They're pretty good. What style of music are those lyrics for? Pop or dance, right? Or RnB? Oh yeah, and what inspired you to write those lyrics. The lyrics I'm about to post were inspired because they just were. Lol. I'm not sure where they came from, but I'd been listening a lot to Evanescence, and had started writing in their style and I guess this just came from how grateful I am for God saving me and how much I love God and how I hate to hear people turn away from God, and how I pray for those who turn away. *shrugs* I think that's the message of the song, or the story behind the song. Anyway, its called "Countless"
Countless:
My God my saviour
How I love you so much
I cant bear to hear the people diss you
How can they blame you for all the suffering
When they could be prasing
The countless blessings you rain on us
They push you out and turn away
I cant believe your willing to save
Their countless souls that are dead throughout the night
Jesus for you I sacrifice
My God my saviour
How I love to hear your word
I cant bear to hear them speak ill of you
They decide to blame you for all they've done
For all the hate theyve created
And they wonder why the worlds going to hell
They push you out and turn away
I cant believe your willing to save
Their countless souls that are dead throughout the night
Jesus for you I sacrifice
My life I give it all away
I want to spend every day
Living for you
My soul I hand it back to you
Was yours all along
I just had to wait for you to come and claim it back
My God my saviour
How I love you so much
That words cannot express the deepness of my heart
I pity those who look away
Who cannot bear to face the truth
Reach into their hearts please help them to realise
They push you out and turn away
I cant believe your willing to save
Their countless souls that are dead throughout the night
They push you out and turn away
I cant believe your willing to save
I guess I should know by now that its never too late
For you I sacrifice
Jesus my saviour
Its one of my favourite songs I've written, I think its much better than some of my other songs, yet I dont think its anything that good. *shrugs*
~Mist