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    WHOA!! The 4th page!! Come on people!!!!
    I was waiting for Rudy to post before I put another fight post but if he doesn't post in a few more days I'll put up another one.
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    I've been meaning to post in this but I've been a bit unsure of how to handle things. Anyway I've got a general idea now about how to get Rudy involved so I think it's about time to get things going here.

    Rudy Summers
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    As I was still making my way back to the area where Kiaran and Makura were fighting I quickly found out just how far away I had gotten from the others while looking around. Soon after picking up the two power levels going after them my scouter lost track of one of them. What was up with that? Was this person trying to hide their level? Were they planning an ambush? I was very worried about that and felt like I needed to get to them as soon as I could. I had a feeling that pretty soon they were going to need my help.

    As I finally started to approach Kiaran and Makura I saw that they were fighting some type of alien. From the looks of things he seemed to be a bit stronger than us but the two things that seemed to hurt him were the fact that he was outnumbered and he couldn't move fast. Well they look like they've got things under control. But where is the other power level I picked up? I was scanning the ground around me to see if they were down below looking for a possible ambush. All I knew was that they were hiding their power level so that they could prepare an ambush of some sort.

    What I didn't know however was that I would soon become the target of that ambush and a deadly attack......
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    Is it short? Yes
    Is it a cliffhanger? Oh yeah
    Is it an evil one? Hell yeah!
    lol

    I'll let either Kuro or Kalah figure out how to deal with the situation. Just don't let Rudy or anyone else die because I think it would suck to see a main character bite it here.
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    Well James, Gav, you had your chance! I have an idea, and its about time this wagon train got moving again! lol ^-^()

    ~~~Dina~~~
    As Hamma, Gav and I all exchanged blows with Gorgax, I was deep in thought. Something about Gorgax wasnt right, it seemed it would have been nothing for any ONE of us to take him down. Indeed it seemed like, with his apparent preference for brute strength rather than skill, and his seemingly low power level/intellegence, that it wouldve been easy for YASU to chase him off, well, maybe that WAS an exaggeration. ^-^() But still, it soon became apparent that what we saw of Gorgax was NOT all he had. As I fought with him, I tried to study his movements, the expressions on his face, and I tried to see what exactly was under that facade of pointless anger and arrogence. What higher purpose he could possibly have for attacking our group. And then it hit me:
    Whoever wanted us gone had sent one of their WEAKER fighters after us.
    Gorgax WAS an idiot! He WAS a super strong idiot and the only reason he seemed strong to us was because whatever sent him was infinately stronger! I could quickly see that we could not win this, for even if we managed to beat him, someone else would surely be sent after us, hoping to stop us before we reached our final destination....
    As I thought this, Gorgax swung his massive fist straight at my head. Thankfully I was able to block, though it did knock me back a bit. And then I flung myself backwards as if his punch had thrown me until I landed behind one of the smashed up tables in the bar. Still having to deal with 2 other fighters plus a cat creature, Gorgax didnt seem to care that I was missing.
    Excellent ^-~
    I quickly began devising another diversion, only this one had to be bigger.....and more annoying by far...

    Gorgax finally got sick of Yasu flying about his head, biting and scratching him repeatedly, so he flung his arms out and let loose an energy attack that blew out the back wall of the bar but thankfully missed Yasu. He roared for a moment, and then his attention was captured by a cheerful female voice. "Hey, ya big FATTY!!"
    Gorgax turned to see a girl with long lavendar hair looking at him with a mischievious look on her face. In his anger he didnt realise it was very odd to see a girl that was slightly glowing. "Wh...WHAT DID YOU SAY!?" He roared.
    The girl just laughed. "Why dont you pick on someone your OWN size!? OHHHH But I guess thats not many people when you weigh ABOUT A MILLION POUNDS!!! AAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAA!!!!" The girl laughed and then stuck her toungue out at him. For Gorgax, that was the last straw. He ran like a wild bull towards the girl, who quickly took off running.
    I ran too, but towards Gav and Hamma, who, after seeing the girl run off with Gorgax after her, just stared in shock. Grabbing their arms, I pulled them towards the hole in the back wall.
    They looked at me with surprise. "But....you....didnt you just....I mean....a...a.....ah..." Hamma seemed to be at a loss for words.
    I shook my head. "That wont hold his attention for long, its only a matter of time before----" Suddenly a loud explosion followed by the angry bellow of Gorgax was heard. I smiled briefly. "Looks like he caught me...."

    As we ran they demanded to know what was going on. I sighed. "I dont really know myself. But one things for sure:
    It seems we have worn out our welcome..."

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    OCC-It seems to me that things have been moving really slowly as of late in this RPG. Seeing that the end of school is around the corner I'm assuming most of us are busy with end of the year tests, graduation plans, ect. Whatever the case might be I'll give Kalah or Kuro a few more days to get their POV's in on this. If there isn't anything new near the end of the week then I'll get to work on continuing things myself ^_~
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    *cries* I'm SORRY! I meant ot post! I really DID!! Waaaa....

    This is probably going to be short but at least it's something...


    Makura:
    ~~~~~
    I was obvious to me, from the very first punch he threw, that this creature wasn't at his full power yet. He seemed to be surpressing his power level, most likely to lull us into a false sense of security. Probably hoping that we'd drop our guard. But due to my accute power sense, it was hard for people to hide their power from me. I wasn't going to let up...
    But even though I could sense that he was hiding his strength, it didn't seem like he was all that powerful anyway...He wasn;t going to be to big of a challenge.
    After several failed punches, kicks and charges from both sides, all three of us ended up in opposite corners of the small opening. Our blue-skinned opponent eyed both of us warily, as if trying to decide which one of us to attack first. I caught Kiaran's eye and gave her a sideways grin.
    "Hey, Kiaran, if you don't mind...I'd like to take this one alone." I said calmly. Kiaran turned her head sharply and looked at me in surprise, her eyes as wide as dragonballs.
    "What?" She replied, "Why, Makura?"
    "Well, there really isn't much room in here for all three of us to duke it out, now is there?" I said, motioning to the tight area around us. "It'll be much easier to move around if we take him one on one. Besides..." I added folding my arms over my chest, "You should really have learned by now, Kiaran, that I fight alone. It's just my nature not to accept help in a fight from anyone. No offense, of course."
    Kiaran just stared at me, her face showing a look of disbelief. "Uh-huh...."
    "So, if you would please step back for a bit? You can hang out over there with Torek." I said taking a few steps foreward so iwaas directly facing our attacker. I heard Kiaran sigh behind me.
    "Whatever..." she said dryly, walking over to stand next to Torek in the doorway of the house.
    Meanwhile, I had gotten back into fighting stance, cracking my knuckles and giving him a threatening and taunting glare.
    "Well buddy, today's your unlucky day! You made the wrong choice when you decided to take me on! Normally I don't fight off contract, but for your ugly arse I think I'll make an exception."
    At that comment the alien growled and the muscles in his massive arms twitched in aggravation and anticipation. "And DAMN are you ugly!"
    I balled up one of my hands into a fist and slammed it into the palm of my other hand.
    "You live to regret the day that you went up against Makura! If I lt you live that is....Heh..." I paused, bending my arms at my sides into an attack position. Then I began to power up, my battle aura building up and swirling around me.
    "BRING IT ON!!"


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    Kiaran - F - Saiyan
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    I stood back in the, 'side lines' as I watched Makura take this guy by herself. It made me a bit discomforted.... i wanted to take him on as well... but seeing before how Makura had her temper, I decided it was best to just let her have her way. Besides, it was just a fight- right? Nothing to really have any glory...
    We just need a ship... a ship... that is what we should just try to get.
    I thought, and sighed until a flickering came into my mind.
    What is..
    I gazed up to see Rudy, floating in the air and gazing down below at Makura and her starting the fight with that ugly blue creature. No... it wasn't Rudy though, I had sensed his power signature earlier and he wasn't the cause of the prickling sensation upon my neck.
    What in the wor-

    Suddenly I saw a blur of emotion heading straight towards Rudy. The power signature was trying to be cloaked!
    Thank goodness for instincts.. I thought in a flash, as suddenly adrenaline came to my body. I couldn't let Rudy get hurt... he was about to be assaulted by some unknown being or force!
    "RUDY WATCH OUT!" I yelled, but I knew this wasn't enough time. Deep inside of me, my body churned until with a flare of ki I pushed myself upwards with a huge thrusting force. Stones flew about as I zoomed straight towards Rudy. He turned to see a blur of Kiaran suddenly go whizzing behind him.
    I made contact with the figure who had tried to sneak up behind Rudy and do who-knows-what. The force of this creature going so fast at Rudy, and the force of me going so fast to protect Rudy caused both of our bodies to fly through the air and crash into the hard, stone ground below. We barely missed a building, as cracks rippled like a mere wave through the cement at our bodies hit against the ground.
    As soon as everything was able to come into a little less of a blur, Iq uickly pushed the figure away from my body and stood up. The figure did the same as it glared at me with glowing red eyes.
    Oh yeah.
    This guy's powerlevel was now officially uncloaked.
    And he was probably mad that I spoiled his plans...
    "Don't you DARE try to sneak up upon Rudy!" I growled, as I took a fighting stance amongst the cracked ground.


