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    Yes I know another trainer fic so just comment good or bad but not to mean ok. Yes I am going to try it again.
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    Creatures New and Old: Meagan’s Journey

    “Finally morning,” said Meagan waking up and getting ready for the day, “Today is the day! Yes today I go to Prof Birch and I can choose my pokemon.”

    Meagan got ready and put on her clothes. She put on a skirt, tennis shoes, a purple shirt, a headband, her new running shoes and her backpack on. She combed her light blue hair, looked at her pale blue eyes and smiled. May grew all her life in Littleroot Town with her mom and her brother that already left to be a pokemon trainer. He next-door neighbor was a new guy that moved from Johto. Then next to him lived Prof Birch’s hot son, Brendan, but he did not like Meagan. The person who liked Meagan was the new guy Nick.

    Meagan walked down the stairs and petted the pet Persian. She went to the kitchen and saw her mom.

    “Well looks like you are leaving too,” said Mom, “another one of my babies is going to leave.”

    “Ahh mom,” said Meagan, “Persian is going to stay here with you and so is Jynx. And when I catch more pokemon I will give you some ok?”

    “I guess,” said Mom, “But you have to be careful.”

    “Yes mom I will,” said Meagan.

    Meagan walked to her mom and hugged her. She walked out the door and saw her house. Nick was walking out of his house, he noticed Meagan and walked up to her.

    “Hey Meagan,” said Nick, “So you are starting your pokemon journey?”

    “Yeah,” said Meagan, “So have you seen your dad, Norman?”

    “No,” answered Nick, “I am going to see him when I go to Petalburg.”

    “Cool,” said Meagan with a smile, “Umm where is umm Brendan?”

    “Oh he is at the lab,” said Nick.

    “Ok,” said Meagan, “I will see you there.”

    “Ok,” said Nick walking away, “Why Can’t she notice me?”

    “Why can’t he leave me alone?” asked Meagan to herself.

    Meagan said goodbye to her friends and neighbors as she walked to the lab. There it was the lab of Prof Birch. In the front a huge fountain and many flowers. She walked into the lab and she the Prof.

    “Hi Meagan,” said Prof Birch.

    “Hi Prof,” said Meagan.

    “So are you ready to pick your pokemon?” asked Prof Birch with a grin on his face.

    “Of course!” answered Meagan.

    Prof Birch walked to a table that had three pokeballs on it.

    “Here are three pokemon,” said Prof Birch, “You can only choose one. So let me tell you which ones they are. In this one is a Torchic. It is a fire pokemon.”

    “Tor!” cried out the red bird.

    “Hmm,” said Meagan, “I don’t know. It is not my type.”

    “Hmm I see,” said Prof Birch, “Then what about this Treecko.”

    ‘Tre!” said the Treecko.

    “No way!” said Meagan.

    “Then the last one is this Mudkip!” said Prof Birch.

    “Kip!” said the Mudkip.

    “Ahh,” said Meagan, “I want this one. Mudkip do you wanna be my pokemon?”

    The Mudkip smiled and went next to Meagan and cuddled her.

    “Ok good,” said Prof Birch, “Here is your pokedex and some pokeballs. Brendan should be in Oldale City maybe you should go talk to him.”

    “Ok I will come on Mudkip!” said Meagan picking up her Mudkip and leaving the Lab. She walked out of he little town and waved goodbye to it. She was on the start of her new pokemon journey. The sun behind her began to set on the mountains and she looked at Mudkip and they walked.

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    Yea! Your posting here! I like your story. Keep on posting here.

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    Yay! I love your fic, I'm glad you decided to continue it!

    Great chapter!

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    More please...
    Longer chapters would make the whole experience more enjoyable. It's very clichèd, but it's okay.
    ~Legend~

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    I agree that the chapters should be much longer. But anyway, I personally think that you should try working on your dialogue and sentence structure--since many of your sentences could easily be joined together. Said is also very much overused, and you should try thinking of replacements for it-- or maybe even adding an action after the dialogue. You'd actually be quite surprised of how many synonyms there are for said. ^^;

    Anyway, please don't think of this as a flame. I'm just trying to help ^_^

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    Yup, I'm here, too. You cannot escape me. Just kidding. Your stories are always good, and I will await for this one to get back where we left off, if we can. Mine is still somewhere, too, but can't advertise. PM me.

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    This is a very good fic, I'm glad you brought to TPM. Keep up the good work.

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    Thanks for all the comments and for the help I will use it when I am typing the new chapters.
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    Trainer of the Night: Poochyena’s Bark is worse than his bite!
    Meagan was now walking on route 101 to get to Oldale. Mudkip was getting tired and it was now completely dark.

    “Mudkip,” said Meagan, “Do you want to camp here?”
    “Mud!” cried out Mudkip nodding her head.

    “Good,” said Meagan smiling, “I wonder what pokemon Brendan and Nick got…but they can’t get a better pokemon than Mudkip!”

    Meagan went to her backpack and got out her sleeping bag and her pillow. She collected some firewood and made fire. She got some fruit from her backpack and gave some to Mudkip while she ate some too.

    “Well Mudkip let’s go to sleep,” said Meagan yawning.

    “Hold it!” said a trainer. He was short, had glasses, shorts, a shirt with a pokeball on it and his hair was just freaky.

    “Who are you? And why are you bothering me?” asked Meagan.

    “I’m Mathew but everyone knows me as the Trainer of the night!” said Mathew.

    “Yeah,” said Meagan, “I’m Meagan and everyone calls me Meagan. And why did you bother me?!”

