When Destinies Collide

**Andrew** · 12th May 2003, 01:43 AM

Well well well... welcome back

Nice to see some Ash bashing "His skills were all he had" And "Ash could only read to a 5th Grade level and still had problems with his times tables" Lol. Poor poor simple Ash, sure he may be able to thundershock something into next week, but can he fill out a government form? lol.

I loved the cute little Sakura and Pikachu part, wonderful! Poor Sakura and Crystal being Targeted but

Come on Madison!

Damn Ivy's annoying, do you think she does that to the Postie? Or perhaps the corner store? Or her children "I can see you kids! ARE YOU MISBEHAVING!" lol....

Heh, another Nurse Joy, I'd laugh if they were actually a variety of women and men paid to dress up. More likely they're clones... like in Gattica....

Woah, Ash is turning gay? lol. That's an interesting plot twist. His newfound hate for women. Sure I know its Ivy induced but it'd be funny. *HUGE GRIN* Yay! Madison and Meowth's sideplot! Excellent! This'll be great, those two get on really well... and where is Togepi eh? With Sakura? And will we get any backstory on What happened to Misty's Pokemon?

Oh well. I still think of Ivy as Ivy from whatchamacall it, Batman. Nice move on behalf of Ash with Phanphy,

Yay for Madison! So what exactly does she wear now? I keep thinking of her in black three quarter pants and a white top. Is that right? lol. And Meowth wasn't in costume!

Great work by Ash, he figured out Muk's weakness. Yay for Phanphy's evolution! That was great, but the killing of Muk

Speaking of next chapter, The Time Wizard is your fav YuGiOh Card if I remember correctly. It is pretty kickass

But Sakura will de-evolve Phanphy and it'll win against Muk in its cute way

But where abouts is Crystal? That's confusing me...

And why won't Sakura perhaps send a card like Windy to help out Madison. Although I'd LOVE to see an adventure with Meowth, Pikachu, Kero and the Flower Card. Perhaps some drunken fun in a club, the three want to get in and cause Kero is the keeper of the cards convinces Flower to come along and get them in.

^^;

Anywho, another good chappie. Will we see Jessie and James again? Will ash battle other trainers that AREN'T Gym Leaders and what exactly does Madison wear? Thanks

**mistysakura** · 12th May 2003, 07:04 AM

Hey, nice chapter. Ivy reminds me of Sabrina in the anime. She'll probably have some sort of weakness no one else has found out about... just kidding, that's not your style.

About the whole battle thing... poor Muk.

And check your IM please...

**Last Exile** · 12th May 2003, 10:18 PM

OzAndrew: Mmm, seems people really liked the Sakura & Pikachu bit!

Well, I'll remember to put in more moments like that. I don't know how you got the impression Ash was turning gay! Have you been obsessing with your last sig a BIT too much?!

It was Ivy manipulating Ash. As for Togepi, it'll pop up soon. It's with Sakura, and she's hidden at the moment. You've got Madison's current clothes fairly right. She's wearing tight clothes because the mission requires that. As for Sakura, she's really going to mess things up big time, so expect plenty from her! Crystal is planning a surprise, the team will have several sidetracks coming up and yes, the Time Wizard is my favourite Yu-Gi-Oh card. It's the only one that stands a chance against all the big stat cards despite its own weak stats. I just love the way it speaks and when it warps time. Raptor's and Mai's faces when Raptor's Red Eyes Black Dragon was fossilised was priceless!

mistysakura: Well, that's a reasonable comparison. But Ivy won't come good. This is one villian in for the long haul. I'll check your story when I can, because I have SO little time these days! I'm currently printing stuff for my Year 9 lesson. Those guys are going to be hell!

At elast the Year 10 class went well.

**Andrew** · 12th May 2003, 11:11 PM

That big grin was for madison I was joking about Ash *Winces* At least that sig is gone now lol. I really should watch my spacing... And I also scored you 400th post

For that I demand to be in WDC ;0 lol Jk.. And get on AIM if you can dude!

**Darkgel** · 13th May 2003, 05:47 PM

"the laughing, the laughing!"

"Scratch, scratch, scratch."

Those 2 lines made me laugh non-stop.

Ivy, as you describe it, is a ***** with a cheap makeup set, or a Mutant (from either X-men or Mutant-X).

Muk can't be dead, unless they stirred its acid with its inner vital organs (if it has any) with Donphan's Take Down blow. That, with a well-placed blow, can be possible...

Yeah, I bet Tomoyo (I know it's Madison... but Cardcaptors SUCKS! I prefer the original Japanese Version! A HELL LOT!) and Meowth are walking their way into a trap.

Anyway, incredible chapter. Good luck!

