This sounds like a very different story. So it is about a boy named Fayen who got attacked and now is in acomma. He has a cool Eevee. It was a little confusing at the beginning of the 2nd chapter with the Noctowl and a trainer. But I guess I will re-read it but it seems like another trainer. You use really good description of what the surronding areas look like and you have good length for your chapters. You get your point out for each one and thats good. Keep it up!