That's very a interesting concept, I haven't seen anything like it before. It's an intriguing idea, having a salon to beautify the spirit with various virtues. Makes me wonder what I would want if I were to go to such a place. I like the title, too; it's simple but unusual enough that it caught my eye and made me curious as to what the story was about.
I like your writing style, it's very descriptive without being overly so. Nice use of all the senses, too, that adds a nice sort of depth to the story. Even though it's a short story, I got a pretty good sense of Ms. Bennett's personality. (She could really use that Deep Soul Cleanser. No wonder she'd need to apply it so much.)
...I love reading, but I'm horrible at commenting on stories. ^_^; I can't think of anything else to say, but I really liked your story, and I hope you earn the scholarship.