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    Own choices of course,Free will is so important!

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    Thats cool. Just another question out of curiosity - if you gave peeps their own chocies, dont you think some of them would do the wrong thing and abuse their free choice? im being so dificult arent i



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    Quote Originally Posted by shazza View Post
    Mt. Moon gives me that similar feeling I used to get when I would wake up first thing in the morning as an 11/12 year old and get excited about browsing TPM.

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    Well.............um......Every year everyone would have a brain scan and If there were traces of them going to do something evil they would put them in jail.NO MORE QUESTIONS!!!

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    Awww why not??? I wanna ask questions.

    Anyway this is a poetry corner - no more discussions.


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    Quote Originally Posted by shazza View Post
    Mt. Moon gives me that similar feeling I used to get when I would wake up first thing in the morning as an 11/12 year old and get excited about browsing TPM.

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    What are we all
    Why do we fade
    Back into a wall

    Now your gone
    I saw you once
    Flew as a swan

    Down on earth
    Alone we begin
    What it's worth
    One more round; one more low.

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    Hey, im back with some more songs that im hoping to get recorded soon, so here are some.


    -Tonight-


    Can you?
    Breathe with me,
    Tonight
    Can't help when you,
    Talk about me,
    With your friends
    NO fight
    I know that things may be bad,
    I kno that I will try and be back,
    I am everything I can be
    I may not be strong
    But I know how to handle things
    Can you hear me tonight


    I am screaming for you,
    Tonight,
    I am waiting for you to,
    Tonight,
    One breath away from falling,
    Tonight,
    I am wating, I am waiting, I am wainting,
    Tonight,
    For you.

    Lost echos in time,
    Freeze frame a picture,
    How does it feel knowing,
    One day I will leave,
    And never return,
    It could be,
    Tonight,
    We have to make mistakes,
    Just to learn,
    How we mesh with differences
    I kno that I am not that smart
    I kno that we cna work it out
    But I know how to handle things
    Can you hear me tonight

    chorus



    La da de la, La da dea la,

    Tonight, to breathe, to be with you
    Tonight, to see, to feel you tonight
    How does it feel, knowing someday I will leave,
    Will you remember me as the way I used to be,
    or Will you sit and grieve,
    Or will we both be set free?

    Chorus 2x

    Tonight, I am waiting, I am waiting, I am waiting for tonight...



    -Slipping Far Away-



    Down, on my own without you,
    Can't control, myself anymore,
    My reflection shows me a fool,
    Losing my mind as I land on the floor,
    Its hitting me deep in the core.
    Sometimes im so tired,
    Always being lied to,
    Exit, slipping far away!

    Slipping far away,
    Got nothing else to say,
    I swear I wont be ok,
    Don't want to remember today,
    Head spinning as I lay,
    Yes im slipping, slipping far away.

    On my own isolated,
    Always with my friends feeling alone,
    Can't help being number one hated,
    Talk all night on the phone,
    Got no where else to roam.
    Sometimes im so tired,
    Always being lied to,
    Exit, slipping far away!

    Slipping far away,
    Got nothing else to say,
    I swear I wont be ok,
    Don't want to remember today,
    Head spinning as I lay,
    Yes im slipping, slipping far away.

    At home contraveral,
    Speaker of many sins,
    Skipping review rehersal,
    Many losses, Many wins,
    Can't help the way I am.
    Sometimes im so damn tired,
    Always being lied to,
    Exit, slipping and slipping and slipping far away!

    Slipping far away,
    Got nothing else to say,
    I swear I wont be ok,
    Don't want to remember today,
    Head spinning as I lay,
    Got nothing else to say,
    I swear I wont be ok,
    Don't want to remember today,
    Head spinning as I lay,
    Yes im slipping, slipping far away.

    Got nothing left to say,
    Don't want to,
    Can't make me.
    Please just go away...



    -Little bit Strange-

    I know I may act wierd,
    I know I can be, a little bit different,
    I may be feared,
    But everything I say I meant.
    Things can get a little bit crazy,
    But you will always be my baby,
    Sorry but I can't give you my love.

    I know things can get a little bit strange,
    I cant help these feelings towards you,
    But I cannot get close to anyone,
    Your gonna get in danger,
    But I don't want to be a stranger,
    Things can be a little bit strange,
    I know, things can be a little bit strange.

    From the, very first time I set eyes on you,
    I had this tingly feeling,
    Trust me, I really do love you and that is true,
    now, I am alone dealing,
    Can't see you without pain!
    Sorry but I can't give you my love.

    I know things can get a little bit strange,
    I cant help these feelings towards you,
    But I cannot get close to anyone,
    Your gonna get in danger,
    But I don't want to be a stranger,
    Things can be a little bit strange,
    I know, things can be a little bit strange

    I try my best,
    Give you my all,
    But in the end,
    You may fall,
    I can give you that call,
    Its hurts me to see you hurt,
    But thats the way it has to be!

    I know things can get a little bit strange,
    I cant help these feelings towards you,
    But I cannot get close to anyone,
    Your gonna get in danger,
    But I don't want to be a stranger,
    Things can be a little bit strange,
    I know, things can be a little bit strange


    -Friday -

    Saturday, im tired as ****,
    Sundays here and Im tired still,
    Monday comes and im feeling it bad,
    Tuesday happens and makes life miserable
    Wendsday makes me remember what I had,
    Thursday Im ready and full.

    Friday Night,
    Feelings alright,
    Can't stop me now,
    No matter how,
    Hard you try im into deep,
    Taking that great leap,
    Its a friday night!

    Hanging with my friends,
    Driving in one of their benz,
    Grabing life real damn high,
    Moving my body down low,
    Feeling so fly,
    Can you feel my flow.

    Friday Night,
    Feelings alright,
    Can't stop me now,
    No matter how,
    Hard you try im into deep,
    Taking that great leap,
    Its a friday night!

    Oh.oh,oh,oh no one stoppin this ****,
    **** it up and Ill throw a fit,
    Stay on my good side,
    Enjoy the ride,
    Girl don't you hide.

    Friday Night,
    Feelings alright,
    Can't stop me now,
    No matter how,
    Hard you try im into deep,
    Taking that great leap,
    Its a friday night!

