Originally posted by pokemasterfrank
And about that Cliche stuff...this fic is starting to get really...something...

I reconize many of these...things...from other fics...

First, the sad and whining rival. I wasn't around for those fics Skullfire talked about, but thats in mine.

Next, in this chapter, this Legendary scene is so...mirrored...from that Entei kills Anna in LTL...

*shakes head*

Maybe it's just me...but I get a feeling you copied some of this stuff...

btw...Oz, I read his fics before hand, but he says "I know, I'm going to add it in" and then when he posts, not much changes..."
Sorry...my little bro has been doin these chPTERS......IGNORE EVERYTHIN.........he overwrited.....i explained to OzAndrew