Ok...for starters I dont want to sound mean but this needs some work. Length, length, and length. Writing a couple paragraphs isn't that intresting. You added a battle that was funny with Makuhuita running into a tree, adding a new pokemon, and tha was about it in about 3 paragrpahs. You could have made this much longer if you added the next thing a chapter needs, description. Y9ou did good with the new pokemon but that cant be it, you need more. Describe what it was like outside, where you were, what it looks like where you are, what the pokemon look like, and little things like that can add length to a chapter. Take your time when your writing on this, try to do at least a page or 2 on word and work your way up. I think if you try really hard you can make this good. Keep it up!