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    MAN! I had this whole thing typed up and then some how, with out selecting anything... I deleted allo f it! I had so much of it done.... *growls* UUUUUGH!
    Now I have to re-type everything...



    Kiaran - F - Saiyan
    *


    I watched in bewilderment, as everything was whirling into motion... so, Makura had been paid to kill Rudy? And then Rudy had paid Makura higher so she wouldn't?
    It was confusing... I had no idea about it, since I had not been there... and now a changeling? Who was this changeling and how did everyone know him?
    "Dang it all..." I whispered to myself, as I watched as now Gav was trying to say he should fight the changeling. For some reason I doubt that if we fighted this changeling we would win... for there was some thing about him that told me he would have many surprises instore if we did try to fight him.

    Rudy was looking strained, as if he wanted to say some thing but didn't know what... it was a look of helplessness, and Rudy didn't wear the look very well. I frowned, as Dina even seemed tor ealize the seriousness of the situation and gazed onward in silence. Then however, my eyes flickered behind the changeling to see two, wide and frightened eyes staring back at me.
    Idaia... clutching the what seemed to be, limp and knocked-out body of Yasu. Idaia must have some how been hiding behind the alienoid trash dumpster, while Gav had been fighting the other alien creature... and now, Idaia was behind the changeling while we were facing him. I wondered if the changeling had noticed poor Idaia.. if he had, he didn't seem the slightest interest in Yasu or Idaia,whichI considered good.
    But what if things get desperate?!

    I thought suddenly... what if things got so desperate, the changeling would stoop so low as to grab Idaia and/or Yasu and use them as a hostage to get his way or worse?! It made me nervous.. and I knew I would feel a whole lot better if they were on our side... literally.

    "Rudy!" I whispered, taking a step towards him and although his gaze was focused on Makura and Gava nd the changeling, he flickered his gaze slightly at me.
    " Look at Idaia..." Rudy did so slightly, as i whispered.
    " He's so alone and frightened... and I don't trust him by the changeling, so I'm going to get him."
    "What?! Kiaran you can't... what if that changeling decides to put an end to you. His power level is much higher then ours... if he decides to -"
    "Rudy, I have to. You stay here, I'm not going far and you'll be able to see me once I get over there. Nothing will happen. I spared with you before, and we both never truely showed our full power, nor did I show you my true energy attacks. Iused simple ki and if you haven't noticed... my energy usually isn't supposed to be in ki form."
    "kiaran I don't thin-"
    "Rudy, I'm not leaving that poor namek child all alone with Yasu who seems to be knocked out from an earlier fight! he's helpless and the poor guy needs some one to help him!"
    My whisper was stern and my gaze sharp, as I quickly walked away from Rudy and then slowed down my pace. Gav and Makura were still focued on the changeling, as he was upon them.
    Makura was on the outside left... and so as soon as I slowly passed her, I knew Icould go.

    I would have to take a wide loop left, and curl around so that I went behind the dumpster and then through to get to Idaia an dYasu. Hopefully by looping around instead of doing a straight line, the changeling wouldn't take it as an offensive manuever. Swallowing hard, I knew I would need some slight speed.. so I consentrated upon my legs. Slowly... urging my energy to swoon towards my leg muscles, an aura suddenly lit to life around my legs. It was a bright blue... and although I didn' thtink anyone was paying attention, I focused upon the color of the aura. Soon after forcing my thoughts, the aura's color faded into a transparent being. I didn't think the changeling took notice like everyone else... which was good. I always had an odd way it seemed to power up or use my energy...
    Alright... now! GO!

    I felt my mind command, and instantly with my newly added boost of speed and seemed to disappear. Of course, I would only seem to disappear to those with the same powerlevel as me or aorund my powerlevel. I knew that the changeling had a much higher level then anyone... and he probably could see my movement far easeir then anyone else... but I still hoped he couldn't. I doubted my hopes were good... but perhaps there was an off chance my speed and agility served me well.

    Soon I had appeared behind Idaia and Yasu, and I didn't look to see what the others were doing. Instead Idaia gazed atme, and instantly his eyes brightened as he whispered.
    "Kiaran! You came for us?!"
    "Yeah, don't want you two to be alone... hey Idaia, was Yasu knocked out?"
    Idaia nodded, looking saddened.
    "Hurry, use some of your healing powers to perhaps kick her senses back to reality ad then I'll get you out of here."
    Idaia nodded, as he placed his hand upon her forehead and instantly a little, small flashof green rippled around us, and when he took his hand quickly off her forehead, not even a second had passed.
    [The...the...] Suddenly Yasu's eyes widened, as she gazed at me with a horrified look. I grabbed Idaia around the waist and hoisted him with one arm against my side, as I looked at Yasu.
    "What's the matter?"
    [ I... I remember.]
    "Remember what?!"
    [ I could not remember what or who I was. I...I have regained back a little of my memory.]
    "Oh.... well Ya-"
    [ I was awakened from the copy of the Dragonball, and I have absorbed one dragon ball because I felt I was supposed to absorb the dragon balls. I remember why now...]
    I leaned closer to Yasu...
    "That's good... but Yasu I would feel better if you could tell me-"
    [ I absorb them because I am the Keeper, I keep them with in me and when I have absorbed all seven, whoever is my master will recieve the wish they want. I guess it's easier then hauling around all seven dragon balls... but when they are all gathered and the wish granted... then I will also do some thing...or I'll change in some way. I don't know how or what tho... that is all I have remembered so far. It's so vague...]
    I nodded, and gazed to Idaia.
    "So we've got a Guardian of Dragonballs and a Keeper... wonderful, but I should get you guys out of here."
    I said, reaching to grab Yasu so we could get the heck out from behind the side of the dumpster.
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    Alright this is just gonna be short, because I'm running low on ideas at the moment. But I figured that this RPG needed another jump start. *gets out jumper cable and attaches one end to the RPG and and prepares to connect the other to the end of a large car battery*


    Makura:
    ~~~~~
    These humans really are an enigma... I thought as I stared at Gav while he moved into a fighting stance. He can't possibly beat Garen, a changeling, in a one-on-one battle...Humans, while stubborn and bold, simply do not have the physical capacity. But yet...he's till willing to fight. He's either incredibley brave....or incredibly stupid...
    After much deliberation I was leaning more towards the latter...
    "Thanks for the offer, Gavin..." I shot, rather sharply, "But I will repeat...this is NOT your fight. I am not so low as to accept help from a human. You would only slow me down. Get out of the way and stay out of this!"
    Gav looked slighty hurt by my comment but stil refused to move.
    "Are you deaf, human?! I said GET THE HELL OUT OF THE WAY!!"
    He stayed put, not moving an inch. I sighed aggravatedly, and brushed my hair back from my face, tucking it behind my ear.
    "Very well, kid. I realize I can't stop you frmo doing what you wanna do. But..." I stressed, "let me tell you this. Once this battle starts I'm not going to be looking out for you or bending over backwards to save your *** if you get yourself in trouble. If you fight, you're on your own. Consider this a warning. This is your last chance to back out."
    With that I turned away from him and once again turn my attention towards the changling Garen, glaring intently. Shifting my feet on the dusty ground, I moved smoothly into a fighting stance.
    "Come and get me...if you CAN!"