**dark_tyranitar** · 14th May 2003, 02:56 PM

AMAZING! Words fail me for describing this Fic!!!!! BTW, this is my first post, so if it looks a little weird, sorry! I just managed to finish reading it about 2 minutes ago.

8) 8)

**Last Exile** · 14th May 2003, 07:24 PM

OzAndrew - Well, I'll see what I can do. Maybe I'll make you a gym leader or a scientist, but a funny one. Yes, i gather people likes what Madison is doing now. You ain't seen nothing yet.

Darkgel - Well, anything's possible. But I think the 'twerps' may have the edge this time.

Ivy will get comeuppance, but don't expect the last chapter to be her last. She will be in the sequel to WDC.

dark_tyranitar - Sweet man! That's one heck of a wrap. Welcome aboard and I hope you keep reading!

**Chris 2.1** · 15th May 2003, 02:34 PM

ok, about a gazillion gazelle's later, Shiny turns up! *gasp, gasp*

But yea, very powerful chappie! Muk dieded? will he go to the big sewer in the sky? (I sure hope it ISNT in the sky..*shudder). I can't believe a giant blob died...visually it was hard, but...you know...

Hmm...I wonder if Pikachu and Sakura run away for a new TV series together. Sounds fun. Leave Ash to go to Jail and whatnot! Sounds like an ironic twist to me...

keep it up!

**Last Exile** · 16th May 2003, 07:09 PM

ShinyMarill: Ah, the big sewer in the sky!

That is priceless!

Well, all will be revealed in the next chapter, whenever it comes.

Well, my first week of teaching is over. And it went quite well. I screwed up a bit with the Year 8s, mainly because I found it quite hard to relearn to think as simply as a Year 8 student does and everything has to be spelled out for them. But they still think I'm alright, which is a relief, because I can relate to them.

Things have gone quite well with the Year 9s and 10s though, especially on Friday, so I'm feeling pretty good about how my first week went.

A lot of people at the school think I'm stressing too much, but I need to, because it makes me aware and work hard. Hope you're all well!

**ZeldaFan20** · 20th May 2003, 08:45 PM

Really? You teach?! That's gotta be hard; I can't even get through a simple Field Experience I placement! You must have a lot of guts to try and teach 8th Graders. I salute you!

**SilverMachop** · 20th May 2003, 09:16 PM

I gotta agree with ZeldaFan20. There's nothing worse than 8th graders; believe me, I've been one and seen the others, and you don't want to pick which was worse. So you're a miracle maker.
Sorry if I sounded rude back there. But at least I got a good running gag about Time Wizard going, didn't I?

Have a nice day, may the Force be with you, there is no spoon, buenas noches, we'll be right back, and all that!

**M1ND G4ME** · 22nd May 2003, 05:43 AM

*Takes out knives and throws them in CCC's general direction* HURRY UP WITH THOSE CHAPTERS ALREADY DO OYU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW LONG IVE BEEN WAITING!? *breeths through inhaler* I WANT NEW CHAPTERS NOW! HURRY!!! *breeths again*

**Lady Vulpix** · 22nd May 2003, 03:43 PM

Hunter, some people do have a life outside TPM, you know?

**ZeldaFan20** · 23rd May 2003, 05:14 PM

Gamewizard007: Yeah, even I have a life: a family (but I'm NOT married), school, job searching for my future...need I say more?

**starjake** · 23rd May 2003, 09:43 PM

Hey y'all
I just wanted to mention a small but important fact:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!

This is easily the best fic I've ever read, including fics that have nothing to do with pokémon or cardcaptors. CCC, you have a future as an author or something; this is definitely a best-seller! KEEP WRITING!!!! (please)

StarJake

**Ultra_Poke2000** · 24th May 2003, 06:37 AM

I know ive been gone for like 3 or 4 weeks, but the end of school is a drag, with tons of last minute projects they give you and trying to perfect your grade average for the year, so ive had zero free time. i might be able to get back on later and i know ill have a ton of reading to do, but im just letting everyone know im not gone 4 good. i get out of school on the 31st, so from then on ill have bajillions of free time. i dont have time to read now, so cya later!

**Last Exile** · 27th May 2003, 09:54 PM

ZeldaFan20:

. That's nice of you to say.

SilverMachop: Well, it is a cool card! But, I've been told to to put mine in my Duelling Deck by all the experts, so I guess I'll sell it alogn with Red Eyes Black Dragon, Shadow Ghoul, a Sangan (I have 2), the Dark Magician and a bunch of other stuff like Curse of Dragon, Gaia the Fierce Knight, etc. because they don't fit into my deck theme, which is a beatdown deck. Oh well, I thought it was a good joke.

Gamewizard007: Geez, have you been listening to Radiohead too much?! Like maybe the song 'Knives Out'?!