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    You know....I wonder what it is about Rudy (the character) that makes all these girls attracted to him. LOL! All three of the girls seem to have little crushes on him!

    Makura: WHAT?! I do not! Take back that ridiculous statement immiedietly!!!!!!
    Kuro: ....no! I don't think I will!
    Makura: >.< ARGH!! *dives on Kuro and begins to beat the stuffing out of her*
    Kuro: Oy ve...*oof* not again...why do my characters always turn on me....*OUCH!!*


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    lol!! ^^ *watches contently as Makura beats upon Kuro*
    Makura: WHAT ARE YOU STARING AT?
    B4: 0.0;;; Me? Errhh... uhhh... nothing! ^^;;;;; Absolutely nothing! *whistles and looks away*

    I think it's funny too! *gazes about* Now if RUDY *emphasizes the name* would jsut poooost...it would make things easier! lol.

    Kiaran: You're not suggesting I like him, are you?
    B4: We are. Mwhaha-
    Kiaran: NOOOOO!!! *tackles B4 and covers her mouth as she struggles to tie her up with duck tape*
    B4: MWHamhphhpmmpphhhh!! mphhhh! *wiggles, after being wrapped up in duck tape tightly*
    Kiaran: ^^ That's betteR!
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    Dina: You know, maybe hes not posting, cause EVERYONES EMBARRASSING HIM!!! *blushes* I mean, you guys are beating up your split personalitys for goodness sake! Leave the poor boy alo---

    Asilynne: *breaking in* You know, we could make a movie, and it would be called 'Theres Something about Rudy' and it could be like a police action drama instead of that stupid romantic-comedy 'theres something about Mary', and it would be TOTALLY AWESOME!

    Dina: ........

    Asilynne: And then, we could rip off The Shield, and the Matrix, and James Bond, and Austin Powers, and---

    Dina: *backhands Asi*

    Asilynne: Ow....or...I could just shut up now?

    Dina: You got it. 8)




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    OOC-If the three of you keep this up then Rudy might just turn into the next Master Roshi.
    Rudy-HEY! What the hell makes you think I'd become a perv?! I would never......OHHHH!!! A penny!!! ^_^

    On second thought I don't think we will have to worry about that ^_^;
    lol

    Time to be serious now. I know I've got to post in FS. While waiting for others to post in this I've taken the time to plan out some cool yet slightly nasty things for my character in Dawn. Now that I've got things taken care of there I can sit back for a moment or two in that and get back to work here. Look for a new post from me soon ^_~
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    It's time to get this back on track now that I've finally got the time to take care of this. This is only ment to get things moving once more. As a result this might be on the quick side ^_~

    Rudy Summers
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    I had been expecting an ambush of some sort but I would have never expected myself to be the target. Being totally unaware would have been a mistake that would have cost me my life. However Kiaran managed to stop the attack before that could happen. I definately owed her one after that. Touching down next to her I got into my fighting stance and said to my attacker "The first rule of trying to ambush someone is to make sure no one else is going to see you." However I soon noticed that this guy couldn't care less about me at the moment. I may have been the target but he was clearly upset about his plan being ruined by Kiaran. I could see he was intent on fighting her. As much as I wanted a bit of the action I knew better than to get in the way of this. After backing off a bit the two of them took to the sky and were soon going at it.

    As I watched the two battles from the ground I quickly noticed something. The two attackers seemed to be powered up fully but no matter what they did neither of them could lay a finger on Makura or Kiaran. As for them I could tell from my own battles with them that this was not their full power. Even so this looked like child's play for them. This got me wondering about the power levels of everyone fighting. Within moments I was getting new readings from my scouter and was quickly shocked over the results. The big guy with the horns came in at 1274 while Makura's power level read 1843. Meanwhile the one with the red eyes had a power level of 1311 opposed to Kiaran's 1800. The two of them were already much stronger than these guys and I knew full well that they could go much higher than this.

    Suddenly I started to wonder about this. Looking toward where I had picked up the third power level I attempted to scan for the levels of everyone involved in the other fight. Sure enough it was more of the same situation. I had a power level of 921 up against three reading in at 1502, 1510 and 1573. While I had no way of knowing who was who I knew it was a safe bet that the three strongest levels were Hamma, Gav and Dina. I didn't understand this at all. Here were three fighters trying to take us on and we managed to outpower all of them. Why attack us if you knew we were stronger? But what if they didn't know you were stronger? I suddenly thought to myself.

    Whatever the case may be I knew that something wasn't right......
    ------

    I know the power levels between the Saiyans and the others may seem uneven but keep in mind no one is fully powered up. Since everyone is equal you could expect much more even levels when everyone is at their max ^_~
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    OOC-Page three?
    Please tell me I'm not the only one who wants to keep on going with this RPG.
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    Oops! Gomen, gomen, gomen Nasai!!! I really should have replied here sooner! I think I was hesitating because...I was never that good at writing battle scenes....^^() But I'll give it a try.


    Makura:
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    The battle was finally underway, and I had to admit, it felt good to finally be able to battle, even if it was only a weakling henchmen. I still didn't know who had sent them, but I was almost positive that our target had learned of our plan and was most likely behind this attack.
    The creature finally jumped into an attack stance and charged me with, what looked like, full force. I held up my arms in a cross and blocked his oncoming fist with ease.
    "Is that all you got?! At least give me a decent fight!" I smirked, "I guess I overestimated your strength!" I pushed him off and jumped back, landing back in my fighting stance, all the while, still steadily increasing my power level. Now it was my turn!
    "HYYYAAA!!" I jumped up and flew straight at him, hailing him with a constant barrage of punches. He managed too block most of them, but I still managed to get a few through. Even tually one landed smack dab in the middle of his face and knocked him back. I touched back down, still maintaining my stance, and laughed. "Well! You seem to be pretty good on the defensive! But how are you on offense?" I hled out my hand, palm up and beckoned him on with my fingers. "Come on! Don't be shy! Show me what you got! You might as well go all out before you die!"
    The lizard creature snarled menacingly, trying to sound intimidating, and was obviously irritated by my comments. I saw his battle aura begin to widen and glow as he too raised his power level. Hm... So he did have more power. I suspected as much. I knew that he was surpressing his power and I had been purposefully been taunting him to draw it out. I always enjoyed a match more when it was actually somewhat of a challenge. It was more fun that way! It gave me satisfaction knowing that my victims put up a good fight before they died.
    The creature finally finished powering up and charged again, this time much faster and with more force than before. In fact, I was surprised at how much stronger he had become. And this surprise cause my gaurd to drop breifly, which was a mistake I shouldn't have made. A hard punch landed on my face, knocking me back, and while I was stummbling a hand grabbed the front of my jacket. He then brought up his knee and rammed my right in the stomache. A choked gasp escaped my mouth as I was temporarily winded. I wrenched free and jumped back, cluching one hand over my stomache. After a few seconds i stood up striaght again. I looked at him and a sinister grin spread across my face as I titled my head to the side.
    "Huh! I'm impressed! You actually managed to hit me! But...don't get used to it. I've already memorized your fighting style and I don't pan on making that same mistake again. So, what do you say..." I slowly brought my arms out in front of me and and brought a pair of cupped hands up towards my right shoulder, keeping them an equal distance apart. I spread my legs apart slghtly, one of them positioned about a foot in front of the other. Twisting back slightly (OOC: kinda like a Kamehameha stance) and smirked at the creautre. "...let's turn things up a notch!"
    Yes. I was ready now...I was in the stance and ready to start my power up for one of my favorite and best attacks...

    ...The Kuro Kakumei...



    Argh, sorry that was bad. I told you I'm not good at describing battles. I'll try harder next time!! Promise!


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    *clears throat loudly* Ahem! *taps foot rythmically*
    Alright...I can't be blamed for it this time, I was the alst one to post so I cant be expected to pick this up. Come on, people! Keep this going! Don't let it die

    Oh BTW- I know this girl at my school who is VERY GOOD at drawing. I'm gonig to talk to her and see if I can convince her to draw a Dragonball FS doujinshi (comic)! I'm even willing to pay her, but I don't think it will come to that...I hope. I'm probably just going to print out the posts from the RPG and have her draw one of the best scenes. If there are any requests, please make them to me now.


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    OOC-Well if your taking requests how about the part where Makura and Rudy are locked in a power struggle before the 'explosive' draw to their fight? A way to make it look cool IMO is to divide it into two frames with Makura in the top left and Rudy in the bottom right. Both could look a little worse for wear and beaten up as that is going on. For the moves in that scene I believe they were Rudy's Masenko and Makura's Kakumei if I'm not mistaken.