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    Default errrmm...hello?

    Um...guys? Isn't anyone gonna post here? Or am I the only one who wants to keep this going?
    Honestly people...the 3rd page? Come on!


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    Ok, Im just going to go with what I had planned, so I dont get yelled at by Maku-chan anymore ;.; lol ^-~

    ~~~Dina~~~
    I watched as the strange new creature showed up and began to cause even more trouble than Gorgax had with our little group. This one called itself Garen, and its mission was to take Makura back for a trial on its planet, which by the sound of it would eventually lead up to Makuras execution. I didnt know what Makura had done before hooking up with our group, but I knew that sending her off to die couldnt be an option.
    But it seemed like if we did not give her up, we would all be killed.
    Garens power level far exceeded all of ours, and it made Gorgax seem like a training excercise. Though I still didnt exactly know how we made it out of that one alive, due to being in my 'Idiot form' at the time, I didnt think that same thing would work again.

    It seemed the only choice we had for most of us to survive was to give in to Garens demands....

    As the fight raged on in front of me I quickly darted over to where Rudy was standing. He looked very frustrated and upset with himself, like something had happened recently. Seeing that stabbed me briefly. Damn my other half!! That idiots always causing trouble...If somehow she was the cause..... I didnt let myself finish my thought. Now wasnt the time for such things.
    "Rudy..." I said in a quiet voice, snapping him out of his thoughts. He glanced at me and then looked away quickly. "Yeah?"
    Getting a deadly serious look on my face, I spoke up. "Garens power level is very high. If we tried to fight him theres a very good chance it would result in all of us dying." Rudy sighed and shook his head. "What else can we do Dina? We cant just give over Makura.."
    I was getting frustrated. Rudy seemed like he had about given up already, and he still wasnt looking at me. Leaning closer, I stared him right in the face and said, "Why not?"
    That finally got his attention. "WHAT?!! Dina you----"
    "Shh!" I said and then, "Listen, Garen wont leave us alone til he has Makura, right? Well as I see it, the best thing for everyone would be to let him get what he wants. But UNDER OUR TERMS."
    Rudy shook his head. "I know Makura seems hot-headed but shes our ally, we cant just hand her over to the enemy!"
    Looking around and making sure no one saw what I was doing, I pulled Rudys jacket until his back was to Garen, and formed an orange ball of ki. Quickly drawing a red star in the middle I showed it to Rudy. "Looks just like the real thing doesnt it?" I asked meaningfully.
    The look on Rudys face showed he understood what I was hoping to do. "I see...but, will he buy it? Garens not as stupid as Gorgax was."
    Nodding, I said, "Ive thought of that. But if I have enough time, I can make it flawless." Concentrating on the false Dragonball in my hands for a few seconds, it slowly faded until its slight glow dissapated and it looked as solid as the real thing. Slowly I reached out a hand and touched it, but instead of exploding, my hand slid across its smooth surface. Still concentrating I handed it to Rudy, who took it after a few seconds. He seemed surprised at its solidity and tossed it up in the air catching it as it fell back down. His eyes widened. "This might actually work..."
    I nodded and then realised my hold over it was slipping. "Drop it!" I told him and he did, just in time for it to pop and fizzle halfway to the ground.
    I took a deep breath and shook my head. "But for it to work I need time. If we could delay Garen somehow, set things up to where we deliver 'Makura' at a later time and in a certain place, then we might just be able to pull this off." I smiled. "And after we re safely halfway to Planet Vegeta in our new ship Garen would be in for quite a surprise...."
    Rudy smiled. "We should tell Makura, so she doesnt get the wrong idea about it. Then Ill make a deal with Garen--"
    That gave me an idea. "No, dont tell Makura. Itll be better and more believeable if she thinks we re really 'selling her down the river'. It would look strange if she agreed to it without a fight."
    Rudy nodded. "Agreed. Well, Im going for it. Hope this works ^-^()" He started walking off towards where Garen and the Human Gav were fighting. I stepped forward too. "Wait, Rudy. If you make the deal he ll think somethings up. You dont seem like the type that would think one of your allies was expendable." Rudy flinched as I said this and again I wondered what had happened while I was an idiot. "Ill do it, he doesnt know me yet. And anyway," I grinned. "Arent humans supposedly driven by greed?"
    He looked uncomfortable for a few minutes, then nodded. "Alright. But dont get too close to him, we wouldnt want a repeat of what happened with Gorgax..." Thinking that something big HAD happened with Gorgax before, I resolved to ask him later what it was as I stepped forward to the creature that Gav was still fighting. Taking a deep breath I resolved to make this believeable. And then I grabbed Gav as he threw a punch and used all my strength to hurl him against the wall. "YOU IDIOT!" I yelled. "What have I told you! Thats not how you properly do business!!!" Rudy, Makura and Kiaran were all shocked by my behaivior, and Kiaran stepped forward with a questioning look on her face. "Whats gotten into y---" Before she could finish, I threw my hand back and smacked her across the face. "Know your place, Saiyan." I snarled and then turned to Garen. "So, you want one of my saiyans, is that it? Theyre not cheap you know, though they should be by how much they talk back." Everyone still seemed stunned by my change of attitude, except Garen, who just reguarded me with a studying gaze. "So, youd be perfectly willing to just hand Makura over?" He asked skeptically.
    I walked over to Makura, stepping around her and looking at her disdainfully. "I dont know...shes a pretty good saiyan, when shes not b!tching about everything of course...."

    Before Makura could get out any sort of taunt I grabbed her tail and gave it a slight squeeze. "But I think for a good price Id let her go..."
    Garen folded his arms. "What makes you think Im in the mood for making deals? I could just take her, and leave you with nothing."
    I had to think quick. This Garen was rather arrogent, but he seemed like he was mainly concerned with doing his job. The fact that we were all alive proved that. So I had to get him at his weak spot.
    "Well its hardly honorable to take a persons property without giving something in return, dont you think? So I propose this: Pay for the repairs on our ship and youll get your monkey, but not until the repairs are complete." I looked at him with an unwavering gaze, as Makura gasped out, "Y..o.u....b....i..t..c..h.."
    Smirking slightly, I said "Whatll it be?"
    I realised how strange this was, and that I hurt Gav, Kiaran and Makura by acting like this. But hopefully they would think this was just another split personality. The thing that hurt me about it was I knew Rudy knew it wasnt. He knew this was part of my plan, and I hoped hed forgive me for it. Because some things just needed to be done to ensure survival. I just hoped it wouldnt be in vain.
    For all our sakes, this HAD to work...

