Whew! Suspense ran high in that one! I guess when parents say they have a bond with their children, they aren't kidding!

A few misspellings: the word is "aisles", not "isles" in this case. Nice try though! And "loose" should be "lose" late in the chapter (talking about Ash losing consciousness). Nevertheless, this was a short, yet high-tension chapter! Let's hope Ash doesn't die on us, or I'm going to have a real problem going to sleep at night...