, clogs whirled... I won't say what I think, I don't want to ruin it for everyone else XD

    I love the way that Ryou's opening up to Karen, but in a completely sarcasm filled way XD And I really like Karen too, she's just so sweet and innocent... The bear was a nice touch too, dunno why... I was sad that she had to ditch it >_>

    This part is my fave quote so far:

    To which, the man smirked darkly.

    “Don’t stick your tongue out unless you’re willing to share it.”
    Also, can't wait for some more science 8D

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    Default Re: KINGDOM HEARTLESS [M] V .:. August 01

    I’M BACK!

    Yes after my rather nice vacation away from the real world, I’m back and refreshed enough to keep going. I still need to catch up in RPG but I had VI planned since made week of the getaway, so I wrote it to get it out of way.

    VirtualPlay: I’m glad you enjoyed that I tied it in, I thought it was necessary to put in more similarities between the Fic and the RPG. There are however, notably differences between the two as well, which I like, gives either of them their own feel.

    What do you mean overprotective? ^^; sorry, maybe I’m just slow today but I don’t quite get what your referring to.

    X3 I worked in the green orbs, I’m so proud of myself.

    * * *

    Asilynne:

    IV

    I was worried my news report was badly written, I kept trying to remember how the news sounded without actually watching any (it’s so depressing I stopped watching it regularly).

    V

    Was it intense? I have a critical mind to my own writing so I always read my scenes as corny, cheesy, badly written, etc.

    She might :3, I reveal nothing.

    The scientist may not be who you’re expecting… Tehehe.

    Well I’m glad you both enjoy it, and I’m happy it comes off as an A/U fic, because that’s… Exactly what it is I guess.

    * * *

    ChobiChibi:

    But it’s a fun pastime, trying to kill him ♥

    Actually I meant ‘You’ as a general term, Dr. Kariya wasn’t Ai’s doctor. Sorry for the confusion!

    Aww, but now I want to know what you think >_>;

    Oh God more science? Do I have too? Really? That means I have to check my facts again, and I really do hate doing that. I’ll try to work in little tid bits of science here and there for you.

    * * *

    And without further ado, ladies and gentlemen, the chapter marking my return from vacation!



    VI
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    “That was a complete and utter disaster Nagano-san!” The bitter words of Kaito didn’t even seem to faze Masato, who was carrying his suit jacket on one of his arms. “Masato don’t you even care?”

    He laughed a little and looked at his partner. “Hayata-san did you really expect Shachou-sama to accept the proposal?”

    Kaito frowned and looked towards the ground sadly. “It would’ve been nice...”

    Masato patted the man roughly on the shoulder, and watched him straighten up a bit. Hayata-san was so easily put down now a days, it was a sad thing to see. Both of them worked for a company called ‘The Organization’, a name that neither of them particularly liked, a few of their co-workers had happily pointed out that such a title made it sound as if they all worked for an evil group of some sort.

    Masato never really thought much of it, all companies were evil in some way; he had watched a program on television one night that had successfully proven that corporations fit the psychological profile of a psychopath. He kept himself disconnected from that idea, if he thought more on it he might feel guilty for working for a group that most certainly fits that description.

    “It didn’t go as badly as you think,” Masato comforted, shrugging lightly and looking up at the overcast sky. “Shachou-sama gave you a compliment; you just need to sort your ideas out better.”

    “He loved your idea!” Kaito spat, looking distinctly irritated by that notion. “Sea salt ice cream! How in the world was that better than my suggestion?”

    He chuckled, and loosened his tie a little as they rounded the corner. The streets weren’t as crowded as normal, but the bad weather last night and the clouds today had practically guaranteed a slow time for shops.

    “For one Hayata-san, my idea was possible.”

    Kaito ran his hand through his highlighted hair and let out a sigh. “Right… Mine wasn’t completely out there.”

    “True, but a security robot wouldn’t be well accepted anyways. People would lose jobs and the robotics team said the systems weren’t perfected yet.” Masato smiled kindly, nudging his associate in a childish manner. “Once it’s perfected, try again.”

    “A glitch never killed anyone.”

    “True, but security robots have guns; I think we can all see the problem if a glitch does happen.”

    “Right…” Kaito stopped at the next crossing, partly ignoring the last point. “This is where we part.”

    “Tomorrow will be better.” Masato reassured his friend, who was already walking away.

    “If you say so...”

    He stood there for another moment, watching as the small swarm of people swallowed up Hayata-san and made him vanish from view.

    Masato frowned.

    “Man needs to loosen up…”


    * * *


    The shopping district of Traverse was filled with neon signs, moving billboards, and the occasional teenager handing out flyers for some event or another. It reminded Masato of the images he saw of Las Vegas at times, especially at night, when the shady sort of shops began to open. It was nowhere near late though, only the afternoon, which he had happily gotten off.

    Always good when the boss has those emergency meetings with the higher-ups, us lowly workers get the day off...’ He thought with a smile, eyeing some of the shops with curiosity before he stopped.

    It was an art shop, newly opened as well, a couple of people were inside, but what caught his attention was one of the window displays.
    The man neared the glass and tilted his head at the simplistic print, it had a black background, and as the sunlight caught on the nearly invisible dark blue ink, you could see a shape in the darkness. A part of him twisted inside at the sight of the picture, especially as he coldly noted the yellow eyes.

    “… Interesting print…” He thought out loud, opening the door. “I think I might go talk the shop clerk.”


    The inside of the shop was fairly clean and simple, pictures mounted on the walls and some displayed in the middle of the room on easels. Masato didn’t mind art, he wasn’t a critic or a big collector, but his apartment had some on display and he was always looking out for more.

    But the print in the window was different; it was a frigid reminder of certain nightmares.

    “May I help you?” The clerk was an old man, well-on into the later years of his life; he looked sort of miserable and very judgmental. His words had a hard edge to them, which caught Masato off guard. But he could deal with them accordingly, his superiors spoke with such a manner all the time so he was used to a harsh attitude.

    “Oh thank you,” He smiled one of trade-mark smiles, but the man did not let that break his grumpy composure. “I was wondering, who made the print in the window?”

    Oh.” The old man sounded displeased. “You like that sort of abstract nonsense?”

    “I find it interesting is all.” Masato chose his words carefully.

    “Eh…” The worker turned from him and wandered to the back door, opening it slowly. “Mika, get in here.”

    “The artist works here?” He questioned as the elder turned back to him.

    “Yes, she does.” He frowned at Masato. “Good at organizing, horrible artist if you ask me.”

    “I don’t believe he asked your opinion of my work Ozu-san.” The woman who spoke smiled politely at the two, and shut the door behind her. “May I help you sir?”

    Masato smiled in return, noting how she looked very cute in that red blouse. As they moved away from the miserable shop-owner he began again. “You made the print in the display?”

    She nodded.

    “What inspire it, if I may know?”

    Mika paused, and deep inside the man, he could feel a sort of fear and nervousness. Mika’s expression was one of disconnectedness, like she didn’t want to admit that the art was even hers. Masato was patient and kept quiet, keeping his friendly composure up.

    Finally the girl shrugged. “Reoccurring nightmare.”

    “Really?” He looked at back at the display in the window, his mind able to see those eyes despite it facing outwards to the street. “That’s rather odd.”

    “What do you mean?”

    Masato gazed into the woman’s hazel eyes; in the back of his mind took notice of the red tinge that lingered in them.

    “I have the same nightmare.”

    The silence between them was thick with curiosity and suspicion. Masato didn’t blame her, from what he could tell, Ozu-san thought she wasn’t much of an artist, and if he knew the reasons that inspired her, probably called her mad at points. He could just be an actor paid by the old man to get her hopes up and then kill them.

    But he wasn’t that type of person, and he was genuinely interested in her art.

    “Do you have any more pieces Miss…?”

    “Yanagisawa… And yes I do.”

    He nodded with a small smile. “Would you mind if I took a look Yanagisawa-san?”

    Mika’s eyes narrowed a tad. “.. I suppose not.”


    Her workshop was at the very back, and was nearly exploding with works. Whether finished or unfinished, they were absolutely everywhere. Every inch of every wall was covered, and battered easels held other pieces that couldn’t fit anywhere else. It seems she was an artist of many talents, not just printing, but painting in what could only be water colour, and the occasional acrylic showcase.

    Almost all them featured the same thing as the print in the window. Yellow eyes, dark colours on black… The only difference was what they were doing at the time. Some were melding out of floors, others walking through walls; the occasional thing looked as if it were attacking the viewer.

    A few others were very different; a cell phone lying on what looks like a forest floor, a park bench, a closet door… The half-completed one in the left corner featured a car seemingly running over the creatures that appeared so frequently in the other artworks. On the furthest display from him was a picture that made Masato stop in his tracks.

    It was of a door, an old worn-out door that looked like it belonged to a medieval tavern, much like the one in his apartment that had appeared out of the blue. This door however, did not bare the same symbol that his did; it had a spiral crudely carved into its surface while the one in his shower had a crown.

    Masato bit his lip. “Yanagisawa-san, where did you see that door?”

    Her eyes drifted over to the canvas. “… In one of my dreams.”

    “Have you… Ever dreamt of other doors?” He questioned, nearing the piece.

    “No.”

    The man swiveled around and faced her. “What happened in this dream of yours?”


    * * *


    The teddy bear sat in the corner of the room, its dark eyes staring at Ryou emptily as he looked up from the playstation he was putting back together. He found himself frowning at the plushie, and how it seemed to have a sad look on its face.

    “What?”

    It didn’t answer right away, and to be honest it surprised him when it did. Teddy bears weren’t supposed to talk.

    “She forgot me.”

    Ryou rolled his eyes and gently placed the top of the game system back on. “How sad…”

    “I’m not important to you?”

    He blinked, and looked up with a confused expression. “You’re a stuffed toy.”

    “I made her smile.”

    The man frowned and went back to fixing. “That’s nice.”

    “You made her smile.”

    He stopped as his and her voice fluttered into his head.


    “It looks like it wants to eat me…”

    “No!”

    “Or you. Though I suppose better you than me.”

    It won’t eat me!”

    “Just wait, when you’re not looking, it’s gonna pounce.”


    Ryou stayed looking at the contraption, his face held no expression as he finished the mending.

    “What are you waiting for?”

    He smirked. “For something to ruin this dream.”


    “Ryou!” Came the all too real voice of his mother.

    Both the bear and Ryou smirked.

    “And there it is.”


    As the dream world faded away, Ryou heard his room door open and silently he cursed himself for not putting a lock on the damn thing. The wounds ached from yesterday, and all he wanted to do was keep dreaming. He didn’t care if it was about talking teddy bears or evil monsters that wanted to kill him.

    Anything was better than-

    “Ryou! It’s two in the afternoon! GET UP!”

    Her.

    He groaned and brought the covers over his head, refusing to even look at her. His body was in pain, and he hadn’t got in until late last night, so the desire to get up and deal with his mother just wasn’t there today. The man turned over, hoping that with his back facing the door and her, she might just get the idea that he wanted to be left alone.

    “Don’t you roll over, get out of bed!”

    Ryou groaned. “Why?”

    “Because it’s two! What other reason do you need?”

    “The doctor said-“

    “To hell with the doctor!” She roared her voice grating on his nerves. “You damn well look for trouble out there and then use the doctor as an excuse to do nothing all day!”

    His eyes slowly opened, and the crimson colour seemed to turn darker as his grip on the covers tightened. Exactly what did she do all day? Nothing from what he could recall, she wandered around the house watching pathetic soap operas, moping or doing something that was entirely not helpful towards anyone.

    “Did you hear me?”

    I heard you.” He snarled, a sinister flicker appeared in his eyes, not that she could see it. Slowly he sat up, wincing a little and looking down at his bandages to make sure they were okay. “I’m up, now get out.”

    She blinked, and crossed her arms. “Pardon?”

    Ryou gritted his teeth. “Leave.”

    “Don’t you dare take that tone with me young man.” The anger from his mother began to filter into him.

    He stood up, not really meaning to be imposing, but the woman took a step back as he rose to full height, a fearsome look in his eyes.

    “Alright, let’s try it dad’s way then.” He hissed, and spoke in a dark tone. “Fuck off.

    Haruka didn’t know what to think, she stood there stunned for a second, trying to even comprehend what her son had just said to her. It was rude, far beyond his normal sarcastic tone he usually took. Her control was slipping and in weakness she could only watch as her hand whipped out to slap him.

    Only he caught it.

    She let out a half-cry of anger and surprise as tore her arm free from his grasp.

    “How dare you speak to me like that!”

    “How dare I?” He growled, his voice steadily becoming louder. “You come in here and have the nerve to say[i]I[/b] don’t do anything! Exactly what do you do all day? You wander around the house watching some stupid show on television or cry because dad left you here, in some shitty house while he went to the city and became rich! You neglect your sick daughter and take off without as much as a note telling me when you’ll be back! Only that I have to take care of her, which wouldn’t be such a big deal except you come home drunk off your ass!”

    His mother was silent, looking beyond hurt at his words.

    “You didn’t even buy her the medicine.” Ryou added as the final argument. “I did.

    “Get out.”

    Ryou raised his eyebrow. “What?”

    His mother, trembling, gave him a cold empty stare. “Out.”

    He laughed, which was the last thing Haruka expected. Her expression didn’t waver much, but he could see the confusion overlapping the emptiness in her gaze.

    “Let’s see how long you last…” The man smirked as she backed into the hallway. “Until you come crying to me for help.” Her anger was swelling, and that only seemed to edge him on. “My bet’s less than a week, Otou-san would say less than a day. But you never know, maybe you’ll use your ‘talents’ to drag another man down. Though I don’t think it’s likely…” He smiled coldly. “You’re not exactly desirable.”

    As she left, Ryou’s rage transformed from emotional to physical. The wall paid the price as his fist collided with it, crashing through the dry wall and hitting the filler in-between. It seemed to dispel after that, most of it anyways, there was still this lingering anger. But he wasn’t quite sure if it was at his mother, who he had just crushed, or himself.

    Why should I be angry with myself?’ He growled inside his head as he quickly put on a pair of slightly worn jeans. ‘She doesn’t do anything; she might as well have someone tell her.’ Ryou slipped into a white muscle shirt and paused. Anger was turning into guilt, guilt that he really didn’t want to feel. ‘So I brought up Otou-san… She crossed the line, fair game after that…

    That didn’t make him feel any better; quickly he grabbed his cell and bag then moved out of his room. If she didn’t want him around, that was fine. Soon enough he’d get a call from her and he would be grudgingly invited back.

    It wasn’t the first time she had kicked him out.

    Ryou walked into the kitchen and could hear his mother crying in the next room. He didn’t doubt Ai had heard, and was probably too upset to say anything to him.

    That thought made him feel terrible.

    Refusing to linger any longer, he took his keys from the hook and stepped outside.


    * * *


    Today was a bad day.

    It showed no real sign of improving.

    Ryou was sitting in the park again, flipping through his phone, toying with the idea of calling somebody. He didn’t quite know who to call though, when he had dropped Karen off neither of them had said much, seeing as the creatures had pretty much killed their day. Birgitte was probably busy, though he didn’t actually know that… For all he knew she was at home, bored as well.

    Truth be told, Ryou was looking for a fight or at least the opportunity to make someone feel worse than he did, he didn’t want to clash with the two people who seemed to put up with him. Of course, last he had talked to Birgitte; he hadn’t left her on a particularly happy note, so she could just be waiting for him to call to yell at him.

    Which would be the exact opposite of what he wanted and Karen well… She didn’t deal well with his normal attitude, hanging out with her when he was angry spelt disaster.

    “Her parents are probably home anyways…” He muttered; flipping through his other contacts and ignoring the fact it had only been a day. “She’ll want to hang around with them…”

    Not some jerk like me.’

    “Oh come on Naomi! I said I was sorry!”

    Ryou looked up and felt a scowl appear. Stomping down the path, arms wrapped around books was that girl he had met before, truth be told he had forgotten her name until this little occurrence. He watched with slight interest as Akira ran up behind her, intent on catching her attention.

    This outta be good…’ He smirked a little and watched as the boy grabbed her shoulder and made her stop.

    “Naomi-chan!”

    “Don’t call me that!” She snapped, as she swiveled around to face him. The brat took a step back, clearly not understanding. “If… If you think you can be that rude in front of girls, then… Then I’m not going to hang around with you anymore!”

    It was sort of a childish threat, but the way she said it seemed to get to the boy.

    “But they deserved it-“

    “No Akira! They didn’t!” Her angry expression worsened. “Until you learn why, you can go hound another girl.”

    She began to walk off, and Akira was stuck. Apparently he had never had anyone, notably a girl, stand up to him in such a manner, that all he could do was watch as she stomped down the path and wait at the bus stop.

    Ryou snickered and the boy looked over at him.

    “Oh.” He growled. “You.”

    Ryou tilted his head at Akira and kept the smirk on his face. “Girl trouble?”

    “None of your damn business is what it is.”

    The man nodded and looked back at Naomi. “Girl trouble.”

    “So what if it is?” Akira snarled and took a step towards Ryou.

    “Boy, I’m itching for a fight, if you really want to go, I’ll happily oblige.” Ryou’s tone was cold enough to make the brat back off a tad.

    “What’s with you?”

    He blinked and raised an eyebrow at the kid. “What do you care?”

    “You know my problem.”

    “That doesn’t endear me to you the least prat, I’d rather explain it to a wall than you.”

    Saotome-san smiled and crossed his arms. “Girl trouble?”

    “No.”

    “Oh yeah? You think you’re such the womanizer?”

    Ryou chuckled and shrugged. “Maybe.”

    “Then you go and talk to her.” He gestured towards Naomi. “There’s no way in hell you can make her smile.”

    “No?” The man looked towards the girl. “I think I could.”

    “I bet you 10000 you can’t make her smile.”

    “You have 10000?”

    “I’m fourteen not some damn kid! Is it that hard to believe I might do odd jobs?”

    Yes…’ Ryou’s lips formed a sly smile. “20000 I can get her number.”

    “HA!” Akira laughed. “Alright, you’re on.”

    Ryou stood up quickly, he doubted that the brat had that much but whatever he got off the kid, even if it was just a fuming expression, was worth it at the moment.

    He approached Naomi cautiously, angry women, particularly teenaged angry women, were to be respected. Their slaps were faster than the elders of their kind, and while not quite as painful half the time; it was the embarrassment you wanted to avoid.

    “Hi.”

    She turned to him and blinked. “Saito-san…”

    He tilted his head a little. “I kinda… Overheard…”

    “Oh…” She grumbled, and huffed, looking down at the pavement. “I’m sorry you had to hear that…”

    “That’s alright…” Ryou shifted a little. “Are you okay?”

    “Yeah, I’m fine…” She shrugged. “He can be such a jerk…”

    He smirked. “Really? I hadn’t noticed.”

    Naomi smiled a tiny bit, and from behind Ryou could just hear a curse.


    Akira watched the two talk with a sick feeling growing in his stomach. So she had smiled? There was no way Ryou was getting her number; Naomi didn’t just give it out to random people-
    She laughed, and she was blushing. Naomi never did that sort of blushing around him; the boy had to hold back a cry of anger as he watched from the forest tree line. He kept watching the two talk until the most terrible thing imaginable happened.

    Ryou got Naomi’s number.

    His Naomi.

    “I… But… He…” Akira stuttered as the bus came and Naomi got on, waving goodbye to a rather cocky looking Ryou, who turned back and sat down on the same bench he had been on before.


    “What did you say?”