    ~~~~~~

    OK! lol JT, please have Garen buy this, at least the initial offer ^-^()
    EDIT: Altering it a bit so its more possible ^-^()

    Also on an unrelated but still RPG note, could someone PLEASE post in Sins?? I just did and Ill post again if I have to but Id like if someone else made an effort to keep that one alive. Besides mine its one of my favorite RPGs ;.;




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    Ummm...I'm guessing we're waiting on JT? *cough cough* I'd kinda like to go get on with this please? I really like this RPG and I'd be really pissed if it died.
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    Yeah it would seem that Kuro is right. Garen is your character after all JT. I'll give you some time to post since the last post made by Asi was directed at you. If nothing is up soon then I'll try to think of something myself to keep this afloat while we wait on you ^_~
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    Well... *I* can post, and add a twist... and probably make your heads hurt with all of the things going on. ^^ Phun!




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    " I'm nobody's fool... I won't be hurt by it again."

    ***

    I was shocked... standing there as the slight tingle from where Dina had hit me still stood. What the heck...
    Part of me believed that this was all just an act, some thing to probably trick Garen... and perhaps it would work to confuse everyone like that. In the short time with Dina, I knew she didn't act this way... usually... I ... think? It hurt me however... what if ... ? It was too confusing with so many questions, and my head began to spin as I clutched Yasu in my one arm and held Idaia's hand in my left. I narrowed my eyes, it was uncalled for. There were more ways to defeat an enemy then decepting your friends and hurting them. I was sick of mind games... Rudy had done it too, and if that didn't make me feel worse enough, then Dina had to go and pull the same trick. I was done.

    " Well, nice to meet you changeling, but I am leaving this party a little soon." I stood up straight, tucking a strand of blonde hair behind my ear. Rudy looked at me and quickly looked as if he were about to question me... but I shook my head.
    " I'm not taking this anymore. I'm going..."
    Dina's eyes filled with a little panic look, but she quickly washed it away and yelled..
    " Coward Saiyan! Remember to know your place... you can't leave!" SHe said it harshly, but my eyes were narrowed.
    " Make me."

    With that, I looked to Yasu and Idaia and I then looked at everyone,
    "I'm taking Yasu and Idaia with me, these two are in more danger than any of you know... "
    With that I flew off, grabbing Idaia in my arms as Yasu nodded and fluttered by me. Flying... I felt the wind ripple through my hair, as I felt my eyes get a little watery and hot, but I quickly shunned them aside. I... I was as Saiyan, and... they didn't... cry.
    [ What they did hurt you, didn't it?]
    Yasu's voice rang gently through my ears... as I didn't bother to look at her, but simply nodded.
    [ I understand.] Was all she said, and I was thankful that as all she was going to say... I didn't really want any advice or reassurance. Understanding from some one, or a creature, was as good as anything right now.
    "Where are we going?" Idaia piped up, his eyes wide but yet full of fasination at how fast I was flying...
    " To the shipyard. I believe we were going to go back there anyway... "
    I said, as the shipyard came into view and I quickly veered towards it and then landed upon the ground in a huff. Dust rose a little bit, as I sat Idaia down and Yasu fluttered to perch on my shoulder.
    " I... I thought you were taking us all away forever." Idaia suddenly said, looking at me with confused eyes.
    " What? No... " I trailed off, smiling weakly as I sat down on a piece of scrap metal formed into a small dome.
    " I... I wouldn't leave anyone, when... I made a promise to help. What they did back there... I don't think it was nessisary. To trick an enemy, you don't need to hurt your friends..."
    I sighed, as I got up.
    " You two stay here... or come with me if you like. I'm going to find some one here and ask if they want help. I need some thing to keep me busy and my mind off things."
    Idaia nodded, as he got up and followed as Yasu remained perched on my shoulder. I walked inside... and gazed at all the ships, a lot of them broken, some of them repaired well... until I found a guy.
    " Hey... you!" I said, as the guy looked at me and then walked towards me.
    " Oh, hello... can... I help you again?"
    I nodded, "Actually, I was hoping you could give me some thing to work on. I'm very fluant with mechanics and ... need some thing to keep me rather busy."
    The guy looked at me awkwardly, but nodded as he walked forward down a row of ships and I followed... until he came to the fourth one.
    " This one's electrical body frame is busted, along with the engine core which got it's wires messed up in a crash. See if you can fix that for me, and if you really are good... then fix the weapon activation field as well."
    I smiled and nodded, " Thanks... I assuem I can use these tools next to it to aid me?"
    He nodded, " Knock yourself out."
    With that I got to work... as Idaia sat near the ship, watching and thinking to himself as Yasu sat in his lap and they both were quiet, only occasionally talking to themselves or to me off and on.
    Busy...I had to keep busy to keep my mind from wandering..
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    I think this is in serious need of a jumpstart. I'm ready to go if the rest of you are still willing to be part of this RPG ^_~
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    *raises hand* I'm willing! I think Asi was planing something, but I was waiting for her to post. someone *cough cough RUDY cough cough* should ask her about it, and if she's gonig to come back.


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    =^^ I AM TOOOOO! If some one could sacrafice *cough Jeff cough* and post already...
    I say if he doesn't post in a reasonable amount of time, we just keep going. We can't help it if we play his character wrong, but there is no use making everybody wait. And I'm impatient! *fume fume*
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    Hey, you guys KNOW Im in ^v^ Heck this is the first RPG I was EVER in, so its important to me! ^-^ lol
    As for my plan, well, I already posted it! lol Thats what my plan was, to have Dina suggest making a fake Makura to give to Garen, so the heroes would have enough time to get their ship fixed, deliver 'Makura' and then get the bloody hell offa that planet while Garen was distracted! AHAHAHAHA ^,-,^ so deliciously EVIL! But now I was waiting for JT to post, but if he doesnt have Garen make a decision soon I think someone should decide FOR him!
    Whoever that is, please let this work! ^v^() Both me and Sarah have plans for this 'fake Makura' thing ^-~
    But yeah, this isnt the only RPG we re waiting for JT on, he needs to post in Dream, I know he said hes busy lately and hes depressed cause he misses Bulbie but still, pretty soon we re going to have to post and let him sort it out later.




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    ~~~Dina~~~

    “Make me.”

    And then Kiaran flew off, Garen surprisingly letting her go. But this sent a chill of panic and foreboding within me. Where was she going? Why was she leaving us here with this creature perilously close to killing us all?! What.....What would Garen think now, with one of the saiyans that were supposedly ‘owned’ by me, ‘disobeying’ like that!!!? Damn, its all over, he ll know, he ll KNOW and he ll kill us all!! A part of me screamed, but then it came to me.

