Well, I'm not a mod, so 'scuse me...
You've got some good ideas, but you may want to develop them a little before posting. If you ever want help, you can PM or E-mail me at VampireGal361@aol.com.
As I said, you've got the ideas, but you need to think things through and put some more detail in them. Join some RPGs, read the RPG news... stuff like that!
Welcome to TPM's RPG forum, too! ^_^