    “Well you’re a pokemon trainer aren’t you?” asked Mathew.

    “Yeah,” answered Meagan, “I have a Mudkip.”

    “Then you must battle me then!” said Mathew, “Go Duskull!”

    “Cool a Duskull,” said Meagan, “Mudkip, you ready.”

    Mudkip went into battle position and went into battle. Duskull did the same and he floated in the air. Mudkip used a mud slap and it his Duskull. Duskull shook of the mud and used leer. Mudkip avoided it and used water gun on the ghost. Duskull hit tree and hid behind Mathew.

    “No! No! No! No!” cried out Mathew, “You defeated the Trainer of the Night! I am so out of here!”

    Mathew left with Duskull slowly following him. Meagan smiled and hugged Mudkip. She got on the floor and heard something behind her. It was a low growl, a growl that sounded like a pokemon was injured…a growl of distress…of weakness. It sent a shiver through Meagan’s bones as she slowly turned around. There at the bottom of a bush was a Poochyena. It looked scared and injured.

    “Mudkip…it’s a Poochyena,” said Meagan, “It looks injured, should we like help it?”

    Mudkip nodded and it went up to the injured pup. She told him that they were going to help him. Meagan approached the pup very slowly and cautiously. She picked it up and the Poochyena felt safer and felt calm. Meagan sat on the ground and reached for her backpack. She got out some potions and some food. She put the potion on Poochyena and gave it some food.

    “He looks better. Well let’s see how you feel in the morning, “ said Meagan petting the pup on the head.

    Meagan crawled to her sleeping bag and got in. She covered herself and went to sleep with Poochyena and Mudkip next to her.
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    Meagan slowly woke up and she rubbed her eyes. She found Mudkip and Poochyena still asleep. She got some fruit and same pancake mix. She made some pancakes with fruit on top of them. The pokemon woke up and ate some of the pancakes.

    “Good morning,” said Meagan.

    “Mud!” said Mudkip.

    “Roof!” cried out Poochyena.

    Meagan laughed and they all ate some more pancakes. Meagan now felt like catching Poochyena but at the same time did not want to. Just then two Mightyena approached the camp and startled the group. They looked mad and looked at the group. Mudkip ran behind Meagan and was scared. The Mightyenas were showing their teeth and they were growling.

    “Their going to kill us!” yelled Meagan terrified.

    Poochyena began to bark and went to the Mightyena…. It then began to nuzzle them. The Mightyena began to lick Poochyena and they looked friendlier. Poochyena began to bark at the two Mightyena. The Mightyena walked up Meagan and licked her.

    “I guess they are your parents,” said Meagan.

    Mudkip was getting licked too and then she had enough. Mudkip went inside the sleeping bag and hid. Meagan petted the two Mightyenas and hugged them. She felt better for not catching Poochyena after all. Meagan packed up and got Mudkip. Together all five of them walked to Oldale. There, Mightyena and Poochyena left Meagan and Mudkip. Meagan waved goodbye to them and walked to Oldale.

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    That was a good first chapter, It could have been longer and a little more descriptive. I think you will get better. Well I see you posted chapter 2. It is good. It looks like it is a little more descriptive. Keep it up.

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    Good chapter. People his story gets really good trust me! I like this alot.

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    Yeah, this is just the way DT works. It's short, but good. Lots of realism, I would rate it PG-13, even. Anyway, keep up the good work.

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    Yay! I love that chapter!

    I kinda wish Meagan would have caught Poochyena, but hey, she might!

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    Oldale: Team Magma’s Secret Plan!

    Meagan and Mudkip entered the small town of Oldale. They looked around and spotted the Pokemon Center. Entering it she said hello to Nurse Joy and gave her Mudkip so she could heal it. While she was waiting she called back home and spoke to her mom. Her mom’s sister was there and they were going to leave town for a little vacation. Nurse Joy called her and she hanged up the phone. She got her Mudkip and brought her out of her pokeball. She thanked Nurse Joy and walked outside. Meagan thought about her father and brother and thought where they were. She got into la-la-land and bumped into a guy.

    “Um…Meagan?” asked they guy.

    “Brendan!” exclaimed Meagan.

    Brendan wore jeans, a black shirt, and a vest and had white hair. They hugged and sat down on a bench and began to talk. Mudkip played with Brendan’s Torchic.

    “So Meagan you are going to beat the gym leaders,” said Brendan.

    “Yeah,” said Meagan, “I hope I can beat them especially my cousin.”

    “Ring! Ring! Ring! Ring! Ring! Ring! Phone Call! Phone Call!”

    “Could you wait I need to get this,” said Brendan.

    “Sure,” said Meagan.

    Brendan got up and answered the phone call. Meagan overheard his conversation.

    “What do you mean,” said Brendan in a bothered mood, “No eliminate them! We must expand the land. We cannot let them expand the water. With the land expanded the ground pokemon can be happy. Team Magma will win this war!”

    Meagan did not know what he was talking about…probably research. Brendan hanged up the phone and sat back down on the bench.

    “Sorry about that,” said Brendan excusing himself.

    “That’s ok,” said Meagan, “Who was it?”

    “Ah you know parents,” said Brendan.

    “Ah of course,” said Brendan.

    Just then some people in pirate uniforms appeared out of nowhere. They had some Crawdaunt in front of them.

    “You must come with us,” said one of them.

    “No!” said Brendan, “Meagan…get out of here! Go call my dad and tell him that Team Aqua are attacking!”

    “Ok!” said Meagan running to the pokemon center.