    Never give up... There was a way to get out of any dangerous situation, there was an answer for everything, you just had to be smart enough to know what it is and how to find it. Laughing a bit, which I hope didnt sound TOO false and high pitched with worry, I shook my head and indicated the direction which Kiaran had gone.
    “Are you sure you dont want THAT one instead?”
    Garen laughed, slightly bored and sounding as if I were wasting his time. “Indeed.....but Makura will suffice. The others do not matter.” He shifted his weight slightly on one foot and swished his tail in an almost irritated manner. “Very well, your ‘deal’ is acceptable to me. It would not be right to break a law by trying to uphold one, would it.”
    I nodded. “And an excellent desicion. I can guaruntee that as soon as the repairs are made on my ship, I will have her ready and gift-wrapped for you at this time tomo-----”
    “12 Hours.” Garen cut me off. The repairs on your ship should not take a full day. And Ive seen how lenient you are on your Saiyans, Ill not give this one time to run away.” Before I could begin to protest he cut me off again. “12 hours, or no deal. It seems your getting the better end of this deal anyway, so trying to argue with my kindness is not a wise thing to do.”
    I gulped as I felt his power level rise in responce to his threat. Forcing a winning, saleswomans smile I spoke. “12 hours it is then.”

    Feeling the need to get the hell out of this incredibly tense situation, and counting my lucky stars at the fact that we were all still alive, I snapped my fingers at Rudy. “Blue!” I said with authority. “Restrain this saiyan.” Rudy stepped over and, with Makura still weak from me grabbing her tail, he grabbed her wrists and held them behind her. Taking one more look at Garen before leaving with Rudy and Makura, I said, “Pleasure doing business with you.”


    ~~~~~~

    “Will 12 hours be enough time for you Dina?”
    “12 Hours my @$$! Let me go Summers you traitor!”
    “It should be. It will be cutting it a bit close but---”
    “Ill cut YOU a bit close you damn human b!tch!!!!”
    “...Anyway if I work all night I should be able to pull it off...”
    “ERRR IM GOING TO PULL SOMETHING OFF ALL RIGHT! YOUR ARMS!!! AND YOUR LEGS!!!! AND YOUR------”

    “Calm down Makura, we re not REALLY going to give you to him!” Rudy said, after the millionth interruption. After getting out of range of Garen, me and Rudy had begun discussing how we d make this believeable, and how we d arrange the ‘deliverance’. It had only served to piss Makura off even more. Makura struggled a bit more until she realised what Rudy said. “Your...not....? But..but then...what was all that about?! Is this some kind of a sick joke?!?”
    “No, listen. Remember how I had ‘drawn’ Yasu with chi? And how I had made a fake dragonball?” Makura still looked skeptical. I sighed. Reaching into my pocket, I formed an orange ball for perhaps the hundredth time and held it in my hands, drawing in the star in the process. Makura would have to see the hard way. Concentrating hard to make it solid, I said to Makura, “Here, catch” and tossed it to her.
    Catching it, she saw what it was. “Hey! A Dragonball! You were holding out on me! You sneaky little----”
    Just then it exploded in her hands. For a moment she just sat there, a growing look of annoyance and anger spreading across her face. Walking towards me, she raised up her hand. “You.......” she said, as I winced.

    “Are a GENIUS!!!!” She finished as her raised hand came down to give me a friendly pat on the back, a friendly pat that almost sent me into the ground. “This is gonna be great, I can just imagine the look on that idiot Changlings face when ‘I’ explode in it! AHAHAHA!!” She laughed almost evilly amidst the strange looks Rudy and I we re giving her. When she was done laughing she looked at us impatiently. “Well what are we waiting for?! We only got 12 hours! Lets make the most of em and get ready to get the hell offa this planet!” She took flight, me and Rudy soon following. But something still bothered me.
    “Hey Rudy,” I began, catching his attention as he flew slightly faster than me. “What happened back there with Gorgax? Howd we make it through that alive?”

    I saw Rudys face take on a withdrawn look and he seemed uncomfortable. “Its...not something Im proud of....”
    ~~~~~~~~~~~



    Ok! Ill leave it off here, lets get THIS RPG up and running again too! lol ^v^ Just call me the RPG Doc! The doctor, is IN LOL

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    Well I guess I'd better post. I really like this RPG and I don't want it to disappear. (I have lots of evil plans for the future...keekeekee....)


    Makura:
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    "Damn it, Dina....aren't you done yet?!"
    "Not yet. And stop moving!! How am I supposed to make an exact copy of you if you won't stand still?!"
    "Well I can't help that! Have YOU ever tried standing in the same stupid position for 6 hours straight? HAVE YOU?!"
    "Well, I'm sorry! But this hard! I've never tried to draw anything this big before."
    "Are you...calling me....FAT?!"
    "No, that's not what I..."
    "Why you stupid little--!"

    "Will you two please shut up?!" Rudy snapped from a chair in the corner of the hotel room. "You've been going at it for hours! Give it a rest already!"
    "I can't help it that she's pissing me off!" I shot back (Dina:"Don't MOVE!") "Maybe YOU'D like to try this, Summers!"
    "I think I'll pass. Besides...you look like you're having so much fun. I don't want to spoil it for you."
    "Errrr! I'm gonna kill BOTH of you!"
    "Not until I'm finished you aren't!" Dina said, peeking at me from overtop of the Makura-in-process. My eye twitched and I clenched my fist, but I manged to restrain myself. 'This sucks....' I thought, irrately.

    Those 12 hours seemed to last an eternity, but at last my "double" was finished and ready to present to Garen. Somehow I had a feeling this wasn't going to work...but we really had no other option at this point. Although... I had really been looking forward to fighting Garen. It would have been nice to have a real challenge for once. But apparently Rudy and the others didn't want that so for now I conceded. After all...I would have plenty of oppurtunities to kick some Changling arse once we got to Planet Vegeta, for no doubt there would be some hanging around there...and I doubted that they'd be very happy to see us.
    We left to go a meet Garen at the appointed time, but since he was going to be there to pick up "me", we figured it wouldn't go so well if there were two of me there. So I split from the group and went into one of the sidestreets to wait for them, suppressing my energy level to an undetectable level.
    "Man...the things I put up with..." I grumbled, stretching my sore limbs. I had never been more grateful to move in my entire life....But as I leaned back against the clay-brick wall near a darkened alley, I heard a mysterious, male voice float out from the shadows.
    "So...this is where you've been hiding....Bounty Hunter Makura."
    I spun around and took a few steps back, squinting into the darkness, trying to make out who had spoken.
    "Who are you? If you want to confront me then do it out here in the open. Unless...you're afraid?" I said with small smirk. There was a short pause, followed by an amused chuckle from the darkness.
    "Afraid? Why of course not....why would I be afraid? After all..." A booted foot stepped out into the light and was immedietly followed by the body and face of a suspicious looking man. "It's not like I'm here to fight you...."
    I quickly looked him over. He was a few inches taller than me with slightly darkened complexion and a semi-stocky build. He had spikey, dark blue hair with two strands that hung down over his cold gray eyes, one of which was covered by a black patch (though I could see the remenants of a scar sticking out diagonally from it). He was dressed in a white tanktop with a black vest covered in pockets and chains, baggy gray pants and black combat boots. He had something long and narrow strapped to his back that was covered in white cloth (which I assumed was a weapon of some kind). I narrowed my eyes suspiciously.
    "Oh really? Then would you mind telling me what exactly you want with me?"
    "Want? Why my good Makura...I want nothing from you. In fact I wish to give something TOO you..."
    "Sorry...not interested." I stated bluntly. I turned my back and began to walk away.
    "Really? Then I supposed you're not interested in finding out....who you really are..."
    I stopped, my foot scuffing the dirt. After a brief pause I slowly turned back around and stared at him coldly.
    "What did you just say?" I demanded, softly but fiercely.
    "You heard me..." he replied, folding his arms over his chest. "Who you are. And I don't mean the Bounty Hunter Makura either. Surely you've wondered what lies beyond that limited memory of yours...the life that you can't remember..."
    My heart seemed to freeze in my chest as I stared at this man before me. Did he really hold the answer that had been searching for all these years?
    "Who are you? How do I know I can trust you?" I asked forcefully.
    "The name's Kage.....and you don't know....But then again, you really don't know anything yet, do you?"
    I clenched my fists and gritted my teeth. "You son of a--"
    "If you wish to know more..." he cut me off, turning around. "Then go to the Kyoman Laboratory on the new Planet Vegeta. A very convinient location, wouldn't you say? I will meet you there. Farewell."
    And with that he returned to the shadows and left me there, standing alone in the dusty side street.


