Thanks for the pointers; I've managed to fix those sneaky little errors. However, there's one thing that puzzles me:

One more error was forgetting to put a new beginning quote at the beginning of each new paragraph continuing the quote. Even if the quote continues straight on through, you're supposed to use a beginning quote at each new paragraph.
I can't exactly see where I made that mistake. I've even checked in my grammer book, and I'm pretty sure there is no such error. If you tell me where that is, I'll be happy to correct it.



On the lighter note, it is sad about Kipper's mother, Ash mightv'e acknowledged Big Sis's inability to talk when he spoke with the Pinsir, the identity of the mysterious "dream lady" will be revealed later, and I have absolutely NO idea how we keep doing that !