    Meagan ran into the pokemon center and called Prof Birch. Meagan told him what happened and was coming over right this way with Persian…since Jynx went with Meagan’s mom. When she hanged up the windows shattered and glass was everywhere. She hid behind the counter with Mudkip in her arms. Nurse Joy went inside where all the pokemon were and put security mode on and called Officer Jenny.

    “Where is that girl?” asked one of the guys from Team Aqua.

    “I saw her come in here,” said one of the girls.

    “Leave her alone!” cried out Brendan, “Why do you want her?”

    “She saw us and called your daddy we must eliminate her!” said the guy.

    Meagan did not know what to do and she was scared. She wanted to run away but she was to scared. She wanted her mom, her dad…anyone! Just them Prof Birch entered along with Nick.

    “Ahh Prof Birch,” said the guy, which was most likely with leader.

    “Leave my son alone!” commanded Prof Birch.

    Nick left and went behind the counter…he saw Meagan and comforted her. He had Treecko and he comforted Mudkip. They left behind the counter and went outside. Persian was waiting there and when she saw Meagan she went up to her and nuzzled her. They heard the arguing of the Prof Birch and Team Aqua. Nick left Meagan so he could go help Prof Birch. Meagan sat down and began to cry. She did not know this was going to happen. Then she heard screaming…it was Prof Birch! She ran around and saw Prof Birch lying in a puddle of his own blood. Team Aqua was laughing and Brendan was crying while Nick was protecting Prof Birch.

    “Ha! We did what we wanted to do…we are out of here!” said the leader. They left out of sight and Meagan, Nick and Prof Birch were left.

    “Prof Birch!” cried out Meagan running to him.

    “Mea…. Me…Megan…go get Nurse Joy…. Hur…hurry!” cried out Prof Birch. Meagan had his blood on her shirt and she ran to the pokemon center.

    “Nurse Joy! Help me! Prof Birch is injured he might die!” said Meagan.

    “Oh my take me to him,” said Nurse Joy.

    They ran to Prof Birch and they helped him to the pokemon center. Nurse Joy and Chansey began to heal Prof Birch. They stitched up the deep wound and cleaned him up. Meagan went into a room and changed her shirt to a clean one. She went back outside and Nick was there. Nurse Joy came out with gloves full of blood. She smiled to them and winked.

    “He is going to be all right,” said Nurse Joy.

    “Thank you Nurse Joy,” said Meagan and Nick.

    “Meagan…he want to talk to you,” said Nurse Joy.

    Meagan walked to the healing room and she sat down next to Prof Birch. Persian and Mudkip slowly followed her and waited for her.

    “Meagan,” said Prof Birch.

    “Yes,” said Meagan.

    “I want you to help safe my son,” said Prof Birch, “Use Persian…. And catch other pokemon…defeat the gym leaders…help save my son…please.”

    “I will Prof,” said Meagan.

    “Thank you,” said Prof Birch.

    Meagan walked out and saw that Nick left. Nurse Joy told her that he left and that he would meet you in Petalburg City. Meagan walked out with Persian and Mudkip and they walked to the next city.

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    Good chapters. I like how Meagan has Persian to use, but it's not really hers. Kind of original... I wonder if Ash is ever going to do that with his Mom' Mr. Mime. Keep up the good work.

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    Indeed. I wish I could think like this, but I don't. I'm too linear.

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    That was a good chapter! I can't wait for the rest of them! There is just something about your righting i like. I just dont know what. WHen I do I will tell you! Keep it up!

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    I liked this chapter!

    So, the pet Jynx is with Meagan's mom, and the pet Persian is now with Megan. So Team Magma has hired Brandon, and Prof. Birch was hurt... this is a great fic!

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    Thank you everyone who reads my story.
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    Danny: The First Capture!
    Meagan was lonely and afraid. She was afraid of Team Aqua and Magma. Lonely since she was by herself…there were no people to talk to. She thought about Brendan and Prof Birch and Nick too. Her mom, dad and her bigger brother. Suddenly Persian picked up her ears and looked around.

    “What is it girl?” asked Meagan.

    Persian prowled around Meagan and meowed. She screeched and a pokemon came out from the grass. It was white, purple head with a green spike sticking out and it floated off the ground. Persian looked at it and slashed it. The Ralts was weak and fell to the floor. Meagan got a pokeball and threw it. It shook and was captured.

    “Yay!” said Meagan, “I caught it!”

    Meagan brought the Ralts and it screamed.

    “I think she likes us,” said Meagan laughing, “This is Persian and this is Mudkip.”

    Ralts smiled at the pokemon and it went up to them.

    “Well I have two pokemon since Persian in my guardian so I cannot use her,” said Meagan.

    Persian laid down and heard a twig snap. She began to meow and placed her self in a pounce position. Mudkip and Ralts heard it too and joined Persian.

    “What is it?” Meagan asked.

    A young man came out of the bush. He wore the outfit of Morty ( the gym leader ) he had ice blue hair, sandals, a tattoo on his ankle and a blue eyes. To Meagan he was so handsome she stared at him blankly.

    “I’m sorry if I scared,” said the guy, “but….do I have something on my face?”

    Meagan snapped out of her trance,” Oh no, you just started my pokemon. And no…you…don’t have anything on your face.”

    “Oh,” said the guy, “Your Meagan right?”

    “Yeah…but how did you know?” Meagan asked.

    “Well your brother told me to come and accompany you in your journey,” said the guy, “ I’m Danny nice to meet you.”

    “Hi Danny,” said Meagan, “My brother? Where is he?”

    “He is in the Johto region,” said Danny.