    You guys can go ahead and pick Makura up now, but don't have her say anything to them about what happened. She'll want to keep it a secret for now. hee hee hee...
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    Rudy-Well I'm too lazy to log out of Brandy's account. Anyway we've both been sick as of late. There's been a nasty flu going around here. She got it the 7th and was sick until the 13th and I got it last Tuesday. In fact I'm still recovering and even had a fever as high as 103 yesterday afternoon. Rest assured you can bet that we'll both get to posting in this and all the other RPG's we're in ASAP ^_~

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    Rudy Summers
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    It was the moment of truth. Me and Dina were waiting at the meeting site for Garen with the fake Makura. As for everyone else with the exception of the real one they were all waiting back at Torek's shop. There was no sense in having everyone here if Garen had a trap of his own. Meanwhile the real Makura was waiting and keeping herself hidden not too far from our current location. It seemed like a flawless plan. Give Garen the fake Makura, make final preps for the trip and get off the planet before he knew what had happened. However anyone with a brain knew that the best plans sometimes fell apart before anyone could figure out where they went wrong. I didn't know why but I couldn't shake the feeling that something bad was going to happen.

    Dina knew that I was slightly worried about this. Before she could say a word I looked at her and asked "Be honest with me Dina. We may have a plan to keep Makura safe but I'm starting to wonder about Garen. I don't expect him to think we'll give her up without a fight. Do you think he may have some sort of trap planned just in case?" Dina didn't say anything at first but I could tell she was thinking the same thing. Finally she said "I don't blame you Rudy. In fact I've been wondering the same thing." All I did was nod. Anyone who may have been watching could clearly see we were both worried about what may go wrong. Suddenly Dina spoke up. "You never did tell me what happened with Gorgax." I tried not to let it show but the things I said still bothered me. Damn! Of all the times to ask that! I thought to myself. I managed to avoid the question the first time around but I knew there was no way to keep it from her forever. I was going to come clean about it and explain how we got out of that situation when a voice interupted me. "So.......I see the female human and two monkeys but the question is where are the Nameks, your little pet, the other human and the third bottomless pit?" Turning around I saw Garen had come up from behind us. There was no backing out now. If this was a trap we had no choice but to face it head on. Before confronting him I whispered to Dina "If we get out of this alive I'll tell you what happened." Now was not the time for that. The important thing was dealing with Garen and hoping nothing went wrong......
    ------

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    ~~~Dina~~~

    There he was. Garen. The most powerful creature I had ever encountered. The fate of myself, Rudy, and all our friends rested on the presentation we would give right now. Either Garen would buy our little scam and we d make a clean getaway on Torek’s ship, or he would see through our deception and it would be the end of us. Even if he did buy the initial scam, I knew that I couldnt keep it up forever. He would eventually find out about our trick, and Garen struck me as the type that wouldnt rest until he got what he wanted. But the fake Makura, if successful, will serve its purpose. It would buy us some much needed time.

    Suddenly I felt my hold on the Chi created Makura beside me start to slip. Quckly I re-concentrated, and felt her become more solid. And just in time, any longer and all our hopes would have literally exploded. Quickly whispering to Rudy before turning around to reguard Garen, I told him, “Rudy I cant do much talking. If my concentration slips......” I trailed off, seeing the look of realisation growing on Rudys face. He knew what happened when I lost concentration. He remembered the Dragonball that he had dropped just in time. Rudy nodded, looking even more nervous than before.

    “So, human, your repairs are complete, and paid for, and now it is time to uphold your end of the bargain.” He stated, peering at me through narrowed studying eyes. Without losing concentration, I nodded, snapping my fingers to signal ‘the monkey’ to step forward with the fake Makura in ‘handcuffs’. Quckly I folded my hands behind my back and made the motions for the fake Makura to walk forward, periodically stopping to struggle to make it look more believeable. As Rudy shoved ‘Makura’ forward one last time, I had her head move to give him one last icy glare. As I watched my creation I had to restrain myself from smiling with pride at my handiwork. Heck, I had seen that hateful glare enough times to be able to paint it in my sleep!
    Garen gazed at ‘Makura’ thoughtfully. “So, Makura, at last your days of running are over. I own your life now, and soon, you will go on trial and almost certainly be found guilty. Have you anything to say?”
    Panic ran through me. I glanced at Rudy, almost about to hyperventalate. I didnt rig this Makura to talk, on the outside it appears to be Makura exactly but it was just meant to be a shell, to visibly and even semi-power level fool Garen into thinking it was the real thing. I didnt count on her needing to talk.

    Fortunately Rudy had it covered. “She has been beaten into submission. She no longer knows how to talk. My....master figured it would make the ride back for you easier.” Rudy looked slightly perturbed at having to call me his master. I made a mental note to apologise later ^-^()
    Garen studied me a bit more, and then looked the Makura up and down. For a few akward, fearful moments I wondered if he knew it was some sort of a trick, I wondered if we were seconds away from death. And then......

    “Very well, consider our business affairs complete.” And then he walked off, dragging the fake Makura in tow.

    But I didnt celebrate yet. We still had to get back to the ship without him noticing it was fake. And that meant constant concentration on my part. Adding to that the fact that I couldnt even see my subject anymore and it would take almost all of my attention to hold the illusion.

    If by some cruel twist of fate I sneezed now it would be all over......

    ~~~~~~~~


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    Kiaran


    " Why do you weep? What are these tears upon your face?"
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    [size=1] They came. They talked. They left.

