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26th December 2003, 07:26 PM
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27th December 2003, 04:43 AM
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Re: The Punchy Punchy Pokemon (children's edition of "Guilty by Design")
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27th December 2003, 10:01 PM
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Elite Trainer
The Punchy Punchy Pokemon (children's edition of "Guilty by Design")
Umm... cute. I think that rhyming really makes this story cute and kiddy-like. It's just such a change from GBD. Not in a bad way, but it's really interesting how you pulled that off.
mistysakura
2007 Golden Pens: Co-winner of Best Poem (Rain Eternal) and Best Reviewer
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Brimstone Diamonds. The Artist. Tightrope. Solitude. Autopsy.
Glitter (one-shot).
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Rain Eternal -- a song.
Random thought: 2+2=5.
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29th December 2003, 08:41 PM
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The rhyme makes this fic shine...
This story is good, I read it twice.
Champ was punchy with fire, thunder, and Ice.
Rick treated him badly, but he gave his all.
But he was discarded when he took a fall.
Where was the love that this pokčmon needed.
It's place in his heart was where sadness was seeded.
Your new incarnation may better convey.
A heart-wrenching tale of a fighter astray.
I'm getting off topic and inspiration is coy.
Just want you to know that this rhyme pleased this boy.
~Legend~
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30th December 2003, 04:09 AM
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