I have decided to make that a prolouge, and this Chapter one. Okay, here:
The Agents
Chapter 1 - Elevator Surprises
As Zan approaches the elevator, he ponders about what will happen on the coast of Liberia. He is confident that Zephyr the Pidgey and Brawler the Meditite will work out, although they are young and unexperianced. Pressing the button labeled 'L', the elevator starts descending down the shaft. Suddenly, it stops all at once.
"What the...?" Zan questions. A sudden sound of a crack turns Zan around immediatly. A Machamp fist can be seen through the hole. The hole is just the size for a head to look in, but it wont be that way for long. Three more punches and a wide hole is in the elevator side. A man in black steps into the elevator, threatining with his strong-looking Machamp.
"Dont move or Fists kills you!" He yells, pointing at his Machamp. "Or better yet, I kill you!" The masked man pulls out a M16. Zan backs away, trembling in fear. "Now, hand over the pokeballs, and everything might be fine," the masked man says with a snicker. Zan sticks a pokeball-filled hand to the robber.
"H-h-here s-s-sir. Th-thats all I h-have," Zan quviers as the masked man picks up the pokeballs.
"Lets see what we have here..." he says, opening a pokeball. Zephyr flies out, looking around, first at the hole, then at the robber, then at Zan. "A Pidgey? How pathetic. Lets see number two," He says, opening the pokeball containing Brawler. "Meditite? You are weak arent you. Well, two pokemon for me," He laughs, turning around. Suddenly, Zephyr pecks furiously at the robber. Fists the Machamp is already gone, waiting perhaps for his owner. The M16 the robber holds in his hand flies out, right in front of Brawler. Seizing his chance, Brawler quickly does a little meditiation and then slams his fist into the gun.
What did they teach him? Wonders Zan. Zephyr stops his assault for a second, a second too much.
"I have more pokemon than Fists!" He yells, blood dripping out of his lip. A pokeball is sent high in the air, revealing a Dragonite, whos head break the ceiling of the elevator.
"Oh my god a Dragonite!" Yelps Zan. Suddenly, a beam of pure whit light breaks another hole in the ceiling, hitting at the feet of Zan. Although the beam doesnt hit Zan and his pokemon, the force of the impact makes Zan, Zephyr, Brawler, and the masked man to there knees. The masked man recalls Dragonite and brings out a Scizor.
"Clawz, False Swipe them all...then bring Mental out and get out..." The masked man falls to the ground, out cold. Zan struggles to get up, and he sees Zephyr and Brawler still on the ground. Suddenly, three quick slashes brings Zan and his pokemon to a standstill, namely out cold. Clawz gets to the masked man's pokemon, and opens a pokeball revealing an Alakazam. Teleporting away, the Alakazam takes the pokemon with him. Or her. Suddenly, Alakazam sees himself surrounded by OAF agents. Alakazam is in awe on how they got here so fast, but then sees Fists on the floor.
Damn him! He attracted all these people. Grrrr Mental thinks. Suddenly, looking around he sees...black. The truth of the matter is that a very agile Scizor, with the owner Bryan himself, came down to do a vicious Metal Claw on the Alakazam, followed by a barrage of yellow stars. The OAF agents take Fists, Mental, and Claws away, leaving Zephyr and Brawler. Bryan however notices the two pokeballs laying on the floor, and investigates. Opening them, he sees the Meditite and Pidgey owned by Zan.
"Oh no..." he thinks, checking the elevator. He sees Zan lying on the floor, and how much of a wreck the elevator is. He gets his walky-talky gizmo out and calls in medical help. The rush Zan to the emergancy room, and check him.
"He will be ok, he should wake up in a bit," the doctor says. Zan's eyes twitch a little, and then open slowly. When they are fully open, he looks around at te white bed, the equipment lying around, and the doctors looking around him.
"Wh-where am I? What happened?" Zan questions, looking around. He trys to get up, but gets back down.
"Dont move. You were out cold in the elevator," comes the familiar voice of Bryan.
"Bryan? What?" Zan looks around. It suddenly hits him like a train. The elevator! He tells his tale to the doctors and Bryan. The listen till the end, and then shake there heads.