Remember, listen to Radiohead in moderation, okay?! Even though they're the greatest band on earth! Look, cool down, didn't you read what I said earlier?! I spend all day with 8th, 9th and 10th graders then go home and try to get some sanity back. Basically I'm f***in'tired these days. Typing up another chapter is not in me right now. I'll get something going after June 13.

Lady Vulpix: I'd kiss you right now if you were here.

That was nice of you to say that.

starjake: Well, we'll see how it pans out! Welcome aboard!

UltraPoke2000: Hey, welcome back! Now worries, take your time. We all have actual lives away from the Net, so no worries there.

Thanks for the support guys. When I finish the teaching prac, I'll give you guys a REALLY good chapter. I promise!

**Last Exile** · 29th May 2003, 11:22 PM

Oh, there's one problem I forgot to mention.

My mum deleted all my files from the computer.

Any questions?

**SilverMachop** · 29th May 2003, 11:30 PM

Originally posted by Citrus Crush Chikorita
Oh, there's one problem I forgot to mention.

My mum deleted all my files from the computer.

Any questions?

Yeah. Um...

How?
Why?
Does this mean we'll be waiting a few years?
Does God hate you and all of us?
You think Yugi and Amy would be a good couple? Personally, I like Yugi and Téa; do you not like Téa, like everyone else seems to?

And...

Have you heard "Weird Al" Yankovic's new album? It's quite good.

**Andrew** · 30th May 2003, 01:59 AM

Damn CCC, what a shame $:\$ You should do what I do, whenever you write something new, email it to your uni email just in case. Mmmkay. But it'll be good to see what twists and turns you have up your sleeve next!

Good luck Ryan. And hope you can get on MSN or something soon.

**ZeldaFan20** · 31st May 2003, 05:48 PM

Ow!! That's harsh! Have you tried saving to a floppy disk? It's a lot safer than saving to your hard drive; that way, if the computer crashes, you'll still have your files ready and waiting.

**Last Exile** · 1st June 2003, 06:21 AM

Actually, SilverMachop, I think Yugi and Tea are very appropriate.

Tea is really the only person that udnerstands Yugi at that deep level. Only she was able to pull Yugi from the brink of despair after his loss to Kaiba. Personally I think Tea is nicer and hotter than Mai.

Unlike all those hornbags at the Yu-Gi-Oh Dungeon.

My statement was a hint about the WDC sequel.

**Chris 2.1** · 1st June 2003, 09:16 AM

shame about that....my fic chappies are in:

My computer
program files
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
new folder
Chris' stuff
personal
perosonal
PKMN
TPM
Fics

hehe, nobody can get them! Mwa-ha-ha*cough*-ha...

Whats your msn adress? I'm Brit_Chris@Hotmail.com, it'd be cool to chat n stuff!

**Ultra_Poke2000** · 1st June 2003, 08:54 PM

I'm back! WOOT WOOT!!! SUMMER!!!!! *does wierd little dance that makes ppl laugh*

ah, a new chapter! ash vs. ivy!!! go donphan! WOOT! "WOOHOO! D'OH!"~Homer Simpson

ivy seems to be just pure wierd evil. from the description from when ash walks into the gym it seems that she is part plant or something. wonder what the next pokemon for the battles will be? hmm...

neway, keep up the good work! cant wait!

**ZeldaFan20** · 3rd June 2003, 09:13 PM

HEY!! I didn't find out until just now: Happy Birthday!!

**Lady Vulpix** · 5th June 2003, 12:43 PM

Ouch, it's June 5th already!! Your birthday was on June 3rd!
I'm really sorry. With all this university work I didn't even know what day it was!

Well, Happy Belated Birthday, Ryan! You can go to the Reward Center and take anything you want, but I'd also like to give you something else, so if there's anything you'd like, just tell me.

And I'd also really like to be there. Or that you were here. Either way would work fine.

**Andrew** · 5th June 2003, 05:29 PM

I emailed your uni account to say Happy Birthday ^^; Dunno if you got it or not dude. lol. But check your email.

**Last Exile** · 5th June 2003, 09:53 PM

Well, I've got 1 week of this teaching prac to go and then I can de-stress!

It's ok, my year 10s are really smart. But half of my Year 9 class are absolute wastes of space while the other half are either quite or brilliant. As for my Year 8s, if they'd only behave, they'd show just how good they are.

Well, thanks for all the Happy Birthdays!

I got more at Pokemon Hangman and even some at the Yu-Gi-Oh Dungeon forum. Even Tara sent me a Happy Birthday email from England!

Ah, it makes me feel better guys, believe me.

For the moment, I can't reply individually anyway. I'm just so busy now! I have 7 things to mark over the weekend, plus I''ms till worrying about the fact my supervisor is threatening to mark me low on several criteria. If I can get as much done as possible on the long weekend, I should be fine. Until then, I can't say much more to you guys or individually or anything.