    -Boy-

    There was a boy,
    He felt so damn bad,
    Never got things,
    Always feeling sad,
    Can't belong,
    So he walked away.
    Whats wrong boy?
    Can't control yourself anymore.

    He wants to run,
    Hide form the pain inside,
    But has no where to go,
    So he runs and runs and he runs and runs and he run,
    Poor boy.

    Tired of being alone,
    He picks up the phone,
    But no ones on the other line.
    Remains silent and hidden,
    Till he finds a way to go,
    He wishes this horror away.
    Whats wrong boy?
    Can't control yourself anymore.

    He wants to run,
    Hide form the pain inside,
    But has no where to go,
    So he runs and runs and he runs and runs and he run,
    Poor boy.

    Hes got to hide,
    Hes got to be on his own,
    Thinks of life,
    Hes learned so much,
    Not much on his own,
    But alone in his mind.
    THings will get better boy,

    He wants to run back,
    Knows hes not on his own,
    Remembers life an't so bad,
    Throws the phone,
    Boy found his way.


    -Could Happen-

    YEAH, hey there, it could happen

    Things are growing better each day,
    Sitting in my room,
    As I begin to dream of what to say,
    Living life to the fullest,
    Was starting to come true.

    Yes there it could happen,
    Live like its you last day,
    Always have something to say,
    Remember you gott be you,
    Party it up now,
    Yes there it could happen today!

    Im in love,
    and its the best thing for me,
    Life is not lasting forever,
    Lets be together now,
    And not wait another second,
    Full of life and beginnings.

    Yes there it could happen,
    Live like its you last day,
    Always have something to say,
    Remember you gott be you,
    Party it up now,
    Yes there it could happen today!

    Life is short,
    Love is forever,
    Life is a gift,
    But so are you,
    Friends are memories,
    but so is life,
    It could happen anyday.

    Yes there it could happen,
    Live like its you last day,
    Always have something to say,
    Remember you gott be you,
    Party it up now,
    Yes there it could happen today!


    -Im in love with you-

    From the very first time we met,
    I knew it was something,
    But hard to recognize,
    I been a stranger to this for some time,
    Its hard to make up my mind,
    But in the end im all for you.

    Im in love with you,
    You brought meaning to me,
    The bond between us grows,
    Heartbreak it more,
    But in the end I have you there for me,
    Im in love with you.

    Can't control the things you make me do,
    Love at first sight,
    Can just be a blind fight,
    Took a bit but I knew you were cool,
    Taking it slow and moving on up,
    Your sweet eyes and your flow.

    Im in love with you,
    You brought meaning to me,
    The bond between us grows,
    Heartbreak it more,
    But in the end I have you there for me,
    Im in love with you.

    I'd do anything for her,
    She'd do anything for me,
    That what makes more than anybody else,
    Can't help but to know,
    Know that we could have it all,
    And now we hae are sappy love song!

    Im in love with you,
    You brought meaning to me,
    The bond between us grows,
    Heartbreak it more,
    But in the end I have you there for me,
    Im in love with you.

    -Can't Make Life Everything You Want It To Be-

    IM so tired of the same **** day in and day out,
    Can't help but to tell you all my feelings and what im all about,
    You know, things about me I dont know and I sit and pout,
    I can be serious even though I act like I dont give a ****,
    Look now and see how Im running out of luck,
    Damn, **** happens to make life suck,
    Falling down and crawling back to the top,
    Hope when im older I dont end with a mop,
    Even though thats what most say!

    Can't make life everything you want it to be,
    To bad I am blinded by the light to see,
    Only got the one who cares about me,
    BUt feelings locked inside,
    Life hurting outside,
    Please wont you be by my side.

    Motivated by your advice keeps me going,
    Keeps my body and engery flowing,
    Hope this relationship we have keeps on growing,
    With that sweet talk of yours that you keep doing.
    Falling down and crawling back to the top,
    Hope when im older I dont end with a mop,
    Even though thats what everyone says!

    Can't make life everything you want it to be,
    To bad I am blinded by the light to see,
    Only got the one who cares about me,
    BUt feelings locked inside,
    Life hurting outside,
    Please wont you be by my side.

    Tired of waiting but I want to,
    Want to be you one and only,
    Can't trust my words,
    Every single heard,
    YEAH, YEAH, YEAH, YEAH!

    Can't make life everything you want it to be,
    To bad I am blinded by the light to see,
    Only got the one who cares about me,
    BUt feelings locked inside,
    Life hurting outside,
    Please wont you be by my side.

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    Here's a little poem I wrote. It's probably really bad compared to the rest here, but I like it.


    A Trainer’s Quest


    Darkness descends upon the land,
    Showered in the fog of night.
    The only light is in your hand;
    You must go and win the fight.
    Catch them, all of them, by the end;
    You must triumph as a team.
    Battle fiercely, and play to win;
    It has always been your dream.
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    I dont know how you say
    That he never existed
    I dont know how you say
    That its all a lie
    Because what I know to be true
    I could never deny

    And you tell me all these things
    That you back up all the way
    You tell me all these things
    Down my throat and in my face
    I take them in but you'll never change
    What I believe

    Because Christ
    has opened my eyes
    and has shown me
    That grace not works
    Faith cant be earned
    and he saved me
    he took my death away
    he suffered all my pain
    because he loved me....
    because he loved me....

    I dont know what that is... dont ask...



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    Quote Originally Posted by shazza View Post
    Mt. Moon gives me that similar feeling I used to get when I would wake up first thing in the morning as an 11/12 year old and get excited about browsing TPM.

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    No poem to post here, might write one sometime.

    Anyway, m_p: Pretty good (I can't review poetry!), but line 7 broke the nice rhyming scheme, and since the whole thing has been more or less instructions/commands, line 8 looked a bit strange.