    As far as a post goes I'll see what I can do once I take care of some posts elsewhere ^_~
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    OOOoo! That would be awesome!! *gets all starry eyed*

    I think a picture with the spaceship would be funny... where they are all crammed in there. lol. Or a picture of Dina falling over that rock with Idaia looking quite frightened. XD And Makura just standing there with a 'what-a-loser-look' upon her face! ^^



    I( really don't know what to post tho... are we supposed to easily beat these guys or is there a surprise? I'm thinking we shoul perhaps get a move on so we can get JT's char back. ^^
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    Yeah, those would be some good ones! The next time I see her (I'm not quite sure when that will be though...) I'll ask er about it.
    But I'm having a little dilemma...you see...in order to put this into a manga format, I'm gonna need to print up the story and give it too her (preferable in a scrit format to make it easier for her to follow) But The problem is, We ahve several cahracters who were in the RPG in the beginning (ex: Yoshi and Kal) that disappeared after a while. I'm figuring that I may have to take a few liberties and redo cerain parts of the beginning in order to write them out. If anyone could help me out with this I would greatly appriciate it. Arigatou!

    I'm thining also we should hurry up and finish these fights or else this RPG is gonna drop. I say just have everyone finsh their battles and start to head back to the others. But don't include Makura because I'm planning on doing something. So how bout everyone just wors on finishing up their own fights first and we'll go from there?


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    ARGH!! ALright! FINE! I guess I'LL post, since no one else IS!!!

    I understand if you guys are busy, but honestly, I don't think it's hard to make a short little post just to say, "this is what's happening" and "my character is doing so and so..."

    Sorry, I didn't mean to snap at you guys but I'd appriciate it if someone made an attempt to post. I really enjoy this RPG and I don't want to see it die!


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    ...The Kuro Kakumei.

    IT was an attack that gained power by feeding off the negative energy of either the user or the opponent, depending on the situation. Anger...depression....fear....all of these things were emotions that could feed into the Kuro Kakumei. And from looking at my opponent, I could tell that he had a lot of negative energy (most of which was due to anger and evil intention). Excellent....it should definetly make my attack highly effective!
    The creature obviously ssensed that I was about to do something, so he began to charge up an energy attack of his own. Not that it would make much of a differance in the end....Heh.
    As I concentrated harder and harder, I could feel all of the negative emotion and energy flowing into me and I forced it down to form a flickering black orb of chi in between my hands. I smiled at my assailant.
    "Go ahead, lizard-face. Make your move..." I taunted. The creature snarled yet again and, drawing back his large arm and swinging it foreward forcefully, propelling a large ball of dark blue energy straight at me. Still holding on to my own chi ball, I jumped quiclly out of the way, though the blast missed me by mere inches. It flew past me and crashed into one of the buildings on the ground.
    "Hmm...an impressive shot! That one almost hit me!" I paused and put on an intense face...the face that I always wore when I was getting serious about a fight. "Now...It's MY turn!"
    I backed up and, focusing my energy into this one intense attack, threw my arms foreward, along with a black beam of dark energy.
    "KURO....KAKUMEI!!!" I cried. The black energy swelled and enveloped the creature, which was accompanied by a metalic screech as he was insinerated into nothing but dust that was picked up and blown away in the breeze. I grinned as I looked at the febble remains of my opponent fly away.
    I floated back the ground and touched down lightly on one foot. I put my hands on my hips and grin a very satisfied grin.
    "Well! That sure was easy! How come I can never get a good challenge nowadays?" I chuckled. But then...a strange thought crossed my mind that made me break my celebration. That creautre was easily defeated....in fact...it was almost too easy... He had obviously been sent to attack us by someone who had heard of our plans and wanted us out of the way. Our main enemy... But why, if he wanted to get rid of us so badly, would he send one of his lowest ranking soldiers? Especially since the Saiya-jin army was full of high-level fighters that could easily have taken us on and stood more of a chance. And our enemy most likely knew this...
    It might be that I was overreacting, but for some reason this thought troubled me. But I decided that it wasn't worth worrying about it right now.
    I looked up and saw that both Kiaran and Rudy were still engaged in fighting, but I knew that it probably wasn't gong to take them long to finish up their resepctive fights if their opponents were as weak as mine had been. I decided to go and check on Torek. And when I did I almost regretted doing so...
    "Hey, Torek! You alright back th- WHAT THE....?!"
    Torek was standing at the front door of his house...or...at least what was left of it...and looking extremely stunned. It seemed that the ki blast from the lizard man that I had dodged had continued on it's way and crashed into Torek's house instead. It hadn't been completely destroyed, but a sizeable chunk of it was now reduced to rubble, including part of his backyard.
    But nothign was as depressing as the look on Torek's face. A look of horror and disbelief and shock was frozen on his face as he stared at his house, twitching convulsively.
    "My...MY HOUSE!!!" He cried, holding his hands to the sides of his head. "LOOK AT MY HOUSE!! NO! NO! NOOO! WHY?! WHY ME?!!!"
    "T...Torek..." I said, sweatdropping. I didn;t quite know what to say considering that it had been our fighting that had caused it. "Eh-heh....uhhh...well, look at the bright side Torek! At least it's still standing..."
    "WAAAAAAAAAAA!!! And look at the ships!!"
    "The....ships?"
    "Yeah! The ships I was working on for you guys! The explosion messed them all up! I'm gonna have to start again! It'll take me all night!"
    "All....night?!"

    Damn....this was getting more complicated by the minute....


    THERE!!! I posted, since no one ELSE WOULD!!! *grumble*
    I left it open so that everyone could finish up their fights and then we'll have to find a hotel to stay in for the night. now PLEASE someone post!!!


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    Sorry about not posting in this. I've got just enough time to take care of a quick post. Hopefully what I'm about to do won't affect things too much

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    Things seemed to be under pretty good control at the moment. Makura had just finished off her opponent and Kiaran still had the upper hand. I would have stayed with them but at the moment my attention was drawn to the others. Their power levels had suddenly dropped off my scouter. I didn't think that they had been beaten but I was a bit concerned. Whoever was fighting them was now at 1200 and still rising. Without a single word I had left Kiaran and Makura to see what was going on with the others.

    I hadn't been flying for very long when a voice from behind suddenly shouted "And where the hell are you off to?" Turning around I saw Makura flying right behind me. "You did see what happened right?" she had asked me. I didn't say a single word since I was a bit focused on the rising power level at the moment. She seemed to be getting annoyed and said "That son of a b**** I was fighting took out our ships!" Stopping in midair I looked at her and asked "Your not serious are you?" Makura just crossed her arms and said in a tone that seemed to be proud and yet annoyed at the same time "Since when am I not serious Summers?" I could see her point pretty well. As I started to fly again I told her "That's a big problem but it's going to have to wait for now." Taking off my scouter I handed it to Makura and let her see for herself. Once she had it on she seemed to get a little more angry and said "So it's a power level of 1350. What's your point?" I quickly explained to her why it was a cause for concern. "While you and Kiaran were fighting that power level was in the low 900's. Everyone else measured in the low to high 1500's."

    Makura seemed rather indifferent about what it could mean. "Isn't this typical. The humans or Namekians get someone they can't handle and then suddenly it's up to the Saiyans to bail them out" she said with a sigh. I didn't say a word but her cold attitude about others was kinda bugging me a bit now. Instead I commented on the rising power level they were dealing with and told her "Somehow I get the feeling this one might not be as easy as those other two." Getting excited now Makura shouted "Well that's great news! This guy might be more of a challenge but he'll still be no problem for the two of us!"

    I could only hope she was right about the fact that we could easily win this......
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    Seeing that everyone's had a role in these battles I figured that perhaps Gorgax was not showing his true power. This could be a good chance to have Rudy fight again provided it doesn't cause problems for anything that JT might have planned.
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    I don't think that should be a problem, Rudy....considering none of the people invovlved in that fight have posted in a while. Asilynne told me that she promised to post sometimes soon, but I'm not sure about Gav. If you could talk to him and ask him to post that would be nice. You probably see him around more often than I do.
    My brother on the other hand...I honestly don't think he's going to post anymore. He hasn't been coming to TPM at all recently and he doesn't show any sign of making a comeback...*sigh* but instead of writing out Hamma again, I think we should probably just make him an NPC. It's easier that way...
    Now, as for B4 and Jt....I really don;t know. Knowing Kalah she'll make a comeback and post again soon, but I haven't heard anything from JT in quite a while, and I find that odd considering that this is his RPG.
    But thanks for posting Rudy, that should probably get things going again.


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    "Ksssshaaaraaanta!" I cried out, as energy formed with in my hands and literally jabbed straight into the alien creature, enough to make him cry out and suddenly start to swell.
    " Feeling a little bloated? Try this!" I stated, taking my foot and making a final blow to his head. The alien creature flew several feet... before crash landing some where in the distance, and I knew he woul dnot be back for more.
    Brushing myself off, I gazed to see Makura and Rudy speaking with each other. Instantly I dashed over to them and heard just the last sentence of their conversation..

    "Well that's great news! This guy might be more of a challenge but he'll still be no problem for the two of us!"

    My eyes widened. "What? There is another?"
    Makura rolled her eyes as Rudy nodded. " The others are battling a guy whose getting stronger... we'll have to go back."
    I nodded, as I gazed back and sighed... but then my eyes widened.
    " So, this was it."
    "What?" Makura commented, as I gazed to Rudy and her both.
    " I bet anything that these two guys who came here were just a set up. Some thing to slow us down... I don't like to say it, but I often have the uncanny ability to feel or predict things, and I predict that this was a set up to slow us down so we didn't return to the others as fast."