    “Is he a good trainer?” Meagan asked.

    “Oh yeah,” said Danny, “He was in the top five in the Kanto region...he even beat me.”

    “Wow!” exclaimed Meagan, “So you gonna join me?”

    “Yeah,” said Danny sitting down, “So you have three pokemon.”

    “Well Persian is my protector so she does not count, I just have two,” said Meagan sitting down next to Danny.

    “Oh I see,” said Danny, “My pokemon are..”

    Out came out a Dewgong, Arcanine, Dragonite, Vileplume, Ampharos and a Espeon.

    “Wow cool pokemon,” said Meagan, “they look strong.”

    “Thanks,” said Danny, “Yours will be strong too.”

    “Thanks,” said Meagan blushing, “Do you have a girlfriend?”

    “What?” asked Danny taking back with the question.

    “Oh nothing…” said Meagan.

    Meagan and Danny got tired and went to their sleeping bag. Danny fell to sleep but Meagan would not. She looked at the sky and saw a yellow pokemon. It had some sort of gesture hat and it looked and Meagan. It smiled and vanished. Megan wondered what was it and went to sleep.

    Next: Petalburg: What a flying surprise AAAACCCCHHHHOOOO!

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    Keep it coming. Danny is such a cool character. *winks at DT* Anyway, I am at a loss for words again. I'll await the next one.

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    Yet again another good chapter. Just keep them going so you can get the other chapters! Your keeping me all wondering.

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    Cool chappie! Is the Ralts shiny?

    Write more, can't wait for more chappies!

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    Yes Ralts is a shiny Ralts.
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    Petalburg: What a flying surprise AAAACCCCHHHHOOOO!

    Waking the group went to Petalburg. It was not to far so they got there pretty fast. Danny and Meagan went to the pokemon center and healed their pokemon. Danny also deposited all his pokemon and called home. He talked to Pryce to send him Slakoth.

    “Cool pokemon,” said Meagan, “Kinda lazy though.”

    Slakoth was on the floor just scratching his head.

    “Thanks,” said Danny, “That’s how they are.”

    “Oh I see,” said Meagan,” So you going to battle the gym leaders?”

    “No,” said Danny, “Don’t need to. I came to accompany you.”

    “So you are just going to catch new pokemon?” Meagan asked.

    “Of course,” said Danny.

    “Norman is the gym leader here,” said Meagan.

    “Yeah but you need to beat four other ones since he is the 5th gym leader,” said Danny.

    “Oh,” said Meagan sadly.

    Meagan and Danny walked outside and Meagan saw Nick coming towards them. Meagan look mad at him but she waited till he came to her 1st.

    “That’s Nick,” said Meagan disgusted, “He really likes me.”

    “Do you like him?” Danny asked.

    “Like no!” exclaimed Meagan.

    Nick walked up to them and he saw Danny with Meagan.

    “Hey Meagan…who is this?” Nick asked.

    “Oh this Danny,” said Meagan, “This is Nick.”

    “Hi,” said Danny extending his hand towards Nick.

    Nick did not shake his hand and talked to Meagan, “I got you something Meagan.”

    “How could you just leave back there in Oldale?!” yelled Meagan.

    “I’m sorry,” said Nick with his head down.

    “You never thought that Team Magma or Aqua could have gotten me!” yelled Meagan.

    “No,” said Nick, “No I did not.”

    “That’s right!” exclaimed Meagan, “You never think!”

    “Well I got you this,” said Mick shamefully giving a pokeball to Meagan.

    “And you gave me a pokeball! You think this is going to make it all better! It’s probably empty!” yelled Meagan.

    “Open it, said Nick.

    Meagan threw the pokeball and a blue and white small bird came out. It had a long beak and it had a short tail. It was a Wingull! It went to Meagan and hugged her with her wings.

    “Wow! Thanks!” said Meagan hugging Nick. She noticed what she was doing and stopped, “Yuck! I hugged Nick!”

    Danny thought, “I will need to give her something better…but a Wingull is a good pokemon especially in the first gym.”

    “So I guess this is your boyfriend,” said Nick looking at Danny.

    “What!?” said Danny shocked.

    “No,” said Meagan.

    “Then why don’t you wanna go out with me?” Nick asked.

    “I would even date Wallace and Bugsy but not you! You would most likely leave me dead!” said Meagan.

    “Ugh,” said Nick walking away.

    “Finally he is gone,” said Meagan smiling.

    “Well that was unexpected,” said Danny chuckling.

    “We should go to the gym so I could go say hi to Norman,” said Meagan.

    Meagan and Danny walked to the gym and entered. Norman was right at the entrance. Meagan liked Norman because he was a handsome man and nice unlike his son.

    “Hello Meagan,” said Norman.

    “Hi,” said Meagan hugging Norman, “This is Danny.”

    “Hello,” said Danny shaking Norman hand.

    “Hi,” said Norman, “I heard about that happened. I’m sorry about Nick to. He got you that Wingull to say he is sorry.”

    “That’s ok,” said Meagan.

    “I want to go to see Prof Birch but I can’t since I am waiting for someone,” said Norman.

    “Who are you waiting for?” Meagan asked.

    “A young man named Wally. He is ill so he is going to move to Verdanturf ,” said Norman, “But he ants a pokemon so he can be happier.”

    A young man entered. He had silver hair. Shorts and a t-shirt.

    “Ahh you have finally arrived,” said Norman.

    “I’m sorry I’m late,” said Wally.

    “That’s ok,” said Norman, “This Meagan and Danny.”

