Very cool! I liked the style. The title was also just so succinct and cryptic, you know. the mysterious background you gave her was also cool. I twigged that it was Misty at the mention of triplet sisters, and it's great fleshing out established characters. I eagerly hope to see more!
Ps the one-line comments by her were a great insight into her mind. It was like a diary entry, or a confession, weaving remarks into blocks of text. Very clever.