Originally posted by ZeldaFan20

The Pokemon weren't hasty in joining the group hug either, and were soon crowding around their human friends, uttering friendly grunts and squeals.
Okay, so it's not exactly a spelling error... but how could they join the hug SOON if they WEREN'T HASTY in doing so?

Anyway, I noticed you wasted no time in introducing the aspects in Hoenn to your story, which is fine by me. BUT THE "CRUISE SHIP" IDEA WAS MINE, DANG IT!! j/k! Even if you DID steal it (which I'm sure you didn't), I would be honored, not angered. Anyway, I'm still itching to know about the trouble that'll befall the S. S. Coral!