"Thats why. It all explains it. Being hurt by that isnt bad at all. Infact, you did great for what you have been through. A Dragonite? Those things are powerful as hell. And that beam? Ever heard of Hyper Beam? Well, its one of the strongest moves, and that Dragonite used it," The doctor explains.
"Oh, I know what Hyper Beam is, but I look down on it. It tires your pokemon way too much. But that beam was Hyper Beam...? I survived it...?" Zan blurts, now lucky to be alive.
"From the description you gave us, yes it is a Hyper Beam. I am surprised you are here today. However, it is now optional that you go to Liberia, or says Bryan. What do u chose?" Speaks the doctor.
"I will go. YAS needs me, and Jason needs me. Well, I hope Jason doesnt need me, but by the info you have given...he does. Oh, one more thing. Where are Zephyr and Brawler? Are they safe? Also, Brawler did a wierd move on the gun I told you about. What was it?"
Bryan speaks up, "My son, Brawler and Zephyr are fine. You can thank me for the move, it is called Dynamic Punch. be wary though; it isnt the accuratest of moves. If you want to use one a little more accurate, get some money and g t Liberia. There they have many TMs, such as Shadow Ball, which I suggest. Brawler will do fine. As for Zephyr, if you can, try to find a Dodrio that is a male. You can get the move Drill Peck by breeding, and if you want, they have made a new system. You dont HAVE to get an egg anymore, so why dont you try it out? Good luck Zan." Zan slowly gets out of his bed and makes his way to the stairs, elevator being out of service. He takes the stairs one by one. There were about 4 flights of stairs Zan passed on his way down, not too much work. He walks out into the sun-lit area, starting to get hot. Walking around, he finds the trainer with the Nidoking sulking with his friends it seems, who also are sulking. Cautiously he approches them.
"Would you happen to know where the private airport is? Boss said we had one."
"Kid, im not in the mood right now, my Nidoking just got pummeled by a Rhydon. But this is easy. Just take a Taxi, and go down the road all the way to the end, you cant miss it," The guy said with a frown.
"I'm broke. How will I get a taxi?" Zan questions.
"Just pay me back later," The guy offers handing out a 20-dollar bill.
"Thanks a lot! I hope your nidoking is okay!" Zan calls back, heading out to the road.
"Kids these days..." The guy mutters.
Zan, in the mean time was sitting in the cab, watching for any signs of an airport. "Oh, wait. Stop here," He says to the cab driver.
"Okay. That will be 16 Dollars," He says.
"Do you have change?"
"Of course," Zan holds out the 20. "Okay, one minute....there," He says, handing four neat 1-dollar bills out.
"Thanks!" Zan says, running to the airport. Suddenly, a tap on his back.
"You Zan Flow?" A low voice asks.
"Yep," Zan says, turning around.
"Your plane is waiting. Come on," He says. "By the way, I am Bill,"
Zan follows him all the way to a slick-looking jet plane. It was brand new! Or, well it seems. As he steps into it a blast of cool air conditioning hits him. He sits into a seat, gets his earphones, and turns on some music. The sfety stuff comes, and they take off. About 20 hours later(hey Bryan was right), somebody wakes up Zan, who had been sleeping.
"We have arrived," The plane assistant offers. Zan sleepily get out of the plane and onto the...beach?
"What is this?" Zan blurts, not knowing why he is on the beach.
"Private jets cant land on public places,"
"But still, the beach?"
"Well, yes,"
"Why?"
"No real reason, but this is as close to the Liberian Coast as possible,"
"Oh yea..." Zan takes a peek at the full beach, seeing as the jet landed behind a wall. "Oh my god..."
OKay, what do u think?
~>) The Agents (<~(PG-13 I think)
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Just edit it next time, ok? It'll make things look a lot more neat and appropriate.
In conclusion, have fun here! The members will try to help you along, and you don't have to worry about being torched by an angry reader. The mods will take care of that. Continue writing, and good luck! I'll try to keep up, but realize I already have about 20 other fics I'm watching, so I may have trouble keeping up! Anyway, I've rambled on far too long! Keep it up!
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