    Ryou glanceed at the boy with a confident look and just shrugged. “Wouldn’t you like to know.”

    “You leaned towards her! Whispered something! What was it!?”

    The man stood and stretched, happily noting the rage pouring off the brat. “You owe me 20000.”

    “That wasn’t fair!”

    “How?” Ryou questioned. “You seemed to like my odds before.”

    “You tricked me!”

    He laughed and rolled his eyes. “Keep your money then, I got her number anyways.”

    “Well, I know where she lives!”

    Ryou smirked. “Yeah? I bet I’ll know a lot more about her soon enough.”

    That’s all it took for Akira to throw the first punch, it connected roughly with Ryou’s lower jaw. He recovered quickly but didn’t return the favour; instead he caught the next punch and threw the kid to the ground.

    “Asshole…” Akira muttered, and looked up at Ryou who had on an empty expression.

    “Doesn’t it suck when someone takes what’s yours?” With that he turned from the brat and left the park, looking over his shoulder just once to make sure the kid wasn’t following him back to his car.

    Inside the car, Ryou chuckled to himself and input the number into his phone. ‘Maybe today isn’t as bad as I thought.


    * * *


    Karen sat in the living room with her fractured arm hanging in a sling uncomfortably. The memory of how she got it was so clear, and so was Ryou’s voice ordering her to stay by the car. She didn’t understand why she froze when he told her to stay in the light; she blamed half of the reasoning on fear.

    Good to know fear would let me watch someone die..’ She thought bitterly, but she imagined that he hadn’t wanted her to die. ‘I didn’t want him to die either, but if I yelled at him, he probably wouldn’t listen… In fact he’d probably have some sarcastic comment to counter it…

    She was being childish of course, but in her mind Ryou refusing to listen wasn’t exactly fair. Though, she didn’t exactly believe she would ever see him again so it didn’t matter if he would’ve listened or not.

    The girl had a notoriously bad track record with boys, most notably first dates.

    Only first dates actually, as they had never gotten past that.

    Karen blushed. “Not to say it was a date…”

    “What was that?”

    She jumped, and shot a weak glare over at the girl in the doorway, with dark brown hair and dark eyes. “Yuki-chan? When did you get here?”

    “Just now.”

    Yuki sat down on the floor next to Karen who was looking at her curiously before poking her in the leg. “You’re wearing jeans...”

    “Bit cold today for a skirt…” The girl poked her back, playing with her hair a bit. “You’re still thinking about the date aren’t you?”

    “It wasn’t a date!”

    “Oh ho ho…” Yuki rolled her eyes. “Okay, so what was it then?”

    “… Not a date.”

    “Good defense Karen.”

    Karen was about to stick her tongue out, but then she stopped. “He felt sorry for me was all.”

    “A pity date?”

    It wasn’t a date!

    “Sounded like a date on the phone.”

    Karen didn’t know what to say, Yuki was her best friend but sometimes she could get annoying, she decided it was better not to say anything.

    “Did he make a move on you?”

    The girl blinked, and was stunned for a moment. “What? No!”

    Yuki was laughing now, seeing her friend’s abhorred face was certainly worth the shove that caused her to fall over. “It’s scientifically proven it’s what they’re after…”

    “He didn’t really show he wanted that…”

    “No?” She sat up, curious.

    “No… well… there was one remark… But I think he was teasing me…” She recalled the memory with crystal clear precision.

    “Which was?”

    She flushed a bright red. “Don’t stick your tongue out unless you’re willing to share it…”

    Yuki giggled. “So what did you do?”

    “What do you mean what did I do?! I never stuck my tongue out again!”

    “Awww…”

    “What?”

    “I would’ve.” She grinned.

    “You think I should’ve?”

    “Well from what you described on the phone this morning, I get the idea he’s interested in you.”

    “I think I bombed it.”

    “Oh…” Yuki sulked a bit. “That’s sad… Why?”

    “I don’t want to say.”

    “That bad?”

    Karen thought back to falling into him, the monsters and the hospital. “Mmhmm…”

    Her mind went back to that stupid remark, and she began to wonder what exactly would’ve happened if she had kept her tongue out.

    She turned as red as cherry at the image.

    Yuki frowned. “What are you blushing at?”

    “N-Nothing!”




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    Default Re: KINGDOM HEARTLESS [M] VI .:. August 17

    Alright, alright, I know, bad Kuro, you didn't comment! Well, I is very sowwie, pweese forgive me?

    Chapter V

    This chapter had me going on an emotional rollercoaster! The part where they were at the arcade made me go "AWWWWWWWWWWW~!" and when the teddy bear fell I went "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" I went O_O when Ryou was playing knight in shining armor goes suicidal but then went "YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Katsumi saves the day!" I wanna see more of her, hee.

    I love how you portray the heartless and Ai is just so cute. Don't get tempted by them, Ai-chan! ;-;

    Chapter VI

    Masato and Mika! Could it be another pairing in the works!? Think you can provide a sample painting for us? EVIL TEDDY'S GONNA EAT YOU, BAD! RUN FER YER LIVES! Ryou blows up at Mama! TAKE THAT HOE! I could relate to that SO well... stupid parents and their *insert censor blips here*. Anyways, taking Naomi from Akira was pure awesome, let him stew in his rage, hee. That was perfectly evil of Ryou! If Roy read this, he'd cry, lol. AND KAREN-CHAN! Maybe you should've kept your tongue out~ *wink wink nudge nudge*

    Anyways, disregeard my weird rambly blurbbiness and keep up the good work!
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    I really loved the detail in this chapter. It seemed like another kinda break one, where there wasn't so much action, which is good! Although there was lots of DRAMARAMA O_O

    It was good to see Masato's day. It's those kinda details that I really like. The kind that give you that little bit more background and atmosphere to the setting. Also, Mika's paintings are rather interesting, can't wait to see what happens with them.

    I feel a bit sorry for Haruka... Maybe his words will do her a little good rather than making her hit the bottle again? Somehow I think the latter is more likely though >_>

    The part in the park made me laugh so much. I love how Akira was just so irritated by this older guy swooping Naomi off her feet XD Well, almost. You know what I mean.

    And finally...

    OMG YAY YUKI <3 <3 <3

    Haha, I love how she teased Karen XD She's pretty much how I imagine her to act... Teehee I'm excited XD

    I also really like how different this is from the old one. You really have improved so much over the years <3

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    Oops, forgot to reply to the next chapter. I do agree with Kuro, Katsumi's moment with the Heartless was badass. I hope she got out of it okay.

    And you referenced The Organization! Yaaaaaaay! What is their connection to what's going on?

    Also liking the Akira vs. Ryou bit. Good that Naomi took Ryou's advice from earlier and stopped standing by while Akira pushed people around. And Ryou's racking up those numbers! He's a playa! *thumbs up*

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    Kurosakura:

    V

    ^^;; Was the chapter really that tense? I thought it was written poorly, but apparently you and others disagree.

    Your way of expressing emotions amuses me.

    VI

    Masato and Mika? Hmmm, maybe. I’ll confirm nothing, you’ll just have to wait and see.

    I don’t know if I’ll provide a sample art, I can’t do prints very well or watercolour, and my acrylic paints are temporarily misplaced. Though you never know ♥

    My intention was not to make Roy cry, just to show how some people just can’t get along. I’m glad you thought Ryou’s scheme was pure awesome, I was amused when planning the scenario out.

    LOL. Well maybe Karen will get another chance to stick out her tongue ^_~, you’ll just have to wait.

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    ChobiChibi: You liked the detail? :3 Such news makes me happy. Yeah I wrote the chapter and suddenly realized how it lacked action. I originally thought I hadn’t even mentioned the monsters until I remembered Mika’s artwork.

    Drama in a story is a good thing; you get more insight into a person X3

    In the initial plan, the chapter actually skipped the conversation with Kaito and went right to Masato meeting Mika. I like back-story though, and I wanted to establish that Nagano-san has more friends than another male-character we know and love ♥

    Yes, Yuki finally appeared. She had a short appearance, but one that I think established her well. I’m glad you think I wrote her properly ♥

    ♥ ♥ ♥ Such kind words, thank you~ ♥ ♥ ♥

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    Classy_cat18: XD I remember in the AIM chat how happy you were that The Organization was referenced.

    Tehehe, yus… The standings so far!

    Ryou: 3 (4 if you count him meeting Mika)
    Akira: 0
    Masato: 1

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    It’s about 40% planned so far, and continues the same day that VI began. Can’t state much past that, as that would be telling :x



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    lol, my favorite part of this chapter:
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    “That’s alright…” Ryou shifted a little. “Are you okay?”

    “Yeah, I’m fine…” She shrugged. “He can be such a jerk…”

    He smirked. “Really? I hadn’t noticed.”

    Naomi smiled a tiny bit, and from behind Ryou could just hear a curse.
    LOL, GO RYOU. Although I was a little scared of him from the things he said to his mother (even if she deserved some of them)... O_O I guess that's the "asshole" part of him you were talking about? It's interesting to see the many different sides of him.

    I was also happy to see some focus another male besides Ryou. I like Masato so far and I'm definitely liking the interaction between him and Mika. The paintings intrigue me...

    Awesome chapter, keep up the good work!


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    Kuro Espeon: Aww, I didn't mean to scare you. Haven't you ever lost your temper before? Poor Ryou-kun had a bad start to the day, maybe he'll apologize for it later.

    Masato ♥ He's such an interesting character to include. He's much more light-hearted and fun than Ryou, such a contrast to write.

    ♥ Thank you~

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    I've finished it, just need to read it over, correct things, edit other things. It's a longer chapter than the average (4300), as it stands now it's at 4600... Give or take a few.

    As I see it now, the action will begin to pick up again during/after VII. So all stayed tuned ♥


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    VII



    Where was he going?

    In truth, nobody knew, not even Ryou. The car seemed to be taking itself, and the longer he drove with the music a little too loud, mind blank of any concrete thought, the farther he was drifting from home. He wondered briefly, if maybe he was going a little too far away, but it’s not like his mother would welcome him back to the house tonight.

    How exactly would he explain to his mother he came home because he was afraid of the dark?

    She would laugh, and he would grow angry. Earlier today had proved that himself and anger didn’t exactly equal the most beneficial outcome.

    There’s that little stab of guilt again…’ He thought, as he came to a stop at a red light he switched the song.

    “My secret side I keep, hid under lock and key”

    Ryou smirked at the words, his mood instantly improving. Back in school a couple of people had given him a strange look for liking American rock, partly because he took such little interest in English class. Maybe if they had put the language into a song that melted the eardrums of the adults, he would’ve paid more attention in class.

    “I keep it caged, but I can’t control it”

    It didn’t matter much anyways, he understood it well enough to enjoy it and that’s all he needed to justify why he was currently blaring such tunes and what-not in the Lancer.

    As his thoughts drifted again and the car began to move, the man jumped when his phone suddenly rang. He cursed it, gritting his teeth as he was forced to turn down the song so it wasn’t shaking the mirrors anymore.

    Ryou flipped open the phone. “Yeah?”

    “Oh, well aren’t we cheery today.”

    He rolled his eyes, and made a left. “I had a bad morning.”

    “… You were up this morning?”

    The man let out a sigh as he heard his friend chuckle on the other end. “What’s up Hotaru-san?”

    “I haven’t talked to you in a while; I was just calling to make sure you were alive.” It sounded like a joke but Ryou could hear the slight concern in her voice.

    “Depends on your definition of ‘alive’.”

    “Your heart beating?”

    He snorted. “As far as I know, though I’m sure a couple people wish it wasn’t.”

    “Making friends again?”

    “Actually…” Ryou’s mind wandered back to Naomi. “One.”

    “Oh?” He could see her coy smile in his mind’s eye. “What’s her name?”

    “Why do you figure it’s a girl?”

    “Just the way you said ‘actually’.”

    “It couldn’t be a guy?”

    She laughed. “Are you gay?”

    No.” He snorted with disgust.

    “Exactly, whoever it is has to be a girl.” There was a pause as he heard her type something. “What’s her name?”

    “Naomi Itsuki.”

    “She sounds cute.”

    “Sure.”

    “You don’t think so?”

    “I don’t particularly want to discuss her with you.”

    “Oh she is cute then.”

    Ryou sighed. “… Yes.”

    “Are you hungry?” She sounded sort of annoyed. He hoped that the irritation wasn’t directed at him. “I made too much food, and I don’t want it to go to waste.”

    “Uh…” He blinked. “Sure?”

    “I’ll see you over here then?”

    “Yeah.”

    “Cheer up Saito-san, you always sound so angry.”

    Something about that comment made him smile a tad. “I’ll try.”

    “See you soon.”

    “Bye.” He finished, flipping the phone shut and noticed that he was a good ways away from Hotaru-san, and the only way to make it back in time was to take the underground highway.

    That wasn’t exactly the route he wanted to take, but he was hungry, and the man didn’t have the desire to be driving around all day. Rolling his eyes he made a right and found himself frowning as his car began the quick decent into what many drivers had come to call the tunnels.

    It was a winding, confusing mix of highways and roads. Originally meant to lessen the traffic of Traverse, it worked for a while before the population boom occurred. Then it had quickly begun to fill up, though everyone had to admit without the tunnels and underground passages, the traffic above would be a lot worse. Even with all these reassuring facts, and the lighting that filled the roads to the brim, Ryou couldn’t shake that uneasy feeling in his gut.

    They were out there, and they were waiting for nightfall.

    ‘Just think of the food…’ The driver mused, turning the music up again. ‘The food makes it all worth it.’


    * * *


    “Yesterday’s freak storm claimed fifteen lives, originally thought to be the work of the notorious heart thief; officials assure the public that unexplained deaths were nothing more than tragic accidents. Captain Mori of the Traverse Police Force does state however, that two other bodies found, are most likely not accidents.”

    The screen switched to an image of the Captain, he was a stern looking man with dark eyes and graying hair. Ryou raised an eyebrow at him, he was a big guy, much larger than he had imagined.

    “Two bodies were found near Main Street Train Station.” He spoke with a rigid voice. “We believe that the heart thief were behind these cases.”

    “Is there any chance of stating the victims’ names?”

    The man shot a glare into the crowd before him. “Not a chance in hell, I don’t want you monsters hounding the families of the deceased.”

    The program went back to the anchorwoman, who was looking down at the papers on her desk before noticing eyes were on her again.

    “Our prayers go to out the families who lost loved ones.” She seemed a bit down.


    “So what’s on TV?”

    Ryou looked over abruptly, turning the volume down to a lower setting so neither of them would be distracted if the news said something odd. Answering her question he shrugged, shifting a little on the couch so he was more comforted as she sat down in the chair opposite him.

    “Fifteen people died in the storm last night.”

    “Fifteen?” The woman seemed a little shocked. “I didn’t think it was that bad…”

    “It wasn’t.” He answered bluntly. “They’re just covering it up.”

    “How do you know?”

    “I was in the storm.” Ryou found himself cringing at the memory. “Trust me; it wasn’t the storm that killed them.”

    Hotaru-san frowned a little and took a quick sip of her drink. She played with her hair as she thought of what to say. She had gotten from Ryou that he had a knack for getting in trouble, but what exactly had he been doing out in that storm? It was quite possible he looked for problems to get himself mixed up in, and she wouldn’t put it past him. But they both knew what waited in the dark, so exactly what would compel him to be out there?

    “Why were you out there?”

    “I was coming home.”

    That made more sense. “Oh...”

    “I lost track of time.” He explained further as he stretched. “Thanks for lunch…”

    Birgitte smiled gently. “No problem… You didn’t eat a lot though.”

    The man shrugged. “Not a big eater.”

    Ryou looked towards the door. “Anything happen?”

    He very clearly got a wave of nervousness and anxiety from the girl, who glanced at the door with a scared expression she was trying to hide. She took a gulp of her drink before standing up and moving towards the odd contraption in her hallway. Birgitte reached out and touched the surface gently as Ryou stood, moving over to her.

    ‘She’s wearing another dress…’ He noted as the light-blue and white outfit shifted from the breeze.

    Ryou paused.

    ‘What breeze?’

    She smirked and looked over at him. “You noticed it too?”

    “The wind when there’s a lack of open windows?” Ryou admitted, hoping she didn’t catch him looking at her. “Yeah.”

    “It started the day after you stormed out.” Her eyes switched back to the door, and then on the symbol. “When it’s really quiet, you can hear water from the other side.”

    He blinked. “Water?”

    Birgitte nodded. “Like water washing up on a beach… Sometimes the breeze smells like the ocean itself.”

    He was hard pressed to believe there was a beach on the other side. “Your own private island?”

    She laughed. “Maybe! Wouldn’t that be nice? I hope it’s like Hawaii.”

    Ryou looked at her curiously. “You want to go to Hawaii?”

    “Oh God yes!” She twirled around him and moved back into the living room. “Wouldn’t it be great? Sunshine and beaches… Not to mention Pina Coladas…”

    “Good to know the alcohol seals the deal.”

    Birgitte looked at him with a small devious smile, her green eyes twinkling with her wish to go to such a place. He had never thought about vacation much, let alone an island that was a far from here. He admired that she had a goal though; somewhere she wanted to go, maybe even a dream, the way she talked about it and got giddy at the thought.

    “What about you?” She questioned, almost like his sister in a sense. “Where do you want to go?”

    He didn’t have an answer; his father had always taught him to think realistically. Don’t dream or imagine things that probably weren’t going to happen, actually it was sort of depressing he had listened. When he didn’t answer, Hotaru-san seemed a little disappointed.

    “There’s no where you want to go Saito-san?”

    His mind briefly thought of places he had seen in textbooks and movies. He mulled over them for a good minute before he decided on one that seemed like an ideal place to get away and dream.

    “Ireland.”

    She looked at him in slight surprise. “Really?”

    “Yeah.”

    Wherever the conversation was going, it would have to wait. On cue to ruin the little inner moment, Ryou’s cell phone rang. He pulled it out of his pocket; his mother was fuming at him, Karen probably didn’t have the nerve to call, his father notably never called, and he was with Birgitte so who was calling him now?


    [SAITO, HARUKA]



    Now he was just confused.

    “Okaa-san?” He muttered, and looked at Birgitte. “I… Uhh.. Gotta take this.”

    “No problem.” She nodded to him and turned around, heading for the kitchen as he flipped the phone upon.

    “Moshi Moshi?”

    “Nii-san!”

    He had not expected Ai to call, and wondered just how she had gotten their mother’s phone. “Um… Ai?”

    “Kaa-san is making dinner; she didn’t see me take the phone.” She sounded particularly proud of her thieving skills. Ryou wasn’t going to mention that all mom had to do was open the phone history to find out that someone had called him on her phone. “When are you coming home?”

    “I…” Ryou paused, absent-mindedly playing with the keychain as he thought. “I don’t know, why?”

    “Because I forgot to give you something, and it’s very important!”

    He frowned. “Oh yeah?”

    “Yes!”

    “Alright…” Ryou decided to indulge her. “What is it?”

    “A key.”

    He paused, his mind going blank of all answers. “A… What?”

    “A key.” She giggled. “You know, to unlock doors?”

    The man still had no idea what to think. “Where did you get the key?”

    There was a pause. “I found it.”

    “Where?”

    “Outside.”

    “Mom let you outside?”

    He could practically see her huff and turn red with anger. “I’m not sick all the time!”

    “Alright I’m sorry…” He rolled his eyes. “What’s it look like?”

    “It’s black.”

    “And…?”

    “And…” She trailed off. “It has a picture on it.”

    “Of what?”

    “A… Swirl.”

