thanks Brian and Phoenixsong, I guess were I got confused was that the really in death Erotic Fiction with gratuitous or overly graphic sex scenes are like written porn...

well see the thing is the Erotic Fiction part of my fic is seen yet not hevily tuched on and for the most part I was planing on using it both to show a some what deep relationship between Charles and Chaloch, and yet I am also plaing to have Andrew's Psychopathic jinx evolve in to a harpy and try to rasies an army Harpies to hunt down men and eat them then throw them up as women.

I would think it would make more since to have an Army of Psychopathic Harpies try to take over the world with girl power so that women can rule the world, then have like say the Greys invade Earth and factory farm humans both for sexual pleasure and as a food source...

So yeah I know I have some truly bizarre Ideas being a guy and all and writing about women to take over the world...

~Charles Legend