    “Oh hello,” said Wally.

    “Meagan can you do me a favor?” Norman asked.

    “Sure,” responded Meagan.

    “Can you go with Wally so he can catch a pokemon,” said Norman, “Here Wally use my Zigzagoon to weaken a pokemon.”

    “Yeah sure,” said Meagan, “Danny stay here.”

    Danny nodded in approval.

    Wally and Meagan walked out of the gym and entered the place where Meagan had made camp. Wally walked around and a pokemon came out. It was Ralts, it was the normal kind not purple like Meagan’s. Wally sent out Zigzagoon and it tackled Ralts. Ralts could only growl. Zigzagoon kept tackling it and Wally caught it. They went back to the gym and Wally returned the Zigzagoon.

    “Meagan I will challenge you,” said Wally.

    “Ok,” said Meagan accepting the challenge.

    “Go Ralts!” said Wally sending out the Ralts.

    “Ok go Ralts!” said Meagan.

    “You have one too,” said Wally.

    “Yes,” said Norman, “And it is a different color too.

    “Yeah I caught it yesterday,” said Meagan.

    Ralts that belonged to Wally began to move around. Meagan’s Ralts slowly followed. Ralts #1 ( Wally ) then spun around and hit Ralts #2 ( Meagan ). Ralts#2 growled loud and Ralts #1 shook his head. Ralts #1 hit Ralts #2 and fell to the floor. All hope seemed lost to Meagan…her Ralts was going to lose. Just then Ralts #2 lowered his head. She slowly raised her hands and head and used her Confusion attack! It was a very powerful also. It confused Ralts #1 and it hit itself.

    “This battle is over!” said Norman, “Meagan is the winner!”

    “Good job,” said Wally.

    “You too. I thought I was going to loose,” said Meagan.

    “Meagan I am going to train hard so one day I can beat you,” said Wally, “Bye.”

    “Bye,” said Meagan.

    Meagan and Danny said goodbye to Norman and they walked outside. They left the town and Meagan was happy since she made a new friend. But in Petalburg woods lives a legend of a green pokemon. This green now wanders there since she got lost in time traveling. A trainer of pure heart must help it escape from the hands of evil.

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    Oh goody, here comes the neat part. Stay tuned, this gets really good. I'm sorry, I just don't want to comment on something I've read twice.

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    That was a good chapter! Nick gave Meagan a Wingull, that was sweet. And we meet Wally, this story is great!

    Keep it up!

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    Good chapters. I wonder if there's going to be a love triangle between Megean, Danny, and Nick... hmm.

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    Great chapter! Keep on posting them! Wingull is finally in it! U like you story a lot and I can't wait for the new chapters! Keep it up!

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    Petalburg Woods: Flaming Hot Magma

    “Wow Petalburg Forest is so beautiful,” said Meagan.

    “Yeah,” said Danny.

    The forest seemed like as if they were alive. Greenery everywhere, plants, flowers and pokemon. Mudkip, Ralts, Wingull and Slakoth were battling some wild pokemon to gain experience. They saw some Wurmples, Silcoon, Cascoon there but Danny did not like those neither did Meagan. Danny found a lake and they saw a Zigzagoon drinking water. It saw them and ran away. That is when they heard a yell, it was a man’s voice that was yelling help. Danny and Meagan. Ran to where the yells were coming from and saw Team Magma and a man on the floor.

    “Give me the damn scrolls!” yelled the Team Magma member.

    “No I will not give them to you,” said the man.

    “Leave him alone!” yelled Danny.

    “Ha! Your gonna stop me?” said the Team Magma member.

    “You bet,” said Danny, “Meagan 2 on 2 battle ok.”

    “Ok,” said Meagan.

    “Go Poochyena! Go Magcargo!” said the Team Magma member.

    “Go Slakoth!” said Danny.

    “GO Wingull!” said Meagan.

    Poochyena used bite and bit Slakoth on the knee. Slakoth turned around and saw the Poochyena. Slakoth yawned and it affected Poochyena, Poochyena became drowsy. Wingull flew over Magcargo and used water gun on Magcargo used fire blast. It missed Wingull and she used wing attack making it hide in it’s shell. Slakoth then began to attack the shell and Poochyena went to sleep. Wingull used wing attack and it his Poochyena making it crash into Magcargo.

    “Ahh!” cried out Tem Magma member, “First our second in command was kidnapped and now this!”

    Team Magma got his pokemon and ran away.

    “I wonder,” said Meagan.

    “What?” Danny asked with curiosity.

    “You se Brendan was kidnapped by Team Aqua and before I heard him talking about Team Aqua and how he needs to stop them,” said Meagan.

    “DO you think Brendan is the person second in command?” asked Danny.

    “Maybe,” said Meagan, “I hope not.”

    Danny walked to the guy and helped him up. They told him their names and his name was Mark.

    “So what did that guy want?” asked Meagan.

    “HE wanted these scrolls,” said Mark holding out some scrolls.

    “What do they do? Or what are they for?” Danny asked.

    “There is a legend that I believe is trapped in this forest,” said Mark, “A pokemon, a small green one named Celebi. It can time travel and somehow got transported to this forest thinking it was Ilex forest which is located in Johto. When it arrived Jirachi appeared and sealed Celebi in a tree with a green shield trapping it in the tree where it still slumbers.”

    “I saw that pokemon,” said Meagan pointing to the picture of Jirachi.

    “You did,” said Mark, “When? Or Where?”

    “After I meet Danny that night,” said Meagan.

    “You never told me,” said Danny.

    “I thought I imagined it,” said Meagan.