Just had a lesson with the year 10s, their Evolution presentations are ready to go for next week. Got a Year 9 lesson (Lesson 7!

), I hope that goes well. That Internet exercise has to interest them surely!

Thanks for all the support! Toodles!

**Last Exile** · 15th June 2003, 09:24 PM

UPDATE!

My Teaching Practice is finally over!

Expect new material soon!

**mr_pikachu** · 23rd June 2003, 04:16 PM

Oh no! It's down to Page 3! *moves to front*

When you get an opportunity, please post the next chapter! I'm itching to hear more about Ash vs. Ivy!

**ZeldaFan20** · 27th June 2003, 11:07 PM

Wow! New material?! I can hardly wait (rubs hands together excitedly)!

**SilverMachop** · 13th July 2003, 01:08 PM

It is so cool watching Ash trash Rocket robots with his morphs. I hope we get to see more of that in the future, and maybe even against strong Pokémon.

Well, I'm excited to see the lovers unite! Keep up the good work, PA! I can easily see the improvement you put into these stories, and I love it!

**Andrew** · 16th July 2003, 05:44 PM

Zelda Fan 20 please don't bump $:\$

K then. CCC's been a big depressed of late. He's got an injection thingie he loves to death $:\$ And yet he can't seem to get in the first place.

So yeah...

**Last Exile** · 20th July 2003, 08:26 PM

If anyone is wondering what the hell Andy is on about, he is referring to the card Injection Fairy Lily from Yu-Gi-Oh! And believe me, if you ahd this card, you'd love her too!

As for getting into first place, I have solved that problem. I'm running a plain beatdown isntead of a dragon beatdown. And I'm getting someone to get me Yata-Gasaru and Harpie's Feather Duster from the US. Then the deck will be complete and won't even need changes from Pharaonic Guardian.

Anyway, my mum's gone compeltely mental on me lately and has banned me from using the computer at home! However, I did go to an anime convention on the weekend and will be participating in the university Anime Club every Tuesday night. I'll find a way to do new material, but with finishing an essay and a new teaching prac looming in 5 weeks time, it ain't gonna be easy at all!

But don't coutn me out of this fic! Or the Mod Contest! Because yours truly is a...SURVIVOR!

*yo ey yo, yahfnana gone ga sana ho je*
*lalalalalalalalalla*
*oh e oh e ohe ohe ohe mafana*

*Your choice of didgeridoo, panpipes or metal chimes*

What am I on about?

If you didn't recognise that was about Survivor, at least you know now!

**Wolfsong** · 21st July 2003, 01:57 AM

Whew, finally caught up again. now that's two down and quite a few to go ^^;; Anyway i enjoyed the chapter, especially the pikachu and Sakura. Anyway, also sorry to hear abotu the comp. Hope everything goes well, and as always keep up te great work.

**Lady Vulpix** · 21st July 2003, 09:58 AM

Oh, I'm so sorry to hear that!

I hope she comes back into reasoning soon and lets you use your computer. I can't imagine what happened that could lead to that.
Yes, you are a survivor. You'll get over anything that comes to you and become even stronger from it.

So take care and do your best. When a new chapter is up, I'll be here to enjoy it.

**mr_pikachu** · 22nd July 2003, 01:18 PM

Oh, no! Your mom won't let you use the computer now? Dang it... I was really looking forward to Chapter... uh... what are we on now?

Anyway, I hope you can get on again soon, because I really want to see the next chapter! And I also don't want you out of the mod contest on a cheap Auto KO! That'd really stink, huh? Well, good luck to you!

**Chris 2.1** · 22nd July 2003, 02:08 PM

Argh darn

My mum's always nagging; do this, clean that, walk *insert anything, including vaccum* for a walk the other.....blah.

Anyway, we'll patiently wait for some more material; don't worry, we'll play tic-tac-toe and eat our shoes, it will be fun, fun, FUN! HAHA!

oh, btw:

why don't the french eat two eggs for breakfast?

Because one egg is Un Oeuff!!!

I found it funny. Everybody else just had an excuse to egg me...

**Last Exile** · 22nd July 2003, 07:47 PM

She has no objection to me using it at University.

Anyway, I bet everyone is wondering what the hell Andy was on about in his last post. So to put all your minds to rest [nice one, Andy!

], here is a picture of the one card that Andy wishes he had because she's just too cool for this world and because I have it:

http://store4.yimg.com/I/dragonballz..._1747_27568945

See?! I told you she was cool!

**Andrew** · 22nd July 2003, 07:58 PM

Well Ryan, how big is your uni Inbox? Cause I'll send it via my UQ email, I can have like 50mb lol.

So If you want I'll start sending it ASAP. K It'll be like errr 9mB

And I'm not that desperate for an Druggie Fairy.

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