    That was what Rudy and Dina did, carrying the fake Makura with them as well, and the real Makura. I overheard a little of what they did... but as they talked with Gav and the other Namek, and Idaia had even gone to listen for a while.
    I had worked upon the ship assigned to me by Torek, and eventually I got everything working in order. He was really impressed by the way I got the weapon activated as well. He said he was leaving for the night, but I was free to roam about and tinker with the ships. I think I earned his trust a little... he was going to pay me a little money for fixing one of his ships, but I declined it.
    [ So, when they return... what are you going to do?]
    Yasu's voice suddenly popped into my head, and I turned adn gave a painful gaze at Yasu.
    "Nothing..."
    [ There is more to this than what you make it seem.]
    I nodded slightly....
    "I suppose.. I mean, what they did... it's all lies. Rudy did it, Dina did it... it's like those two lie together and - I don't.. "
    I kicked a piece of a broken part away, frustrated I sat down.
    [ You were once lied to before.] Yasu commented, gazing at me with those eyes. I stared at Yasu...
    " You're a smart kitty."
    [ I wish i knew why.]
    I smiled... and sighed, resting my face in my hands.
    " I guess there is more to it than that... it just adds up. Maybe I'm a bit... sad and ... oh I don't know. I shouldn't bother you with my problems Yasu... you have enough of them."
    [ No, not currently. No one knows about how I regained back some of the memory I'd lost, and no one knows much about Idaia as well. No one accept for you,a nd I'm assuming the others as well... if ... or once you tell them.]
    "- or they decide to liste-" I cut myself off. That wasn't right... t hey were nice... I mean, mostly nice I suppose. They let me come along with them.... why was I so confused?
    [ You were lied to before... but it's more... oh, I think I might understand.]
    "What?" I said, looking at Yasu... a single tear strolling down my cheek. "It would be nice for a change to have anyone understand..."
    I quickly wiped away the single tear, embarrassed to myself that I would cry. I was a Saiyan, the books said that Saiyans don't cry....
    [ You have feelings towards him.]
    My eyes stared for a second, those words Yasu said sticking to my body like a dreaded towel... did I?
    "Maybe... I just.... i just need to be alone."
    With that I stood up, and began to walk farther back into Torek's shop.
    [ They'll be back soon, and they'll want to leave right away. Dina can't holdonto her creation much longer. ]
    " I know... maybe I shouldn't go... " I responded, tearfully gazing back at Yasu.
    " Maybe it was a mistake to bring a lame excuse for a Saiyan along... I was never meant to be here."
    With that I turned away and walked back into the deepest part of Torek's shop,and Yasu didn't respond.

    I had to think... all the emotions inside of me... i had to think... try to sort them out.



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    Yay! We're back an running! And there's...*gasp* posts!!! O.O *passes out in a dead faint*

    If you guys don't mind I'm just gonna skip ahead a little and make it so that Garen already left with the fake Makura. Just for the sake of moving things foreward...


    Makura:
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    I stood staring at the dark alleyway into which Kage had disappeared for a good 10 minutes before I moved again. For once in my life was completely dumbsturck and I didn't know what to think. Was this guy for real? Or was he just playing me for a fool and trying to lure me into a trap? Was it a risk...that I could afford to take in order to find out about my past? My life?
    I sighed and shook my head. I held up my hand in front of face and stared at it. "Why.... am I here? Where did I come from? What am I supposed to do?" I dropped my hand and leaned against the wall, my arm above my head and my forehead pressed to the cold, hard stone. "Am I really...who I think I am?"
    I was consumed in silence for several minutes, my mind blank as I tried not to think about what had just happened. The silence was only broken by the sound of a familiar male voice.
    "Makura!" I knew without looking up that it was Rudy. "Here you are! Great news! Garen bought it! At least for know anyway! He left on his ship and the fake Makura should last long enough for us to get a good headstart. Now we just need to...Makura?"
    I stood up straight again and looked at him. "What?"
    "Are you...alright?"
    "Of course I 'm alright Summers! Why wouldn't I be?!" I snapped.
    "Nothing...you just...looked a little uneasy...that's all."
    "Well, I 'm fine! Stop worrying about me, Rudy! I don't need it! And furthermore--what? Why are you looking at me like that?"
    "You...you called me Rudy." he replied, his face stuck in wide-eyed surprise as he pointed at me.
    "Yeah so?!"
    "That's the first time you've actually called me by my first name! What happened to Summers?" I saw a small, laughing grin twitch at his lips. I felt my face growing hot...
    "Errr...well...." I quickly regained myself and narrowed my eyes into a glare. "So WHAT?! That's your NAME isn't it?!"
    Rudy just stood there and laughed. I sweatdropped.
    "You earth Saiya-jins really ARE strange..." I spun around and began to stalk off until he called after me.
    "Hey Makura! Dina went to go get Gav and Hamma at the bar. Could you go and find Kiaran, Yasu and Idaia. I think they're back at Torek's shop! As soon as everyone's ready we'll meet up at the launch pad and leave as soon as possible."
    I spun back around and yelled back. "Man! What AM I? Your errand girl? First you and Dina put me through hell and NOW you expect me to do a favor for you? Geez...how rude, Summers..."
    Rudy just crossed his arms over his chest and raised an eyebrow at me. I let out an exasperated cry, throwing my hands in the air.
    "Fine! Fine! I'm going!" Rudy nodded and began to turn away. I watched him for a moment, a strange heavy feeling settling in my chest. Suddenly, I called out to him again. "Hey!"
    He stopped and looked back over his shoulder. "Yeah?"
    "Ummm...thanks...Rudy." Without waiting for him to respond I turned away again and headed for Torek's shop.


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    Theres a slight problem, Dina has to use all of her concentration on keeping the cohesion of the fake Makura. There IS a way to fix this, but.....I need to shake things up first ^,-,^ So here goes, get ready for trouble everyone!

    ~~~Dina~~~

    Must....keep....focus.......Makura Makura Makura.......focus....focus.......focus....

    I walked straight towards the bar, keeping my mind on nothing but keeping the fake Makura in one piece. What happened to the Makura once we all were on our way to Planet Vegeta meant nothing to me, I knew all I had done was buy us some time. But time was precious, without this plan Garen wouldve cut through us all one by one, until the only one that was left alive was Makura. Then it would only be a matter of rendering her helpless and taking her back to Planet Vegeta, where she would have been joining us in death in no time. Without us, without what I realised was Earths greatest protectors, the bad Saiyans would come, and our beautiful Earth would be nothing. Everything that was once good would be gone. And I could not let that happen.