    “Wow I hope I can see Celebi,” said Meagan, “And Jirachi again.”

    “May I finish?” asked Mark bothered, “Jirachi put a spell on the seal or shield. The spell could only be broken if a trainer of pure heart helped Celebi out. Celebi would then be sent to Ilex Forest and rest in it’s shrine. So only a trainer of pure heart can open the seal.”

    “Wow I hope I can see Celebi,” said Meagan, “And Jirachi again.”

    “Team Magma wants these scrolls so they can control all plants and choke the water and grow more land,” said Mark, “Team Aqua wants it so he plants can choke the land and transport water where there is land.”

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    I hope you don't mind, but I will refrain from posting to this fic for a while since I've already seen this part, but know that I am still here, and I'm sure the rest of your readers will support you.

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    Great chappie!

    Wow, so we finally know about Celebi and Jirachi.

    So Brendan was kidnapped, I wonder if Meagan still likes him even though he's in Team Magma...

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    HEy! Sorry I havent posted in awhile, I have had tons of exams. Keep it up with all teh chapters! I love it! Keep it up!

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    Hey, I been catching up and this is really great. It looks like you have gotten better. I really like dhte chapter when Meagan got wingull from Nick. That was really nice and sweet of him. Then with the legendarys was really cool. It seems that you haven't posted in a while. Why haven't you? I would really like for you to continue! The shiny ralts was really cleaver to. That isn't part of Wally and the game. Good chapters.

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    Soory about not posting any more chapters but I have been busy. So here they come now.

    Petalburg Woods: Legend come to live

    Meagan and Danny said goodbye to Mark and were walking to leave the forest.

    “I’m going to miss this place,” said Meagan.

    Just then flowers and vines sprouted form the ground blocking the exit to the forest.

    “What is going on?” Meagan asked.

    “You cannot leave,” said a feminine voice, “For the trainer of pure heart is her! You must help me.”

    “Celebi?” asked the voice.

    “Yes,” said the voice.

    “The trainer is Meagan then right Celebi,” said Danny, “She is the trainer of pure heart.”

    “Meagan, she must hurry for evil lurking. Go to the lake of flowers and you will see my tree there. Be careful trainer of pure heart for Team Aqua is near,” said the voice fading away.

    “Team Aqua!” responded Meagan.

    “Lake of Flowers?” asked Danny.

    They looked around and saw a Vileplume. It walked through the forest and Danny and Meagan followed it. They reached the Lake of Flowers. The water was covered with colorful, huge flowers that overflowed and climbed up a huge tree. On the tree was a green shield that looked like something was inside it.

    “I believe that is where Celebi is,” said Meagan.

    “Your right,” said a man in a Team Aqua outfit, “And the trainer of pure heart is here to. My, my, my I got lucky today very lucky. I am Archie the leader of Team Aqua!”

    “What did you do with Brendan?” Meagan asked.

    “It does not matter,” said Archie, “He is alive and well.”

    “Leave us alone!” yelled back Danny.

    “So,” said Archie walking to the tree, “Celebi sleeps inside this tree. The young trainer is out here to. You, Meagan, will help Team Aqua obtain Celebi. With her we will choke the land and bring water everywhere! The water pokemon will be so happy!”

    “Your psycho!” yelled Meagan.

    “But you ill help me!” yelled Archie, “Go Crawdaunt!”

    A big emerged from the pokeball and stood in front of its trainer.

    “Go Mudkip!” said Meagan.

    “Go Slakoth!” said Danny.

    Crawdaunt went inside the lake but got tangled inside the roots of the flowers. Mudkip went in the lake and swam through the roots. Slakoth climbed the trees and went where Crawdaunt was. Archie ran towards Meagan but Danny tackled him throwing them both to the ground.

    “Meagan!” yelled Danny, “Go get Celebi!”

    Meagan ran to the tree but Crawdaunt saw her. It cut the roots and was going for Meagan. Slakoth jumped on him, Ralts came out and floated around Meagan. Wingull came out and perched on a branch waiting for the right moment. It used wing attack on the crab and it went in the water again. Mudkip used mud shoot and the crab could not see. Persian was watching from far away but waiting if the pokemon needed help. The pokemon were beating up Crawdaunt and it looked weak.

    “Good job,” said Meagan, “Come on Ralts…we need to help Celebi.”

    They climbed they tree and they saw Celebi sleeping. Meagan touched the green shield and it cause a ripple effect. She put her arms inside and reached for Celebi. Celebi woke up and she smiled. Meagan put her arms around Celebi and brought her out. Together they climbed the tree.

    Archie and Crawdaunt were waiting for her. Danny and the other pokemon were in a net hanging from a tree.

    “Let them go!” said Meagan.

    “I’ll let them go when you give me Celebi,” said Archie.

    “Never!” cried out Meagan, “I won’t give her to you…the hands of evil!”

    Archie laughed but then stopped when he saw Celebi.

    “You must leave the forest!” said Celebi telepathically.

    It was moving it fingers commanding the flowers and vines. They were shoot and Archie and Crawdaunt and they were caught inside of them. Celebi snapped her fingers and they were sent flying out of the forest. She then used razor leaf to cut the net.

    “Trainer of young heart,” said Celebi, “You helped me and I am grateful for your help. I give you this.”

    Celebi went to the flowers and brought out a egg. It was a light blue color.

    “This egg is yours,” said Celebi, “Thank you trainer of pure heart.”

    Celebi vanished along with her flowers. Meagan put the egg in her backpack and together they all left the forest. Happy for what they did.