    Tara: That was an interesting poem; "and has shown me That grace not works Faith cant be earned" didn't make sense to me though, although I got the gist of it. And about the subject material, don't know what happens where you are, but in my circle of people we don't try to change people's beliefs. We can debate religion, I do debate my views about Christianity and stuff, but it's not like we're trying to convince anyone that God exists/doesn't exist/whatever. By the way, how we can say that it's all a lie and stuff is because, well that's what we believe, and if you want your beliefs respected, you've got to respect our views too... yeah. End of rant.
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    ^^ Well... here are a few of my poems. I'd be extremely happy if you guys would tell me if you like them or what you liked or didn't like... well, you know. Critique-like ness. ^^;;

    This first one is my favorite thus far. ^^;



    We caper the intricate dance
    Of wits, smiles and truth
    We sing the complicated song
    Of being flirts and aloof
    Breathe
    Take a lapse from the music


    I smile the ever-lasting grin
    With hope, pride and trust
    I believe the spirited maiden
    With memory and lust
    Watch
    Fleeting images take flight


    You perceive the glittering reality
    In body, soul and mind
    You capture the exotic fantasy
    In intuition and grind
    Grasp
    Truth will slip through fingers


    We live the twisted life
    Of soul, death and dancers
    We love the vague lust
    Of questions and answers
    Realize
    All webs will interlace together




    This second poem is one that I wrote for a friend. She was having a hard time and she always thought that she was ugly or that she was undesirable and basically she was going through a depressing time.

    More Beautiful

    There are sundry people around you
    They’ll always stop and stare
    There are mumbles to follow you
    As you clarify all of your flair
    There are judgements upon you
    And you pretend not to care

    Here is just one solitary soul with you
    Always looking your way
    Here is a divine song to surround you
    As you dance and sway
    Here is sole tenet about you
    It hopes you never stray

    Fiery gazes
    May singe your skin
    Slitting declarations
    May cut deep within

    Ebony thoughts
    May cloud your heart
    Tempting ideas
    May cause you to part

    This solitary soul
    Won’t let you start

    There are baneful things upon you
    That will endeavor to taint your mind
    There are vile entities around you
    To seclude what you find
    There are scapegoats encircling you
    Who try to deign you to their kind

    Here is the unsullied alongside you
    Who will bring you light
    Here is ample compassion for you
    Promising to hold you tight
    Here is elutriated truth spoken to you
    You needn’t be more beautiful for sight


    This is a shorter poem I wrote... simplistic too. ^^



    Trying to resurface,
    I'm trying to break though,
    But when my fingers reach the air,
    Some one else pulls me down too.
    When I need to be rescued,
    No one is there to be found,
    No one is there except nothing,
    And nothing let's me drown.
    I try to defend for myself,
    But I'm lost with out a 'you',
    So you can stay away from me,
    But I'll try to be true,
    You may not know how I feel,
    But what I feel has a purpose,
    May some day I'll tell you,
    But I'm trying to resurface


    Thanks for taking your time to read!
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    And it was you



    By: Dan M.




    Ya know a crush can hurt in so many ways,
    When you think about the person day after day,
    When you try to speak a word yet you have nothing to say,
    Staying silent and hurting is the only way,
    Being with you would be the greatest thing for me,
    But being alone is the only thing for me to be,
    Everyone knows what I feel but you can't see,
    I really like you a lot with all my heart.

    And it was you,
    That brought me to tomarrow,
    And it was you,
    That gave my life a moral,
    And it was you,
    That kept me sane,
    And it was you,
    Who kept me in the right lane,
    I had a dream of fame,
    And then you came,
    And it was you,
    That me want to,
    Give up everything just to be with you,
    Who kept me from turning blue,
    And it was you...

    You gave me a smile everytime we talked,
    When we were outside taking a long walk,
    Watching tv and movies,
    You making me want to be,
    Something more than I every though of,
    Your like a white dove,
    Sent from heaven to me,
    I really like you alot with all my heart.

    And it was you,
    That brought me to tomarrow,
    And it was you,
    That gave my life a moral,
    And it was you,
    That kept me sane,
    And it was you,
    WHo kept me in the right lane,
    I had a dream of fame,
    And then you came,
    And it was you,
    That made me want to,
    Give up everything just to be with you,
    Who kept me from turning blue,
    And it was you...

    You are the one,
    But am I your one?
    This is no game,
    Even though this may sound lame,
    After the end things may never be the same,
    I wanna be with you girl all night long,
    We could do no wrong,
    Sitting and talking about us,
    Please baby no fuss,
    I know its fast but may be love,
    Things may get rough,
    But we have to stay strong and tough,
    To make it through,
    And I like you a lot with all my heart!

    And it was you,
    That brought me to tomarrow,
    And it was you,
    That gave my life a moral,
    And it was you,
    That kept me sane,
    And it was you,
    WHo kept me in the right lane,
    I had a dream of fame,
    And then you came,
    And it was you,
    That made me want to,
    Give up everything just to be with you,
    Who kept me from turning blue,
    And it was you...

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    Haven't done poetry in a while. So, here's a few. Some really short, some medium length, etc.

    For the Walking STD (And it doesn't stand for Super Trendy Diva)
    When asked about life, Iíd rather die
    Itís twenty for deuce, itíll make you fly
    Forgetting the things that pass me by
    Committing ideological suicide

    Why canít you breathe with my hands around your neck?
    You try to gasp for air as my tightened grip prevents
    As your body stops resisting, doped on E and crystal meth
    I realize, to no surprise, Iíve lent another death

    Untitled

    Hello mister, dark-rimmed-glasses-toe
    Sing me songs, tell me of your woe
    Howdy mister, tell me this:
    Why should I even give a ****?

    And how do geeks redeem their low?
    They buy black dye and let their hair grow.
    They write ****ty poetry, all of it blows
    And they call themselves a trendy emo.

    Spider, Spider

    Slowly as she weaves her web
    She dangles down, a single thread
    But as she turns, on legs of four
    She finds her house of webs no more

    Seeming Divinity

    Iím your only alibi
    Iím the reason Jesus died
    Iím the car crash at the lights
    I put the clouds in the sky

    Iím your god, on your knees
    Hands together, pray for me
    Iíll strangle you until you canít breathe
    But in the end Iíll set you free

    Left Alone with Wounds Full of Salt

    Where are we? Are we lost?
    Deaf children forgetting the cost
    Little ones, without mind
    Bodies wasted, without time

    Another one, left alone
    Feeble aching in the cold
    Where were we? Where were they?
    How far were we thrown astray

    Like a deck of cards without the game
    Like an orphan left without the pain
    Blown to your fortune flows like the rain
    Here just to **** on your parade

    Singled out, once again
    Left with nothing, without a friend
    Now weíre here, now weíre there
    Why are our wounds never fair?