    Rudy gazed to Makura, and nodded... "Even if your feelings are wrong, I wouldn't want to wait for them to prove me otherwise. Let's get moving then."

    Makura, Rudy and I then immediatly went back to where the others were... in hopes at least, to find them in one piece.
    Some thing isn't right... I thought... and tried to shake it off as we began to come back.


    Yasu
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    Yasu fluttered about, until suddenly she froze. Pausing in mid-air next to Dina, her eyes widened as her cat-like expression turned into a horrified gaze.
    { Dina... Dina! }
    "What?" Dina said, gazing towards me as Hamma and Gav continued to beat upon the alien creature.
    { I recognize this creature- this alien we are fighting.}
    "Oh? What is it?"
    { I just remembered that their powerlevel increases after substaining many hits... not only that, but their intelligence rating goes up as well. If you were to defeat it, you woul dhave ot kill it quickly before it gained power from your attacks. But I am afraid that his defense is quite high... }

    Dina's eyes widened, as she quickly turned and called out to Gav and Hamma but they were to into the battle. Yasu swallowed.. as Dina then turned back to the cat.
    " You and Idaia should perhaps go look for Rudy, Makura and Kiaran. We might need some Saiyans..."
    Gorgax suddenly threw Gav threw a window, and Yasu did not wait for another second. Instantly she zoomed to Idaia, and Idaia got the notion and followed the cat out of teh building. Yasu floated in the air, as if debating on what direction to take.
    " I sense them not too far this way... " Idaia said, pointing to the right. Yasu nodded, and floated above Idaia as they briskfully walked towards the direction- but before they even got five feet away from the door which led inside to where Gorgax and the othesr were, a ghastly hand suddenly reached out and seized Yasu.

    Yasu made a squeak at teh grab, and Idaia stopped immedaitly to whirl around and suddenly freeze with terror. There... was the strangest alien to be seen thus far. It reminded Idaia of an Earthly creatured called a Scorpion.. except this alien walked upon to legs, but still had many arms of a scorpion upon his upper body. A long tail drapped over his shoulder, and it was that tail which looked deadly. Two large claws were the last of his arms, and one of them tightly held Yasu. Yasu's wings were also grasped, and one ofthem looked broken or twisted oddly. Yasu grimaced, as her face- although black furred, seemed to whiten and look sickly pale. Her body was limp, as her eyes closed suddenly after a message to Idaia..
    { i sense Ru-}
    Idaia froze, as the alien sneered and coarsely spoke to Idaia...
    "What's this... I've found a green bug to squish while I take the little kitty away!" Then laughter came. Idaia tried to run... but found that a tail smacked him in the back which caused him to fall to the ground. Idaia was a little boy, but he was not stupid- he was Earth's new Guardian after all...
    " RUDY! MAKURA!! KIARAAAAN!"


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    Makura:
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    "RUDY! MAKURA!! KIARAAAAN!"

    Rudy and Kiaran had heard it to. I could tell from the looks on both of their faces that they had. Without stopping we all looked at one another, Rudy and Kiaran's faces one's of seriousness and urgancy.
    "That...That was Idaia!" Rudy cried, instinctively clenching his fists.
    "I knew something was wrong!" Kiaran added. Her eyes narrowed. "We need to hurry!"
    "Right!" Rudy agreed.
    "Alright! More alien ARSE to kick!" I chimed in, grinning from ear-to-ear.
    Rudy and Kiaran both stared at me, skeptical looks on their faces.
    "You really need to refigure your priorities, Makura..." Rudy stated bluntly, shaking his head.
    "What..? Hey I didn't say I wasn't worried about the kid! I'm gonna help him! I'm just glad I get to have some fun in the process! I hope that this one is more of a challenge than the last one though..."
    Suddenly, Rudy's head seemed to grow about ten sizes as he finally snapped. (OOC: hehehe...enlarged anime head...hehehehe)
    "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU, MAKURA!!!!!" He shouted
    "Ahh! Alright, alright! Chill out, Summers!! I was only kidding! Don't go getting your tail in a twist!!" I replied, recoiling from Rudy's violent reprimand.
    Kiaran simply sweatdropped. "You were asking for that one...
    "Shut up! No one asked you!" I yelled.
    "Nevermind that now!" she replied, "We have to get going and help Idaia and the others!"
    Rudy nodded and he and Kiaran sped up, zooming towards the retaurant where we had left the others. I sighed and followed. These Earth Saiya-jins were quite and enigma...I didn't think I'd every figure them out...


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    ~~~Dina~~~
    This seemed like it wasnt gonna be one of my better days.
    After leading Hamma, Gav and the rest away from Gorgax we had hid in a small alley behind one of the strange alien buildings to figure out what was going on. As I thought to myself about our strange attacker, and that we should all try and find Rudy and the rest and get off this planet as soon as possible, Hamma took the time to display one of the bizzare powers of his race.
    With a sickening ripping/splashing noise an arm shot out of what a few seconds before had been just a bloody stub.
    Feeling like I had been kicked in the stomach, I wished for the second time that day that I hadnt eaten so much.

    But I wasnt going to have time to be disgusted because a few seconds later, Gorgax had found us again. And by the look on his face and the way he was panting like a raging bull, I had a feeling my 'exploding double' technique wasnt going to work on him again. Gav and Hamma rushed at him again without a word, but for a moment I just stood there. Theres got to be SOMETHING.....he HAS to have SOME weak point....Now WHAT IS IT!?
    Yasu took that moment to tell me just the opposite. { I just remembered that their power level increases after substaining many hits... not only that, but their intelligence rating goes up as well. If you were to defeat it, you would have to kill it quickly before it gained power from your attacks. But I am afraid that his defense is quite high... }

    Dammit....as if we needed MORE problems.... I started to warn Hamma and Gav, but stopped. Theyd find out soon enough. Right now it would be best if Yasu and Idaia got as far away from here as they could. Things could only get worse and if they were here it would be guarunteed they would be harmed in some way. So, after telling them to find Rudy and the others for reinforcements, I joined in the fray.

    I soon found out HOW worse thing could get.

    A well placed punch sent me hurtling into a dumpster, where a half full bag of flour was laying in. With a *poof* a cloud of white dust rose up around me and started to affect my sinuses. Oh ****.. I had time to think just as I sneezed.....




    ~~~Dina~~~

    "Wooow where am I?" I chirped as I looked around the small metal room, funny white clouds dancing around. There was a hole at the top, what a funny place! I climbed out and looked around and saw the green guy and the guy with spiky brown hair dancing with a weird dude. We mustve been playing hide and seek! Or maybe even Tag! I realised. Hey and that means they didnt find me yet! So that meant if I tagged one then Id win!

    I giggled as I snuck up on the new person. He was new so I figured why not let him be on my team? ^-^ Getting closer, he was so busy with my friends he didnt see me. I reached back a hand and smacked him on the back. "TAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGG GGG!!!!!" I yelled as loud as I could! Now we could REALLY start to play!

    But he didnt want to play, he mustve been a bully cause he just whirled around and smacked me right in the face! It hurt a lot and as I fell to the ground I almost started to cry but then....
    Then.....I got mad.
    Here I was, trying to play with him because he was new and he looked like he needed friends and he HIT ME!! He WAS a bully! And then I realised he was hitting my friends too!! I stood up, clenching my fists and came over to him. I was so angry that my face was turning red and colors were rising up around me and I didnt even notice how pretty they were! Thats how mad I was!
    I grabbed him by the shirt and before he could do anything I slammed him up against the wall. "YOU LEAVE MY FRIENDS ALONE YOU BIG BULLY!!!!" I yelled at him and brought my other hand up. It was glowing, but I wasnt paying attention to that really, I just hit him. Then he got free and tried to hit me but somehow I never got hit, I guess it was cause I was so mad.
    After a lot of him trying to hit me I just got so mad that the glow around me got bigger, and then a lot of glowing lights came out of my hands!
    I was surprised. "Woooow how did I-----"
    "Dina?!" I looked, and saw Rudy looked surprised too. "Hi Rudy!" I said, waving a glowing hand. Stray lights shot out of it which Rudy dodged. "hehe Sorry! I was just teaching this bully a lesson!" I pointed to where Hamma and Gav were pounding on Gorgax. He was slumped on the ground and he looked charred and crispy.
    Rudy just stared at me. I guess he couldnt believe anyone would want to bully us cause we were so nice. ^-^

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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    I just looked at Dina in shock after seeing that last blast she let loose. She may have been in her so called 'idiot form' but that was still amazing. I had never seen any human use such power before. I can't believe it. All that power just from getting angry. Suddenly I stopped thinking about that for a moment. The signs were starting to point in another direction. I could think of only one person that let their true power loose when they started to get mad. Was it possible that Dina was actually......

