Razor Vs. DarkestLight Ref: Dabsaww

[dabsaww]

indigo plateau 1v1
no rest or toxic

LEEEGOOO

[RaZoR LeAf]

I have an open slot so I will take up a battling role.

To my opponent, you call I'll attack.

[dabsaww]

bumpers

[DarkestLight]

o.O! Wtf! Wtf wtf MEMEMEMEE
Wait. vs Mike..
vs MLG..
vs Wolf..
....YES I HAVE A FREE SLOT OMFG LETS GO LETS GO LETS GO

Okand as since I have no B/W Pokemon, in fact I'm still working on all my other unevolved ones...I'll use..

Marcho M Haunter. Haunt haunt haunt!

[dabsaww]

HEY DL. FANKS FOR PICKING THIS UP <3 NOW PICK YO MOVESS

[RaZoR LeAf]

I see your Haunter and raise you, my currently unnamed Deino (m) Hustle

Taunt - Work Up - Crunch

[DarkestLight]

Gladly sir! I see your taunt and raise you one Disable. Stop him from talking kthx

Follow up with Snatch

End with Ice Punch.

Disable~Snatch~Ice Punch
(If Taunt works, then Frustration~Sludge Bomb~Ice Punch)

[dabsaww]

SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG
I FORGOT ):

Top bar is hp
bottom is ep
eatch represents 10

DarkestLight

Marcho the Male Haunter
!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!
Disable ~ Snatch ~ Ice Punch


RazorLeaf

Deino the Male Deino
!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!
Taunt ~ Work up ~ Crunch

R1

Well here we are on indigo, such a lovely day, this is my first reffing outta retirement, on the left we have Darkest light and his haunter, and on the right RazorLeaf and his deino. Im pretty sure Deino just called haunter barney for being purple, but Marcho simply sent a ghostly wave preventing this attack from happening.

Deino -6E ~~//~~ Marcho -8E

Well Deino seems to be pissing himself off somehow. While at the sametime Marcho trys to snatch deino's face and ends up stealing his angry thoughts.

Deino -6E ~~//~~ Marcho -7E +1 A

Deino is furious, he runs up to marcho & BITES HIM. Jeez louise, rude. Marcho replies with a Freezing cold punch, ahhg.

Deino -12hp -7E ~~//~~ Marcho

-11hp -8E

Post Game

DarkestLight

Marcho the Male Haunter
!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!



RazorLeaf

Deino the Male Deino
!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!

[DarkestLight]

Constrictive criticism:

Ok. I know this might seem like ref hammering, but this is really gonna help you in the long run dabsaww. Trust me, after doing these 2 things, your reffings will sail by faster and you'll get them out quicker too

1) Numbers: We all need beginning and end totals. I know the health bars were clearly explained by you at the beginning, but Deino is at 88 Hp, which is imperceptible to me. Since I only see 8 bars, I hafta guess between 80-89.

2) Stat buffs. Make sure you check them. Nasty Plot give the user +2 SpA. TPM has a Pokedex now that you can use for quick lookup. Its...here. Save this page

Now. Pure Positives.

1) I do like your style, its plain, simple, not too flashy or convoluted. The more you begin to have fun with the match, I'm sure the more we'll see in descriptive writings, so I'm not worried about that.

2) I absolutely must thank you for reffing, btw x_x! Really appreciate it more than anything.

Now, for Razor. What, did you and Mew go "Hey let's have DL fight Deino's all day !" Gonna hafta murrderrr them.

Marcho. Sucker Punch his first attack. Otherwise, Ice Punch~Spite~Smog.