    Here we are, let us go
    How could you sink down so low?
    Let us be but let us through
    Let us reach divine solitude

    Like a deck of cards without the game
    Like an orphan left without the pain
    Blown to your fortune flows like the rain
    Here again just to piss on your parade

    Like a deck of cards without the game
    Like an orphan left without the pain
    Blown to your fortune flows like the rain
    Here just to **** on your parade
    Piss your parade
    Spit your parade
    **** your parade

    Like a deck of cards without the game
    Like an orphan left without the pain
    Blown to your fortune flows like the rain
    Has dug your grave if death must feign

    Hyperactive Attention Deficit Disorder

    Scream! You can do it!
    Bite your tongue, right through it
    Bleed it all some more
    Still think youíre a whore

    ****! You can do it!
    Pierce your brain, right through it
    Drain out the unneeded
    Victims become the impeded

    Should I grab my shovel?
    Dig right through the rubble?
    Chip Ďway whatís just wrong
    You were ****ed up all along

    HyperóHyperactive
    HyperóHyperactive Attention
    HyperóHyperactive
    Attention Deficit Disorder!

    Strewn Apart, Pieces of Thrice

    Here we are alone again
    Me myself, this time not I
    I was lost, he was a friend
    Just me and myself left to die

    You talk about yourself sometimes
    All the while I fall inside
    Why canít I be just like them?
    Who am I to recommend?

    Me and myself, little ones
    Iím so selfish, but thereís no fun
    In being alone
    When there can be more than me
    And maybe myself

    Here I am alone again
    Me and myself past away
    I am my only friend
    I was spat from games to play

    Pleading Crazy

    Slit my wrists, condemn me a whore
    Love to hate what you adore
    And through my eyes, itís you I see
    Regretting things that were meant to be

    Some dayís life stabs you in the back, thatís reality
    Some days you want her at your side, thatís insanity
    Some days you can only be passive
    Iím pleading crazy to the masses

    Hang myself out on the killing tree
    Pick out a branch of insecurity
    Some care to take the easy way out
    Just what the hell is life all about?

    Some dayís life stabs you in the back, thatís reality
    Some days you want her at your side, thatís insanity
    Some days you can only be passive
    Iím pleading crazy to the masses

    Can you not see? You have two eyes
    Here I am you *****; Iím ready to die
    Youíll never take me, despite all the bleeding
    Can you not see that Iím knelt down and pleading?
    All the while my insides are screaming
    Telling me Iím a stupid **** forever believing

    Some dayís life stabs you in the back, thatís reality
    Some days you want her at your side, thatís insanity
    Some days you can only be passive
    Iím pleading crazy, pleading crazy to the masses

    Some dayís life stabs you in the back, thatís reality
    Some days you want her at your side, thatís insanity
    Some days you can only raise a finger and be passive
    Iím pleading crazy, pleading crazy, pleading crazy (pleading crazy)

    Some dayís life stabs you in the back (pleading crazy)
    Some dayís you want her at your side (pleading crazy)
    Some days you can only be passive (pleading crazy)
    Still pleading crazy (pleading crazy), pleading crazy (pleading crazy)
    Pleading crazy to the masses

    ---

    Umm-- yeah. As for a favorite? Probably Strewn Apart, Pieces of Thrice because to this day it even confuses me. I write most of these when I'm stoned, or burning out from beind stoned. So, even I'm surprised at what I can write intoxicated-- since my poetry when I'm not is total ****. Now, considering this is near ****worthy, itself, well-- we'll just say my normal poetry is even worse.
    Pleading Crazy and Left All Alone with Wounds Full of Salt were songs for my band.

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    You have very dark work. Its so cool. I dont agree with half of the things ur sayin in ur poetry but I still reckon that u have an awesome way of wording things



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    Mmm so this one was just an experimentation with word placement and punctuation, but here goes.

    Papercut Memories

    I do remember
    And I now know
    Many things you
    Hoped I'd never know
    Papercut memories
    Hard to forget
    And ever biting
    But I'll do my best
    to Love you,
    Anyway.
    Since you are.
    And since I am.

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    Even cats hate me ~ by me.. obviously.

    Cats can't stand me
    People want me dead
    Do i bring them dread?

    Cannot see, breath
    No next world for me
    If only you could see

    Why am alone again
    Humming dark rhyme
    What is it this time?

    Razors on my hands
    Scars are my world
    My fate is unfurled

    Sit down and taunt
    Ravens flock to you
    What is there to do?

    It's over for you, I
    We cannot truly see
    Must cats hate thee
    One more round; one more low.

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    Quote Originally Posted by PancaKe
    You have very dark work. Its so cool. I dont agree with half of the things ur sayin in ur poetry but I still reckon that u have an awesome way of wording things
    Yeah. Half of my poetry is too controversial for TPM, so I left it to sit in the Word document.

    I hate this poem. I don't like it at all. My friend Jessica commented on how my poetry was much better than hers, and because of this she refused to show me her work. So, I wanted to see her work-- and I asked her why I couldn't see it and she insisted "Because most of it is just 'Roses are red, violets are blue...' you know." So, I wrote this one in about two minutes while we continued talking on MSN and I showed her it and said "See-- we're the same. Now show me your stuff." She finally gave in.