    Suddenly a blow to the stomach caught my attention. As the wind was knocked out of me another blow to my face sent me through the window of a nearby shop. As I got up and brushed the glass off myself I looked at myself. I wasn't cut up too bad but the top of my gi got ripped pretty bad. Seeing that it would only get in the way I pulled it off and threw it to the side leaving myself with just my orange shirt now. As I stepped back outside I looked right at the alien who had attacked the others and then come after me. Those blows weren't strong enough to do serious damage but it was enough to let me know that this guy was all business. Even without my new scouter I was able to tell that he was almost as strong as a Saiyan. However I was sure that I was still at least stronger than him Without a word I prepared to attack since I felt that I'd be able able to handle this no problem. Lucky for me a sudden warning from Hamma stopped me. "Be very careful Rudy! His power level increases as he's injured." As I looked at him I saw looks of disbelief on the faces of Kiaran and Makura. I was also shocked but I was not going to let that get to me.

    Getting into a battle stance I focused on the creature again and said "I'll keep that in mind." The alien however was not amused and told me "I don't care if you are a Saiyan. Do you honestly think you can beat the mighty Gorgax?" Despite his advantage I showed no sign of backing down as I spoke. "You seem to be putting too much trust in your ability. Everyone has limits to their power. Also it's rare to find someone that does not have some kind of weakness." My words only seemed to anger Gorgax more as he got into his own stance. "Well my tiny friend I must say that your a confidant one. However your weakness showed itself before you even said or did anything. The pride of a Saiyan is the biggest downfall of your race. None of you can seem to admit when you are outclassed. Plus your two female friends also go to prove that when you crush one there's always another waiting. It's one of two things you have in common with roaches. And before you ask about the other I'll just go ahead right now and say that both of you are pests. At least the roaches aren't so troublesome." While I kept my cool and said nothing I could feel Makura's power level rising. It wasn't anywhere near her max but it was high enough to show that she was ready to fight. Gorgax seemed focused on her rather than me. I had the general idea of what he was about to do as he started to power up but before he could do anything to her I rushed right at him as I charged an attack. Before he could even react I had already fired a Masenko at point blank range. All of us watched as he flew back several feet and hit a wall hard. Surprisingly he recovered from the blow very fast and was back on his feet in no time. Gorgax put a hand on what appeared to be a very painful burn that was on his chest as he looked at me with pure rage. "Your going to pay for that Saiyan. It's a debt that will be paid for with your life!" With those words he came flying right at me with deadly intentions. The battle was underway and all eyes watching were hoping that I'd be the victor......
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    "Ehhh!" Idaia gave a blunt cry, as suddenly the scorpion-like alien took a massive claw and bluntly struck him with a blow to teh stomach- hard. Idaia went flying and landed in a massive groupings of trash and various metal objects. Objects flew into the air as it lightened his fall, but as he slowly got to his feet again, poking his head out from the trash- he saw the alien coming at him again.
    " I'll squash yer bluntlilhead like a buurggg!"
    He slurred his human language, as Idaia's eyes widened as the bug charged straight at him. In his claw was Yasu still, limp and motionless... it was odd to Idaia that the alien wanted to kill him, but yet it only disabled Yasu and kept her in his claw with out 'disposing' of her.

    "Eeeeeeeeugh!" Idaia suddenly rolled to teh side just as the alien made a 'fwack!' and tried to smack him upside the head. Idaia had moved in time, just before beng made into Namek trash himself. Idaia had sensed Kiaran, Rudy and Makura coming... but for some reason, he couldn't see them. Where were they?! He could sense them near... near Dina's, but they were not here.
    Holy God of the Dragons... they've gone by Gorgax instead..
    He thought, and swallowed hard as suddenly the alien made another attempt and cleanly disabling Idaia's head permanantly.
    IDaia ducked in th enick of time, trembling from fear of being made into an alien sport trophy..

    "Stop mov'n yer ugly gren burg!"
    The alien growled, and Idaia decided that it would be best if he ran. He couldn't really help Yasu being saved if he stuck around enough to get his head sliced clean off..
    As Idaia turned to run however, instaedof taking a massive claw to strike Idaia upside the head, the alien took it's massive Scorpion tail and swung it from the side which hit Idaia solidly in his legs and abdomin. It caused hte poor young boy to fly wildly, and slam against a cement wall hard. Idaia's head backlashed so that it hit the wall as well, causing Idaia to be consumed by the blackness... as he fell to teh floor, out cold.

    The alien still clutched Yasu tightly in it's claw-like grip, as it smirked and jeered..
    "Mission accomplissshed... havuh the prooofEsea, nowah must keeell thuh heeealur."



    Kiaran
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    "He's just getting stronger!" Kiaran gave a shout, as she frantically looked at Rudy and Makura, then to the others.
    Gorgax suddenly charged at Rudy with a fierce speed, but Kiaran was going to have none of that. She quickly took to the air and with a thrust of heavy ki, she sped her body straight towards Gorgax's side and knocked him off his 'crash course' with Rudy. The blow to Gorgax was massive, as it knocked him deadly off his path into a wall- causign it to crumble.
    The force of impact was painful to Kiaran's shoulder, as it popped out of place with the contact made. She quickly hovered in front of Rudy however, and popped it back into place. Gorgax- as expected, rose to his feet.
    "We've got to attack him at the same time... all of us, with one massive blow to take him out before he gets any stronger."
    Hamma commented, as Kiaran nodded.
    "Let's powe-"
    Kiaran stopped short, as suddenly she sensed some thing...
    Some thing was not right..
    The others did not seem to notice her pause, for they all were focused directly upon Gorgax. Kiaran quickly floated behind them all, and landed...
    Some thing was telling her to leave them and go....
    Maybe I shoul- no, I should stay here with Rudy and the others!
    She nodded to herself, as the others were powering up their biggest ki attacks. Kiaran quickly placed her fingers, the tips of them, together except for her pinky fingers... which she spread out. Instantly with a flicker and a little ki to ignite it, a small ball of glowing, brilliant blue aura began to swirl and grow with in her hands. As she fired more energy into it... the color began to interchurn with many various even lighter and brighter shades of blue...
    "Let's get this sucker..." Kiaran said, smiling as her hair began to ripple in teh slight wind..
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    Sorry ive been away but im comin back with a Vengeance.

    Gav
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    "Excuse me" i said as i tapped the bug like creature on the shoulder. It turned slowly and looked blankly at my grinning face.
    "Wahut doo you want?" it hissed at me.
    "Im sorry to interrupt but that little stuffed animal in your uh...hand...." It raised its arm holding up the weakened form of Yasu. "...yeah thats it, i was wondering where u got it cos my little sister would love to Kick your a$$"

    It looked at me confused and growled. "Oh im sorry, what i meant was, my sister would love that.....im gonna kick your a$$"
    Before it could react i snatched Yasu from its grip, being carefull not to hurt her and span planting my foot firmly in its face. Knocking it away.
    Idaia looked up at me, he was a little shaken but not too badly hurt. I gently handed him Yasu and moved him behind me as the creature stood. Without the element of surprise taking him down was gonna be tough but since the others seemed to have thier hands full i guess ill have to do my best.

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    You don't need a cover story U_C. Gav was haning around with Dina, Hamma, Idaia and Yasu. We've included your character in our posts so Gav doesn't need an excuse for anything. Actually, I like your post! It's about time the humans got in on the action (other than Dina I mean!)


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    Makura:
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    Finally! A challenge! Now, this was more like it! Even if our opponent did have no apparent weakness...but that just added to the fun of it! The answer was obviously not going to be brute force, seeing as how this Gorgax increased in strength every time her was hit and recovered. The answer then, as it seemed to me, was to hit him with an attack that was so powerful that he wouldn't be ABLE to recover. In other words: an All-or-Nothing.
    A soft yellow aura swirled around me and the breeze created from it tumbled through my hair, lifting it off of my neck.
    "Alright, Summers," I said, grinning smugly and glancing at him out of the corner of my eye, "You actually got a plan, or is this just a muscle flexing contest?"
    "I suppose you do?" he replied blandly.
    "I'm so glad you asked! As a matter of fact, I did have something in mind."
    "Do tell." Both he and Kiaran looked at me, waiting for my suggestion.
    I looked back over at Gorgax, who was preoccupied with watching Dina (who was bouncing around like and idiot and blowing rasberries at him). "We'll split up. You go to the left, Kiaran will go to the right, and I'll take the middle. Once we begin to charge, start to bring up your most powerful attack, and then at the same time we fire. There's no way he could stop all three of them and the combined energy of the blast might be enough to destroy him."


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    Anyway I've finally got an idea for this fight.

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    It seemed like a good plan. Obviously one attack was one going to make Gorgax stronger. However the combined attacks of three Saiyans would be enough to put this guy down for good. There was just one small problem that we hadn't taken into account as we powered up.

    Gorgax was not going to just sit back and get killed.

