Quote Originally Posted by PancaKe
Lol. I quite like that poem. It makes me feel happy inside for some reason. I know that probably wasnt what you were trying to achieve, but its the effect it has had. *shrugs* i guess just your choice of words for expressing that were a bit abstract, and im a very abstract person.

either way i really liked that.
its meant to be funny
the beging part was a bunch of nonsense that i used to try to sound smart

Here's my new poem.

Life

Life is like a lukewarm soup.
Like fluffy clouds and stinky poop.
Do you want to join the group?
Or turn away and fly the coop?
Follow a Dog named Snoop?
Watch Arsenio and go whoop?
Get killed with your army troop?
Or sing Salt N Pepa’s Shoop?
Follow a rap culture loop?
Or find some cat litter to scoop?
Find a little kid to dupe?
Grow wings and learn to swoop?
Argue is it's meeps or moops? (Seinfeld joke)
Or work for a paper and get the scoop?
Go and buy a hula-hoop?
Or find more words that rhyme with oop?