    For Jessica

    Roses are red, violets are blue
    Black runs the blood of veins cut anew
    Saturated organs fall into a funnel
    And white is the light at the end of the tunnel

    The roses fall into nothingness, turning pale
    The redís attempt at tranquility fails
    Red fades into pink as dim grows itís life
    At the end of the ages, there remains not but white

    The blue becomes prominent, but it too falls down
    From the tabletop, the vase shatters glass across ground
    The violence causes silence, this blue is their last
    Each violet petal severs into sections of glass

    At the end of the day, nothing remains
    The staged attempt lays voided, without gain
    Roses, like shriveled white death, blood drawn away
    And in sections of glass, tainted violets lay

    Jessica did, however, give me a bit of an idea for a poem. When she was talking about it-- she said "Violets are red, roses are blue is a very powerful thing to start a poem off with." I disagreed, and then I noticed she had switched the violets with roses. So, I'm going to start a poem soon, don't know how it'll turn out, but it will feature the opening line, ala Jessica: "Violets are red, roses are blue"

    Adieu,
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    Don't be afraid to post things. You have a right to post it even if iit maybe controversial. It maybe but poetry and song writing is about getting out your feelings and its good to get that out there.


    Here is a new one I just completed a few days ago when I was bored. Just kinda came to me and is now one of my top five favorites that I've done.


    -Hell Shadow-


    Living a so called average life,
    I was once a loner on my own,
    Thinkin of dreams and big hypes,
    Always having a bitchy tone,
    Learned to not care what they thought,
    Living life without a doubt,
    I know its time cuz i been thinkin alot,
    This is gonna be the hardest thing for me,
    Time to be what my destiny wants me to be.

    Coming out of my hell shadow,
    Can't control my fate,
    Gotta keep breathing with the flow,
    I should be at my destination at this rate,
    Im ready and not saying no,
    Hurry now and I can't be late,
    I gotta get up and go,
    From my hell shadow!

    Remembering the times I had alone,
    Wondering where these gifts will end up,
    Now the black crow has flown,
    Leaving its destiny behind in the small cup,
    Its gotta find that strange place called home,
    But lately haven't had very much luck,
    Don't want to be the last one free and end up blown,


    Coming out of my hell shadow,
    Can't control my fate,
    Gotta keep breathing with the flow,
    I should be at my destination at this rate,
    Im ready and not saying no,
    Hurry now and I can't be late,
    I gotta get up and go,
    From my hell shadow!

    Now sitting and reflecting,
    Writing down everything I dream,
    Times passing and melting,
    Now its time to feel to be,
    More than I ever thought possible,
    Soon gonna be so full,
    Can't be dull,
    This is my time to fly!


    Coming out of my hell shadow,
    Can't control my fate,
    Gotta keep breathing with the flow,
    I should be at my destination at this rate,
    Im ready and not saying no,
    Hurry now and I can't be late,
    I gotta get up and go,
    From my hell shadow!
    I gotta free,
    Of this burning,
    Gotta keep learning,
    This is it,
    This it yeah!
    Coming out of my hell shadow,
    Can't control my fate,
    Gotta keep breathing with the flow,
    I should be at my destination at this rate,
    Im ready and not saying no,
    Hurry now and I can't be late,
    I gotta get up and go,
    From my hell shadow!

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    I wrote this, when i was very angry as you can probably tell.. im fine now.. but i was so upset when iw rote this its kind of shocking..

    __

    Your opinions meant so much to me
    They always meant so much to me
    Why did it mean so much to me
    Why did you mean so much to me

    Your an insensative ba*tard
    Your cold black hearted
    How could I love you
    How could I wonder

    If you were all right
    You were just fine
    You disregarded me
    I hate everything

    Now its out in the open
    What was once unspoken
    three years down the drain
    Never the same

    Your lies are uncovered
    The way that Ive suffered
    You ba*tard its me
    Its so hard to breathe

    How could I wait for you
    Who influenced me but you
    In everything that I do
    You ridiculed me
    I'm never good enough for you

    Wanting to be first always second place
    You left me deflated you left me in disgrace
    cant bear to see please don't show your face
    Your so much better
    and your always right
    Now find some other ive had my day



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    That is somthing I wouldn't see you writing Tara. All your other poems are much different but I like this one you did. I can sorta know how you feel with that one also.

    Here is another one.



    -The Risk-

    Wanting something new,
    Something that would always stay true,
    Not something that would hurt me bad,
    Something that would make me glad,
    Was this all an illusion?
    Messed up in the head with confusion,
    All this mental abuse,
    What was it that lite the fuse?

    I'm not some tool,
    You make look like a fool!

    Can't be some little toy you bought,
    Always wanting things a lot,
    Getting into lots of fights,
    Can't stop me I have a right,
    Risk704-1934ing everything I own,
    Talking all night on the phone,
    If you can't handle this,
    Then don't take the risk.

    Partying it up every night,
    Laying watching planes takes flight,
    Prowling the dark streets,
    Feeling the the rock of the bass beat,
    Watching lives be ruined,
    To bad i've already been through it,
    All plans fell threw the gutter,
    As everyone trys to talk but stutters!

    You think that you rule,
    But in the end your not very cool!

    Can't be some little toy you bought,
    Always wanting things a lot,
    Getting into lots of fights,
    Can't stop me I have a right,
    Rising everything I own,
    Talking all night on the phone,
    If you can't handle this,
    Then don't take the risk.

    You think you know me but you don't,
    Sorry that I dont front because I won't,
    Sorry if you can't take my open mind,
    You be an ass I promise im not going to be kind,
    If you wanna party with me and have fun,
    When things get heated don't run,
    Welcome to everything im about.

    Can't be some little toy you bought,
    Always wanting things a lot,
    Getting into lots of fights,
    Can't stop me I have a right,
    Rising everything I own,
    Talking all night on the phone,
    If you can't handle this,
    Then don't take the risk.

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    A Piercing I Wouldnít Wear Around Anyone, Even Those Cool Kids Way Cooler Than Me At The Skatepark, Yeah, I Mean Those Guys That Only Come On Tuesdays
    You just shot me in the ****ing heart
    Shot me, you shot me again
    Pierced my ventricles, poisoned dart
    With a memo attached ĎLetís be friendsí

    Not too loud, but break the silence
    Contain the screams, lift the pick
    Emotionless, condemned by violence
    Thrust that thing right through my dick

    Now alone, once again on my own
    No more thinking of things before
    Memories, carried in wind blown
    I try to forget, but I want all the more

    Edging me slightly, but still I bleed
    So I reach my hand inside the chest
    Fingers wrapped round what kills me
    Rip out the heart and fade into nothingness

    Don't like it, myself.