    Next: Rustboro: Rock Solid!

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    You posted! Keep on posting! I hope you keep up with this story becuase its good. That was a good chapter with celeibi in it. Keep it up and keep posting!

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    Finally, you posted! A Great chapter, I loved it!

    Well, all the Pokemon helped out. Wingull seems lazy, but Slakoth seems much more active than I thought.

    Wow, Danny seems to like Meagan, and why didn't Persian battle? Archie is evil, and at least Brendan is alive and well.

    As for Celebi, yay! I hope we see it again!

    And I wonder what the egg is?

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    Hanada Tattsu: Sometimes I forget about Persian so like Persian sometimes does battle and sometimes does not.

    Rustboro: Rock Solid!

    Entering Rustboro Meagan and Danny went to the pokemon center to heal their pokemon. They ate some lunch and decided to leave the pokemon center.

    “This is where the 1st gym is,” said Danny.

    “Who is it?” Meagan asked.

    “It’ Roxanne,” said Danny, “The rock/ground leader. She uses her Geodude and her Nosepass.”

    “Will I use Mudkip,” said Meagan.

    “Mud!” cried out Mudkip.

    “And Wingull,” said Meagan.

    “Gull!” said Wingull.

    “Yeah,” said Danny, “Those will be very good in battle. Since her pokemon are weak against water. It should be a piece of cake.”

    “I hope so,” said Meagan.

    The city was huge and Danny told Meagan that the Devon Corporation was in this city. Then they passed a school where Roxanne teaches and a little girl came out running towards them. She was in a school uniform with her hair in a pony tail.

    “Are you two pokemon trainers?” she asked out of breath.

    “Yeah,” said Meagan, “I’m gonna go battle Roxanne right now.”

    “Want me to take you there?” she asked regaining her breath.

    “Yeah,” said Meagan, “I’m Meagan and this is Danny.”

    “I’m Momo,” said the girl, “I go to the school where Roxanne teaches.”

    “Cool,” said Meagan, “DO you have a pokemon?”

    “Yep,” said Meagan, “It’s a Spoink. Roxanne told me in order to finish school I must travel with a pokemon trainer for a little while. So I was wondering if I can join you two?”

    “I guess, no harm in that,” said Meagan, “So where’s your Spoink?”

    A purple pig came out, it had a pearl on it’s head and a springy tail that it bounced on.

    “Here she is,” said Momo picking it up and hugging it.

    Meagan, Danny and there new friend Momo walked to the door of the gym. When they walked inside it was all rocky. It had a lot of boulders that were everywhere. On top of the biggest pillar was Roxanne.

    “Hello Momo….I see that you found trainers to journey with,” said Roxanne in a soft voice.

    “Yes Miss Roxanne I have,” said Momo.

    “Actually I also came to battle you,” said Meagan.

    “Ah I see,” said Roxanne.

    Roxanne jumped off her pillar and landed on her feet.

    “through this battle I will know more about pokemon!” said Roxanne, “GO Geodude!”

    “Go Wingull!” said Meagan.

    Geodude tackled Wingull that crashed into a boulder. Wingull then flew in the air and Geodude began throwing rocks to Wingull. Each one missing him. Wingull used wing attack that blew away Geodude which crashed into the boulder. Geodude got up again and threw some more. Yet again each one missing Wingull. Then Wingull used water gun which hit Geodude. Geodude could no longer battle and fainted.

    “A strong trainer I am against!” said Roxanne, “Return!” GO Nosepass!”

    Wingull flew into the air and used water gun. It his Nosepass but then his it self in the boulders.

    “Perfect,” said Roxanne, “Now Nosepass Thunderbolt!”

    “What!” cried out Meagan.

    Nosepass sent a thunder bolt that hit Wingull. Wingull tired from the last battle fell to the floor and could no longer battle.

    “Return! You did good Wingull,” said Meagan, “Go Mudkip!”

    Mudkip jumped on the boulders and Nosepass crashed into them. Breaking them and Mudkip used water gun. It hit Nosepass but then Nosepass used thunderbolt which hit Mudkip! Mudkip fell to the floor and looked tired but did not want to give up. Nosepass was going to use body slam but then Mudkip moved out of the way. It then began to glow……it was evolving.

    “Its…..its….evolving!” said Meagan happily.

    Mudkip got a little taller and stood on its back legs. Her hands grew longer and her tail to. It was a Marshtomp! Nosepass got scared and used thunderbolt but it had no effect. Marshtomp got ready for her water gun and threw it at Nosepass. Nosepass was sent back to the boulders and crashed…it could battle no more. Meagan was the winner.

    “I won!” said Meagan.

    “Good job,” said Roxanne, “Here is your Stone Badge.”

    Meagan took the badge at was grateful. They left the gym and went to the pokemon center to heal there pokemon. They were on the way to Rusturf Tunnel.

    I hope you all like it.

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    Wow, great chappie!

    Momo sounds like a good character, and she has a Spoink!

    Wingull did good, and so did Mudkip, or should I say Marshtomp! Good job!

    Keep it up!

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    The gym battle! Great chapter with Marshstomp! Marshstomp beat that nosepass good! Wingull did good but Marshstomp did better. Keep it up and keep on posting!

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    Whismur’s Whispers: Team Magma Returns!

    Entering Route 116 is was getting dark so they made camp. The moon was full, the night was quiet and well the group was sitting around the fire.

    “So Momo,” said Danny, “Where are your parents?”

    “I have no parents,” said Momo sadly.

    “Oh I’m sorry,” said Danny.

