Wow, someone wrote a CCS fic. You get props just for that. Anyway, the fic was nicely done. I like the way you captured Sakura's innocent personality really well, and the characters' reflections on their relationship with Sakura were also good, to the point but not melodramatic. I like the wistful, nostagic atmosphere of the piece, and I still find it ironic that Sakura's mode of death was a bus. However, here comes the criticism. I found that the fic lacked a focal point. Maybe it was because it didn't have a proper climax, but it felt like the fic wasn't going anywhere. You know, Sakura reads out her will, everyone feels sad, the end. It's a one-shot, but usually they too have a defining point where they express whatever the author was trying to get across in writing the fic (I'm not tlaking morals here). I wsn't a fan of the lack of ending either -- to me it jus sort of seemed like, "is that it?" (This ties into the previous point as well.) Maybe flesh it out a bit more. Lastly, your opening of a new paragraph with almost every sentence reminds me of a certain writer we both know. But this sort of worked for this fic, as thoughts are often intertwined with action and dialogue, and the paragraphing was practically a necessity given the large number of characters.
So, to conclude, OMG you wrote something. :p OMG you wrote something CCS.