    Ryou’s eyes shot over to the door in the hallway. “Yeah?”

    “Yep.” She giggled. “Are you coming to get it?”

    Without really thinking it through, he answered. “Yes.”

    “Good. Because when you get back, you’re in big trouble.”

    He sighed. “I am?”

    “Uh-huh. If it wasn’t for Tonberry, I wouldn’t even of told you about it.”

    “Tonberry?” Ryou raised an eyebrow at that, but he was pretty certain that she had a tonberry plushie. “Alright… I’ll be there eventually.”

    “When’s that?”

    He frowned. “Sometime today.”

    “Okay.. Look out for Kaa-san, she’ll yell at you if she sees you.”

    “Alright… Bye.”

    “Bye Nii-san!”

    He hung up and noted how she had sounded quite happy on the phone, like she had never heard the fight between him and their mother. There was that faint hope that she hadn’t, but she had said when he comes home, he was going to be trouble. Maybe Tonberry or some other plushie had made her day by simply existing or being found. Who knew?

    Not him.

    “Right…” He moved into the kitchen and Birgitte looked up at him. “I know where the key is.”

    She blinked. “The key for the door?”

    He nodded.

    As if not believing him, she pointed to it. “That door?”

    “Yes.”

    “Where?”

    “My sister has it.”

    Birgitte didn’t know what to say or think about that statement, she opened her mouth a couple of times, but no word seemed to fit. Until finally she just gave up and placed her hands on her hips as she asked.

    How?


    * * *


    Ryou had come to the decision that it didn’t matter how exactly his sister had come across the key, only that they needed it and she had it. Though in the back of his mind he wondered if she had always had it, or maybe she had indeed, just found it lying around somewhere. Ai wasn’t overly known to lie, not to him about important things, and from the sound of it this had been important.

    ‘How exactly did she know it was important though?’ The man thought, but kept his face expressionless as he rounded the corner and stopped at the red light five minutes later. ‘Could those things… No, I told her they were monsters, she wouldn’t still be talking to them or following them around..’ The duo began to move again as the light turned green. ‘Would she?’

    It was an unnerving thought that maybe his sister had gotten to the point where she had noted that she didn’t have to listen to really anybody in that household. Okaa-san didn’t punish her usually, Onii-san had no power and Otou-san was never around, he was always working in the city.

    ‘I should get a job…’ He mused, wanting another reason to be out of the house more often. ‘I had a couple before… Just have to add them to the resume.’

    Ryou’s thoughts drained away as he pulled into a parking lot about three blocks away from his house. If his mother saw the car (on the off chance she was paying attention), their plan to get the key would be ruined. As he switched the vehicle off he leaned back, staring at the ceiling and thinking about the fight a few hours ago.

    “Something up?” She looked around. “Do you leave nearby?”

    “Three blocks.”

    “How come we’re-“

    “At the moment,” He interrupted. “I’m not exactly well liked at my house.”

    “… What did you do?” She questioned with suspicious tone.

    Ryou looked over at her in irritation. “Why do you assume I did something?”

    “Well you’re not welcomed home.”

    “That doesn’t mean I was the one to do something wrong.” Ryou got out of the car in a huff. “… And I don’t want to talk about it.”

    Birgitte smirked, and stepped out, shutting the door behind her as her friend locked it. “So what’s the plan?” She asked, following him towards the sidewalk.

    “Get the key.”

    “Funny,” She rolled her eyes. “I figured out that part myself.”

    “I haven’t thought about the rest.” He admitted, hands in his pockets. He seemed rather cool for someone without a plan. “I’ll think of something.”


    Ryou could see his house now, and stopped. He still didn’t have a concrete plan just that he probably wasn’t going to use the front door. He thought briefly of trying to get to the back one, but the kitchen wasn’t split from the dining room. He grew irritated at the gaping hole in his scheme.

    ‘Of course we had to have that giant window installed…’ He gritted his teeth in annoyance. ‘“You’ll be able to watch your children in the backyard!”’ Ryou rolled his eyes. ‘What backyard? Mom had only noticed that fact after she hired the installers…’ With a sigh he found himself leaning up against the tree. ‘Damn woman will buy anything if you sell it well enough…’ He paused.

    ‘She’ll buy anything.’

    “That’s it!” He said triumphantly. “I know how I can get into my house.”

    “Oh?” Birgitte raised an eyebrow. “How?”


    In the history of bad ideas and ill-conceived plans, this particular scheme had to take the cake. Birgitte was walking up to the door, in the corner of her eye she could see Ryou moving up the side of the house. As soon as he was out of sight she knocked. When there was no reply for a good minute, she knocked again, louder and much more pronounced.

    She heard the locks on the door being undone, and then the door swung upon, revealing a rather miserable looking woman. Her hair was disheveled, her eyes tired and a little red. Her shirt had stains of what looked like grease, Hotaru-san immediately went on the idea it was from cooking.

    Though that might’ve been giving the woman too much credit.

    “What is it?” She nearly snarled, and Birgitte found herself wanting to step back.

    “Hello mam,” She bowed politely. “My name is-“ The woman thought as quickly as she could for a fake name. She hadn’t thought this through at all. “Asi Hotaru,”

    “Is there something you want Hotaru-san?” She nearly spat the words.

    “Well I’m here to offer you a fantastic deal on this!” Birgitte held up her phone, it was sleek, white with green trim. “A limited release LG Neon!”

    Haruka raised an eyebrow. “I have a home phone.”

    “Oh… But surely you go out?”

    “I already have a cell phone.”

    “I’m sorry mam, but what is your name?”

    “Saito.”

    “Saito-san, though I’m sure your phone is adequate, it’s not the LG Neon, which comes loaded with bonus features, all free.”

    “Is it common for phone companies to go door to door?”

    Birgitte managed not to falter. “It’s a special offer so it requires a unique way of advertising.”

    She didn’t seem too impressed, but Hotaru-san’s lie seemed to be keeping her attention. “Go on.”

    ‘Hurry up Ryou… I don’t know how long I can keep this up…’


    Hearing that his dear mother was distracted, Ryou ran. The fence was quite high and wasn’t the simplest thing to climb. Another important factor was little to know sun got between the houses, so these sorts of alleyways were not a place to linger for long. The man leapt for the top of the barrier and surprising even himself he reached it, he kept going however, using his arm that had caught the top of the enclosure to propel himself forward.

    Ryou landed roughly in the backyard, skidding to a stop just before he slammed into the opposing fence wall.

    “Jesus…” He muttered, looking back at what he had just jumped. “I don’t remember being able to do that… Not without smashing into something…”

    The man stopped cold when he looked through the dining room window pane, through the kitchen and to the front door. His mother wasn’t any the wiser, which was just grand in his opinion. He skipped the two wooden steps to the back door and balanced precariously on the two inch wide cement curb for the frame of the door.

    ‘Alright…’ Ryou mused, slowly turning the doorknob as his body tried to remain even. ‘I’ll give Naruto credit next time…’

    He opened the door and quietly stepped inside. Freezing as the floor quietly creaked under his weight. He had forgotten about that particular spot, but at least it wasn’t nearly as loud as the two steps. The man clenched his jaw as he shut the door and moved into the kitchen.

    Haruka was mere feet away, and seemed heartily distracted by Birgitte who was trying desperately not to look at him.

    Ryou moved into the hallway towards the bedrooms and living room. Confident he was safe until his toe got caught underneath the rug.

    His mind panicked as his balance was thrown completely off and down he went. He hopped, managing barely to land gently on a non-creaking part of the floor, his arms flailed and one hand desperately grasped for the ledge of the railing that lead to the living room.
    Ryou managed to grab it; fingers’ straining as all his weight was suddenly put on that hand as his body swung around. Pivoting on the foot which was touching the floor, the rug was wound up quickly and suddenly he found himself in a very odd, very twisted position.

    God…” He whispered out of a quiet sigh. Letting go of the railing and allowing himself to slide down the wall so he was firmly on the ground again.

    On the ground sitting in plain sight if his mother decided to move, but he wasn’t flailing.

    Horror took over him as his eyes spotted one of the paintings dangling precariously on the edge of its hook. Ryou cursed himself, he must’ve hit it when he was busy trying not to fall on his face. It hung there in a sort of taunting motion before it decided to give him away.

    It fell.

    Ryou shot his leg out, barely managing to stop it with the very tip of his shoe.

    “Come in and have a drink Hotaru-san, you can tell me more about this phone!”

    “Okaa-san?” He questioned near silently in horror, holding completely still as she moved past the hall without batting an eyelash in his direction. Next to come was Birgitte, who looked over at him in shock.

    She blinked; dumbfounded by the comical position he was in. He looked as if he was ninja kicking the painting into the lower wall while twisting around to.. Well she didn’t know what. Ryou narrowed his eyes.

    “Will you go?” He whispered with an edge, putting the painting down. “Before she suspects something!”

    Snapping out of her stare she quickly moved out of sight, Ryou held back a sigh as his mother might hear and recovered, dashing into Ai’s room and shutting the door. He had managed not to make too much noise, not enough to alert his mother anyway.

    When he turned his attention from the door to in front of him, the first thing he got was a plushie to the face.

    “Argh!” He tried to keep his voice down. “Imouto-san are you nuts?”

    “You shouldn’t of said such means things to mommy!” She yelled, slamming another plush into him. “She cooks for us! And she does take care of me!”

    Ryou grumbled; the words were hurting more than the dolls. “Ai, she doesn’t know I’m here!” He spoke in a rough, agitated tone that was barely managing to keep itself down.

    “Maybe she should know!” Ai slammed him again. “You said such mean things!”

    Losing his temper for a millisecond he tore the next toy out of her hand. “Listen.” His voice sounded foreign to her, it was cold and unkind. “The argument was between me and-“

    “Okaa-san.” She interrupted stubbornly, before he could disrespect her.

    “Yes. Her.” Ryou growled. “I’m willing to bet you didn’t understand half the things said, or what they implied. So drop it.”

    Ai fell silent and looked at the ground shamefully. It was true what he said, she only understood about a quarter of what the fight had truly been about, but they had been nasty none the less. “How long will you be away?”

    Calming down, he let out a long breath. “I don’t know.”

    “Will you visit?”

    He frowned. “Jeez Ai it’s not like I’m moving away.” Though the idea was becoming more tempting with each fight and every passing day.

    “I know… But…” She shuffled a bit. “I don’t like it when you’re gone… I don’t have any friends…”

    Ryou knelt down in front of her and smiled softly at her. “Oh come on, you have friends. What about…” He looked at what he was holding and then back at her. “Tonberry?”

    Her smile was tiny but it was a genuine one of happiness. Ryou handed back the odd plushie and watched her give it a big hug.

    “When I’m allowed back home,” He began in a hushed voice. “I’ll bring you back a new friend, how’s that?”

    “Really?” His little sister perked up, eyes sparkling. “Like what?”

    In truth, he had no idea. “You’ll see, you’ll love it.” Ryou paused and stood up again, looking around the horrendously coloured room. “Can I have the key now?”

    “Oh yeah!” She beamed and, with Tonberry in tow, lifted up her small plastic jewelry box to reveal a simple black key. “Here.”

    He took it from her and looked at the handle of the object. On it was a crude spiral, exactly like the one on the door. The man smirked and gave his sister a kiss on the forehead. “Thanks Ai.”

    Ryou’s phone rang.

    Of all the times to ring and on the highest possible setting for volume…

    “Shit!” He cursed, looking at the caller display.


    [YASASHISA, KAREN]



    “Of all the times to call…” Ryou hissed as he flipped open the phone to stop the ring. “Karen?”


    Haruka had found that odd, she could’ve sworn she heard her son’s cell. Narrowing her eyes in suspicion, she stood from the table and moved to the hallway, finding the rug out of place and the picture on the floor.

    “Saito-san-“ The guest spoke rather loudly, but she supposed it was out of surprise.

    “I’ll be only a second Hotaru-san,” She said with a fake smile and moved towards his room.

    The room was untouched, well as untouched as a disaster zone could be.

    Slowly, her eyes turn to Ai’s shut bedroom door and her stare turned into an angry glare.


    * * *


    It looked out at the world with fascination, a place of wonderful colours and senses. It adored the one known to these human creatures as touch. To feel the wind, the ground, its own physical shape and form. Such a thing was almost addicting, it could understand why those who lived here wanted to keep it. Why share what is so perfect and tasteful?

    It was different from the rest of its kind. They horded after humans, chasing and running… Minds linked on an ethereal pulse of darkness. They were all the same, thinking the same thoughts and being so obvious about everything.

    ‘I’m different.’ It thought with glee, now having the capability of individual thought and comprehension. Its learning curve skyrocketing after that delightful storm had let it escape the dirty, disgusting place under the paved land and mechanical beasts. ‘I’m special.

    The creature was under the impression it had outsmarted the humans. They could run very fast, yes, and it was such a waste of energy chasing them. It imagined soon some of the smarter ones would realize this and becoming like itself.

    But they won’t be like me, I was the first.’ It readied itself, hiding its form in the shadows of its new lair.

    It could hear one now, a human approaching. A lighter voice, it wasn’t male. It was a female, oblivious to what was coming.

    The girl paused on the path, in perfect position. It moved closer, ignoring the fiery sensation of the late-sun beams on its limbs. For a moment it let her stand there as it admired her steady heartbeat, it was a wonderful thing to hear, such a lovely melody it played. It wanted a more intimate look at it and the female who seemed to catch on something wasn’t right.

    Slowly the girl looked up, and dropped the thing in her hand.

    ‘And I’ll be the last.’


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    You automatically WIN on this chapter for using Skillet lyrics! XD

    And the tripping part made me LOL, seriously. The way you described it was perfect!

    Overall, well done chapter, nice description and the dialogue was great. It's getting exciting! Can't wait for chapter 8....^_~


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    Those were some pretty awkward acrobatics that Ryou did. Oooh, he'll have some explaining to do if his mother sees him.

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    Kuro Espeon: 8D Yay! An Auto-win!

    Thank you ♥ It was fun to imagine.

    It’s getting exciting? I was under the impression VII was a sort of boring chapter… But alrighty, thanks again~

    * * *

    Classy_cat18: You don’t listen to skillet? You should.

    Ha ha, I’ve had ninja moments like that. No matter how unrealistic your chances are, you somehow make little noise and pull it off until some unseen force (cell phone, dog, etc) gives you away.

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    VIII

    It’s done, actually. Lol, I finished it a couple of minutes ago. Unlike VII which was a bit longer than usual (4600 words), it’s a little shorter (4000 words). It might grow in size when I reread it and edit some parts.

    Life is going to get interesting~

    IX

    Is being planned 8D (is it sad I have more things planned for X than IX? Lol.)

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    Oh Ryou, you silly, silly *insert random word here*! XDDD I loved the fall, and Ai's multitude of plushies! Ryou's mom doesn't seem likable, but I'm starting to feel sorry for her. ;-;~ I wonder who the girl is? *feels like she should know but doesn't*

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    Ryou becomes more and more epic every day! Who knew he was trained as a Ninja?! XD

    I love all the Asi-related-references you used for Birgitte XDD Hawaii!! The lush sea... XD

    I love Haruka's obssessive compulsive spending XD That whole part is hillarious.

    The heartless have BRAINS!! Well, that one is no longer a zombie O_o Run away, girl! Ruuuun~

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    Here are my belated comments, for the purpose of ending your naggings at me and to prevent you from further witholding the next chapter from your dedicated fans.

    Chapter 4:
    I was amused by the fanfare following Ryou’s survival and I felt it accurately reflected today’s “bloodthirsty” media (as the general opinion appears to be) though I was a bit disappointed that there wasn’t more to do with reports stalking him and trying to get statements and whatnot. I’d have loved to see how Ryou would react to cameras and microphones pointed at his face.
    And the first victim’s body is missing. Intriguing…
    I really like the interactions between Karen and Ryou. In some ways they’re almost comical because the two are so different. Ryou is, to be blunt, an ass, whereas Karen comes across as being – for lack of a better word – cute. It almost feels strange that he’s being nice to her. But then perhaps he sees a little of Ai in her and that’s the attraction. I don’t know but I enjoy reading it.
    Example of a favourite moments:
    “… What’s your number?”

    The girl found herself once again caught with defenses down and stared at him for a moment with her bright green eyes. Ryou related them to emeralds; they shone in the sunlight with a sparkle many other people lacked nowadays.

    “M-My number?”

    He raised an eyebrow. “Yeah, they’re for calling people. Maybe you’ve heard of them?”


    And once more you left us with things to think about; Ryou’s mutant cells and Masato’s mysterious door (and not the first mysterious door we’ve seen so far). You just love giving us so many things to think about…

    Chapter 5:
    Being the lame sap that I am, I found the start of this chapter ridiculously cute. It was interesting to see Ryou in what felt like a date setting (though I’m sure he’d hate me for saying such). Although, I noticed what could be viewed as a bit of back and forth between’s Ryou’s approaches to Karen. The first being where he treats her like Ai (or just as a younger sister), and the second where he actually seems to be flirting with her.
    Example of Ryou treating Karen like a sister:
    “It looks like it wants to eat me…” He noted, tilting his head at the plush.

    “No!” She giggled, hugging it and pulling it closer to it.

    “Or you.” Ryou joked, “Though I suppose better you than me.”

    “It won’t eat me!”

    He shook his head and leaned back, a sly smile playing on his lips. “Just wait, when you’re not looking, it’s gonna pounce.”


    Example of Ryou flirting:
    “Don’t stick your tongue out unless you’re willing to share it.”

    I liked the action at the end of this chapter; fast-paced and well-written with just enough suspense to make you nervous. Poor Karen…
    It’s nice to see that things are starting to come together with Ai receiving what is most likely the key for the door her brother knows about. I wonder what he’ll find when he opens it…if he does that is.
    And following the ending events of this chapter I have to agree with its final line:
    “Just what the hell is going on?”

    Chapter 6:
    So we’re seeing some insight into Masato but all he’s giving us is more questions. The mysterious of the doors is a wide-spread one it seems, so what are they hiding? And what’s his role in the grand scheme of things? Is he even in the same place as the rest of our cast?
    Ryou’s dreaming of giant teddy bears? Brain damage? Or something inside telling him he likes Karen? Hm…
    Glad to see Ryou tell his mother where to shove it. We’ve been waiting for it. But it fear that his separation from Ai will have bad consequences on at least one of them.
    It was also nice to see Ryou handing Akira’s ass to him; not in the typical fashion either. For a guy who likes to keep to himself, Ryou seems to be getting all the girls’ numbers. Is he becoming a lady’s man?
    It was good to see Yuki in this chapter and I felt the interactions between her and Karen were actually pretty accurate.
    The bit that especially made me laugh:
    She flushed a bright red. “Don’t stick your tongue out unless you’re willing to share it…”

    Yuki giggled. “So what did you do?”

    “What do you mean what did I do?! I never stuck my tongue out again!”

    “Awww…”

    “What?”

    “I would’ve.” She grinned.


    Chapter 7:
    The mission to get the key. It was great to see a longer interaction between Brigitte and Ryou after seeing him spending so much time with Karen but there attempt at sneaking him into the house was genius. Brigitte did a great job but nothing can compare to Ryou’s clumsy ninja antics. The image in my head had me laughing for a while.
    Two different types of ending here too. The suspense from Ryou’s mother and the potential discovery of Ryou (will Brigitte come to the rescue) and the intrigue of this curious creature. Just what has you dark mind conjured up this time? I’m almost too terrified to find out.
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    Kurosakura: I’m glad you enjoyed the falling scene and the attack of the plushies.

