Originally posted by IloveX-TINA
Ok, I think you have a Idea set up. Its intresting with the names and having Red and Blue mentioned. Was this a prolouge or chapter? Not sure on that. You introduced Green and thats good. It doesn't sound that original yet. I hope you decide to make this different from the anime and game to make this intresting. But this is your first fic so its ok with the whole Oak ordeal. To help you out for when you write chapters make sure they are at least a page or two on word and they are full of description becausde people really like that and they will keep reading. I will keep reading to see how you get better. If ya need any help feel free to im me on aim or pm me ok? Good luck and Keep it up!
Thanx and i am goin to keep it faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar away from the anime and only the begining is kinda like the game. this was a prologe/chapter and it will be longer. thanx for offering the help