    Before any of us were even ready he had fired a blast from his mouth right at the three of us. As soon as I saw the flash I let the energy I was gathering disapate and shouted "Hit the deck!" Kiaran and Makura didn't need to be told twice as the three of us dove down. The resulting explosion took out the building behind us and sent dust and rubble all over the place. Once I was sure we were out of danger I quickly got to my feet and looked around. Everyone seemed ok. Just then it had hit me. That wasn't an attack intended to kill us. Gorgax simply did it to get us to stop gathering power for our combined attack. Now I knew that one of us had to distract the big guy long enough to let the others finish him off. Looking at Kiaran, Makura and Hamma I said "There's no way we'll get an attack off like this. I'll distract him and keep him away from you guys. No matter what happens to me you have to make sure you guys keep powering up. All I'll need is three minutes. By that time the combined effort of everyones attack should hopefully be able to put a stop to him." In a concerned voice Kiaran asked me "Are you sure about this Rudy? Three minutes may not be that long but in a situation such as this it can feel like forever." Hamma had his own comments as well about this. "Try not to damage him too much Rudy. Not only will you be putting yourself at a greater risk but his higher power level might help him take even a combined attack with no problems. If he survives this attack then we're going to be in serious trouble." I had already taken all of that into account. If I had a feeling he'd live then I'd make sure to let them know to power up some more.

    However this was not a time for small talk. Gorgax was rushing right at us. If I didn't pay attention from this point forward then all I'd be doing was give him a free attack. Without a word I ducked under a right fist and got around him. Before he had time to turn around to face me I had grabbed the big lizard like alien's tail and flung him towards the nearest building. I just stood there and waited as the others started to power up. There was no sense in hitting him more times than I had to. While Gorgax was recovering I also used this moment to power up to my full strength. Right now Gorgax was equal to my own power level but I knew that it wouldn't be for very long if I had to hit him some more. All of this had happened in no more than 20 seconds. As the alien got up from the rubble he laughed at me and said "You honestly don't think I don't know what you are trying to do? Give me a break kid! Once I start to get really strong two Saiyans and a Namekian won't even make me break a sweat. What do you think I'll do to you when your alone?" It was my turn to laugh and smirk a bit as Gorgax started to get a bit full of himself and foolish. "I wouldn't be one to brag just yet" I told him. "All this talking is just eating away at your time. Right now I'd say you've got a little over two minutes if your hoping to get the job done." Gorgax finally saw his mistake and got on with the fight. I prepared myself as he charged at me again. I knew that I had to try not to hit him as much as I could. However it was a task easier said than done since it would be next to impossible to keep him away from the others without striking him. The real question was if three minutes to power up would be all it took to finish him. Somehow I had the feeling this was going to be much longer than I originally expected......
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    Talk about the pot calling the kettle black....but where is everyone? *hears crickets chirpping* Rudy and I have posted most recently, so where are the rest of you?
    If this doesn't get a reply in 2 days I'll go ahead and post....but please don't let this die!!


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    Idaia - M - Young Namek(Current Earth's Guardian)
    ***

    Idaia was full of shock.
    Probably because the creature wanted to squish Idaia like a bug.
    Probably because he was not even half the size of that creature.
    Probably because he had not one ounce of fighting ability.
    Probably because Yasu was either dead or unconsious.
    Probably because out of no where Gav came to his rescue.
    Probably because Gav pissed off the creature in the process.
    Probably because he was... well, terrified of huge, scorpian-like creatures with gaping jaws of death and evil, beady eyes.
    One one those would suit Idaia's cause of shock just fine.


    "Gav! You came just in time! I was so frightened... I don't know why this creature attacked us... but for some reason-"
    Idaia spoke about a mile a minute, which caused Gav to hold out his hand.
    "Idaia... really, now is not the time."
    "Oh... sorry."
    "See that space-trash can there? The big dumpster?"
    "Yeah."
    "That would be a good place to hide."
    Idaia got the hint with that one, and quickly scurried off behind the dumpter, holding the soft, fluffy kitten-like creature in his arms. For as small as Yasu was, Idaia was equally as small for holding the small kitten-sized cat fully in his arms.
    Idaia was confused however... as the creature suddenly growled at Gav, looking hungrily at Idaia. Idaia sweatdropped....
    "Iwuhsh gonnah eet dah greeene buggger..." The creature said, his voice rather almost un-hearable.
    "Ineiidsh da cat too. Neeed dat kitty..."

    Idaia was very confused, but he hugged the limp and un-awakened Yasu at the mention of 'kitty'. why did this strange, alien-thing want with Yasu? It was strang ehow he wanted to eat Idaia... and not Yasu. It made Idaia even more terrified at the thought that he was to be eaten.

    "Gav, remembered how I healed you?" Idaia said quickly,as it seemed that both Gav and the creature were sizing each other up... and because the creature kept trying to get to Idaia, and Gav would quickly leap in the way, cuasing the creature to backup.
    "Yes... EHH!" Gav suddenly aimed a punch at the creature's head, which glanced off to the side and hit the creature's eye instead.
    " Well, please...uhh.. I don't want to heal you a second time. I'm afraid I might not be able to."
    Gav let a small chuckle escape from his throat, before getting a bit distracted and punched in the gut. Gav looked very unhappy about this... and quickly narrowed his eyes.
    "Lucky shot!"
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    Heheheh I have an interesting idea for how to get this fight finished!
    ~~~Dina~~~ (Idiot Form)

    Rudy started to play with the bully, and the bully was playing back it looked like! The tail girl and the blond girl and the green guy were just standing there watching, so they mustve been on base already! Since I had already decided Rudy was on my team, I had a great IDEA!! I could help him out with the bully by tagging Rudy, and then when Rudy made it on base we'd win the game! (OOC: Dinas so stupid shes mixing up rules and inventing her own LOL) YAY! What fun this was!

    Dodging around the mess that we made earlier I got around behind Rudy. It was kinda hard because he was moving around so much but I managed to sneak up on him. And then I smacked my hand on Rudys back and shouted, "TAG YOUR IT RUDY!!!!" Rudy turned his head slightly. "Dina, not no---" He started to say but then the big guy punched him right in the face and sent him flying towards a wall. Ohhhhhhhhhhhh that was a GOOD HIT! But it shouldnt have hit Rudy, because well, our team should win! I ran over to where Rudy was. "Hey Rudy...we need to tag him back." I said, matter-of-factly. Rudy opened his eyes and looked at me like I didnt know what I was talking about. "What? Dina this isnt a ga----" Then he stopped, and his eyes grew wide. "Yeah Dina your right. But we cant tag him if he can hit us, you understand?"
    I nodded. "Yeah hes fast. But if I dont get caught can I tag him?" Rudy stood up and faced the big guy. "Lets play a game called 'Monkey in the middle'. You have to try and keep his attention on you without letting him hit you, hows that sound?"
    My eyes lit up as Rudy started heading towards the big guy again. WOOW!! That game sounded awesome!!!!! Rudys smart and he likes to have fun too!!! This was gonna be great. "Ok Rudy!" I chirped. "HEY BIG GUY!!! YEAH YOU!! I BET YOU CANT HIT MEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
    I ran at the big guy as Rudy ran at him from the opposite direction. While he was looking at me Rudy stomped on his tail and then poked him in the eyes as he turned to look behind him. "HAHAHAHA!!! You got CAUGHT! My Turn!!" I crowed as I poked the big guy in the stomach. He swung at me but I leapt in the air, landing on his face and doing a few hops on it before jumping down with a crunch on his toes. Then I jumped backwards and did a hopping little dance in front of his face. "hehehehehehe..."
    It rubbed its face and shouted, "YOU IDIOT LITTLE TWO FACE! YOU WILL DIE FOR YO------" but then Rudy smacked it HAHAHAH!
    "What was that?" I smiled at it and it got really angry. It started charging to me so I darted out of the way. Rudy looked at me with alarm. "Do you really have to get him so angry?"
    I grinned and stuck my toungue out at Rudy. "Its fun! You should try it!" I said but just then the big guy grabbed me!! "Not so fun now is it?!?" It said. Uh oh this might be bad......
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    lol I know Rudy wouldnt want to put anyone in danger but since he knows she can sort of take care of herself he would figure why not get her to help too. Hopefully we can get this fight finished with soon and get on to the bigger game! Wahaha! I think about a minute took place in this post so you guys can judge when your ready to make him explode ^-~




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    "Great" i called out. "You guys get to tag team your guy while i have to go one on one with Ugly over here"
    I knew noone was really listening, except of course my opponent he growled and lunged a clawed arm that i barely ducked under. Seeing an opening i shot a straight jab to his Gut but as i connected my fist felt like i had punched a Steel wall. The armour on his body was solid, in truth it wasnt even armour. Like the scorpion he resembled he had a tough shell like Carapace.
    "Ooh natural body armour huh" The creature grinned with an ugly smile "Ill just have to find the weak spots" i said as i lashed out another punch, this time at his head. It reeled back from the shot but then swung a retaliatory claw which caught me in the chest and sent me flying away.
    It glared at Idaia but then turned its attention back to me as i tried to pull myself out of the rubble of a small hut i had crashed through.
    I was starting to lose patience with this guy and i knew i shouldnt be taking him so lightly. I readied myself to launch an energy wave at him but realised it was dangerous, him being so close to Idaia and Yasu.

    "Great, hes got more armour than a tank, and i gotta do things the old fashioned way."

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    Seeing as all Kiaran, Hamma and I are doing is powering up, there really isn;t much I can post, but I'll at least put my two cents in before Rudy gives us the go ahead.