    Thanks for the comment ♥

    * * *

    ChobiChibi: Lol, he’s not very ninja in my opinion. Just has horseshoes up his arse.

    Yes some Heartless are evolving brains… Be afraid..

    Yes I still luff you ♥ ♥

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    Samchu: I didn’t nag, I only reminded you that you promised me them ;o;

    IV

    They didn’t give away Ryou’s name, so he could just by another patient who was released. I thought about putting him in the limelight, maybe it’ll happen later.

    I adore writing Ryou and Karen interactions; they always end up so amusing ♥


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    I would say because Ryou knows he has to be careful around Karen, who he ends up saying some things that come off gentle (and thus like a sibling interaction). But he can time his moments where he can say just about anything he wants.

    Plus I love his random flirty moments, as they’re funny.

    Mwahahaha, mysteries~

    VI

    I’m good at creating questions it seems, I don’t know if I’m good at the answering bit, lol.

    Taught to see everything has a meaning eh? Good show ♥

    Ahaha, Yuki and Karen interaction is fun to write as well. In fact as long as their personality is generally different from Karen’s, its funny.

    VII

    X3 Glad you enjoyed the antics.

    I like my creature! Yus, be afraid… Be very afraid… Mufufufu…

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    VIII


    “It’s evening Yamaguchi-san…” The driver seemed concerned. “I thought you didn’t want to be out at-“

    “This is necessary.” Her reply was stern yet soft spoken as she opened the car door and stepped out. One hand on the hilt of her shinai she scanned the dark spots of the surroundings. For a moment she thought she saw yellow eyes, but when she blinked, they were gone.

    Wary of me are we?’ Katsumi didn’t show much emotion, only a small, nearly invisible smirk appeared on her lips. ‘There were so many of you… Yet none succeeded in the task of taking my life…’ She moved forward, towards the quaint little house on the corner, heels clicking on the stone walkway. ‘The only worthy opponent wasn’t after me…’ Her mind drifted back to the leader of the monsters, a creature that seemed solely focused on Saito-san. ‘Pity…

    Her arm throbbed with pain as she knocked on the door, ignoring her father’s orders not to use the wounded limb. It would get better with time, she imagined. If she didn’t use it, than her pain tolerance would lower, and that was not the sort of thing she wanted. When Katsumi was attacked, whether she was wounded or not, she wanted to be able to fight back.

    Besides, it was just a scratch.

    The door opened, and homeowner blinked.

    “Yamaguchi-san?” Hajime asked, pausing in confusion. “Is something the matter?”

    “No doctor.” Her mere presence made him back up as she moved into the house, eyes taking everything in quickly. “Just visiting.”

    The doctor was quiet, and pushed his glasses back up as he shut the door. His eyes immediately spotted the bandaging on her arm and he found himself frowning.

    “What happened?” He questioned with concern.

    “Conflict of interest.”

    The girl in the dark uniform slipped off her shoes and moved into the hallway, looking at family photographs and the occasional one packed with friends. All in the entire house was nice and kept very clean for a man with a busy career. From what she heard, he rarely left early or took days off, but he had taken one recently which had sparked her interest about the usually normal acting doctor.

    “Dr. Suzuki mentioned that you asked about an American visitor from a while back,” Her tone was cool and didn’t give any hint of curiosity.

    Dr. Kariya nodded. “Yes, I was curious about his work.”

    Katsumi, who had made her way to the living room, was playing with a small crystal ornament when she heard that reply. It made her stop her action and look at him inquisitively.

    “Oh?” Her eyes narrowed a tad. “I was told he was a ‘nutjob’…”

    “No doubt.” Hajime commented, moving into the room. “But it may have some relevance.”

    “Too?”

    “Too the blackening phenomena.” Hajime raised an eyebrow. “Forgive me Yamaguchi-san, but why are you asking about this?”

    She smiled and walked up to him, hands on her hips, she was mere inches from him. “Curiousity.”

    “… Right.”

    With that she moved away, the emotion draining from her face and her posture going back to strong and defined. “Did you find out anything about the blackening?”

    “It’s rather fascinating actually.”

    “How so?” She sat down in a chair as he began.

    “Well, the samples I took from Ryou Saito have blackened everything under the epidermal layer.”

    She hid her concern well, but she couldn’t help but glance at her own wound.

    “I attempted to put it on cold storage, but it failed to affect the darkened tissue. It actually grew.”

    That concern was growing into a slight fear now. Could the dark tissue in her be growing?

    “I decided to see if it was weak against fire, as most things are anyways…” He frowned, sitting in one of the other chairs with a far-off look in his eyes. “But it didn’t work, the fire burnt the dying skin, but the rest was unaffected.”

    “Did it do anything?”

    “Nothing.” Hajime shrugged, and played with the cuff of his sleeve a bit. “The fire didn’t affect it in the least.”

    “How can something be resilient to fire?”

    “Not resilient Yamaguchi-san, but immune.”

    She closed her eyes. “Immune…”

    “I tried different things: blasts of wind, dunking the samples in water, alcohol, oil… I think it was even electrocuted when some of my equipment shorted… But it’s still ‘alive’ per say.”

    “You don’t think its living tissue?” Her eyes opened again.

    “Not our definition of living…” He stood up, and motioned her to follow. “Our definition includes the ability to die, to have a weakness, the only things that don’t are-“

    “Gods.” Katsumi said the word with a tone that sounded as if she were worried.

    “Gods… Angels… Demons…” He flicked on the light and the woman found herself in a science room, filled with odd contraptions and a small fridge in the corner. “Here…” He opened the fridge door and pulled out an object.

    It was about the size of a fist, completely black, and was oddly squishy. It was cool to the point of being unnatural, and made her spine tingle.

    I shouldn’t touch it…’ She thought, keeping a fair distance between it and her. “What is it?”

    “It’s the tissue.” He put it on the counter and it seemed to stop moving in the light. “It doesn’t grow in the light though, only in the darkness of the fridge.”

    It doesn’t die in the light either…’ Katsum’s grip on her shinai tightened. “Is it dangerous?”

    He looked at the thing. “No it’s-“

    “I meant to those cut. You said this was the tissue from Ryou’s wound.”

    “Oh.” Hajime shook his head. “No, it seems that a living organism can fight it off like they do an infection or cold.”

    “How do you know?”

    “Saito-san’s wounds are healing normally, and the darkening is fading.”

    That was an incredibly relief. And as quickly as she appeared in the room, Katsumi pivoted on her heel and left. She heard Hajime open and then close the fridge before catching her as she was putting on her shoes.

    “Yamaguchi-san wait!” He called as he slid to a stop behind her. “What’s going on? Why are you so interested in-“

    “I was just curious doctor.” She opened the front door, and both heard the car engine start. “Be careful though, you’re the best at Traverse Central, it’d be a shame if something happened to you.”

    He wasn’t sure if that was concern, a threat or just a comment. Either way, he watched her leave and let out a long sigh. Things were getting far too complicated; maybe it was better if he just got rid of the samples, instead of continuing his work.


    * * *


    “Is this Saito-kun?”

    The man blinked, baffled, he didn’t exactly have time to figure out who he was talking too, especially as he heard his mother move past the room towards no doubt his.

    “Who are you?” He began, looking around the room desperately.

    “Nii-san,” Ai whispered. “She’s gonna check in here!”

    “We’re her friends, Ayome Hamada and Kana Iyanari!”

    Briefly he thought that there was no way Karen would allow them to call him, so that meant they had stolen the phone. But he didn’t have time to think about it, he could hear his mother coming back, and if he got outright caught, Ai would get in trouble as well. His goal in all of this wasn’t to get in another shouting match. But she would check this entire room and…

    Ryou’s eyes drifted over to the window.

    “I gotta go bye.” He hung up the phone and dashed over to the glass barrier. Roughly he opened up the frame as the doorknob began to turn.

    The man faltered briefly, seeing the darkness of the alleyway between houses again.

    Monsters or Mother… Monsters… Mother… Monsters… Mother…

    “Ryou?!”

    Monsters.

    He fell down to the gravel side path and collided with the ground. He groaned, his body not appreciating what he was doing in the slightest. The man nervously glanced up to the window and scrambled as he saw his mother’s head pop out. Ryou’s mad dash for safety had him leap clear over the small garden he had been able to maneuver around earlier, and keep running until he was safely back at the parking lot.

    The pain that had seemed weak at the initial landing became infinitely stronger. He cringed, sitting down next to his car and as he clenched his jaw while his chest and back pounded.

    There Ryou waited until he saw a familiar woman in a pretty dress come around the path corner. She raised an eyebrow at him, tilting her head as she neared and pointed to his arm.

    “Is your arm okay?”

    He looked down at it, and frowned.

    It was bleeding.

    “Oh… Yeah.” He shrugged. “I jumped out a window, probably hurt it when I landed.”

    Hotaru-san frowned and knelt down next to him, inspecting the wound carefully. “You should try to land with more grace.”

    “Oh my landing was full of grace.” The man replied with a smirk. “Grace and tact… I was like a bird.”

    Really…” She looked up at him with those bright green eyes. “What sort of bird?”

    “An Eagle.” He sort of puffed his chest out proudly before wincing at the pain and slumping again.

    “Eagle huh?” She giggled.

    “Yeah, with an anchor on it.”

    She laughed, and by accident pressed on the wound. He hissed, biting his lip.

    “Oh… Sorry.”

    “It’s fine.” Slowly he stood, and helped her to her feet. “I’m used to being tortured.”

    “I don’t doubt that.”

    He looked over his shoulder and gave her a big grin before unlocking the car. “I should get you home before its dark.”

    Birgitte got into the car shortly after he did, and as she shut the door she looked over at him. “Where will you go? You’re not welcome at home.”

    Really?” He threw back at her, causing her to roll her eyes. “I’ll be fine.”

    She frowned. “Come over for dinner then.”

    He looked over at her. “Why?”

    “Because you need to eat Ryou, and if you’re gonna wander around all night the least I can do is feed you.”

    “Alright.” Ryou agreed, shrugging. “But I’m not really hungry.”


    In some twist of fate, Birgitte had not only convinced Ryou to have dinner, but then used her sly words to get him to agree to stay in the guest room. The man didn’t know what to think, for the time being, it would seem he had moved in with his friend. He didn’t mind, she wasn’t like his demonic mother but it felt sort of odd, especially when she had helped him move his bags (or rather, watched as he grabbed the two bags in the trunk of his car and brought them in).

    But that didn’t matter now, right now he was tired. It was one in the morning and still he hadn't fallen asleep.

    Argh…’ He thought, turning over. ‘Let me sleep… God just knock me unconscious with a divine thunderbolt and I’ll be happy.’

    The problem was Ryou could not shake the feeling of something being wrong. He had the key; both he and Hotaru-san had agreed that they would open it in the morning, so everything should’ve been fine.

    But it wasn’t.

    There was a constant shiver between his shoulder blades, and a tingle shooting up and down his spine. He knew the feeling had to do with the monsters; it always came when they were around. But the door was glowing, effectively making the hallway off limits, and he had a light on in here, as did Birgitte in her own room.

    Ryou sat up, glaring at the tiny dark spots in the corners of his room. “Will you just piss off and let me sleep? Kill me tomorrow night.”

    The feeling didn’t vanish, but eventually, after another good twenty minutes of staring out the window…

    He fell asleep.


    * * *


    It was dissatisfied.

    One and only one of these humans had held a heart worth seeking. It shone like the stars in the sky, so beautiful in the expanding darkness. It had felt its pulse, and watched it keenly as it ceased to exist any longer. The other two hearts had been nothing more than a waste of time; this was something that annoyed it.

    It could wait though, patience it had mastered and eventually it’s toiling would pay off. It was certain of this; eventually it would grow more cunning, able to sense the differences between the hearts. That’s all it wanted, the rest could go on living as far as it was concerned.

    Soon I will have to move…’ It thought, and if it could frown, it would’ve been. Moving was a hassle, and if it did not pick a spot that was adequate to its need in the small time allotted, the sun would rise and it would burn. That wasn’t a pleasant thought, and while it could take the rays of the dying sun, a newly risen one was something it wouldn’t be able to stand for long.

    “I’m on my way home right now.”

    It froze, through the darkness of the trail came a human. He was larger than the others it had taken, and if it perceived his voice correctly, he was an irritated human.

    Much too distracted to notice me…’ The creature thought happily, shifting its position lower, if it had been daytime, it would’ve been in clear view.

    “I’m sorry; I had to work late…” It watched curiously as he wiped a red smear from his cheek. “I’m almost home; I’m cutting through the woods.”

    The human had the scent of a female on him, this wasn’t so odd, many males had such personal female smells from time to time, but most had been accompanied by the said female.

    “I’m just under the-“

    He screamed and the device, the creature believed it was called a ‘phone’, dropped to the ground as the flailing human was pulled upwards. He was much stronger than the creature had imagined, which was something it enjoyed. The others it had taken, they had squirmed lightly and had no strength. This male was a far better prize, even if he shrieks were somewhat painful to listen to.

    It silenced him quickly, but didn’t kill him.

    It liked to watch the prey struggle during the daylight hours, as so many of its own kind passed below, oblivious to the horror he was going through.

    So for now, the creature repositioned itself once the man was secure, waiting for another victim.


    * * *


    Terrified, Ryou awoke.

    He was sitting up in his bed, trying to get the blurring images of some random passerby being tugged up into the darkness by some thing out of his mind. He panted heavily, he was used to nightmares, but that had been different. It had felt different, almost real in a sense. His skin crawled at the fading memory and as his nerves calmed, he slumped back down, crimson eyes focused on the ceiling.

    “I just want to sleep…” He groaned, looking over at the clock on the table.


    [3:01 AM]


    “Joy…” Ryou muttered, turning over. “I slept for a whole two hours…” Slowly his eyes began to feel heavy once again, and the dream realm seemed close.

    Until a ringtone blasted into the near silent room.

    He was near the point of cursing as he reached blindly over to the table and grasped the cell roughly. When he saw who was calling, he didn’t know whether to be irritated, surprised or amused.

    Ryou decided irritation was the way to go.

    “I swear to God, if you’re not dying, I’m hanging up…” The man sounded particularly groggy.

    “I’m s-sorry! Did I w-wake you?” Karen’s voice fluttered into his ears, and he smiled slightly.

    “It’s 3 AM Karen…”

    She chuckled nervously. “C-couldn’t sleep?”

    “She wanted to hear your voice!” Ryou recognized that giddy voice, though he wasn’t sure which one it was.

    “Ayome shut up!”

    That answers that then, and he found himself rolling over so his head was buried in the pillow. “Dear God there’s more of you…”

    “I’d share my tongue with you!”

    Ryou sat up a bit, taking the phone away from his ear and looking at it strangely. Blinking he brought it back to his ear. “Are they drunk?”

    “No! Well… Y-Yuki maybe… I-I’m sorry for calling…” She sounded almost terrified. “They t-told me too-“

    He rolled his eyes at the excuse. “Are you drunk?”

    “What!?” Karen sounded shocked. “No!”

    He smirked. “So, you call me at 3 AM in your right state of mind?”

    “W-Well…” She floundered. “Y-Yes I-“

    “You’re insane.” He rolled onto his back as he heard the other girls giggle and could almost see Karen blushing.

    “I’m not!” She huffed.

    Oh… Struck a chord there…’ His smirk grew larger. “So you’re drunk.”

    “Ryou!”

    First time she’s used my name without being scared.’ The man noted, stretched a bit. “Hey it’s one or the other, pick.”

    There was a moment of consideration.

    “Sugar high?”

    “Oh Christ that’s worse…” He heard her giggle, as did the others.

    He could just hear the conversation on the other end.

    “See Karen? It’s not that bad to call a guy.”

    “Yuki its t-three…”

    “Well he was awake!” Came Ayome again. “So it’s not like you woke him.”

    “B-but-“

    “Do you want to go out?” Ryou interrupted the bickering. He could hear the others go on, oblivious to what he had just asked, but Karen had fallen silent.

    “P-Pardon?”

    “Alright, I probably explained the concept of this before…”

    “Y-you…” Her voice was beyond shaky. “You want to s-see me again?”

    “Unless you want me to take out one of your friends.”

    “N-No!”

    He smiled. “Don’t like sharing?”

    “W-what?” Karen was struggling again. “N-no but-“

    Ryou laughed, she was far too easy to play with sometimes.

    “Y-you’re picking on m-me…” She sounded embarrassed.

    “That I am.”

    There was a silence between them as she mulled things over, Ryou was patient, surprisingly. He lied on the bed, staring up at the ceiling with a small, but true smile on his face.

    “Y-you really want t-to take me out a-again?”

    He decided he shouldn’t play anymore, she sounded vulnerable at that exact moment. “Yes.”

    Her voice was suddenly a lot lighter and happier as he heard the other girls squeal. “O-okay!”

    The man held back a yawn. “Right so… When are you free?”

    “She’s free right now!”

    “Yeah Ryou! Come take her for a ride-“

    He broke out laughing, as did the other girls.

    K-Kana! Yuki! S-SHUSH!” She sounded rather annoyed, but he could just pick up on amusement in her voice. “Um… Tomorrow I’m busy…”

    “Oh?”

    “My p-parents are taking me out for a b-belated birthday gift.”

    “Awesome.”

    She sounded joyful. “It is!” The girl paused as she thought. “How about the next day?”

    “Alright.” The man yawned, unable to hold it back any longer. His eyes were growing heavy again.

    “D-did I wake y-you up?”

    No…’ He thought. “Yeah.”

    “Ooh… I’m sorry.”

    Ryou smirked, a devious plan entering his mind. “Well I guess you’ll just have to make it up to me on the date eh?”

    “I… Uh… Um… I-I…”

    His mind saw her cherry-red face perfectly, looking so intimidated by those words. He managed to hold in his laughter.

    “I-I guess…” She sounded scared stiff as she spoke.

    “Right…” He rolled over, facing the doorway. “Not to cut this short… But I’m going to fall asleep on the phone…”

    “O-okay… Good night.”

    “Night Karen.”

    As he flipped the phone shut, he started to snicker, that had been far too amusing. The dream realm came back quickly, and distantly in the back of his mind he thought of something.

    … I have to get her another bear.


    * * *


    “How did you sleep?”

    Birgitte asked the questioned, but as she watched the groggy Ryou yawn and nearly spill his orange juice on his white and black striped shirt, it was evident that he hadn’t sleep much, let alone well. Ryou shrugged; his typical answer for anything and everything that didn’t warrant a sarcastic or cocky remark. She tilted her head at the small smirk now on his face.

    “What’s up?”

    “I got a date.”

    She blinked. “How did-“

    “She called at 3 AM.”

    Hotaru-san was lost now. “Naomi?”

    “What?” Ryou looked up, confused for a second. “Oh, no…”

    “So then who…?”

    “Karen.”

    “Karen…”

    He nodded and took another sip, smirk still there.

    “So what’s so funny about it?”

    He shrugged again and yawned, putting the drink down, his expression change to boredom. “Nothing… Nevermind.”

    “So…” Birgitte looked over at the door. “Where’s the key?”

    Ryou reached into his jean pocket and tossed the key onto the coffee table. The woman picked it up gently, analyzing it meticulously. She couldn’t note anything really important about it, it was old, had the symbol, that’s all there was too it.

    “I can’t believe you jumped out a window for this…” She thought out loud, causing Ryou to roll his eyes as she put it back down on the table.

    “I’d take the monsters over my mother any day.”

    She smiled a bit. “She’s that bad?”

    He nodded grimly.

