First of all... Fwee, Lucifer!Definitely glad to see that character in the picture; that guy's very cool. ^^
And now for the other highlights and such that I felt inclined to comment on...
That chapter opening still cracks me up. XD It'd be right at home in an af;lkjglk;uer chronicle, actually. Serious paragraph followed by silly line? Definitely af;lkjglk;uer material.Within Ter’ast, sentries had been awaiting the return of the Bogcrow with the group members. The sentries had all but given up by now. As they stared impatiently, only remaining at their posts due to the mayor’s orders, their robes flapped in a gentle breeze.
“Screw this, I gotta go pee!” one of the sentries complained.
And Ter'ast's mayor still strikes me as an asshat. X3 Especially considering that this is an alakazam he's talking down to, a being that could basically make your head explode with less effort than it would take him for to fart. X3“You wish to see our leader? Very well.” At that moment, an Alakazam teleported in front of them. He clasped golden spoons and had golden bracelets hanging from his narrow wrists.
“A Pokémon? Is this your idea of a joke?” The mayor boomed.
“Greetings. I am Mystos, leader of Telluria City. Please do not be alarmed.” The Alakazam communicated telepathically, his psychic voice bearing a tone of importance.
“This is nonsense! I will not accept aid from a town run by a Pokémon!
...I want to throw a shoe at the mayor's head, but mine aren't quite big enough to make the kind of impact that I think the guy deserves. Maybe one of Rionette's shoes would be better-suited, if he even wears any. Plus a fictional character's shoe might work better against another fictional character, so yeah. X3“Please. If you do not trust me, your city will be destroyed. You and all the other citizens will perish.”
“Go away, and let me sleep.” The mayor responded.
There's just something epic about that line.We shall do battle at the edge of the fog, and hold the line there.
That attack is so fucking cool. *__* And heh, that's the second time today that something has reminded me of the drowning sequence from the Sonic games. X3“Let’s make this more interesting. I’ll give you 10 seconds to decide. Gravecall, Countdown Seal!” The four remaining flames around Gravecall began to rotate. “You have exactly 10 seconds to tell me how to get to Emmanuel. I can abort the countdown at any time. However, if you don’t respond in 10 seconds, everyone and everything in this room will perish.” With that, one of the flames poofed out of existence and a transparent number 10 appeared in front of Gravecall and the room darkened.
...XDThe normally revered and might Grand Cardinals were reduced to sniveling, groveling feeble old people who were now literally wetting their pants in fear.
Nice. ^^Shade backflipped over the circle of Litaria before they launched their attacks.
Heh, cute. ^^Gravecall and Spook started to get bored and so they drifted off and began to horse around with each other.
I like that phrase. ^^A glittering rain of Light Spear attacks fell on the forces below.
An epic note on which to end a chapter.The cataclysmic battle was just beginning.![]()