    As I came to the door, I spotted Gav and Hamma waiting around nervously. I tried not to move my arms (as any movement I made had the possibility of being transmitted into the fake Makura) but I made sure to be seen. It wasnt long before Gav and Hamma came over.
    "Hey Dina," Hamma said. "Whats the news? Did it work?" I didnt say anything, if I thought about talking I could easily lose control. Without a word I started walking towards Toreks shop. Gav seemed confused and trotted up beside me. "Hey, you ok? Your not talking." I started to panic as I felt my control slip, and I walked faster. Concentrate dammit! Concentrate....concentrate......concentra---- "Dina!" Suddenly a hand grabbed my shoulder, and I felt my concentration slip and shatter. A faint exploding sound soon followed and in the distance, I saw a cloud of smoke rise up. "DAMMIT!" I turned to look at Gav. "The jig is up Gav, run for the ship! We have to get off the planet as soon as possible!" I began running towards the ship to warn the others.

    Reaching Toreks shop I ran inside, panic rising within me. Garen would be mad, and if he found us here, there would be no time wasting, no more deals. It would be the end of us.
    Kiaran came into view and I ran to her, putting my hand on her shoulder and gazing at her with desperate eyes. "Kiaran! Is the ship ready?! We have to leave now, Garen KNOWS, I...I couldnt hang on and now he KNOWS!" Kiaran just looked at me with hurt eyes and nodded. I sighed with relief. "Thank goodness....come on, get in, Ill round up Idaia and Yasu and the others are on their way----"

    "Im not going.." Kiaran said, turning away from me. Stopping suddenly in surprise I shook my head. "What? Why not, you HAVE to---"
    "I do NOT have to!" The look in her eyes was of pain and fury now, as she looked at me with an expression I had never before seen on the face of another person. "If I decide not to keep company with liars and betrayers then that is my decision." I was shocked. "Kiaran, dont be like that...I..." She turned away, seemingly hearing enough and no longer listening to what I had to say.
    A defensive feeling rose up within me, and I began to feel slightly angry myself. "Listen Kiaran, Im sorry I treated you that way, Im sorry I had to lie. But I did what I had to, if we fought him we might not ALL die but some of us would! Now, you look at me and tell me, which ones would you have die so that all of us could live?!"
    She whirled on me. "You did NOT have to do that! There could have been another way!"
    "Well I didnt see anyone else stepping up with another way, and time was critical. If we waited around to find another way we might be having this conversation while burying one of our friends. And given the choice between lying and watching one of the people I care about die, what do you think I would choose?!"

    Suddenly, Hamma Gav, and the rest ran in. "I heard the news, is the ship ready to leave?" Rudy asked, looking at Kiaran questionably. She nodded, and turned away from me, walking towards where the ship was. Good, she was coming... I thought with some relief. I hoped she understood why I did what I did...I would rather her be upset with me and alive than my best friend and dead.
    Taking a deep breath to calm the emotions tumbling within me, I reguarded everyone. "We need to hurry and board the ship. If we havent cleared the atmosphere before Garen recovers from the exploded Makura, he ll just shoot us down." Realising the seriousness of the situation, everyone began heading towards the ship, urgency in their steps. Seeing Idaia and Yasu in a corner, I picked the small Namek boy up and carried him with me to the ship. "Why were you and Kiaran fighting, Dina?" He asked, sounding a bit nervous with the situation, which he had every right to be. I sighed. "We werent fighting....we just....disagree on something. Everythings alright..."
    He nodded, pretending to believe me. But both he and I knew, everything was FAR from alright.

    The trouble was just beginning.....
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    Yasu



    *
    Yasu fluttered near Rudy's shoulder, as they all began to enter the ship. Soon the engine roared and lift off was in order.
    [ If it pleases you to know Rudy Summers, the weapon activation shield and the engine were fixed and enhanced by Kiaran. It should run a bit fa-]
    Before Yasu could finish, Rudy has punched the 'gas' you could say... and the ship accelerated with more giddy up than before, causing the floating Yasu to smash into a wall. Her eyes fluttered for a second before she fell to teh floor.
    [ -faster...]
    She finished, this time fluttering and sitting upon Rudy's shoulder.
    Yasu thought about bringing up the fact that she had recovered some of her memory, and that it could prove vital... but as Rudy spoke, and Kiaran had answered after ... well, she thought it better to remain quiet.
    "Good thing we got out of there..." Rudy mumbled, as Dina nodded.
    "Wouldn't have wanted to battle Garen..."
    With that, Kiaran- almost bitterly, retorted.. 'Like it matters... once we reach the planet, we'll end up having to fight him anyways. Do'nt think it makes much of a difference... we're fighting the inevitable."
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    ~~~Dina~~~

    The way there was quiet. Many of us had thoughts of our own, things we had to work out. There was a heavy air about us all, a tense feeling of knowing we werent home safe yet. Our journey had just begun, our worst troubles still ahead of us. In the warmth and the quiet, I pondered, and then...

    I dreamed....

    It is quiet. Makura Kiaran and Rudy, Gav, Yasu, Idaia and Hamma. They are all around me, but are just standing, watching. What are they looking at...? I think, and then I look. Darkness surrounds us, but for a large round blue orb. Its the Earth...my home.... Suddenly a bright light shoots from the blue, blue turns to red, sharp orange and yellow. With a flash my home winks out, soundless in the vaccuum of space. I turn to the others, my eyes seeking to know, Why had this happened??
    They still just stare, sadness upon their faces. I run to the closest, Rudy, and grab for his arm, but my hands meet only air. They are here, but NO! They arent! Whats happened-----


    Garens hand shot out, stabbing through Rudys chest as I watched helpless. Blood flew from his mouth, and he seemed to fall in slow motion, but yet at the same time so fast I could not even move before he hit the ground, never to rise again. Garen stood up straight, and one by one, blasted everyone where they stood motionless, shocked by what they had seen. "NO!" I tried to cry out, but I too was soon destroyed.

    In the black nothing that followed, thoughts drifted around my head.
    "Some f***ing hero I turned out to be....."Rudy...no...dont say that....
    <"I am not a fighter- therefore it is strange to think some one feels threatened or uneasy.">Yasu...my fear of trusting had hurt others...
    "Don't think it makes much of a difference... we're fighting the inevitable."Kiaran..Im sorry...I tried.....
    "Why do I get the feeling that girl is going to be the death of you guys?"Makura....that cant be true...can it?
    Can it......?


    My eyes opened, Makuras words still ringing through my head. It IS true.....its my fault...We will fight Garen again on Planet Vegeta and he wont show mercy on ANY of us this time. It wont be just about Makura anymore, now we re all going to die......I was just stalling our deaths....

    Not if I could help it. I gritted my teeth. It WAS my fault, if anyone died in the battle that was sure to follow, I would be to blame. I looked around at the faces of my companions, my friends, and remembered my words to Kiaran earlier. I had told her to tell me which ones she would choose to die so that the rest may live. I couldnt comprehend being able to make such a choice. That was then.
    This is now.