    Waste
    Body flung, emotions stay
    Among the trash the body lay
    Emotions without body to feign
    Struggle as they hide the pain

    Short but sweet? You decide.

    Mix-Matched Organs
    Violets are red, roses are blue
    Open your eyes, see them lie to you
    The sky is green, the grass is blue
    Open your eyes, donít let them lie to you

    Youíve got a heart in your head
    And a brain in your chest
    The brain pumps all the plasma
    And the heart knows best

    This is that one Jessica inspired me to do. I noticed it was going nowhere so I left it hanging.

    Aliens
    I don't know, where the **** it is
    Do you think it was the aliens?
    They sailed down from their ship above
    Stole my marker, and stole my love

    They took her far, far away
    To a planet long blown astray
    And they gave her wine, and they gave her cheese
    Then the alien got on his hands and knees

    "Hello, Jenny" was what he said
    "I don't know you, but I won't forgetĒ
    "The way you looked at me with gleeĒ
    "So, I ask you human, will you marry me?"

    Except it didn't really sound like that
    It was in some crazy alien tongue with blats
    So Jenny looked up into his eyes
    She carried herself well, to her own surprise

    "Alien" she said "I don't know you
    "But you're better than the little 2 inch fuseĒ
    "On my boyfriend back in Earth so smallĒ
    "He's got the dynamite-- but who likes balls?

    "Aliiiien" she said
    "I love you, but I just can't"
    "I got friends on earth, I can't leave them there"
    "I got things to do, I got to wash my hair"

    So, the alien looked deep into her eyes
    He set his ray gun to vaporize
    He pointed it, said, ďPrepare to dieĒ
    And blew that bitch into the ****ing sky

    This was a joke one, obviously. I was having a conversation with this one girl who's a bit weird, like myself, on MSN, and she said "I lost my sock... do you think it was the aliens?" And, well, I started typing this one out into the chatbox thinger, and in a couple seconds this poem was born. We got a good laugh out of it.

    Death is a Teenager, She's into the Goth Fad
    Death she whispers so soothing
    A lullaby, it soundly puts me to sleep
    Her words they appear so moving
    At her final breaths, fresh widows do weep

    When sheís done with her song, she packs up
    She leaves and takes the train at noon
    Dead men are left behind, mentally ****ed
    But donít worry guys, sheíll be back real soon

    Sheís that desecrating whore,
    She feeds on so much more
    She eats all your insides
    And then leaves you out to die

    The waiter on the train asks her for an order
    She says sheíll like a martinióshe likes them dry
    Eyes now looking down, she opens up her death-count folder
    But still notices the path of the waiterís eyes

    She swishes it around once, not twice
    Itís got a little olive, speared with a sword in it
    The rims of the glass are frosted with thin ice
    When the waiter comes back, she kindly throws a fit

    ďThat Martini wasnít dry!Ē she screams clear
    ĒIn fact, if I do recall correctly, it was rather wet, as hellĒ
    ďBut maíam, it was dry,Ē he replied full of fear
    Her finger touching him gently, and to the floor he fell

    Sheís that desecrating whore,
    She feeds on so much more
    She eats all your insides
    And then leaves you out to die

    She wears black lipstick, but listens to no one
    And Jesus told me she used to suck cocks for money
    But if she wrapped her lips around your gun
    Youíd no longer be finding your waste of five bucks funny

    She likes to kill, she feeds on the ill
    She desecrates, and men she rapes
    She hates child porn, but likes to mourn
    But to my nights, sheíll be the black in the light

    Another joke one.

    And I came in with a boo, but now I must bid a fine...

    Adieu,

    Zak Hunter

    EDIT: Added a whole bunch more.

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    Tainted damn ur stuff is so dark. Its quite cool though, u have a totally mad way with ur words that I want to be able to have.

    This one is kind of unfinished, I'm not sure where to keep going with it...

    Her Job

    They all watch as she goes by
    They tel her how she looks
    She begins to cry
    ...
    She can't take it no more
    They dont know what they did wrong
    Shes heard it all before
    Shes wondering what shes done

    To be a pretty girl
    Every head she turns
    Thats the pretty girls job
    But what does she earn?



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    Quote Originally Posted by PancaKe
    Tainted damn ur stuff is so dark. Its quite cool though, u have a totally mad way with ur words that I want to be able to have.
    Thanks, it's really nice to gain some praise for my writing, especially from a veteran such as yourself. Does anyone here gather inspiration from anything that's a little odd? Like, for example, I like spiders, they intrigue me-- don't know why. For some odd reason, whenever I see a spider dangling, or scampering on my wall, I feel like writing. Interesting things, really.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tainted
    Thanks, it's really nice to gain some praise for my writing, especially from a veteran such as yourself.
    Lol. Me a veteran? (I always thought the word was vetenarian lol) As if. But sigh, if you insist I'm getting older...

    Um.. I get inspiration from like, emotions and things that are on my mind. If God is on my mind, he's my inspiration, if a situation is on my mind, thats what i write about, but I write with my feelings "intwined in my words" so to speek.



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    I'm dreaming again
    Stuck with my life
    Watching people go
    From under the snow

    I'm not disturbed
    Just dissapointed
    Watch the world go
    So sad and so slow

    It's a burning globe
    Trying to break out
    Watching people go
    From under the snow

    Your all out chanting
    Die Planet Die Planet
    Watch the world go
    So sad and so slow

    It's so disturbing now
    I can't see anymore
    Watching people go
    From under the snow

    So this is the end now
    What is death like now
    It's all over, just give up now.
    One more round; one more low.

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    Alright, just wrote a couple.