[RaZoR LeAf]

Assurance - Roar - Thunder Wave

[dabsaww]

DL. Thanks for the criticism, after all this is my first reffing back. Ill make sure to do this one better, take a look after. Thanks

Pre-Game

DarkestLight

Marcho the Male Haunter
!!!!!!!!! : 89 HP
!!!!!!!! :77 E
Ice punch ~ Spite ~ Smog (Suckerpunch Sub)




RazorLeaf

Deino the Male Deino
!!!!!!!!! :88 HP
!!!!!!!! :81 E
Assurance ~ Roar ~ Thunderwave

ROUND 2

The round begins with Marcho punching Deino with a freezing cold fist of fury. That, burned. Deino gets pissed and hits him with a double damage assurance

Deino -10hp -7e ~~//~~ Marcho -14hp -6e

Next Marcho begins to use spite, before being intrurrupted by roar!


Deino -6e ~~//~~ Marcho -6e

Suddenly Marcho becomes much more gaseous, making it impossible to see anything. Deino is coughing loudly, seems as if hes been diagnosed with POISON. AHG. Suddenly the cloud of smoke gets much brighter and marcho lets out a ghostly yelp. Yep, paralyzed.

Deino -3 hp (PS) -7e ~~//~~ Marcho -6e

POST GAME

DarkestLight

Marcho the Male Haunter
!!!!!!!! : 75 HP
!!!!!! :59 E
Ice punch ~ Spite ~ Smog (Suckerpunch Sub)




RazorLeaf

Deino the Male Deino
!!!!!!!! :75 HP
!!!!!! :62 E
Assurance ~ Roar ~ Thunderwave


THERE YOU GO. Much faster

[RaZoR LeAf]

Dark Pulse - Crunch - Dragon Pulse

[DarkestLight]

Great! That's quite fine dabsaww. Keep that up and you'll grow into a superb ref One note-I'm paralyzed.

[DarkestLight]

Ok. I can actually post really fast.

Uhh ok go for..Venoshock~Double Team~Ice Punch

[RaZoR LeAf]

That's the one problem with new pokemon. Such a limited movepiool. 1st gen, they have 10 years of moves at their disposal.

[dabsaww]

Pre Game

Marcho the Male Haunter (Par)

!!!!!!!! : 75 HP
!!!!!! :59 E
Venoshock ~ Doubleteam ~ Ice Punch




RazorLeaf

Deino the Male Deino (BRN)
!!!!!!!! :75 HP
!!!!!! :62 E
Dark Pulse ~ Crunch ~ Dragon Pulse

ROUND 3

The round begins with Deino, releasing a dazzling black wave of energy which slams Marcho. Unfortunatly Marcho seems to be frozen up, and cant fight back for the moment.

Deino -5e ~~//~~ Marcho -11hp

Deino was feeling good, on a roll, it ran in and bit Marcho's gostly butt. And then it, dissolved? Thats right, Marcho had used double team and split into 5 clones. 1 had died.

Deino -6e ~~//~~ Marcho -7e -1 clone

Deino was angered. So angry infact, that it released a beam of draconic energy that took out another clone. Dangit.. Little did he notice Marcho sneaking up getting a direct hit.

Deino -7e -14 hp ~~//~~ Marcho -6e -1clone

Deino gets stung from his burn -3hp

Post Game

Marcho the Male Haunter (Par)

!!!!!! : 64 HP
!!!!! :46 E
(3 clones left) Par.
Venoshock ~ Doubleteam ~ Ice Punch




RazorLeaf

Deino the Male Deino (BRN)
!!!!!! :58 HP
!!!! :44 E
Dark Pulse ~ Crunch ~ Dragon Pulse

[DarkestLight]

Dab: Loving it Ghostly Butt, lol.


Ok Marcho, this Dragon's gonna go hard, so...Sludge Bomb~Psychic~Shadow Claw

[RaZoR LeAf]

Widespread Dragon Rage (to destroy all the clones) - Work Up - Dark Pulse

[DarkestLight]

DabsaWW :/

[RaZoR LeAf]

Dabs AWWWWWWWW!!!

[DarkestLight]

Sub ref. 1 v 1. Shouldn't be too long at all.

[Crazy Elf Boy]

I'll take the case.

[DarkestLight]

:/ Now I see what I did wrong in this battle :/ Laaaaaaame me for not knowing WTF Deino was. Will not LOSE!