    Makura:
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    A minute had already passed, and it looked like Rudy was getting some help, no matter how little, from Dina. But being in her idiot form there really wasn't much that she could do except to be a distraction. But this seemed to be a job that she could accomplish...at least until she got herself captured, leaving Rudy with another problem to face. Now he had to fight him him without hurting Dina, AND he would have to free her before we could attack.

    I turned my attention breifly back to the glowing orb of chi beween my palms that was slowly swelling as I put forth more and more of my energy. I glanced over at Kiaran and Hamma out of the corner of my eye and saw that theirs were steadily growing as well (Kiaran's more than Hamma's, but that was understandable...). It wouldn't be long now...just another minte or so. I hoped that that moron, Summers, could hold out for that long. And he'd better find a way to free that stupid human....because I as soon as we were fully charged I was wasn't going to wait, because for every moment we waited, Gorgax got stronger. And if we waited too long even our combined attacks may not be enough...So Dina or no Dina, I was going to destroy him....


    Talk about pressure, huh? *sighes* That's Makura for you.... (*psst* Don't worry, she wouldn't really kill Dina...)


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    All I could do was freeze in place as Gorgax grabbed Dina. Normally I would have jumped right in to help but before I could react he had a hand to her face and was charging up an attack which would kill her. Dina didn't say a word while this happened but the look on her face said it all. Even this form knew when something wasn't good at all. Gorgax just stared me down and laughed at how indecisive I was about all this. "It there a problem Saiyan? Did something make the poor little monkey mad?" From the corner of my eye I saw Makura twitch at that insult. Thankfully she didn't try anything rash.

    Right now all I could try to do was sort this out. However to my horror Gorgax would not allow me the time to think. With a deep and evil sounding laugh he said "If you don't call off your friends now I'll be sure to decorate your clothing with her blood." I knew that I had to act fast now. Waiting too long would more than likely wind up getting Dina killed. Makura still had my scouter and I couldn't tell the exact power levels of everyone but I was able to sense how strong the attacks were. It would be enough to put an end to Gorgax. However if they didn't stop powering up Dina would be finished. Either way we could end this but doing so at the cost of Dina's life was too much to handle. I had an idea but it was extremely risky. If this backfired then I'd be the one responsible for getting Dina killed. I was hoping that Gorgax knew that I'd give the word to kill him if he did something to her. With no other plans coming to mind I did the only thing I could think of.

    I started to laugh at him.

    It wasn't a normal laugh however. Instead it sounded more like the laugh of a madman or a killer. Meanwhile I let the biggest smirk I could have creep onto my face. "It would appear that the big bad lizard has no idea who the hell he's talking to" I said to no one in paticular. The sudden change in attitude took everyone by surprise. Kiaran didn't seem to know what to make of it and started to say "Rudy? What are you....." However I didn't want her to blow this chance. Turning to face her I shouted "Quiet girl! I never asked for your opinion on this matter did I?! Just keep on powering up your damn attack!" Not wanting to see the look on her face after that I turned back to Gorgax. "I'm sure you've heard stories about the great Prince Vegeta. Surely an overgrown animal such as yourself knows of him right? If not then I'm sure you know of Kakarot. Vegeta was one of the people who usually ran around that band of weaklings. Why he never finished him off I'll never know. I would have never shown the same mercy that my ancestor did."

    A look of shock appeared on Gorgax's face for a moment before he too laughed. "Nice try kid! But I don't believe for one moment that you....." I already knew what he was going to say so before he could finish I yelled "YOU DARE MOCK THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS?!" I saw Gorgax's grip on Dina loosen for a moment before he started to speak again. "Even if your telling the truth about being part of the former royal family it still doesn't bother me. Now I won't ask again. If you don't call off your friends the girl dies." Now it was do or die time. With a laugh I said "You truely are a fool if you believe I actually give two squirts of piss about that human. Go ahead! Kill her! She means nothing to me!" I could hear the shocked gasps of everyone as I said that. Inside I was feeling sick to my stomach. I wished I could drop the act but as long and Dina was in trouble I had to keep it up. However I had a feeling it wasn't working. Gorgax seems to see my trick and called my own bluff. "Fine then! If you really don't care then why don't you kill her yourself? Either way you'd still get rid of me." Luckly I was expecting that and had a back up plan. Spreading my arms out I started to power up what looked like Vegeta's Final Flash. In truth I really didn't know the attack. Instead I had two bright orbs of ki in both of my hands. To anyone looking on it would appear as if I was ready to end it. In truth the orbs were nothing more than harmless balls of light. Gorgax however didn't seem to know the difference as I brought my hands together in front of me.

    Finally the chance to attack came up. My scare tatic seemed to finally work as he pushed Dina away from him and turned to fire his attack at me. "You dirty little monkey! DIE!!!" As he fired I fell backwards and quickly shouted "Hit him now!" Just as the others got ready to fire I quickly charged up my own attack for an added bit of power as I layed on my back.

    "MASENKO HA!!!!!"

    It didn't take long for all four attacks to find their mark as the air was filled with a shout of pain. As the dust started to clear I stood up. To my relief Dina was ok. As for the others they seemed a bit drained from having to power up that long but overall we were fine. As for Gorgax the only trace of him left was a smear of blood on a nearby wall. For the most part everyone was silent until a sneeze was heard. We all knew who it was before she even had the chance to ask "What happened to Gorgax?" All I could say as I walked by was "Don't worry about it. He's been taken care of." Right now I just didn't want to face anyone after what I had done and said......
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    My eyes widened in shock, as I heard Rudy's words. ...
    Why was he acting like... like a jerk? Was this how Rudy really was? The guy I had been with for a whole night and sparred with, who seemed kind and caring and understanding of everything? How could he say such things?
    Then he told us to fire... as Dina was thrown away from Gorgax. Before I had released my ki... I understood slowly why Rudy had acted teh way he did. It was of course, to save Dina's life.
    But there was some thing so unnerving about it..

    Everyone had been powering up, or at least most everyone was. My ki however, probably looked the oddest out of everyone. My whole body seemed to be consumed by a lengthy, tendril-like flame which glowed with the aura of shady blues and slight variations of magenta. It swirled around my body as if alive... and slowly I had spread my palms open to form a large ball of ki. As the aura around my body flickered and grew, slowly the 'flame' -like arms thrusted themselves to my palms nad the ball of energy began to grow rapidly. I didn't know why... whenever I formed a ball of ki, for some strange reason I grew an aura around my body which looked like blue flames, as if I were burning.

    Then Rudy told us to fire... and I did.
    " YOUKAI FIREO!" I gave a shout, and instantly teh ball of energy turned pitch black- colder and more sinister than even darkness itself. The energy ball of black instantly bursted into the air and the particles re-gathered again for an extra burst of energy, and slowly it took the form of a winged-beast which was only the size of a cat rather, slightly larger than Yasu. All this happened so fast however... that unless someone was paying attention to my attack in particular, they couldn't have seen the whole formation process and form of energy. Anyway, everyone let loose their most powerful attack... and instantly Gorgax was pummeled and nothing but his blood was left.

    Rudy then gazed at everyone, and he looked rather awkward. Rudy's gaze flickered to mine, as I gazed to him with my gentle, liquid-blue gaze. He opened his mouth as if to say some thing... but I shook my head, mylight blonde hair wavering.
    "No need to explain Rudy... i... I understand why you acted like that."

    Although I spoke to him kindly, I had to turn away from his face so not to look in his own. For some reason... the words he said had hurt me far more then they should have for he didn't mean them. Why.. .
    Why Kiaran are you suddenly so emotional aroun d him?
    A voice questioned... but I had no time to answer it.

    " EEEEH! GAV WATCH OUT!"

    There was a small Namekian voice which suddenly had caught my attention.
    "Oh my! Rudy, Makura- everyone... Gav and Idaia!"
    I quickly exclaimed, and then turned around to quickly run to where I heard the small voice cry out.
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    OOC: this color is just so wrong for this Garen..........oh well.



