Ah, the hilarity that can ensue from hallucinations in fiction... Yeah, the bit with the Luna-hallucination that Milo had was great. I especially liked how one moment hallucination!Luna was about to take off Milo's pants and the next moment she burst into flames. I just thought that particular sequence of events was funny. X3

Damn, what happened to the farfetch'd was certainly unexpected. o_o Yeah, that'd definitely qualify as an "oops" on the heroes' part. X3 But these things happen. Not all victories are clean or perfect or whatnot; sometimes things don't go exactly right, as was the case there. So that outcome had the nice effect of bringing a touch of realism to things. I think it's neat to get to see a not-so-clean victory sometimes.

Other highlights:

“What the fuck is with your smell?” Milo asked.
XD Milo has some truly epic quotes...

Sure enough, Golbat sank its fangs into Scizor’s arm, only to be battered across the head with a metal claw.
X3 Awesome.

Golbat: *bites, or rather tries to*
Scizor: *swats Golbat as if it were a mosquito*

I love that. X3

The trees were waltzing with one another, and the clouds formed into phallic objects.
...Holy crap. XD

“Don’t tell me about the FUCKING ECOSYSTEM!” screamed Sylvester. “MY FAMILY’S BUSINESS DEPENDS ON THE FUCKING ECOSYSTEM!”
Another epic quote, this time courtesy of Sylvester.