    “Wow…”

    Both of them stared at the key, not knowing what to do. Was it wise to open the door? Maybe they would just let more of them in, and that beach sound they heard was nothing more than a trick to try and get here, to earth, from wherever to door led. Perhaps they should just board it up and never take a second look at it, to forget it even existed.

    But there was that chance, that slim hope that it held behind it, something else. It didn’t matter what really, maybe a paradise, maybe a clue on how to defeat the monsters that were running lose Traverse City.

    Could it really be worse than here?’ He thought, trying to reason things. ‘Chances are it’s linked to the monsters… Not to some other doom. It glows, hinting that it should be hiding something from them, not us… A glowing door that randomly appears isn’t exactly subtle.’ Ryou was still wary, he didn’t know exactly where his sister got the key from, she could be lying. There was also that annoying feeling that something was wrong, but he didn’t know if it was about the door.

    “The morning sun is bright…” Hotaru-san stated, as if sensing his fears. “I’m sure that the monsters, if they on the other side, can’t face it. That will give us enough time to shut the door again and lock it.”

    “True..” The man noted, and stood up as she scooped up the key.

    The door seemed like an impossible barrier now; both of them could hear the water and feel the slight breeze. Ryou gritted his teeth, and nodded to Birgitte to unlock it. He would stand in front of it, meaning if anything did jump out to kill them, it would get him and not his friend.

    Aren’t you the knight in shining armour?’ Came a mocking tone in his head, he ignored his own thoughts.

    Birgitte took a deep breath; she wiped her sweaty palms on her jeans and drew the key from her pocket. The woman’s hand was unnaturally steady for being so nervous, Ryou noted. The old piece of metal slid into the lock perfectly, no resistance or forcing.

    This was it.

    “Maybe…” She gulped. “Maybe we shouldn’t…”

    Ryou shot a look over to her. “Why not?”

    “Well… If… If it’s them, they might grab you.”

    The man stared at the door, body stiff as a board. “I’ll be fine.”

    “Ryou-“

    “Open it.” He ordered.

    Birgitte closed her eyes, and turned the key. There was a soft click and the handle wobbled as it was now free to turn. Now her hand was shaking, as she released the key and grasped the handle, pushing it downwards before pulling the door open.

    It groaned as if it hadn’t been opened in centuries.
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    Another good chapter although it was more of a bridging chapter than an actual one (that's not an insult it's a comment. The occasional bridging chapter is fine). It's nice to see things developing with Katsumi and the mysterious black cells. Will science give us the weaknesses of the heartless? I assume the black cells are what comprise a heartless' physical structure but I could be wrong.

    I thought that the almost discovery of Ryou needed a bit more suspense. There was a lot at the end of the last chapter but it was lost in the space between the posting of this latest installment so it needed more build up to really make things exciting. But other than that I liked it.

    Karen's friends...how I love those girls. And the conversation between her and Ryou (with accompanying background comments) was hilarious. I have to say that I absolutely loved this little bit:
    “She wanted to hear your voice!” Ryou recognized that giddy voice, though he wasn’t sure which one it was.

    “Ayome shut up!”

    That answers that then, and he found himself rolling over so his head was buried in the pillow. “Dear God there’s more of you…”

    “I’d share my tongue with you!”

    Ryou sat up a bit, taking the phone away from his ear and looking at it strangely. Blinking he brought it back to his ear. “Are they drunk?”

    “No! Well… Y-Yuki maybe… I-I’m sorry for calling…” She sounded almost terrified. “They t-told me too-“

    Hehehe...

    There were a few grammar mistakes. Mostly words finishing in 'ly' or 'ed' when they shouldn't. The one I would really pick out though is:
    It was one in the morning and still he had fallen asleep. <---- It should be "hadn't". And personally I think it would read better as: "and he still hadn't fallen asleep" but that's just me being picky.

    One other little whine (please don't hate me for them, I'm trying to help) is a slight overuse of adverbs (those words that end in 'ly'). As my teachers are always complaining to me "make the verb active".

    But other than that, really good chapter. I like it a lot!

    And ffs...ANOTHER cliffhanger?
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    Yaaaaaaaaay! More Kat-chan! Oh dear, is she flirting with the doctor? Bad girl! You're jailbait at the moment! These black cells can resist anything but light! But has he tried autoclaving them?

    I loved it when he was trying to make up his mind and decided to jump out the window instead of dealing with his mommy. "Monsters, mother, monsters, mother..." MONSTERS!

    Oh boy Karen, you naughty girl. Did you and your silly friends stay up too late playing Truth or Dare? Sharing your tongue with a boy is srs bizniz! And Ryou, stop playing with innocent girls' hearts! You're not all good yourself! Then again, you're being bait for Birgitte, good for you!

    Moar pls?

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    Samchu: I like how it cut to the chase, I think the suspense in the last chapter did enough that I didn't need it for this one.

    Grammar mistakes and what-not are what happen when almost everybody who reads this fic tell me to hurry up and post it XP

    I did fix the hadn't after I read your comment, so it's not a problem anymore. I'll consider your adverb note for the following chapters, thank you~


    Yes... That would be a cliff hanger XD ♥

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    That chapter had its cute moments. I just don't want Ryou to have to deal with more than one of his girlfriends at the same time, or someone's hair is going to fly.
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    Classy_cat18: Oh lord… That would be bad… But seeing as none of them are his girlfriend(s?), he technically can’t get in trouble ♥

    Ah, the little details that save lives XD

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    IX

    She dropped the silver coin into the wishing well, watching the ripples of the pool dance off the curved walls of its container. The breeze here was cool; it drifted through the town so gently, playing with her hair of the darkest nights. Today was a good day, the suns were shining and soon the parade would make its way to the square and the festival would begin.

    “Dare to dream little rose,” She whispered at the small pink coloured flower gliding over from the square’s gardenr. It spun slowly, its sweet scent reminding her of the most beautiful of days. “There is no darkness here; Svyn is safe from the horror of ten years past.”

    That memory was a distant one. Hours later as the festivities begun to calm and people chose to head home, the cool wind turned bitter. The nighttime sky lost its magic, one by one; the sky began to lose its stars under a blanket of everlasting darkness. Only one remained, one perfect little speck of silver light, sparkling and shining through the horror now unleashed on the town.


    I am salvation.

    So many people were dying as the girl with the midnight coloured hair ran. She ran all the way to the neighbouring city, desperate for the one man that could set this right again. The girl collapsed on her knees before him and the others on the council.

    “It’s back!” She cried, tears flowing down her cheeks as they gathered. “The barrier did not last… It’s… The sky is turning dark…”

    The man who she trusted, her father, knelt beside her, concern in his eyes.

    “How many stars remain in the sky?”

    She sniffled. “One.”


    Time keeps passing, closer her mind draws to the present. The council of priests chose her to be the one to banish the darkness once again. It should’ve been an honour, something that she should do with pride.

    But it wasn’t.

    Sanya Halvacor had no wish to die, not even to save so many on her beloved planet. To give herself to the darkness that had returned far too early, it was terrifying. Her father, a firm believer in the cruel practice had been torn in two. He had no wish to sacrifice his beautiful daughter to the evil that was now consuming their world. He came to the conclusion there was only one way to save her.

    Desperate times call for desperate measures.


    Years have passed little girl, but where have you ran?

    She banged on the wall as the darkness moved closer, the present was horrible. She wanted to go back, back to before all this. She was stuck in the absolute worst place; a void. She watched the portal behind her fade away as she furiously tried to move forward. Sanya didn’t want to die, she wanted to run. Run as fast as she could out of this space between, this confusing, dizzying mess of nothing and everything.

    She could hear something.

    “Well… if… If it’s them, they might grab you.”

    The voice was tiny but it was there, muffled as it were on the other side of this impenetrable wall. Sanya didn’t even understand the words, if whatever it was spoke with words.

    To the last star in the sky, a world that will not welcome you.


    It’s not darkness…’ She thought desperately, kicking and flailing as she felt something wrap around her arms. ‘It’s not-

    “I’ll be fine.”

    “Ryou-“


    “Please!” She cried, hoping to the Gods they could hear her. “Help me!”

    It grasped her legs now; she was beginning dragged away from the unseen barricade. Her heart ached, pounding as fast as it could to try and give her the strength to escape.

    “Open it.”

    The wall gave way to a brilliant light beyond her mind’s comprehension. She could feel it wither, its cries ugly and terrible as it retreated. Her body fell forward feeling tired and heavy after such a struggle.

    “What the!?”

    She felt someone catch her; and then she heard the person’s heart beating steadily.

    “You’re not them…” Sanya whispered, eyes fluttering close. “You’re alive.”


    Ryou blinked, dumbfounded as a woman collapsed into his arms. Of all the things he thought were going to pop out of the doorway, this was definitely not one of them. He stood there as Hotaru-san stared at the girl now held in his grasp. Slowly his eyes travelled from her to the world behind the door. The man thought maybe he saw the beach Birgitte was hoping for, but as quickly as it was there, it vanished.

    “Who is-“

    “I have no idea…” Ryou answered, though both knew the question and the answer were unnecessary. Gently he shifted her weight so he could get one arm on her back and the other underneath his legs, plucking the woman off the floor.

    She had odd coloured hair; it was the blackest of blacks, with bright aqua bangs. Her skin was like the moonlight, a beautiful sort of pale, though wholly unnatural here on Earth. Ryou raised an eyebrow at her clothing, an odd sort of mixture of black and blue robes, making her appear as if she stepped out of the wrong century.

    “She’s cold…” He noted, as Birgitte rushed over with a blanket. “Like she’s been standing out in the snow…”

    His friend frowned, biting her lip as she thought. “I could call a doctor…”

    The man snorted. “What will you tell him? ‘Come help the girl that fell into my living room’?”

    “Well… He’d certainly get over here quick.”

    There was an abrupt banging on the door that made Hotaru-san jump and Ryou look over suspiciously.

    “.. Not that quick.”

    “Hey!” Came the voice on the other side. “Don’t open it!”

    They looked at each other and then back at the front door.

    “Damn it! Are you home?! Don’t open the spiral door!”


    * * *


    She felt cold.

    But it wasn’t a natural cold, no, it was foreign. A different sort of sensation she wasn’t familiar with. She could feel the ground below her, the subtle textures in each of the tiles. They were gritty and felt wet, signaling that wherever she was, was damp. But everything was different, it didn’t hold the same meaning, it almost felt empty of whatever it was it had possessed before this moment.

    What had happened to her?

    Sara Bailey didn’t remember.

    What she did remember was vague visions of walking, but it wasn’t by choice. It was as if something had attached a chain to her very soul. It had made her walk here, day and night, wearing nothing but a loose, white gown giving to the sick in the hospital.

    It had been so cold…’ She noted, her eyes snapping open. There was a pulse here; it was dark and powerful, throbbing every second. It was sort of calming in that respect, as if it was telling her not to panic. ‘I’m still cold.

    Frigid, frosty, freezing… No word seemed adequate for what she was experiencing, just ‘cold’.

    Fear took over suddenly, as a blurry memory came to the surface of her mind.

    She had died.

    “Oh…” She tried to speak but it was hard, her throat was practically arid. Her skin felt like plastic, her lungs didn’t inhale automatically, and eyes so very dry. “God…” It was the harshest whisper she had ever made.

    Her surroundings were alien, nearly pitch-black with no real light reaching this place, with strange growth on the dripping walls that pulsed with the throbbing that kept her from running away.


    I will make you whole again.

    The voice, it was soothing. Cool like water washing over your body after a hard day’s work. Upon hearing it her eyes felt perfect again, and her thirst was quenched, soothing her throat.

    You are not the only one needing a heart.

    Needing a heart?’ She thought, confused.

    Then she came to realize something.

    Her heart, it wasn’t beating. As her eyes looked down at her chest, and hand tore away the paper shirt, she found herself staring at a hole. A grotesque wound with her ribs bent outwards and heart completely missing.

    “W-What?”

    Do not fret child.

    Again that father-like voice interrupted her oncoming panic; it was as if she wanted to believe it. No matter how abnormal any of this was, as long as she heard that voice, everything was okay. She even managed to stay calm as creatures that seemed remotely familiar melded out of the walls and floor, large humanoids with dark bodies almost invisible in such a poorly light area.

    They’re yellow eyes stared at her with curiousity.

    Together we will open the door and take back what is rightfully ours.

    “What door?” She questioned, brushing some of her hair from her face. “What are you?” The dead woman paused, watching as one of the monsters dumped a pile of clothing in front of her. “What are they?”

    We are the damned. Voices spoke in unison.

    “Am I a-“

    No. You are not us.

    They sounded so sure but unless she was hallucinating, which was a good possibility at this point, she was here in this hell hole as well. Sara was left confused, she wanted answers.

    “What am I?”

    There was a deep, rumbling laughter as the voice spoke once again.

    You were somebody,

    Now you’re nobody.



    * * *


    “Listen I can’t explain just-“

    Ryou had the strange man up against the wall. He hadn’t been fast enough to stop Birgitte from opening the front door, but he had been quick enough to catch the man and stop him from moving any farther inside. The man was dressed in business attire, though it still retained that ‘young man’ charm of being a little baggy and having a striped tie.

    Whoever he was struggled against Ryou’s hold, but was failing in getting free. For a split second he got off the wall, before the fiery one slammed him back into it, making him groan.

    “How do you know about the door?” Ryou growled, slamming his arm into the intruder’s abdomen. He wheezed, stopping his attempt at escaping.

    “I…” He coughed, gasping as the air had been knocked out of his lungs. “I’ve seen… it…”

    Birgitte was standing beside them now, lost on what to do. “What do you mean?”

    The man looked over at Hotaru-san. “Please…” His eyes then went to Ryou’s. “I don’t… Mean any harm…Really…”

    Reluctantly Ryou let him go (half because of the glare Hotaru-san was giving him), not pleased with the idea at all. Birgitte bit her lip as the stranger took a couple of deep breaths, recovering from the blow. She moved towards him and put a hand on his shoulder as her angry friend moved back towards the girl on the couch.

    “Are you okay?”

    “Heh…” He chuckled a bit, wincing a bit as he straightened up. “He hits hard…”

    “Yes…” She shot a look over at Ryou, who seemed to ignore it. “I imagine he does.”

    There was a creaking noise and their attention was drawn to the spiral door. It was swinging on its own, back and forth before finally slamming shut. Ryou neared it as the key slowly turned back, locking it once again and falling to the ground as some unseen force pushed it out of the keyhole. All of them stood in silence as the door vanished, only leaving the carving of the spiral in the wall; the rest appeared to be as if the door was never there in the first place.

    “Who are you?” Ryou spoke, the edge to his voice undeniable as he took the key.

    “Masato…” The man replied, watching the other pick up the key. “Masato Nagano.”

    “I’m Birgitte Hotaru.” She bowed politely. “And that charming fellow is Ryou Saito.”

    “Saito?” He looked over at Ryou, who looked disinterested in the topic at hand. “Do you happen to be the son of Noboru Saito?”

    Ryou shrugged. “Yes, that would be me.”

    “Oh..”

    He looked over, a smirk on his lips. “That disappointing?”

    Masato didn’t know how to reply. “No, I didn’t mean it that way-“

    “Z-znihi el U…?” Ryou looked over in quiet interest, the woman was awake. Well sort of, her eyes were just barely open, and they were the brightest of blues he had ever seen. “E-El U... M-mewi?”

    “Oh that’s great…” He grumbled, looking over at the other two. “She speaks another language.”

    “What were the chances of her knowing Japanese?”

    “About the same as her falling out of a doorway to nowhere.” He remarked. “And that happened.”

    “Where did she come from?” Masato questioned, interrupting the bickering duo.

    “From behind the door.” Hotaru-san answered as she moved over to the girl.

    "Cuknd...." She smiled lightly as her eyes drifted shut again. "U zemr'd.... T-thielurk..."

    Thielurk to you too…’ Ryou mused, moving away as he thought to himself. “You said you’d seen it…” He swiveled around to face the man, who stared back questioningly. “What did you mean?”

    Masato blinked. “Oh… Um… Well an artist painted a picture of it.”

    “The door?”

    He nodded. “Yes, an old wooden door with a spiral carved into it.”

    “That’s weird…” The woman noted from behind, and moved into the hallway. “Hold that thought, I’ll be back.”

    “Why did it grab your attention?”

    Now he was faltering, he didn’t know if he should tell Ryou or not. But it only seemed fair; he had come barging into their house (he assumed it was their house), yelling at them to not open the door. Now that he thought about it, Masato realized he had been quite rude about the whole thing.

    But what Mika had told him…

    “I have one.” He finally answered, and he could see the disbelief filtering into Ryou’s face. “It doesn’t have a spiral on it though.”

    “Just what does it have?”

    “A crown.”

    “Pardon?” Birgitte interrupted, coming back with a hot water bottle for the other girl. “A crown?”

    “His door.” Ryou gestured to Masato. “It has a crown on it.”

    “Really?” She looked at the two boys. “Do you think it has another person behind it?”

    “I… Don’t know.” The man sighed, deciding honesty was better. “I suppose it’s possible, but there might be something else behind it for all I know.” He paused and looked at the two again. “What did it look like? Behind the door?”

    Birgitte quickly moved to get the bottle set up, leaving Ryou to answer.

    “It was dark.” He remembered how that other world just seemed to dissolve into the darkness. “There was another world at the other end I think, but it disappeared in the darkness.”

    Masato looked at the floor. “Oh…”

    “You don’t think…” Hotaru-san began but stopped, leaving the incomplete question hanging in the air. “T-that…”

    No one dared answer; Ryou didn’t want to tell her what he thought. His mind had already come to the conclusion that the woman who had fallen into him had lost her home. It was a sad state, but it was also sort of intriguing.

    If it was the same darkness as the monsters here, it meant that other… Places,’ he supposed, ‘face the same challenge as Earth does.

    It was comforting to think you weren’t alone in a challenge, that others are fighting the same problem. Of course what he saw was probably the horrible price for losing the battle. All that you held dear would be gone; they wouldn’t stop until the entire planet was in darkness.

    He frowned. ‘A bit cliché…

    “So how exactly did you know the door was here?”

    Birgitte and Masato looked at Ryou, who was staring coldly at the other man. Masato didn’t falter, but his opponent certainly had the intense stare that his father often glared at people with. What was odd was the crimson eyes, they almost seemed to burn with anger, though the businessman wasn’t sure if it was directed at him or nothing in particular.

    “It’s a bit of a story...”

    “That’s alright.” Ryou smirked and sat down in one of the chairs. “I have time.”

    “Saito-san.” The girl hissed, and glanced back at her guest. “You don’t have to tell us… I just want to know why you warned us.”

    The man shrugged it off. “It doesn’t matter now…” He looked at the sleeping girl with a smile. Ryou just rolled his eyes and allowed his expression to go back to boredom; Hotaru-san disappeared into what appeared to be the kitchen.

    As Masato went to slip off his shoes (realizing only after all the excitement he had left them, on much to his shame), he kept thinking back to Mika and what she had said.

    She sounded so sure…’ He looked over at the spiral on the wall. ‘But she was wrong… A girl came out of the door not-

    “Are you hungry Nagano-san?” He turned back with a cheerful smile on his face, quickly brushing some of his bangs from his face. Birgitte seemed to appreciate the smile as she held in her hands a tray of delicious looking cookies. “They’re fresh, do you want some?”

    “Oh yes please.” The man grinned and ignored the snort from Ryou. “And please, call me Masa.”

    Birgitte smiled and a hint of blush appeared on her cheeks. “If you’re sure…”

    “Positive.”