    Little Hopping Bunny with a Big Hat and Dentures
    If I were a little hopping bunny, I once thought
    Iíd sleep on a mattress instead of a cot
    Iíd like to listen to classical, Iíd have my tea at noon
    Iíd stay up late at nights outside and quietly watch the moon

    Oh, what a fýcking paradise itíd be
    Oh, what a mother fýcking paradise
    Oh, what a fýcking paradise itíd be
    Oh what a mother fýcking paradise

    If I were a little hopping bunny, I once thought
    I would live my life eating grass a lot
    Occasionally I think Iíd have a cabbage or two
    But in the end Iíd really have not to eat but few

    Oh, what a fýcking paradise itíd be
    Oh what a mother fýcking paradise
    Oh, what a fýcking paradise itíd be
    Oh what a mother fýcking paradise

    So come with me, come with me
    Come get away from it all
    So come with me, fýcking come with me
    Be a bunny and bound the walls

    Oh, what a fýcking paradise itíd be
    Oh what a mother fýcking paradise
    Oh, what a fýcking paradise itíd be
    Oh what a mother fýcking paradise

    Save me, come along, hate your reality
    Hate it, ****ing hate the life youíre in
    And just when youíre broken down, weeping
    Thereíll be only one place you can dig

    Oh, what a fýcking paradise itíd be
    Oh what a mother fýcking paradise
    Oh, what a fýcking paradise itíd be
    Oh what a mother fýcking paradise
    ---

    If the filter evading is a trouble, **** it. I think people know what the word is when they see "****" anyway.
    This poem means a shitload to me, because there's a certain madness to it-- and this madness is withheld behind a bunny, the smallest and most harmless of all creatures... Heh... I don't know why it means a lot to me, a lot of it doesn't even rhyme-- it just says something to me.

    Butterflies
    Butterflies, one fýcking wing
    Spins in a circle, still watching
    Life is a whore, a homeless wife
    She works this hell of a thing we call life

    You stand there, and you scream
    Insecureótheyíll listen one day it seems
    But no, never, your voice only dies
    Inaudible, but still to yourself you lie

    Theyíll never hear you, nobody will
    Even as your shrieks reach peaks and define shrill
    Although you try to redeem, you still fade away
    And where once a voiceless stood, now a body lay
    ---

    I like this one too. Not much else to say.

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    Coem on dude, we all know what "****" means but dont filter evade. You know the rules. Don't make me warn you, I'm too tired. This aint a warning, its a notification that if you filter evade again I'll have to give you a warning just to folow the rules. And anyway, if we all know what **** means then theres 'no reason to filter evade cuz we'll all understand anyway.

    And besides, I dont particularily want to read that world, even with an apostrophy over one of the letters.
    ___________________

    Both of them

    Your being selfish
    Who am I to talk
    Youve become jealous
    Of yourself
    Oh this is always what I've wanted
    Two in one
    Oh this is always what I've dreamed of
    The two compiled into one

    You represent
    Both of them
    and I dont want to view this person
    ever again
    You represent
    Both of them
    and two alone is bad enough
    dont make it two in one



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    Tainted, great poetry - but you evasion of the word filter just makes you look like an idiot.

    Blinded
    I don't want to know
    Don't try to find why
    Watching the snow
    Someday we will die

    Alone in a cold world
    Will it be our time yet
    Banners now unfurled
    We must all pay debt

    But why is the snow
    Covering logic's hand
    Hiding down too low
    Fearing whats grand

    Sitting in my square
    Seen it before you
    Your falling beware
    The end for me too.
    One more round; one more low.

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    Tainted- your work is morbid and perhaps better words could be subsituted for the 'bad' word, but they are very deep and morbid. Me likes.

    Leon- Yours is nice as well, I like the title and the energy coming from it.


    ;_; no comments on mine... oh well...



    If tears were my soul,
    If feeling was my happiness,
    If sight found my role,
    If speech would find my tainted bliss,

    My tears would be blood,
    Myself numb to the outside,
    Seeing nothing but black mud,
    Saying nothing but have cried,


    Untamed spirit I once was
    Broken by unknown lies
    Wandering life with no cause
    Bleeding wings do not fly

    Trapped in a prison
    The bars made of nullity
    Doomed victim of vision
    To be lost in nothing
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    B4 - Good but odd, was that actually meant to rhyme or not?

    Sunlight
    Burning my eyes away
    Taking what i've seen
    Don't let it come here
    The fields are all green

    Lost all alone out here
    Walking through a day
    Wishing I was at home
    Having found my way

    Can't I care anymore
    Our time is never yet
    Weathered memories
    Why can't we forget

    Too horrific to lose it
    Things we saw today
    Why must it be you
    Who got to fly away
    One more round; one more low.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bulbasaur4

    Tainted- your work is morbid and perhaps better words could be subsituted for the 'bad' word, but they are very deep and morbid. Me likes.
    Thanks, your poem is quite the work itself, I don't really know how to describe it. To me, it's very powerful, and gets it's point out easily... but then again, I've never been all that good at deciphering poems for a common audience. The way I see it-- everyone interprets a poem differantly, and very seldom is it exactly similar. I've got one on the way, myself, so stay tuned.

    Adieu,
    Zak Hunter

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    Nice work B4 ^.^ Me likes your poem very much..

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    Our wings were spread apart
    Have been ripped apart
    The wind that once made us fly
    Left beneath our hearts

    Im calling out from here
    Will my voice reach you from here
    The tears choke up my throat
    Its getting dark I fear

    The Lord brought me to this
    He will bring me through all this
    How long will I wait
    To be carried to my bliss

    The meadows that were once green are no longer
    The sun that shines on them has burnt them yonder
    The daffodills and daisys that sprung up in May
    Are no longer standing
    This purity was tainted as far as I remember

    Ive been waiting for your answer
    Haunting for your answer
    I wish I wish I wish
    That the questions I never asked you

    These tears are deep inside
    Tears well deep inside
    The hours that I've regretted
    And these tears I've never cried

    Im too chicken to call or speak
    I cant look at you and speak
    Because you wont look at me
    And how could I ever think

    The meadows that were once green are no longer
    The sun that shines on them has burnt them yonder
    The daffodills and daisys that spring up in September
    Are no longer standing
    This purity was tainted as far as I remember



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    Quote Originally Posted by shazza View Post
    Mt. Moon gives me that similar feeling I used to get when I would wake up first thing in the morning as an 11/12 year old and get excited about browsing TPM.

