I would suggest that you heavily revamp this story, as it
has officially become a cliche trainer fic. Even if you do
revamp it, it will ultimately be ignored by the seething
masses of readers who will view your fic and ignore it,
but view fics like " Lisa The Legend " and " Electric
Buggy To Victory " and reply to those. So, don't bother
trying for reviews... As other writers will get them,
leaving newbs like me forgotten and trampled in the
dust.
Not that I mean to offend any of those fine writers
and their excellent fics, of course. Nor do I intend
to offend their fics or the aforementioned masses
of wise readers... Nor do I intend to evoke feelings
of pity. Ah well, zat's life...