    I knew which one to sacrifice so that the rest could live, but they didnt need to know who it was. If they did, they might try to talk me out of it, after all, I was just a human. This was a Saiyan war. But I had seen, if it wasnt stopped now, the war would spread, the causulties would grow to more than Saiyan lives, more than the lives of us few rebels. The lives of every living thing on Earth rested on our shoulders. And I would die before I saw my dream become reality.
    "Yasu..." I said quietly, breaking the silence that had weighed heavy on the cabin. Reaching into my pocket I pulled out my Dragonball, its smooth, orange surface and single red star comforting me one last time. "This was the only thing anyone ever gave me...." I said, presenting it in front of her as she sat perched on Rudys shoulder. "I know what lies ahead of us all isnt going to be easy....so I want you to have this Yasu." I held it in my open palm, its translucient surface reflecting my face back to me. Eyes filled with pain and determination stared back at me from the orange orb.

    "Promise me....no matter what happens, youll take care of it as I have."
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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    Hey Guys, just eltting you know I'm still here And I'm planning on posting soon.
    I think we're waiting on Rudy actually...*taps foot* Wow...this is a switch...


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    "Makura!" I knew without looking up that it was Rudy. "Here you are! Great news! Garen bought it! At least for know anyway! He left on his ship and the fake Makura should last long enough for us to get a good headstart.
    I just reread my last post and found this in which I noted that Garen had already left on his ship with the fake Makura before Rudy came and got Makura. So even if the fake Makura exploded in wouldn't have been on Planet Sylpha would it? I had planned on giveing them some leisure time to escape but....
    I don't know if it's asking too much Asi-chan, but would mind tweeking your posts just a little? I don't mind if Dina loses control and the fake Makura blows up but could you change it so that it happened while Garen's ship was already in outer space?
    I don't mean to sound so anal about this....I'm sorry if I do....

    And Rudy, if you're reading this, PLEASE POST!! I don;t want this RPG to go down!


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    Dammit *reads her last post* That would mean my last post would have to be ignored ;.; and I did this whole dream sequence thing! *reads her second to last post*
    ......
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    I wish you wouldve seen that before I wrote all that x.x I made it so the fake Makura exploded cause everyone was having her talk and move around easily, and really she can barely walk and keep the cohesion at the same time ^-^() Its a very strenuous effort to keep chi from flying all over the place, especially when your target is out of visual range. *realises she sounds like she tried* lol Plus no one else was adding anything and I felt the need to shake things up a bit ^v~
    But I have an idea:

    How about we ignore my last 2 posts (leave them there though cause Im proud of them ^-^()) and you can write what you wanted to have done before everything got crazy. If everyones ok with that that is, to me it doesnt seem very fair but whatever. Since I have no idea how to backtrack Ill leave that up to you ^-^()
    And everyone stop picking on Rudy, hes not the only one in this RPG you know. With my last post I was actually waiting on Kalah ^-^() but since that post doesnt matter anymore youve got the field Sarah chan!




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    Well...the dream sequence doesn't neccessarily have to be ignored. I didn't we had to completely disregard your posts, I was just seeing if we could tweak it a little. The panicky thing could still happen. All you'd have to do would be to change it so that the fake Makura exploded while Garen's ship was in the air, before we took off. Do you get what i'm saying? Would you mind doing that instead? That way those two posts wouldn't have to be ignored.


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    I get what your saying Sarah but if it exploded in the air, how would that affect what happened afterwards, if it would mean they never left the planet then my posts would have to be ignored, so just post something to fit with what you wanted to happen. I dont feel like just editing both my posts to fit with things Im not sure how you want done so just say whatever you want. You know me Im not being mean but Im just letting you handle it so I dont mess with your plans again. But leave my posts the way they are so that later if we leave the planet for real Ill just need to tweak a few things, copy it into a new post, and delete the old one.
    Disreguard whatever you want in them I guess but make a post with your new ideas so that the rest of us arent lost ^-^()




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    Alright...that's fine, as long as you don't mind. I hate sounding like a bully here...^^()
    Sheesh...this RPGing is getting more an more complicated. Everyone has their own plans.
    I'll try my best to put up a post sometime soon. (I am currently swamped with IB English homwork.) But I actually think it best to give Rudy a shot before we continue. He IS going to post right?


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    x.x....
    Im sure he ll post when we know whats going on...
    I think you need to make the next post though, since your the only one that knows whats you want to have happen ^-^() And dont feel like a bully, just post soon so Ill know what to do next lol




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    To the cast of Dragonball FS:
    Im sorry but I will no longer be posting. This was my first RPG here at TPM and I hate to not be able to see the end of it, but it has to be. When I joined this, TPM was a fun place to be, and it was fun to write stories about mystery and intrigue, blood and feuds, love and honor. But far too much has been happening behind the scenes, and broken trust and betrayal, something you might see in an RPG, has manifested itself on how this place is run.
    When the people in charge, who are supposed to help people and provide guidance, get so power-hungry and spiteful that theyd screw over a fellow person, a FRIEND, that is when it starts becoming less fun. The system is corrupt, and I want no part in something that allows betrayal of friendships to happen. I want no part in a place where people who act nice and innocent, and smile in your face and call you friend, stab you in the back when your not looking.
    Its been fun, and if anyone wishes to continue to RP with me, feel free to give me an IM. But I wont stay in this corrupt place any longer.
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    JT assures me that things have changed and that the situation in the above post no longer applies so, a little unfinished business must be taken care of ^v^ I have a plan for a surprise for Sarah but this RPG needs to finish for me to do it. Whoever is game post here.

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    Wooo, the old peeps are comin back lol.

    I wouldnt mind gettin back into the whole rpg side of the rpg forum again though i did kinda lose my place with this one. My charachter was pretty Redundant but ill give it a go if you guys will.

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    I was actually hoping that this RPG would be revived! I've had the urge to play Makkura again for a while now. I remember when this RPG first died I had so many plans for it, and now I have another stab at them. Mwahaha! XDXDXD


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    I have the urge to play the lil'green dude. ^_^

    Let's get this thing ignited again!

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    Yeah, i shall return with my freak....now i have to remember all the custom attacks i made up.....bloody ell fire!

    .Would it work just trying to pick up where we left off though? Some of us were kinda in a dead situation. *Translation* (My charachter wasnt getting any attention and was too underpowered to have any reason to get involved) :biggrin:

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    Bloody ell!!!! Guess this makes one more RPG I have to get around to posting in then.


    Since this was MY rpg here is how we will do this. I will spend some time reviewing the rpg as a whole. I will write a story summary that brings things to the part I wish us to pick it up from and I will post it as a new RPG thread that is closed to sign-ups. Fortunately I still remember all the plans I had for this thing. I will try to have it up sometime this weekend so it can get rolling again.


    It is good to see some of our old peeps back on the board. I really miss those good ol days!!!

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    *pokes JT* Come now you know how much patience I have...lol It ran out like 2 days ago lol


    HURRY UP or lets just post in this one




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    Not to double post buuuut:



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    Heh heh heh....awesome. Though her outfit is kind of a combination of FS Makura and SA Makura. O_o there are too many of them...@_@


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    *sees Makura's dancing everywhere*
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