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    Wow pancake, that poem is very emotive but without falling into a trap of non-stop emotional language - I guess thats why nobody has replied to this yet, a hard act to follow

    Forest of Soul
    Why must we be alone
    Walking under the sun
    Looking into the wood
    Life and death are one

    Why must we see one
    As our souls reflection
    Walking into the cone
    To find our connection

    Another sleeping soul
    Sliding down a tunnel
    See the chilling silence
    Like water in a funnel

    Now we cannot walk
    We cannot hide away
    Why must you and I
    Not last another day

    NOTE: I posted this on Serebii, but it's time to get this thread back onto the front page - also I've never posted a poem there before so feedback might not be so great.
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    Toast
    Thereís a little black sunshine in everyone
    But thereís a little more in me
    And even when the song is no longer sung
    Thereís toast sitting up in a tree

    Toast isnít for you, toast is for me
    Toast doesnít like to be buttered much
    Toast grows from the high apple tree
    And toast would much rather be touched

    Apart
    The entire world collapses as you fall into the end
    Implosion causes lapses, without much time to mend
    They scream and they shout, they kick and they cry
    But they donít know about how my voice inside does die

    You donít know just what to do
    When the spear it passes you through
    Pierces skin, it pierces the heart
    And leaves you left fallen apart

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    The Spiders' Web

    It glistens in the sunlight,
    And sparkles with the dew,
    Little fly little fly,
    This trap is waiting for you.

    Fly towards it, coming ever closer,
    You become stuck as you hit it,
    Little fly little fly,
    I'll eat you bit by bit.

    Here I come,
    Ready or not,
    I'm hungry for a meal,
    And you're best eaten than left out to rot.

    Now I scurry away,
    Back to my hiding place,
    My hiding place in the corner near the tree,
    Will I eat you or let you go? We'll see, we'll see.

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    I liked it Snorlax. Was very cool. Especially the ending, was really cool. I dont know why i just like the idea of things hiding in poems. *shrugs*

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    Look here I stand
    Torn between two
    Paths lie ahead
    What shall I do
    Which would you pick
    Which would you choose
    The one who you love
    Or the one who loves you

    If you ask me this
    If you want the truth
    Give me time
    To get back to you...

    How can I go
    When I dont know where
    They want me now
    Life is not fair
    How did you pick
    How did you know
    The right path to walk
    The right one to follow

    If you ask me this
    If you want the truth
    Give me time
    To get back to you...



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    Quote Originally Posted by shazza View Post
    Mt. Moon gives me that similar feeling I used to get when I would wake up first thing in the morning as an 11/12 year old and get excited about browsing TPM.

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    C.A.R.E.
    How many times does that love song play
    On the radio, in one melancholy-soaked day
    I like to dream about us, I like to dream at night
    I like to dream about a life without the light

    That slow depression seeps over like a fine champagne
    Textured ever so carefully, it reminds me of where I lain
    Last night when you whispered ever so softly into my ear
    You didnít need to tell me twice about how we drunk too much beer

    Remember the night, last night, partyóeveryone got ****ed
    And Merf was upstairs in the bathroom getting sucked
    But you and I sat downstairs among those passed out
    We held each other on the couch and knew without a doubt

    That this was special, that this was it
    But it was like a lighter that couldnít be lit
    As we fell asleep, and I dreamed of the dawn
    I eventually awoke to find you were gone

    So I searched the yards, I searched the park
    I walked up to 7/11 in the dark
    To find youíre not here, and Iím not there
    Maybe you just never really cared

    It's about a party I went to last night. Best ****ing party ever, I'm just left with your usual almost lethargic feeling today. It's horrible, really.

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    November

    Day by day
    You help me along my way
    Hour after hour
    time flys by
    and still i wonder why
    you stopped to help me
    in my life

    How can i repay the favor
    You are going away
    How can I tell you waht you mean to me
    When I dont have the words to say

    let me hold you tight once more
    May you be helped by God above
    Let me say before your through that door
    There was nobody else that I have ever loved
    With the amounts that I loved you
    On the other side you'll make it through



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    Quote Originally Posted by shazza View Post
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    This is a poem i wrote during a very complicated time of my life
    it represents man's inner struggle to find himself in such a strange world.

    Abstract Like a Stick Figure

    Fun on a bun
    When you're stuck in the sun
    And you're shunned by a nun
    Just know it's been done

    You can't rhyme like that
    Your lyrics are crap
    You look like a rat
    I'm a hungry cat

    So that's the flow
    Is there symbolism? NO!
    That's all you need to know
    And now you have to go

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    Lol. I quite like that poem. It makes me feel happy inside for some reason. I know that probably wasnt what you were trying to achieve, but its the effect it has had. *shrugs* i guess just your choice of words for expressing that were a bit abstract, and im a very abstract person.

    either way i really liked that.



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    Chips on the Dance
    Welcome to my hell
    It's the end of town
    Watch the fire start
    The chips are down

    Bloods on the floor
    But no cuts to see
    Hammers are falling
    For you and for me

    Burning men hiding
    Nothing is still alive
    But for no reasons
    Live your last jive

    For what we make
    We must all prance
    Just die here today
    For one last dance


    The Future As It Is
    Communication down
    Sitting under the sun
    Looking into the blaze
    That makes all as one

    Walking into the dark
    Smiling into the night
    Two times cut short
    Falling from my flight

    Falling into a cavern
    Full of burning cold
    Watching the world
    Living to be too old

    Cut away your joys
    Throw your dreams
    Give away happiness
    Becoming machines


    Rivers of Choice
    You must fall down
    Or I shall push you
    Drop to the ground
    On a count of two

    The end of a spree
    The end of this joy
    Come back with us
    Enjoy this here toy

    Fall from a tall tree
    The branch quivers
    As I can't ever see
    Life as deep rivers

    Falling into gullies
    Living in deep gaps
    Weeds falling away
    Into deeper traps


    Career Solace
    I am your solace
    Nightmares again
    Followed to here
    As a falling raven

    Death is evaded
    While we shared
    A simplicity here
    To feel declared

    Simple insanity
    Cannot cause it
    Cutting threads
    Bit by frayed bit

    Cutting life out
    Puts death away
    Sitting in a box
    Slaving for pay

    Give it up here
    Show the door
    Use it yourself
    Away from war
    One more round; one more low.

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