    “Right…” Ryou stood as they sat down, quickly snatching a cookie from the tray. “I’ll take my leave.”

    “Ryou you don’t have to-“

    “Listen…” He growled, and Masato found himself frowning as another sharp look was shot towards him for an instant. “I don’t have time to sit here and babysit a girl who literally just came out of the closet with you and some clown from the Organization.”

    Birgitte looked confused and turned to look at her new friend, who seemed to absorb the insult with ease. Ryou either didn’t notice or didn’t care, he was across the room and putting on his shoes by the time she turned around to see him. She left her seat and caught him at the door, grabbing a hold of his arm as he was halfway out.

    “Saito-san… I didn’t mean to upset you.”

    Ryou eyed her warily before he replied.

    “It’s not you.”

    The woman looked back into her apartment at Masato. “What’s wrong with him?”

    “He works for my father.” Ryou grumbled. “That’s enough of a reason to hate him.”

    “Shouldn’t you wait until he does something to warrant your hatred?”

    “No.” His reply was much stronger than he intended, and he ignored what else she had to say about it. “I’m rather good at hating people for no reason,” the man tugged his arm free. “And that’s not going to change.”

    The woman rolled her eyes moved back inside. “Just be careful Ryou, don’t go looking for trouble.”

    He rolled his eyes as she shut the door.

    This may come as a shock…’ He thought as he walked away, fiddling with the keychain. ‘But I don’t look for it; it just seems to find me.


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    Mika let out a steady sigh as she brushed the dust off her top. The backroom was always so dusty, with a stale smell and taste that was only appreciated by Ozu-san. He of course, was just as old and musty as this storage room and probably just as ‘organized’. The artist found herself thinking that maybe she should quit and move on, there were many collectors that appreciated her work, but because the old man seemed intent on ruining her.

    Tomorrow is my day off…’ She smiled lightly at the thought as she grabbed one of the heavier boxes and dragged it out, finding that a strip of packing tape barred her path to the supplies inside. ‘Maybe I’ll take a look around town for a place a little more hospitable.

    The woman reached into her pocket only to find that there was no knife. She didn’t let the emotion slip to her face but she was growing irritated.

    “Where did I…?” She questioned as she scanned the room and spotted it on a shelf across the room. “I’ve worked here for over a year, maybe sometime soon I’ll remember to put the thing in my-“

    There was a dull hum and suddenly the lights went out.

    “Ozu-san?” She called, looking around the darkness, waiting for her eyes to adjust.

    “It’s the damn box!” He yelled back. “I’ll fix just hold on…”

    She was left in silence, and slowly her eyes adapted to the severe lack of lighting in this backroom. Mika buried the nervousness in her gut, they weren’t here. They couldn’t be, it was broad daylight out and they had no way to get in. It wouldn’t make sense if they could get in here.

    But slowly that cold, creepy tingle crawled up her spine. It sat between her shoulder blades, sending a cool sensation up into her neck. It made rational thought harder, but she wouldn’t give into her fear, she had no reason too.

    They can’t get in here…’ She tried to calm herself, and move towards the knife to complete her task.

    Then she stopped, her mouth opening a bit as shock and confusion filtered onto her face.

    The knife was gone.

    But…’ Mika thought, running her hand on the smooth surface of the shelf. ‘I didn’t grab it, did I?

    The woman turned around and went to move back to the box. She might’ve grabbed it and put it with the box already, the lights flicking off could’ve distracted her.

    There was a clang in front of her and she looked down.

    Just in front of her toe was the knife, and all her assurances died with the sight of it.

    “Oh…” She gulped, her head rising to peer upwards even though something in her told her not too. Her eyes met two bright yellow ones belong to a cruel looking creature hanging from the ceiling fan. “No…”

    Mika took a step back and the thing dropped down in front of her. It rose to full height, towering above her before it back-handed her so hard it sent her flying to left, crashing into one of the metal shelves holding numerous other boxes. She scrambled, panicked gasps for air coming from her as her chest ached from the impact with the shelf.

    Up on her feet she ran for the door, grabbing the handle and desperately pulling on the door.

    Shit!” She cursed, looking over her shoulder as the monster moved closer. Helplessly she banged on the door. “Ozu-san!” She called. “Haru! Please, open the door!”

    It was near her again, its freezing grasp wrapped around her arm and tossed her carelessly behind. Mika crashed down on the cement floor, her body numbing the pain with adrenaline and forcing her to roll as the thing went to stomp on her face.

    “Mika?” There was a muffled voice from the door.

    “Haru!” She cried, tossing a box at the creature which it easily knocked out of the way. “Haru help me!”

    “What the hell are you doing?” He sounded more confused than angry. “Mika!?”

    It grabbed her, claws digging into her shoulder. The creature seemed to watch with glee as it stained her shirt a new reddish hue. The woman screamed, the pain turning into a mangled cry of horror. She could hear the door being slammed, but she had lost hope.

    No one was there to save me before...’ She thought dizzily, as she somehow got free only to be knocked down on her back. ‘No one will be here now.

    An image of her nightmares stood above her, gloating in its victory it pinned her with its foot, careful not to dig the claws to deep into her chest.

    There was a dull hum, and suddenly the lights were back on.

    Mika stared up in blurred astonishment as the creature appeared to be smoking. Wisps of darkness poured off of it as it lowered down to her, its hand barely managing to stay whole as it struggled to touch her skin. Its eyes were squinting, fighting with all its effort to stay in the light.

    “Get off her!”

    It was gone in a flash, the monstrous form knocked off of her by the grumpy old man and his trusty broom. It rolled across the floor, slowly getting up and looking at the man, who spun the cleaning tool before entering a battle stance. He looked completely different then, his angry exterior appeared more controlled and disciplined, like he was a soldier of some sort.

    The fiend stood up again, unable to fight the light any longer it moved back and melded into the wall.

    Ozu-san grunted, and then looked down at Mika. Immediately he dropped the broom and checked her pulse.

    Faint…’ He spoke it in his mind like it was a curse. “Damn it.” Gently he picked her up; it wasn’t safe to leave her back here as that thing could come back. In a hurry he moved her into the employee’s lounge and grabbed for the phone.

    “119 state your emergency.”

    “I need an ambulance at 358 Main Street.” He tried to stay calm. “One of my employees is badly hurt.”


    As the conversation went on, something watched from the shadows behind the fridge.

    We will get you seer of secrets… Its eyes narrowed at it began to fade away. Even with an old fool guarding you…

    We are the Heartless, and we will not lose.
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    *flails with joy*

    Holy crap, words cannot describe how much I loved this chapter! The first appearance of Sanya!! ^o^ Heeeeeee~~ I love it!

    And wow, so much going on in this chapter. Things are starting to come to light....so to speak.... o_o

    I'm curious to find out what happened to Sara Bailey. Very mysterious indeed.

    And poor Mika! T.T For once, Ryou isn't the one getting beaten up or slashed to ribbons. O_o I guess you finally DID give the guy a break.... XDD


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    Well. I didn't think you would include Nobodies in the fic, but there they are. I am even more intrigued than ever.

    And Ryou shows even more of his asshole side. Poor Masato didn't (completely) deserve that.

    The last part was awesome. Just who is that grumpy old man? Guy is dangerous with a broom. XD
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    Kuro Espeon: ^_^ I'm so glad you enjoyed Sanya's entrance into our world.

    Wahaha... Things are starting to reveal themselves, but more mysteries lie ahead on the hero's journey.

    XD I almost forgot about her to be honest, I didn't remember I wrote in that she up and left. I had to go and reread my previous plans to suddenly realize that I should get around to that particular little detail...

    Mufufufu... Do not worry; Ryou's not getting a break at all. :3

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    classy_cat18: Why would I not put in the nobodies? They were a fun aspect of KHII.

    Tehehehe, poor Ryou... One day he'll be nice... One day....

    Mr. Ozu Ozu-san! Though I think Mr. Ozu sounds far better, but meh. I quite like him, he's an interesting character.

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    Its... 40% planned now, I have the beginning and the end, but no middle. I'm getting bit by bit planned while I'm on break at work. Of course I'm also drawing a costume design for another character and planning another fic (woo, I did the prelude 8D, now for the first chapter >_>; ). So X is taking a bit longer, I'm just waiting for major inspiration.

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    KYAAAAAAAAAAAA~!! Poor Sanya and her family, I'm sure they are very upset. The language she uses is interesting, is it anything in particular? *fangasm* Nobodies! I wanna see more of 'em! Ooh, Masato! Ryou's not a happy camper~ Maybe he has competition? Kufufu~ Oh noes, Mika! Your paintings are as scary as ever. ;~;

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    VIII
    I never imagined Yuki drunk until now XD I love that whole part, it's exactly what silly high school girls would do. And yes, Ryou should definatly buy Karen a new bear <3

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    I love Sanya's introduction! Not just a simple "oops, a girl fell out of the door". The way you started from her point of view and moved to the others made it interesting. Her poor world is gone. I wonder how she'll cope? Language barriers are horrible things, afterall :3

    Mikaaaa! >< I genuinely felt scared when I read that bit >< I'm glad she survived though. Her paintings are indeed very interesting, maybe that's why the heartless attacked her? She has too much info by accident?

    Asshole Ryou is back XD I don't blame him for being irritated, he has a lot on his plate atm. Not enough food though >w>


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    Kurosakura: I love your replies, they’re always so random. Her language is fun, and maybe there’s a method too it, the trouble is if anyone can figure it out. :3 Yus, I’m happy to see that the Nobodies were happily received into the world of Kingdom Heartless. ^^


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    ChobiChibi: Lol, I’m glad you enjoyed drunk Yuki and the drunk call. You’ll have to wait and see if Ryou gets her a new bear. ^_~

    It was fun to write, and switch perspectives. I love Ryou-kun dearly but sometimes I need a change and a fresh view.

    Lol, you were scared? ^^;; I was having fun throwing her around the room. But I answer no questions -w-

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    He could tell from the moment that man had burst through the door, he wouldn’t like him. Ryou of course, didn’t like many people. Not people from his dad’s work anyway, which is really the only reason anyone would know of his rather secretive father or him. It was something that was both convenient and annoying, because once people knew who his father was, they were either terrified of him and the potential ‘power’ he held, or wanted to suck up and be your best friend.

    Masato Nagano was just a pawn in his father’s game, and apart from being the mediator between his mother and the business tyrant, Ryou had separated his entire life from the man. He had no interest in suddenly rekindling that long dead relationship, and that goon in Birgitte’s house was some unwanted link between the two very different worlds.

    ‘Might as well let him look after Birgitte for a while.’ He mused, noting how the woman could most likely take care of herself. ‘I’ll return later tonight, when I’m tired and sick of driving around.’

    The car, which he truly and dearly loved, was half paid by his father as a notion that if Ryou really wanted or needed something, that his father would be there for him.

    At least half way anyway; his father didn’t give anything away for free. He said that Ryou needed to grow up understanding the real world and the challenges it held, that there was no sense dreaming of things you really wanted if they were out of your reach. Procrastination was the ultimate sin; in fact the man was sure his father would say murder was acceptable if there was a greater gain for it.

    ‘Bastard…’ Ryou growled, his grip tightening on the wheel as he rounded a corner and began to move into the older part of Traverse. ‘Couldn’t even let me dream…’

    It stung; old wounds that he had thought healed began to open again. His anger was like salt in the wound, it burned and made the entire experience worse. Gritting his teeth Ryou flicked on the radio in the car and smirked as his CD began to play. The melody deafened him from the outside world, and drowned out the memory trying to make its way to the surface.

    “I could be fake, I could be stupid, you know I could be just like you”

    The old town of Traverse was far quieter than anything Ryou was used too, few cars passed by him, and occasionally he’d see an elderly couple walking by. But the farther he was drawn into it, the less and less it seemed to be part of the world he so easily recognized. Past the old charm of the exterior, the interior was musty and old. Apartment buildings needing repair, condemned sites, everything seemed to be falling apart.

    “I could be weak, I could be senseless, you know I could be just like you”

    The lancer looked out of place; a shiny crimson coloured car that was modern was thrust into a world of rust and decay. What houses were around were far beyond needing repair, some had trees growing out of them. The man’s eyes scanned his surroundings, rusted, bent fences, a dead tree, and a crumbling stone wall that looked like it was made out of the worst type of brick in existence.

    ‘Why don’t they fix this place up?’ He thought with a frown, not noticing that he had slowed down to a crawl. Everything around him was surreal; his only connection to reality was when he glanced in his rear-view mirror and saw the rising towers of his home city. ‘It’s probably bringing down the city rating…’

    Ryou raised an eyebrow as his eyes fell upon something out of place.

    It was a temple, or at least he thought it was. It was old and worn-down, though not as much as the other buildings this deep in. The surrounding area was protected by a deteriorating outer wall made of old cement and rotting, crumbling wood which had been painted red. Though the paint desperately needed a new coat and varnish, it was chipping and completely gone in places.

    “On my own, cause I can’t take liven with you. I’m alone, so I won’t turn out like you want me too”

    He found himself smirking as he pulled up to the curb. The front gate was missing half of it, so anyone and anything could wander freely between the outside and the guarded interior. The man tilted his head at the mystery; his curiosity got the better of him as he switched off the car and got out, locking it as he hopped onto the sidewalk.

    He neared the entrance and found himself stopping to look up at the archway. Ryou was honestly surprised it was still standing, though whatever had been hanging from it had rusted away or simply been stolen, as all that remained was the chain it had hung on. Quietly he moved inside, finding something about the old, broken stone path charming. The grass on either side was only slightly overgrown, with elegant Japanese maples with dark trunks towering in on either side.

    Ryou found for the first time in a long time, he was breathless; something about this place was beautiful to him. He had seen impressive places before, but as he moved down the path and looked to the left, spotting an old statue. The man found himself calming.

    ‘Odd…’ He thought, moving towards the statue.

    It was of a woman, made completely of jade, she had long hair tied into a braid. Her hands were outstretched to the sky, cupping in their palms an orb. Some details were done faintly in gold, like the slight colouration to her lips and irises. Ryou found it amazing how she had made it through the years without becoming worn down like the rest of this place. He was even able to tell that the woman was wearing a simplistic dress that was made to appear as if it were moving in the wind.

    “Wow…” He muttered, staring up at her. She was good nine feet tall on her pedestal. Ryou circled her, stopping only when he saw a strange inscription in the stand. It was painted with gold, but whatever language it was in, he couldn’t recognize nor read it for the life of him. “What the hell…?”

    Then something drifted into his ears. A soft tune, It sounded sad but in a divine sort of way. Ryou thought maybe he had heard it before, but he shoved that thought to the back of his mind. The man moved from the statue and walked under the second archway, which revealed a smaller sort of garden with a building on the other side.

    The music was coming from inside, so he found himself hurrying for it as the tune picked up. He only stopped to spot another jade statue. This woman had her arms spread out horizontally; she was looking up to the sky, wavy hair tied back in a ponytail. She was as wonderfully crafted as the last one, standing on a pedestal, wearing a shorter skirt a sleeveless top with a cape billowing in the wind.

    “huh…” Ryou murmured as he spotted the strange writing again.

    “Aren’t you coming inside?”

    He swiveled around, confused as he spotted no one. It had been a woman’s voice and sounded around his age. Ryou frowned, stepping away cautiously from the statue, he moved towards the building. The steps creaked under his weight, and he noted how the railing around the porch like landing was rotting and falling off. Curved shingles from the roof had fallen onto the ground and wood floor.

    Ryou slide open the door and stepped inside. Light filtered down in streams from the broken ceiling and illuminated only bits and pieces of this place. Yet his spine didn’t tingle, in fact he held no apprehension about this building. He faltered only when he thought if he should take his shoes off or not.

    “Don’t worry.”

    He frowned. “Who are you…” His voice trailed off as he spotted another statue. His body moved towards it almost on a will of its own. She was as tall as the others, though seemed as if she were in the midst of spinning. She was wearing a beautiful kimono and in her right hand was a scepter. “Wow…”

    The music, from wherever it had been coming from, faded out, leaving Ryou in pure silence as he stared at the third statue.

    “Can I help you?”

    He jumped, pivoting around to see an old man dressed in stark white robes. He old, far older than most men Ryou had seen. His eyes were squinted and tired, with a sort of drained grey for colour. What was odd about the stranger (other than he was in this place) were the numerous tattoos all over him, they covered most of his head, leaving only the left side empty. His arms and hands had them also.

    Ryou thought it was somewhat amusing; this old man was a walking scroll.

    “No.. Um…” He frowned, as the man moved past him and looked at the statue.

    “Admiring the temple artwork then?”

    “Yeah…” Ryou looked at the woman again. “I guess…”

    The elder chuckled, and turned to Ryou again. “You don’t seem very sure.”

    “I heard somebody.” He admitted, looking around.

    There was a small sparkle in the old man’s eyes. “Heard who?”

    “I don’t know... Sounded like a girl.”

    “Oh?” He smiled. “There are no women here, I assure you. Only the statues remain of the women who visited this place...”

    “I think you’re wrong.” Ryou challenged, frowning. “I know what I heard.”

    “And what did you hear?”

    The monk, if that what he was, didn’t have a condescending tone. But Ryou couldn’t help but get irritated at the question and how it was presented.

    “A woman asked me if I was coming inside.” He countered, “Then told me not to worry when I wondered if I should take my shoes off or not.”

    “Sounds like she could read your mind…”

    “To be honest it wasn’t that big of a mystery, I was looking at my shoes.”

    The old man chuckled and moved away, motioning the younger to follow. Still wearing a frown, Ryou followed, taking last glance at the statue before focusing on where they were going. It was revealed as the man lead him to the back garden, which was almost as brilliant as the rest. The only problem was there were small stone plates in the grass and nothing on top of them.

    “What’s this?”

    “The rest of the garden… You can see however, it’s lackluster compared to the front…”

    Ryou frown deepened. “There’s no statues...”

    The monk nodded. “They were stolen.”

    “Oh?” He tilted his head. “How many were there?”

    “I don’t know. The previous caretaker took the number to the grave with him, sadly…” Briefly the older man bowed his head. “When I was selected to continue the watch of this place, there were two back here… One night I awoke to find them gone.”

    Ryou knew that stealing any one of these statues was no easy feat. They were large, fragile and very, very heavy.

    “That’s quite the trick, stealing two jumbo statues.”

    His companion nodded, before sighing and moving back into the temple. “I’m surprise such a young man would come venturing into this part of town and not be looking for trouble.”

    Ryou frowned. “I’ve had enough of trouble, believe me.”

    “Hmm…” The monk nodded, as if understanding. “What’s your name?”

    “Ryou Saito.”

    The man smiled and began to guide the younger one to the front of the property. “You may call me Kaede.”

    “Just Kaede?”

    As they reached the gates, Kaede nodded. “If anything is ever troubling you, you may find this place to be a sanctuary.”

    Ryou looked around and smirked. “Yeah… It has that feel.”

    “I’m glad you think so, now if you excuse me, I have to return to my duties.”

    Ryou watched the old man leave, and found himself wondering exactly what his duties were. Was it because of him and his predecessors that the temple still remained somewhat intact instead of fully neglected? The man looked up at the sky in thought before moving away from the gate and towards his car. He was half surprised to find it untouched, but he supposed not even the low lives of Traverse would make their homes in this neighbourhood.

    “Why hello…”

    He stood corrected.

    Ryou turned to see the man who had given him the keychain standing there, a smile on his face.

    “Would you like something?” Ryou growled.

    “What brings you to this forgotten part of Traverse?” He eyed the temple. “Curiosity?”