[Crazy Elf Boy]

What did you think it was?

[Crazy Elf Boy]

~*~*~* Razor Leaf vs Darkestlight *~*~*~
~*~*~* Ref: CEB *~*~*~

~*~*~* Location *~*~*~
Indigo Plateau

~*~*~* DQ *~*~*~
1 Week

~*~*~* Banned Moves *~*~*~
Rest, Toxic

~*~*~* Round 1 *~*~*~

~*~*~* Pre Round Stats *~*~*~

Team Darkestlight
O

Marcho (M)
Levitate
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 64%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 46%

Sludge Bomb ~ Psychic ~ Shadow Claw

Status: Creepy
Paralysed
3 Clones

Team Razor Leaf
O

Deino (M)
Hustle
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 58%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 44%

Dragon Rage ~ Work Up ~ Dark Pulse

Status: Life is pain
Burnt 3% each round -Atk

Newly sub reffing this match is none other than Me, bam. Anyway the incredibly nicknamed Deino opens his tiny little mouth and releases a brilliant orange flames which heads towards the multiple Marcho's burning up all the copies and slightly damaged the real one. Marcho responds by conjuring up a small purple ball of sludge in his hands which he then flings at Deino hitting him right in the face causing him to rear back onto his hind legs before slamming them back down.

Marcho [-1HP -8EN]

Deino [-8HP -5EN]

Shaking off the poisonous goo from his face letting him get his vision back he starts getting so angry that he stamps around the field getting all worked up over nothing. Marcho laughs at the odd display from his opponent and starts waving his hands in front of his body in some weird arcane ways. Marcho keeps waving his hands around expecting something to happen but is disappointed when nothing does except Deino just staring back at him in curiosity.

Marcho [-9EN]

Deino [-5EN, +1 Atk, +1 Sp.Atk]

Deino laughs vigorously at Marcho knowing full well that psychic attacks won't work on him, he follows up this attack by opening his mouth again this time rather than flames an eerie set of dark rings float towards Marcho hitting him right in the face. Marcho desperately flails his arms around in an attempt to regain his composure but suddenly the paralysis sets in and his arms tense up along with the rest of his body causing him to fall to the ground.

Marcho [-12HP *Paralysed*]

Deino [-7EN]

~*~*~* Post Round Stats *~*~*~

Team Darkestlight
O

Marcho (M)
Levitate
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 51%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 29%

Status: Creepy
Paralysed

Team Razor Leaf
O

Deino (M)
Hustle
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 47%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 27%

Status: Life is pain
Burnt 3% each round -Atk
+1 Atk
+1 Sp.Atk

~*~*~* Razor Leaf TO ATTACK NEXT *~*~*~

[RaZoR LeAf]

Crunch - Dark Pulse - Crunch

EDIT: Forgot to mention, my Dieno is called Rorschach now

[DarkestLight]

...o.O! Clear Smog~Ice Punch x 2 >>...

[DarkestLight]

Cause its the 18th :/

[RaZoR LeAf]

Cause it's the 27th!?

[Crazy Elf Boy]

~*~*~* Razor Leaf vs Darkestlight *~*~*~
~*~*~* Ref: CEB *~*~*~

~*~*~* Location *~*~*~
Indigo Plateau

~*~*~* DQ *~*~*~
1 Week

~*~*~* Banned Moves *~*~*~
Rest, Toxic

~*~*~* Round 2 *~*~*~

~*~*~* Pre Round Stats *~*~*~

Team Darkestlight
O

Marcho (M)
Levitate
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 51%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 29%

Clear Smog ~ Ice Punch x2

Status: Creepy
Paralysed

Team Razor Leaf
O

Deino (M)
Hustle
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 47%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 27%

Crunch ~ Dark Pulse ~ Crunch

Status: Life is pain
Burnt 3% each round -Atk
+1 Atk
+1 Sp.Atk

Rorschach gets things off to a flying start as he bounds over to Marcho and digs his teeth into the ghostly entity however due to the burn it isn’t as effective as he would have liked it. Marcho shakes off the blow and begins to conjure up a ghostly wind which rushes over Rorschach removing any of the strengths he once had.