    Garen
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    He watched from the rooftop with mild interest as the two warriors fought. Neither fighter was truly giving their all. The scorven was saving up its energies in case more came to get in his way. Gav was holding back to avoid hurting the namek boy and that fascinating creature. He was also staggering his attacks slowly to guage the scorven for weak spots in its protective skin.
    "Pity," Garen thought aloud but no one could hear him.
    Just then Gav and the scorven traded blows sending them both back to opposing walls. The scorven crashed into the wall directly below him. He could not remain hidden for long now. Just as well, Garen thought. He wasn't here just to observe anyway but it was entertaining to watch the energetic Gav. He had a true warriors spirit even if his power level was low compared to the saiyan elite.
    Garen watched as the scorven recovered much more quickly than Gav. It sprang up and charged across the way to attack Gav while he was trying to find his feet. Garen heard the yound namek scream and decided this was the time to intervene. Garen didn't wish to see his earlier mercy go to such a shameful waste.
    He floated down from the rooftop quickly and leapt forward behind the scorven.
    " EEEEH! GAV WATCH OUT!" the namek boy shouted.
    Garen was not after Gav this time though. With lightning speed Garen's tail snaked out and wrapped itself tightly around the scorvens neck. At the last moment he swung his body lurching the creature sideways to slam it against the wall Gav had just gotten up from. Garen punched it squarely in the face as it wriggled and writhed to break free.
    At this point Gav was back at full attention and he jumped away from the pair, unsure how to react. the young namek, which was hiding next to a garbage receptiocle on this wall, ran from its spot to behind Gav since he was no farther away form them than the bin.
    "That fighters life belongs to me you pathetic little scorven. It is not yours to take," Garen hissed sharply.
    With that he launched a very powerful punch straight at the creatures face. With a loud cracking sound the thing stopped moving to break free. Instead it hung there limply from Garens raised tail. You'd think it were dead could you not hear a low rasping hiss coming from its throat as it tried to breath. It had only been knocked out cold and been given a fractured cheekbone.
    "What the hell are you doing here?" Gav shouted bravely, cautiously falling into a defensive stance.
    "You shouldn't have been holding back your attacks. You could have gotten past his shell with your strength if you had focused enough," Garen answered coldly, ignoring his question.
    "That thing is harder than steel. Nothing could get through it directly," Gav replied sharply.
    "Nothing?" Garen asked, slightly amused.
    Garen held the scorven up against the wall and pulled back his fist. He opened it up slightly so that his knuckles were outstretched. With great and sudden force he punched forward straight at the things chest, the hardest part of its so called armor. The fist connected with a thunder like clap. His fist was flat against the armor even though his knuckles had been outstretched when he swung. He pulled his fist back to reveal the shell had been completely shattered in that spot. So much so that pieces of it had snapped off and it was oozing a clear greenish fluid.
    Gav stared at Garen for a moment, his gaze shifting between Garen and the shattered spot of the scorvens chest. He looked down at his own fist for a moment and flexed it, trying to figure out how Garen could've done such a thing. Realising Garen was still watching him he quickly let go of his fist and stared back at Garen confidently. All he could do was be ready.
    Neither of them had time to act though. A group of people quickly rounded the corner with worried faces. Garen spun around to see them and recognised most of them instantly. He knew they'd be coming eventually. He needed them to afterall. It might have been nice to exchange a few more words with Gav first though. Seeing them all drop into defensive positions Garen effortlessly pulled his tail back and tossed the unconscious scorven away over the rooftop to land through the roof of a nearby tavern.
    "I was wondering when you would all arrive. I was amazed it took you so long to deal with that joke Gorgax. I'd hate to think I overestimated the lot of you," Garen said coldly with a hint of mischief in his voice.
    The angrier they were the less efficiently they were likely to fight. Their powers had grown since their last battle and Garen did not want to risk their collective power level being higher than he could currently sense. At their current level he still held the advantage but it was foolish not to expect them to be holding their power levels down at least a little bit.
    "What do you want with us now monster?" Rudy said as he took a step forward in front of everyone.
    "I have no business with you today young saiyan. My business is with her," Garen said, pointing past his shoulder to Makura.
    "What?" she said angrily. "Whats a lizard want with me? I've had enough of freaks with tails today!"
    "I am no more a lizard than you are little saiyan mercenary!" Garen replied quickly, his voice growing deeper and stronger. "I am here to collect you for trial on Vegetta. It seems you made a contract with my colleagues back on Earth. As one of your targets is standing right beside you it is obvious you have broken that contract. While I had no desire for your deaths personally it seems our generals agreed with my colleagues decision to hire you. Since they see it that way and you have betrayed your contract they ordered me to retrieve you to be tried for that crime. I have no quarrel with the rest of you. Come with me peacefully Makura and none of your new friends need get hurt. I won't tell them I saw you all here so long as you do not keep heading in the direction of planet Vegetta."
    Garen himself dropped into a defensive stance as a warning. His intuition told him they would not let one of their own be taken so easily. Even the child must know Makura would be killed once she arrived on Vegetta. Garen had no taste for it but she had broken a contract. He had respect for the laws. Even though he had no desire for her to fulfill her contract he had to bring her in for breaking it.
    "I hope our previous encounter encourages you all to see reason. I do not wish to kill any of you but disobey this command and I will take her by force," Garen said sternly.
    He waited patiently for their reply, readying himself to strike. Makura and this strange new saiyan girl were the biggest threats so he'd have to move on them first. That scouter could prove to useful to them. It was a great advantage being the only one able to sense power levels and he did not like giving up any advantage. And that strange technique the new girl used worried him. The attack itself was not terribly powerful in his experience but it was unlike any he had seen before. Who knew what else she was capable of?




    OOC: so you know he is talking about Kiaran. He was watching both fights and he did see the full of her attack. Enjoy everybody. Feel free to kick things off but don't expect this to be a quick or easy fight becuase you have the numbers.

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    Makura:
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    I stared blankly at the Changeling, my mind whirring very fast. Was this guy serious?! He actually expected me to just give up and go in quietly? Ha! Besides...The Great Bounty Hunter Makura wasn't one to go marchig off to her death when it wasn't her time to die.
    There was a short time after Garen's last words that was filled with an uncomfortable silence. I could tell that everyone was nervous by the feeling of tension in the air and the constant wavering of power levels as if they were debating wether or not to attack. But most of all I noticed their expressions, a mixture of shock, nervousness, and definance. I was slightly surprised by this. Why should THEY care what happens to me? After all...I was only with them by contract. I was pretty sure that none of them did, or ever would, consider me a friend. ...Not that it mattered to me of course...
    I decided to break the silence by doing something the changeling did not expect. I started laughing. The changeling's eyebrows lifted as he looked at me curiously. Rudy and the others spun around and stared at me, mouthes agape. Apparently, they did not find this a laughing matter.
    "Hahaha! You've GOT to be kidding me! You seriously believe you can..."Take me in"? HAHAHA!! You're FULL of it, changeling!" I bellowed.
    "You don't seem to understand your position, Saiyan." He said bluntly.
    "On the contrary! I understand perfectly! You're trying to kill me! I thin it's YOU who doesn't understand, changeling!" My aggravation was starting to come to the surface and I didn't realize that I had begun to yell. "You don't seem to understand who you're dealing with! As a bounty hunter I have my own authority and I am not bound by any law! It is MY desicion on what jobs I follow through on! I broke that contract because I recieved a better offer!" I motioned to Rudy, "That is the nature of almost all bounty hunters, you should know that! Therefore, it is not for you to dictate the legality of my actions! I'M NOT STANDING TRIAL FOR ANY GOD DAMN THING!!" I curled my hands into fists at my sides, shaking with rage.
    "Once again, Saiyan. You don't seem to get it." said Garen, shaking his head slightly. "The difference in our power levels is quite obvious. You wouldn't stand a chance against me if you tried to fight. You OR your friends here..."
    "YOU LEAVE THEM OUT OF THIS!!" I yelled. I noticed out of the corner of my eye that Rudy stopped short at this, looking at me with surprise and a twinge of compassion. "If you think you can get to me by threatening uninvolved people, you're mistaken! They have nothing to with this, and if you're bringing them into this then you're and even bigger COWARD than I thought!"
    This seemed to get to him. His eyes narrowed dangerously.
    "I can see that you're never going to cooperate, are you? Hmph! Well, than you leave me no choice...though I do warn you, you don't stand a chance." He cracked his knuckles as he regarded me with a twisted grin.
    "I'd be more worried about yourself..." But as I said this, I felt a cold wave of doubt pass over me. For once, I was unsure about my chances of winning. But I wasn't going to come quietly, that was for sure. Just then, however, I felt a hand on my arm. I look to my elft and saw Rudy stepping foreward,a determined expression carved onto his face.
    "If you want to take Makura, you'll have to get through us as well. Do you really think you can take us ALL on?" He smirked at Garen. Garen, in response, raised one eyebrow and laughed lightly.
    "Such strange bonds of loyalty...You sure are quick to protect the one who, under slightly different circumstances, would be trying to kill you."
    Rudy was about to reply but I held out my hand in front of him, stopping him from moving foreward.
    "Get back, Summers! This doesn't concern you! This is my fight, and I'm not going to let you interfere!"
    "In...Interfere?! Makura! I'm trying to help you!" He insisted.
    "Well don't help me, Summers! I've survived this long without help and I can do it now!" I cried.
    "Makura..."
    "Get out of here and take the others with you! This isn't your problem and my safety is NOT your concern!"


    Heh heh...you can tell that Makura is just looking out for them...but she'd never admit that!


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  40. #240

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    Gav
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    "Fair enough" i called out. Everyone turned to look at me as i had been quiet during most of this. "Makura, you may not want help but i see a problem" She glared at me. "And just what problem might that be?"

    "Well...." I began "...it seems that im standing right between you and Garen and the funny thing is i dont seem to be able to move..." I heard her curse under her breath. "..and since Garen says he owns my life he may as well get some time with his investment"

    I changed my stance to something more aggressive and prepared myself. I knew the others had all been fighting longer than me and i was fractionally less fatigued, with any luck i could keep Garen stalled, either with his gloating of his superior power levels or with a fight. At least to give the others chance to work something out. I doubted a head on attack would work.

    For some reason i felt i had a better chance against Garen. I wasnt the strongest fighter but there was something about him. Why would an enemy give me hints and tips for fighting if he just wanted to kill us.

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