    “I was raised in Rustboro by Roxanne all my life,” said Momo, “Roxanne told me that I was abandoned when I was born. She said my parents were pokemon trainers and they had to leave me.”

    “Do you know if they are still alive?” Meagan asked.

    “Roxanne said they are very alive,” said Momo, “She even said that they might be one of the Elite members.”

    “Cool,” said Meagan, “Well not really cool. Do you want to meet them again?”

    “Yeah,” said Momo, “I would love to.”

    “You know my mom is one of the elite members,” said Meagan.

    “That is so nice,” said Momo, “And your daddy?”

    “Well my dad…..I don’t know where he is,” said Meagan, “I also have a brother that is in the Johto region right now.”

    “The Johto region……I hope I can go there,” said Momo.

    “I beat you will,” said Danny,

    “And what about you Danny?” asked Momo, “What about your parents?”

    “My parents…….my parents are dead,” said Danny, “I was also abandoned on an island. Where there I was discovered by Sabrina the Kanto gym leader. She taught my psychic powers there at her gym. Then I moved to Johto where I lived with Pryce. There he taught me the powers of ice pokemon.”

    “Wow,” said Momo, “Sabrina…I have heard so many stories about her. I even heard that she is going to battle the gym leaders Tate and Liza. I hope I can go see that battle.”

    “Maybe you will,” said Danny.

    “So what pokemon do you like Momo?” asked Meagan.

    “Psychic pokemon!” said Momo out loud, “I want to be a psychic gym leader just like Sabrina.”

    “Then you can challenge Sabrina and the twins,” said Meagan.

    “That would be so cool!” said Momo.

    “So Momo who gave you that Spoink?” asked Danny.

    “Well when I was visiting my cousin Flannery,” said Momo.

    Danny interrupted her, “You are related to Flannery!?”

    “Yeah,” said Momo, “Can I finish?”

    “Go right ahead,” said Meagan.

    “Ok well she took me to Jagged Pass and well I wandered off,” said Momo, “But before that she gave me a pokeball...anyways. I wandered off and I tripped and fell on a wild Numel. The Numel got mad and began chasing me. The Numel was going to tackle me when a Spoink came out and used psybeam. It confused the Numel and it ran away. The Spoink then came and checked on me and kissed me. It searched in my pocket and brought out my pokeball. It touched the pokeball and went inside…and that’s how I caught Spoink.”

    “That reminds me of how Erika, the gym leader, got her gloom,” said Danny and he told the story.

    It was now dark and time to hit the hay. They all got in their sleeping bags and they went to sleep.

    ***Meanwhile in Rusturf Tunnel

    “Yes we found what we want,” said a Team Magma member on a phone, “Yes the Book of Continent should be in here…….I see…..so we must await till the moon turns a lava red……then the book will come out of the ground….”

    The Team Magma sat on the ground and talked on the phone. In the corner was a Whismur overhearing his conversation. Whismur then traveled out of the cave and began to walk to the grass. The moon was pink and it was time for the mating season for the Whismurs. The male Whismurs gathered around and there tip of their ears began to glow an eerie yellow. The females were timid and just looked at the males. The male ones began to cry out loud and the females whispered. Then one by one they began to pair off slowly and went back into the cave. But there was one left…the little Whismur that overheard the Team Magma conversation. The little Whismur wandered off and did not return to the cave. Whismur traveled very slowly to the camp and saw Momo. Momo’s hair was untied and Whismur began to play with the soft silky hair. Whismur then pulled to hard and Momo woke up. Momo and the Whismur both yelled waking up Danny and Meagan .

    “Ahh!” yelled Momo, “There is something in my hair!”

    Meagan ran to Momo and took out the Whismur out of her hair.

    “That’s a Whismur!” yelled Danny.

    “It’s cute,” said Meagan.

    Momo looked at it and was cute and she agreed to.

    “Put it away!” yelled Danny.

    “Why?” asked Meagan.

    “Are not aware of what those things can do?” asked Danny, “They can yell really loud and break glass. Those pokemon are deadly.”

    The Whismur then whispered.

    “Why is it whispering?” asked Momo.

    “Maybe it lost its voice,” said Meagan.

    Danny then walked up to the Whismur and felt it.

    “Yep it did lose its voice,” said Danny.

    The Whismur jumped out of Meagan’s arms and began to signal them. It moved its tiny little arms, then it drew on the ground. It drew the letters “T” and “M”. It drew some book and the moon.

    “I wonder what is it trying to tell us,” said Momo.

    “I think I know,” said Meagan, “ ‘T’ means Team ‘M” is for Magma. They must be some book that deals with the moon and they must be in Rusturf Tunnel. Is that right Whismur?”

    Whismur nodded its head and walked to the cave signaling the group. The group followed the pokemon into the cave but noticed something else. They noticed the moon and its color. A blood/lava color. They got an awkward feeling inside of them.

    The Team Magma member then looked at the shrine to the book. The moon’s light entered the cave through a little hole and shined on the shrine. Out of the shrine came blood/lava like substance. Out of the substance emerged a book…..the Book of Continent. The book that control the flow lava and control Groudon. The book floated in the substance and the Team Magma grabbed it. The ground began to shake and lava began to overflow from the ground.

    “It works!” said the Team Magma member, “The creation of land and the destruction of water has begun!”

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    Good chapter! Showed some history of Momo with her parents leaving and her wanting to be a psychic trainer. Then the part with Whismur was cool to. Keep it up and keep postin!

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    Good chapters. Sorry for not posting in a while. Momo's a pretty good character, and i like Spoink.

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