    The man’s scowl deepened, and unintentionally his stare turned into a suspicious glare. “Something like that… You?”

    “The same.” The salesman shrugged. “I heard evil gives this place a wide birth, I was coming to see if the rumours were true.”

    Ryou rolled his eyes. “I have to go. Have fun fulfilling your curiosity.”


    As the car pulled away, the salesman looked back at the temple with fascination. It had been a long time since he had been here, he wondered if that haunting melody still emanated from the temple occasionally. Fighting some sort of deep rooted fear, he forced himself up to the gates and peered in.

    He spotted one of the statues, and ducked to the side, sighing.

    “Were you welcomed with open arms?” The man thought out loud, staring up at the sky. “Or are you like me? And every step closer is a battle…”


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    Evening was here, long shadows were cast by the fading light and many were beginning to move quickly to home to try and avoid being the heart thief’s next victim. People were practically pushing and shoving on the main sidewalks, trying desperately to stay together and in the light.

    But not Suki Moto, no, not her.

    The girl didn’t fear anything or anyone. Her entire life had been wrought with grief and fear for so long, that about a year ago, she had had enough of it. Her new lease on life was that of happiness and confidence, that as long as she believed she was lucky and untouchable to the heart thief, she was safe. Now as unlikely as it was for this idea to work for the petit woman, it had.

    She had gone out at night, around midnight actually, and wasn’t touched.

    So she sat in the park on a bench without a care, her long dark brown hair had a beautiful red sheen to it in the lighting here. Her eyes were solely fixed on her notebook, though they occasionally glanced at the white and pink mechanical pencil she had found about two weeks ago. Suki quite liked it; it went with her outfit. She wore a black tank top with pale, slightly baggy jeans. The right knee of the pants though was patched with multiple pieces of fabric, all different colours.

    The eighteen year old was an outcast, but she was alright with that.

    ‘It’s warm tonight…’ She thought with a faint smile as she scribbled down a couple more words. She was just getting to the interesting part of her story, and it was the part she had most troubles with. The girl had never finished one of her stories before, and this time she was determined it was going to happen. ‘Someday…’

    Someday yes, she had no doubt of that. But that day wasn’t today; her little work of fiction was still far from being completed.

    “I don’t want to-“

    Suki looked up curiously, watching with a slightly raised eyebrow as a girl came down the path. She was talking on her phone and sounded rather peeved. She had never seen this particular teenager before, so she assumed this was the first time the stranger was using the park as a cut through.

    “Akira, no.”


    Naomi frowned, he had called to try and apologize again, or that’s what she had assumed. But in typical Akira fashion he had blindsided her by ranting on about her flirting and being ‘loose’. This hadn’t impressed the normally shy girl, so instead of being meek and quiet about it, she took control. She had no desire to hear about this, not when today had been relatively okay.

    ‘Probably called because I avoided taking my normal route home…’ She thought bitterly. ‘He would’ve been waiting at the corner, but no. Today ‘Naomi-chan’ didn’t show up did she Akira? She deliberately avoided you-‘

    “I saw you with Ryou!”

    She stopped, and only lightly noted the strange look the girl on the bench was giving her. Naomi felt her free hand clench, and her grip on the phone tightening.

    “You were spying on me?”

    “What?? No-“

    Akira.” Her voice had transformed into a hiss. “I’m tired of this.”

    “Of what?” His voice was rising; the boy was growing irritated with her.

    That was fine in her opinion.

    “Of this… This unhealthy obsession you have with me!” She yelled into the phone, as she began to move again. “You have no right to try and control my life!”

    “I’m not trying to-“

    Yes Akira, you are.” Naomi didn’t know what was coming over her. “I’m tired of you hitting on me, trying to show off, picking on others, and worst of all spying on me! What does it matter if I was talking to Saito-san or not?”

    “He was only talking to you because I made a bet with him!”

    That hurt, and it couldn’t be true. Ryou was ten times the man Akira would ever be, right? The girl didn’t want to think about if somehow, Akira was right. And even if it was a bet, Ryou had given her advice before that had drastically changed how her ‘friend’ treated her and people around her. That proved that he was better.

    Distantly, Naomi knew she was only trying to make herself feel better incase that was really the only reason Saito-san had even looked at her.

    “Naomi-chan?”

    “… It’s Itsuki-san to you.”

    “I.. uh…”


    It was waiting.

    It was always waiting, patience was its virtue, it was the master of waiting (sometimes it was a burden though). The sun, that beautiful yet burning ball of fire in the sky would be gone soon. Such an idea made the creature unbelievably happy, soon enough it would be able to pick off another human, another that would have to suffer until the night of the next day.

    Suffering was something it thrived on, that and pain that it inflicted on others. Yes, such a twisted way to live but a way nonetheless. Of course, the thing briefly wondered if it could even be described as a living thing. Not in this world, it didn’t fit the category; it lacked a few key things.

    ’I will have my heart at the end…’ It mused as it picked up another walking towards its lair.

    This human approaching was different. Something shined from within, a blinding light, almost as searing as the sun itself. Yet it was tempting, it was like a sudden, horrible addiction. Something the creature had to have, though it was confused why. It wasn’t like the hunger it had felt before, it was so much deeper. Its very essence craved for what this human, a girl, had. Its steady beat was soothing, the light no longer so bright, but warm against its dark hue.

    ’For all the cold I have felt…’ The creature thought, lowering a little more. The girl seemed far too distracted to notice it. ’I have to be careful though, sometimes they notice…’

    It couldn’t take that chance, not when the heart of this female was so tempting. Its senses told it no other humans were approaching, just her. It was almost like fate, that she was destined to give herself to the creature in waiting. The others had been pure chance, but this, this was divine intervention. A sign from the great one that things were changing, that it had earned this reward.

    'You are mine girl…’ It thought, and it would’ve been smiling if it were able. ’Mine and mine alone.’

    “No…” The girl sighed, rolling her eyes and switching hands. “I don’t want to see you- not even for your apology.”

    ’Closer…’

    “Akira no-“

    'Just a few steps more little one..’


    Naomi stopped, her body felt incredibly weird. At the back of her mind she could almost hear someone screaming, her gut seemed to be twisting into knots and her spine was tingling.

    “Itsuki-san? Are you there?”

    “Um…” She mumbled, looking around. It was daylight out, nothing should be bothering her. “I’m here.”

    Akira must’ve picked up on her voice, because now he sounded concerned. “Naomi-chan? What’s wrong?”

    “N-nothing.” She replied, trying to shake the feeling. “Just a weird feeling.”

    “Well its day still, you got nothin’ to worry about.”

    “I know,” Naomi replied a bit hastily. “I’m not blind Akira.”


    Oh but you are… It right over her now, fighting the harsh fire the sun was creating on its skin. You’re eyes are open, but you see nothing.


    Naomi moved; she wanted to get out of this park. She had heard something, she didn’t know what, the voice had been so distant and quiet but so evil, all the girl wanted was to escape. She was so intently on running away, she didn’t see it. A dark blur climbing down from above, sharp talons sunk into her skin and tore her upwards; her body vanishing from view in seconds. She didn’t have time to yelp or scream; she was in shock, all she could feel was the sick sensation in her gut exploding, and the light trickle of blood running from her shoulder.

    “N-no!” She cried, reality dawning on her suddenly. “Let me go!”

    There was a horribly blunt thud noise as something collided with her head, making the world spin out of control. Briefly she saw other people, all of them grey and horribly thin. The rest she couldn’t tell, though she could almost feel the darkness move around her, forcing her into a tight hug. She fought for only a second longer, much to dizzy to do anything effectively.

    Her phone fell from her hand, and clanged as it landed on one of the beams.

    “Oh… God…” She murmured her vision blurring and mind slowing. “I’m… I…”


    Mine.



    * * *



    Akira looked at his phone confused, he had known that Naomi had been angry, but he never imagined her having the guts to hand up on him.

    “Naomi?” He blinked. “Naomi!?”

    He growled as he received no response and flipped his cell shut, before pivoting on his heel and stomping towards home.

    “Bitch hung up on me.”


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    NAOMI, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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    ... First I must GASP IN SHOCK!!

    *GASP!!*

    Naaaooomiiii! >< She... She was a good one! D:!!

    Loved Akira's responce though... XDD What a bastard! Doesn't deserve her, even if he didn't know what happened.

    Anyway, I loved the description of the temple! I have such a vivid image in my mind... The girls are all so pretty. Also, the reappearance of the Merchant man... That was very interesting indeed. I want to visit the temple, plz <3

    Also... YAY SUKI! It's a little confusing... If she could see Naomi, but the heartless couldn't see her... :O

    So many mysteries, it makes my brain overthink. Definatly worth the wait, smexypants! <333

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    *twitches* Na...Naomi...

    WHYYYYYYY?

    This is too painful! Why do you end this in suspense? Is she really gone for good?

    Yes, the temple was nice and the statues were pretty. And I also wonder about how the statues were stolen. Maybe they got up and walked.

    And yes, Akira's a jerk.

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    Heh, finally read X. And what a note to leave it on.

    My personal feelings are that Naomi isn't gone for good, and not just because "she was a good one" either. Buuuuut that's for CT to reveal at a later time; I have my suspicions and I don't want to post them, be correct, and have CT all annoyed at me.

    Nice twist of Naomi getting back at Akira's jerkiness, too. (For those that don't understand, in Japanese names show formality. Naomi telling Akira to call her by her last name instead of her first shows that she doesn't want Akira to be informal with her anymore. Translation: she just shunned him.)
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    HAI SIE I thought I'd leave you a comment, since you've gone all idle on msn.

    I finished reading the first chapter, and I rather enjoyed it. It was nice to see something familiar from RPG, heh.

    - Ai is adorable! Was my first impression.
    - At times, the narrative was slightly confused - especially the part where we go into the Heartless' viewpoint. This is easily fixed, however, by putting in nice, neat paragraph separations.
    - One thing I'd like to mention, and only cos I see it so often in a lot of fanfic: when you're writing in third person, like you are, you shouldn't be afraid to use the character's name, or personal pronouns (she, he, etc.). Get rid of all this "the man" and variations on that theme (there's a lot of describing people by their hair colour/job in fanfic - it bugs me). If you replace every instance of "the man did something" with either their name, or a "he/him/etc.", you can also get a better idea of when you're using a name too much within a single sentence.
    - Ryou doesn't seem like a dick, but that's probably cos we see his interactions with Ai. I like seeing this side of him - it shows that he's not just one-dimensional. I also liked the way you let us know why he might be a tad antisocial (the parents). It didn't feel expositiony, just natural. However, I was unclear on his age, though you might have put how old he was. Referring to him as a "man" so often, but his living with his parents just seemed to clash.

    Overall? Awesome start! I can't wait to get cracking on the rest. <3


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    Oh wow, I know I haven't posted anything in a while, but rest assured that Chapter XI is coming. After probably more than two months on hiatus, a resurgence of ideas has sparked me to continue writing. In fact the next chapter is about 90% complete. Good news for all my readers who might've questioned my loyalty to this fic. ^_^

    Annie: Lol, that’s all I got. XD

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    I'm glad you enjoyed the temple. At points it was a pain to describe... Stupid trees and statues and argh.

    I hope you think XI is worth the wait.

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    I thought I did separate? Sorry if I didn't. Do you mean putting a larger space or...?

    I will endeavor to fix your next point. But this I told you on MSN. ♥

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    And without further delay, I give to you the beginning of Season Two of KINGDOM HEARTLESS. After my two month or so hiatus, I have returned to the writing world. :3

    Thank you to Kuro Espeon for providing me with both Season's themes: Monster by Skillet and Unbreakable by Fireflight.

    Where we left off..


    It's hiding in the dark
    It's teeth are razor sharp
    There's no escape for me
    It wants my soul
    It wants my heart

    KINGDOM HEARTLESS
    SEASON ONE

    X


    There was a horribly blunt thud noise as something collided with her head, making the world spin out of control. Briefly she saw other people, all of them grey and horribly thin. The rest she couldn’t tell, though she could almost feel the darkness move around her, forcing her into a tight hug. She fought for only a second longer, much to dizzy to do anything effectively.

    Her phone fell from her hand, and clanged as it landed on one of the beams.

    “Oh… God…” She murmured her vision blurring and mind slowing. “I’m… I…”


    Mine.




    Where are the people that accused me?
    The ones who beat me down and bruised me
    They hide just out of sight
    Can't face me in the light
    They'll return but I'll be stronger

    SEASON TWO
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    XI


    “I can’t sleep….” Karen whispered softly into the ear of the plush she clung too. She wasn’t afraid of the monsters or the darkness, but of tomorrow. The last time Ryou and she had gone out; it hadn’t counted as a date, or that’s what the girl liked to believe. Karen was anxious; her mouth was dry as she thought about all the other dates and how horribly they had gone. “I’m going to mess this up…” She brought her knees to her chin and buried her face into the stuffed lion. “He’s going to think I’m a moron or-“

    The girl fell silent as she looked at the clock.

    [3:43 AM]

    She wasn’t sure if it was nerves or insomnia keeping her up, but whichever it was, it was annoying. Karen didn’t want to go out with bags under her eyes. Her teeth gritted together in frustration before she abruptly lay down, staring at the ceiling hopelessly as her mind kept going back to the worst case scenario.

    ‘Something bad is going to happen, whether it’s the monsters or yourself…’

    “Well I fell into him on the train…” She thought out loud, “and he still wanted to go out for a date.”

    Obviously the date was out of pity.

    “Urgh…”

    “Karen honey?”

    She sat up in surprise as her mother slide open her bedroom door and stepped inside. She was a kind woman, with soft eyes and hair, and a friendly smile on her face.

    “Are you alright?” She tilted her head slightly. “I heard you talking to yourself…”

    Karen smiled in return. “I hear that’s a sign of insanity.”

    The older woman rolled her eyes. “I’ll keep that in mind.” Her smiled faded as she saw her daughter look down on her bed sheets sadly. “Oh honey, you’re worried about your date tomorrow…”

    “I… I always mess up.” The girl admitted, tugging on her PJs uncomfortably. “I just… Don’t want him to see me as an idiot.”

    “You’re far from an idiot…”

    “I know that… But…” She shuffled over as her mother sat next to her, plopping her head down on her mother’s shoulder sadly. “He doesn’t…”

    “Oh I imagine he does.”

    She thought back to all the stupid things she had said in front of him, and how he picked on her. “.. He likes to make fun of me.”

    Her mother’s eyebrow rose. “Is the teasing like the others?”

    “N-no, it’s… Sort of childish… Really…”

    She smiled. “Then he likes you.”

    “W-what?”

    “You told me that this boy didn’t have a problem telling people off. If he didn’t like you, chances are he would tell you right?”

    “Right…”

    “And has he?”

    “No… Not-“

    “He’s done the opposite correct? He asked you out instead.”

    “Well… Yeah but-“

    Her mother cut her off with a kiss on the forehead. “Honey, is it so hard to believe that he might actually like you?”

    Karen was silent as she lay down on her bed. ‘Yes..’

    “Goodnight.”

    “Night… Um… Mom?”

    “Hm?”

    The daughter looked confused as she asked. “What are you doing up?”

    She laughed. “Couldn’t sleep, I know when your upset hunny.”

    Karen lied in silence for a good moment before she turned over, facing the wall as her mind began to drift towards sleep. She thought for the briefest of seconds that Ryou actually liked her, that something about her timid self was attractive. She smiled at the thought, a tiny innocent smile she wore until she fell asleep.



    * * *


    Ryou’s iPod flashed on, blinking twice before it began to play. Ryou jerked in surprise, turning over in his bed in a futile attempt to escape the music now blaring into his ears. The man yawned; refusing to get up as his mind slowly was drawn from the world of sleep. He couldn’t recall his dream today; though he could remember the deep fear he had felt at one point.

    “Urgh…” He groaned, reaching up and sluggishly plucking the ear buds from his ears and dropping them down on the sheets. “What time is it?” He mumbled, not remembering what time he set his alarm for.

    He grabbed his phone and switched it on, ignoring his still playing iPod.

    [12:01 PM]

    “Huh…” He smirked a bit and lied there, thinking. “I guess I should get ready.”


    Birgitte looked up from the table curiously as Ryou emerged from the hall. He looked rather nice, wearing a faded sort of jean, with a red tank top underneath a half done up black sweater. The man didn’t look tired, annoyed or anything, in fact he looked neutral. Something that was rather rare to see as she had come to understand him. He fiddled with one of the leather bracelets on his wrist before slipping on a silver ring on his right hand.

    “Well…” She smirked at him as he looked over; even his hair seemed to be more tamed than usual. “Aren’t you dashing.”

    He rolled his eyes. “Thank you.”

    “When are you picking her up?”

    He glanced at his phone again. “Soon…”

    “Where’re you going?”

    Ryou raised an eyebrow at her. “Don’t you have closet girl to take care of instead of bugging me?”

    “She’s asleep, and my doctor friend is on his way here to make sure she’s okay.”

    “Hm..” He murmured. ‘More of a reason for me to leave, I hate doctors.’

    “Nagano-san apologizes by the way.”

    The man looked over with a distinct frown of both annoyance and confusion. “Oh?”

    “He’s sorry for upsetting you… For you know,” The woman added on. “Existing?”

    “Ah.” Ryou smiled mockingly as he neared the doorway. “Well as soon as he dies, I’ll forgive him.”

    “You’re such a charmer.”

    He swiveled around, grin on his face. “Aren’t I?”

    “Excuse me as I try to figure what this girl could possibly see in you…”

    Ryou slipped on his shoes. “I suppose all I have going for me is my good looks.”

    “..I’ll let you believe that…”

    He shot a look over at Hotaru-san before rolling his eyes and laughing. “Thank you.”

    “Have fun.” She smiled at him as he left.


    * * *


    Karen was pacing, she wandered back and forth, unaware that at her current rate she was going to tear a hole right through the floor. She was nervous, occasionally glancing at the clock before turning her eyes back to the wood panels below her. All that confidence she had in the morning, everything the girl had told herself to keep her self-esteem in the air was gone. Like a part of her had tossed everything out the window in seconds.

    “I can’t do this…” She murmured finally, glancing down at her outfit she had put together.

    It had Yuki’s seal of approval, though honestly Karen thought the skirt was a little short. It definitely wasn’t the worst thing her best friend had suggested though.

    Oh who was she kidding? The skirt was far too short for her liking, it was something confident people wore, and Karen was about as confident as a mouse caught in a spring trap.

    She took one long look at the clock before summing up the courage to pick up the phone. She was going to call him and cancel, Karen couldn’t take this sort of pressure.

    ‘Not another embarrassment…’ She thought bitterly, dialing the man’s number. Her thumb hung on the call button for a good moment before she pressed it.

    There was a knock at the door, and she yelped. Her soul sinking as she heard a very distinct ringing coming from the other side.

    “He… He can’t be…” She gulped and moved to the door, slowly opening it to see Ryou, holding his phone open in his hand.

    He smirked at her, eyes narrowing a tad as he flipped the phone shut.

    Karen managed to snap out of her stare. “I-I sorry, I was j-just calling t-to see where you w-were.”

    “Am I that late?”

    The woman quickly shook her head. “No, I-“

    “So you’re just that impatient?”


    Ryou watched the girl frown, her cheeks were flushed red from embarrassment and perhaps irritation. He shouldn’t pick on her, this he knew, but she was cute when she blushed and tried to look angry. Her outfit was something he hadn’t expected on her, a slightly loose violet t-shirt that faded to a white at the front. The skirt was black and bit frilly, pretty trendy in all. Not to say that Karen had been behind on the fashion, but she didn’t seem like the one to wear something so…

    ‘Short.’

