Sorry for not replying sooner.


“Isn’t that sweet?” she asked, “Ash and Big Sis are playing Tag.”

That was just funny to me. Of course, that was probably your intention. ^_^ There's something about your writing that makes it feel very "cute" in a way. You've really captured the happy, friendly part of the Pokemon world. Not to say your serious parts are bad or anything, because they are good too. But your recent chapters cheered me up a little. Although, I wonder what's up with Aurora and David? Hmm... I smell a conspiracy.
Pikachu is actually speaking in English? (or whatever language is used in your fic. ^_^) But wouldn't Pikachu notice if that had occured.

"Aah! I just said that in Human!"

Well, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it up!