Actually... there is one other spot that could use some (a lot of) embelishment...

It would be a retcon, and this is just me being upset this didn't happen like it should have, but the cress encounter was way too short. This is the guardian against bad dreams, and it's just OH NO! A HUMAN! RUN!!!!!!

I don't know what DLs opinion on retconning something like that is, but it seems simple to me. It should have been a case of cress believing s/he could hold darkrai at bay, while I was convincing that I could take care of Darkrai more permanently. If I can do that, and we get out the necessary rounds from that, then Darkrai is mine to keep (any damage dealt to my pokemon would be rest'd up afterwards, and any en use would be relax'd up afterwards)

Up to you guys, of course.