Okay, one problem I see is too many people following Ash, and a small tip, write a chapter with this, okay. It is just a genreal peave, that you see a neew fic, out, but it jusst tells about a group and the people.
Ok since I am making a PKMN game I have decided to do a fic based on it.
Okay Chracters
Ash-I don't need to explain.
Brock-You know who he is.
May-yep her too.
Matt-Masato's dubeed name(Well a educated guess of what it will be)
Jessie and James-You know who they are too.
Hiro-A Pokemon Trainer who helps Ash,he has a treecko and a Electrike at the begginig of the series
Drake-A dark Gym leader after losing he journey with ash and co.He starts out with a Nuzleaf,Sableye, and Poochyena
Rose-A popular grass gym leader who is admired by many people.Once Rose loses Rose joins Ash.Rose has a Bulbasaur,weepingbell,Tangela,and a Hoppip
Okay so join them in their adventures in the land of Eaki!
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Okay, one problem I see is too many people following Ash, and a small tip, write a chapter with this, okay. It is just a genreal peave, that you see a neew fic, out, but it jusst tells about a group and the people.
If something is wrong, please say so.