Marcho [-13HP -5EN]

Rorschach [-8EN, Normalised]

Feeling a little less strong then he once did Rorschach tries another attack this time creating a set of dark energy rings which float through the air and right in Marcho causing him to bob around in the air momentarily before he regains his composure. Marcho floats over to Rorschach and then punches one of his fists right into Rorschach leaving an icy patch covering his left shoulder.

Marcho [-16HP -6EN]

Rorschach [-11HP -8EN]

Rorschach once again bounds over to Marcho and sinks his teeth into the ghost causing Marcho to scream out in pain, however before he can retaliate to the attack the paralysis shakes his body once again causing his muscles to lock up and become useless.

Marcho [-13HP]

Rorschach [-8EN]

~*~*~* Post Round Stats *~*~*~

Team Darkestlight
O

Marcho (M)
Levitate
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 9%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 18%

Status: Creepy
Paralysed

Team Razor Leaf
O

Deino (M)
Hustle
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 33%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 3%

Status: Life is pain
Burnt 3% each round -Atk

At 0EN Pokemon will use 1HP for 1EN

~*~*~* Darkestlight TO ATTACK NEXT *~*~*~

[DarkestLight]

Taunt+Double Team~Pain Split

[RaZoR LeAf]

Ngh.. Wide-spread Dragon Range - Crunch x2

[DarkestLight]

Took my whole honorable heart not to use Destiny Bond XD.

[RaZoR LeAf]

Taunt followed by Destiny Bond? That is evil, but not impossible to avoid.

[Crazy Elf Boy]

~*~*~* Razor Leaf vs Darkestlight *~*~*~
~*~*~* Ref: CEB *~*~*~

~*~*~* Location *~*~*~
Indigo Plateau

~*~*~* DQ *~*~*~
1 Week

~*~*~* Banned Moves *~*~*~
Rest, Toxic

~*~*~* Round 3 *~*~*~

~*~*~* Pre Round Stats *~*~*~

Team Darkestlight
O

Marcho (M)
Levitate
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 9%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 18%

Taunt + Double Team ~ Pain Split

Status: Creepy
Paralysed

Team Razor Leaf
O

Deino (M)
Hustle
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 33%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 3%

Dragon Rage ~ Crunch x2

Status: Life is pain
Burnt 3% each round -Atk

Feeling the pain bearing down on his body Marcho whips up a team of clones, or at least tries to. The paralysis takes over his body and all his muscles tighten up making them useless, leaving him an easy target for Rorschach. The tiny dragon opens his mouth and breathes a bright orange flame covering the entire field in a fiery wash burning Marcho before dissipating into the air.

Marcho [-6HP *paralysed*]

Rorschach [-1HP (from EN conversion)-3EN]

Seeing his foe droop to the ground nearly void of all energy Rorschach takes this final opportunity and races over to Marcho sinking his teeth into the ghost causing him to scream out in pain as the last of his health fades away causing him to float slowly to the ground and out of this match.

Marcho [-13HP]

Rorschach [-8HP (from EN conversion)]

~*~*~* Post Round Stats *~*~*~

Team Darkestlight
X

Marcho (M)
Levitate
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 0%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 0%

Status: Creepy
Paralysed

Team Razor Leaf
O

Deino (M)
Hustle
[))))))))))))))))))))] HP 21%
[))))))))))))))))))))] EN 0%

Status: Life is pain
Burnt 3% each round -Atk

Sorry for this match for taking so long, but I had the large gap at the middle of this month getting used to a schedule with very little free time.

Razor Leaf wins

RL: 2 points
DL: 1 point
CEB & Dabsaww: Not sure

[RaZoR LeAf]

Woowoo! Deino evo time!

Thanks CEB and Dl (and dabsaww I guess *shrug*)

[DarkestLight]

Yay its over! Sweet! I haz a gengar!