    “You enjoy p-picking on me, d-don’t you?”

    Ryou smirked and shrugged, watching the girl grab her purse before hurrying out the door. “I pick on everybody.”

    “R-really?” She replied, playing with her half done up hair. “S-some people don’t like being picked on...” The woman trailed off; giving the obvious hint she was one of those people.

    “Hm.” He thought about that prospect for a second. Yes, it was quite possible people (notably Karen) didn’t like to be poked and prodded. But, there was an important fact that Karen had failed to recall about the young man; he didn’t care, not enough to stop anyway. There was nothing to gain from stopping; he rather liked putting people on the spot, it was a game he excelled at. “Well, I’ll make you a deal.”

    Karen was stopped by him, taking an ever so slight step back as Ryou moved towards her. He was far too close to comfort, popping her personal bubble completely as he looked her in the eyes. His crimson gaze was hard to match; she could already feel the blush on her cheeks returning, her face beginning to turn hot. What made it worse was his look was challenging, almost like an unrelenting fire.

    “If you give me a kiss, I’ll stop picking on you.”

    Ryou watched with a certain satisfaction as her eyes went wide before they shot to the ground, her face completely red with heat practically pouring off of her body.

    “That’s a no huh?”

    Karen nodded quickly, rushing into the car as he opened the door for her.


    * * *


    The car ride was pretty quiet; Karen was still recovering from his offer. As wonderful as it was to imagine Ryou not picking on her, there was no way in hell she was going to kiss him.

    ‘I’d probably mess up…’ She thought bitterly, staring out the window as they turned down a street and headed for main. ‘I’m not sure how I’d mess that up… But…’

    She silently wished for her confidence to return. To come back in a wave of self-esteem and self-love so that she could reach across the middle of this blasted vehicle and plant a kiss right on Ryou’s lips.

    Her cheeks began to heat up again so she had to drop the thought at that.

    “S-so…” She tried to break the silence, receiving a curious glance from Ryou. “W-where are we g-going?”

    His mouth formed into an amused smile. “Somewhere with [ba lot[/b] of light.”

    “Oh, w-well that’s good.. I-I wouldn’t w-want to run f-for my life in t-this s-skirt.”

    Ryou snorted, looking over briefly in mild amusement as she smiled back. The joke had broken whatever awkward feelings were between them, and the invitation to talk was not ignored either party. In fact for the good fifteen minutes it took them to get to their destination, all the duo did was talk on various topics no one else in the world could possible find interesting.

    The lancer pulled into the rather packed parking lot, and that’s when Karen got the first look at where exactly he was taking her. At the edge of the lot was a large chain link fence with three white pay booths. The line wasn’t extremely long, maybe two to three minute wait. But it was what lay beyond the fence that was daunting. It rose up into the sky, its metal frame glowing with red and orange lights, even from her seat in the car she could see the caged seats hanging from the over bars.

    It was a Ferris wheel and not a small one either. It was nearly the size of the buildings around it, though it was nothing compared to other wheels scattered through Japan, it was still daunting.

    “A Carnival?” She questioned in disbelief as she stepped out of the car, quietly shutting the door behind her as she leaned up against it. She could hear the jumbled together noises of people, laughing and some kids crying over a lost toy or game.

    “You don’t mind do you?” He questioned, though his voice gave no hint if he cared or not.

    “N-No! I just… J-just didn’t t-think you were l-literal about the l-lots of l-light.”

    Ryou smirked, watching Karen approach him cautiously. He didn’t know why, he wasn’t one to physical bully meek teenage girls. They walked together in silence before she stopped a few feet away from the end of the lines to enter.

    “Y-you won’t… Leave me w-will you?” The woman’s question was shaky and her helpless look told Ryou this was one of those times a smart comment wasn’t welcomed.

    Ryou’s eyes narrowed a tad in thought as exactly why she would ask such an awkward and rather stupid question. Why would he leave her in a dizzying carnival? Briefly it crossed the man’s mind that maybe another date had taken her to something similar, and left her there. That would be unbelievably cruel, even for Ryou.

    Gently he took her arm and pulled her next to him. “I’ll only leave if you want me too.”

    Karen smiled sheepishly, looking at the ground childishly as they headed for the line.


    * * *


    It hadn’t seen her, had it?

    Suki was standing at the edge of the park entrance, her feet unwilling to step onto the path. Her eyes nervously glanced at the ground, at the fine edge that separated her and her sanctuary. Her heart was beginning to pound, just being this close to where it had happened. Had no one else seen it? Surely there had to be more people around then just her, who had just been looking over at the overhanging bridge of the family park.

    That’s when she had seen something; something wicked with bright yellow eyes. It had come down in such a blur that for a second Suki had to reassure herself she had indeed, seen something. The girl who had been walking was gone in that moment, and with that realization, Suki had done something she hadn’t since grade school.

    She had ran, no sprinted, as fast as possible out of the park. Her feet had carried to the police station before she even came to realize where on earth she was. The girl’s heart had been pounding then, feeling as if it wanted to escape her chest.

    “They didn’t listen…” She growled, clenching her fists. “One call to the captain, about a supposed monster or kidnapper, and I was blown off.”

    Suki Moto knew what she saw; something had swooped down and taken the girl. A creature, that in the back of her mind she thought she should remember from somewhere.

    She needed to tell somebody, anybody… Suki took a step back, thinking of everything that had happened recently. Deep down in her, her heart told her that the victim wasn’t dead yet, she still had a chance. If Suki could get one person to listen, maybe she could be saved.

    ‘Who..?’ The thought was a desperate one as the girl slid down against the park wall and sat on the sidewalk. ‘Who would listen?’ Her eyes went to the sky, a clear day in Traverse City, a day that should’ve been a happy one.

    “Please…” She whimpered. “Just a little help, that’s all I’m asking for.”


    * * *


    Wrapped in the darkness, her name wasn’t clear, but Mika knew so much about her. She was trapped, her heart beginning to thump louder and louder as panic set in. The blackness was everywhere, consuming everything around. All that seemed to offer any light was the girl. A shining beacon in the void, she was tempting, no, the light coming from her was tempting. So much so that it was beyond recognition, all around her was a twisted need for that light. For that quickening pounding…

    ‘Lust…’ Mika thought. ‘Lust is a sin.’

    The darkness was shattered by a park, a park that Mika distantly recognized. Though it was a blur of dull grey and white, an ugly world.

    “Please…”

    The voice was so clear, like a prayer in nature. It was much to calm to belong to the fading away victim. Mika focused, the world turning from grey to dull shades of colour as she zoomed out of the park to the very edge of it and the sidewalk.

    “Just a little help, that’s all I’m asking for.”


    Mika’s eyes shot open, her mouth parched and her throat roaring like fire, somehow she still forced out the numbers. “Four, two, three, five, five, one, seven, eight, five, six!”

    Her eyes, blurring and watery looked over desperately to the old man sitting next to her, his face expressing complete shock at the life the girl suddenly had. Ozu-san blinked; reacting a second later he stood up and gently forced the frightened girl back down. The alarms on the machines were going haywire; turning far more annoying than they had been when she was asleep.

    “Damn it Mika, calm down the beat isn’t here!”

    “Girl…” She whispered, wincing as her throat protested. Her boss offered her a drink of water that she hastily snatched from him, downing the liquid as quickly as she could. “Ozu-san there’s… a girl at the park..”

    “Park?” He blinked, scratching his cheek. “Which park there’s-“

    Mike cringed; her shoulder and chest were aching from the sudden movements and harsh breathing. “It has a bridge, a metal bridge… Someone is going to… Die.”

    Haru began to panic, how in the world could she know this? With no real explanation, the man just sat back down, bewildered, but listening. “Who’s going to die?”

    ’Damn girl is never full of cheery news, whether in her contorted paintings or when waking up from a nightmare.’

    The artist struggled; she didn’t know the answer to be honest. But there was another who wanted to help, she was sure of it. Fighting the blackness threatening to overtake her, she grabbed him.

    “Four… Two… Three, five, five… O-one, seven, e-eight… Five, six…” Consciousness was too hard to hold onto it seemed, Mika began to slip back. “Find the girl… Tell her t-that…”

    Haru Ozu hadn’t had a mission worth completing in a long while, longer then he cared to remember. His body was old, often needing pills to help the pain that haunted it to stay away. But something about this, about how sure his employee seemed to be loosened those tight muscles and eased the flow of air into his lungs. He had felt a similar thing when he was fighting that creature.

    ‘Adrenaline…’ He mused, writing down the numbers on his hand before hurrying out the door. ‘My old friend, it’s good to know you’re still with me.’


    * * *


    There was only one park in Traverse City that had a metal bridge, which made the old man’s search much easier. His old beat-up clunker pulled up to the sidewalk, groaning as he parked it and he glanced out the passenger seat’s window. The brick wall that surrounded the area made the lands a bit hard to look at, but just over the wall’s edge, were the railings of the old bridge. Ozu-san let out a long sigh, his tired eyes staring at the destination.

    ‘Exactly what does she want me to do?’ Frowning he watched numerous girls pass by, all of them potentially know what the number sequence meant. ‘She couldn’t have told me a defining feature…’

    He exited his sad excuse for a vehicle, glancing up at the clear sky. Late noon, he had to hurry. Finding someone who’s going to die isn’t easy in the day, let alone at night. Quickening his step, he moved over to the entrance of the park and stopped, taking another nervous glance at the bridge. Hesitating a second longer, Ozu-san stepped over the edge and headed towards the old, iron framework.

    He hadn’t been afraid of the last monster he had fought, and he didn’t see anything as he neared the bridge. But something in him told him to stop. Ozu-san came to a halt, anxiety playing with his mind, though he didn’t quite know why. But warnings, even ones he couldn’t quite understand were to be heeded. His feet refused to move any closer to the bridge; he had to find another way to help whoever it was.

    “D-do you…”

    Haru looked over his shoulder at a girl, the knee of her pants had patches of random colour sewn into it, and her hair had a red sheen.

    “Know what’s there?”

    “No.” Ozu-san frowned, and the girl seemed to lose hope. “But I have a feeling, no one really does.”

    It was a fair point, one the woman could accept. She looked relieved, biting her lip nervously; she took his arm and pulled him a couple steps back. The thing, whatever it had been, hadn’t come this far. But she wasn’t willing to take the chance they might be in range.

    “I…” She looked down at the ground. “I didn’t know what to do… I-it just… Grabbed her… I guess I was selfish, I ran… I ran as fast as I could…”

    Ozu-san narrowed his eyes in a contemplative manner. Slowly he outstretched his hand and placed it firmly on the girl’s shoulder. Slowly she looked up, eyes shining with new found tears.

    “You were smart girl; many kids your age would’ve gone running into trouble… What’s your name?”

    She sniffled as he lowered his hand, as irritated as his words sounded; the teenager suspected it was just a part of who this man was.

    “Moto, Suki sir.”

    He grunted. “I am Ozu, Haru.”

    “Have you ever encountered one of… Them?” Suki asked, hoping to God that there was only one of those things, and that one was under the bridge.

    “Once, and its intended victim sent me on a fool’s errand to find you.” His eyes shifted away, looking solemnly at the grass before they shot back at Suki. “Maybe you know what this message means…” Haru held out his hand, and slowly read off the numbers. “Four, two, three, five, five, one, seven, eight, five, six.”

    She took a long blink, mulling over the numbers. “I’m sorry, but I have no idea what those mean.”

    “Better think hard then, because my friend suspects these numbers are key to figuring out that bridge.”

    ‘Maybe…’ Suki thought, hopefully. ‘Maybe we can save the girl… But… Those numbers make no sense, there is no real order too them… Nothing…’ She stared up at the late noon sky; the colours would soon start to change to mark nighttime. Her hope almost died at that thought, for as sure as Haru was about these numbers helping, she was positive about the darkness of the park taking on a new, deadly nature tonight.


    * * *


    Ryou tilted his head to the side a bit as he watched Karen embrace her new teddy in her arms. As large, if not bigger than the last which had met an unfortunate end, the giant white beast (which he supposed with a fairytale’s rendition of a polar bear) had two black eyes, a black nose and soft, snow white fur. It wasn’t intimidating though, not like a real bear, it screamed “cuddle me”, to which the man would normally reply with a frown and perhaps a comment of disdain.

    But he owed her a bear, and as long as she kept wearing that skirt, he would gladly put up with any number of stuffed animals.

    This time though, he hadn’t lied. She had asked him to win her a plushie, any one in fact. While most boys he had seen aimed to just win any of them, he was the big brother of a plushie fiend. A genetic fact that had paid off much in his favour. Ryou had gracefully beat the ‘shoot as many cardboard chickens as you can’ game, along with the bonus of ring toss.

    ‘Ai taught me well.’ He mused, though the thought of home made him frown just a tad. The sudden hand on his though, tugged him out of thought as he looked over at Karen.

    “Thank you.” She smiled, squishing the massive teddy bear into her as she hugged it.

    Ryou smiled back, looking at the creature with a raised eyebrow. “You don’t want to lug that around with you do you?”

    Karen bit her lip, something that the man found himself enjoying. He didn’t know if she even realized how much of a tease that was, but it was doing a very good job at tempting him to kiss her.

    “Not really, I love him really, b-but he’s kinda big…”

    “Come on,” He smirked, tugging her gently in the direction of the exit. “We’ll put him in the car and come back.”


    The car gleamed in the late afternoon rays, and briefly Karen could see why Ryou seemed to love his car so much. He never expressed it in words; in fact he had rarely ever talked about the vehicle. But it almost seemed to lighten his load when he was in it, she wondered briefly if the thing was sort of an escape for him. Really he could go anywhere in Japan if he wanted, he could run away and disappear.

    ‘I wonder if he’s ever done that before…’ She chanced a glance at him, but he seemed to be distracted by placing her plush inside to notice her shy gaze. ‘He doesn’t care about people’s opinions for the most part, so it’s not like anyone could stop him if he truly wanted to go.’

    That would be a sad day indeed, for all he picked on her, she enjoyed his company.

    Her train of thought was shattered by that piercing ringtone of his again. Ryou stood up, shutting the door and retrieving the cellphone from his pocket. He looked at in confusion, as if wondering whether to answer it or not.

    “I don’t mind.” Karen chimed in, smiling a tad. “You can answer it if you want.”


    Ryou Saito stared at the phone, confused. It wasn’t really the idea of answering it or not, it was who was calling. His thumb played with the edge of phone lip, as if it was the one pondering whether to flip it open or to ignore it, not him.

    [UNKNOWN NUMBER]

    For curiosity’s sake, he flipped it open.

    “Moshi Moshi.”

    “This is going to sound crazy, and I’m sorry for bothering whoever this is. But…” The woman’s voice trailed off. “Do you know anything about dark shadows with yellow eyes?”



    There was a long pause on the phone; Suki bit her tongue, waiting for a reply.

    “What about them?”


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    ZOMG NEW CHAPTER! *squee*

    I actually figured out what those numbers were right away. XD Probably comes from watching too much "Lost".

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    I got the numbers thing too XD Who ya gonna call? GHOST- Ryou...

    I had a feeling Suki would get hold of Ryou somehow. I didn't think it would be through Mika though (since when we RPed, they knew each other. I shouldn't assume! XD). Was it Mika's power in the RPG to be able to find out where people were? I can't remember... Either way, it was a really good way of portraying it, having dreampt it :3

    Wasn't expecting Ozu to go, but that's probably because I forgot Mika was injured ^^; Twas a long gap, but it doesn't matter! He did kinda find her rather easily though...

    I really liked how you did the date bit! It didn't feel like you were trying to get through it (cos I know how much you hate to write that stuff XD), and the regular, but not confusing, switches between the couple's point of view made it not drag. I really like how much Ryou genuinely likes her and the fact that Yuki picked out Karen's outfit XD Has her exact philosophy of short skirt + long legs= good thing XD And loved how Ryou liked it too. Such a perv <3

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    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG

    Took you long enough! D: But I forgive you since you're not killing off Lisette. XD This chapter was really well worth the wait; I still love how you change point of views.

    Anyways. The moment we've all been waiting for: THE ANNIE RAMBLE TIME!

    D'AWW KAREN SLEEPING WITH A PLSUHIE! That's so cuteeeeeee! D: And her mommy is so nice. I wish she were my mommy. >w> Ryou is sexy as usual~ <3 CAN HE DATE ME TOO?! 8D Okay, on second thought, maybe not. When are they gonna kiss anyway? D< EEP! Mika's a little creepy, seeing all this bad stuff happening. x_x XD OMG KAREN GOT ANOTHER BEAR. A GIANT BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAR! Is the old one going to come back and haunt them? owo Awwwwwwwwwww! I wanna see Ai again! Annie demands more Ai! Ryou is also surprisingly cute, his car is his sanctuary! xD Ooh! Suki seems interesting, I wanna know her better. :3

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    Default Re: KINGDOM HEARTLESS [M] XI .:. January 15th

    *finally releases breath and collapses*

    *wakes up several hours later*

    Awww, this chapter was sweet. And suspenseful. Two different flavors that go well together if done right. And like Chinese food, I'm already hungry for more. So make me some more!
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    Default Re: KINGDOM HEARTLESS [M] XI .:. January 15th

    Sara: 8D I’m so glad you liked it! Yes, too much LOST for you. But to be honest the number challenge wasn’t that difficult (finding a Japanese area code however, was when your internet decides to fail).

    :3 ♥

    Becki: OMG! A big reply! This makes me squee uncontrollably. Ryou is just as skilled as the ghostbusters, or he’d like to think so. He improvises more though, I think.

    Yeah, I had to change that because of a further down the line plot-bump =/. Originally they were meant to know each other but that just isn’t going to work out. That’s alright though, a certain other character you love to death will in fact, keep to his original intentions. Mika’s power in the RPG was projecting her emotions onto people, that’s why she would such a major influence on Ryou, if I ever got around to writing them meeting up for more than five minutes… >.>

    Ozu-san is very smart and very quick (even his car). I was thinking of making it a tad more difficult, but the chapter itself ran over its limit anyway. D: I hope such a quick find didn’t ruin it for you. Besides, if an old man is suddenly walking and then stops and just stares at the bridge, it’s a pretty dead give away to poor Suki.

    OMG ARGH MUSHY CRAP! I hate it, I hate it so much… Ryou’s amusing thoughts and comments made it worth to write, as did Karen’s awkward blushing replies. Only because of the way the chapter turned out I didn’t get to write the ending I wanted… Bleh…

    P.S posting spree! Squee~


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    I’m sorry for making my readers wait for so long, but it was worth it? Right? XD You’re not lying to me?

    Eh.. Kiss? ._. you want me to write a kissy scene? Are you nuts? I hate kissing I-.. Just ask Asi… WEREN’T YOU THERE FOR THAT RANT?!

    You’ll get more Ai, I promise. Once I find a way to make her relevant again.

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    I’m already writing Chapter XII, no worries. :3

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    Update on the story…. I have the outline of chapter XII written, and I’ve begun to write. I have about 10% completed, hoping to get more. XIII has a basic plan and XIV has a rough plan for the beginning. I’m doing quite well, the break served me well it seems. :3

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    I liked this chapter. A lot. It was sweet. It's interesting to see Ryou accepting some of his emotions, even if it's just internally. Damn flirt that he is. A few grammar things that I'm too lazy to discuss but aside from that good story.

    I got the numbers too. I think Lost is an evil being...
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