Rate my FR Team

[SWAMPERT1]

Hello. Here is my future FR team. Its ingame but outgame ON THEY OCCASION as in maybe 4-5 times a year. The rules of this team is that i am only going to use the avaiable TM's and move tutor moves available WITHOUT TRADING. this means my Snorlax and Charizard cant both have E-Quake. The only pokemon i'll breed is a scizor for Silver Wind because that attack is killer. So here it is. Also I like my teams to be big and strong attackers. Not a lil Umbreon that uses Confuse Ray, Toxic, Attract etc. Also note that i want THESE 6 POKEMON! NO DIFFRENT FROM THESE ONES! Thanks in advance ~ Swampert1

Charizard@ Charcoal
~Flamethrower
~Rockslide
~Fly
~Blast Burn

Snorlax@ Leftovers
~Body Slam
~Rest
~Sleep Talk
~Earthquake

Gyarados@ Mystic Water
~Surf
~Ice Beam
~Body Slam
~Hyper Beam

Tyranitar@ Quick Claw
~Rock Slide
~Earthquake
~Hyper Beam
~Thunder Bolt

Dragonite@ Dragonclaw
~Dragon Claw
~Ice Beam
~Hyper Beam
~Wing Attack

Scizor@ Silver Powder
~Aerial Ace
~Metal Claw
~Silver Wind
~Swords Dance

[SWAMPERT1]

Anyone? This has been here for about three weeks now and I NEED help.

[andyizcool]

Try the Pokemon Ruby/Sapphire Team Rating Sub Forum because they'll rate Pokemon from Pokemon Colosseum/Fire Red/Leaf Green too.

[Ultimate Pikachu]

Don't mix Special and Physical Attacks.

Charizard
@
Timid/Modest
Flamethrower
Dragon Claw
Crunch

Snorlax
@Leftovers
Adamant
Return
Brick Break
Shadow Ball
Curse

Gyarados
@
Jolly
Dragon Dance
Earthquake
HP Flying
Taunt/Return

Tyranitar
@
Adamant
Dragon Dance
Earthquake
Rock Slide
Taunt/Brick Break/Return

Dragonite
@
Jolly
Dragon Dance
Return/Thunder Wave
Aerial Ace
Brick Break/Thunder Wave

Scizor
@
Adamant
Silver Wind
Swords Dance
HP Steel
Agility

Your team needs more defnsive Pokémon. Two sweepers, 1 Special and 1 Physical, are good enough. Then you need a Pokémon or two with high defenses. Then you need some to annoy people. Silk Scarf, Charcoal, Miracle Seed, Mystic Water, Magnet, Soft Sand, Hard Stone, Sharp Beak, Nevermeltice, Black Belt, Poison Barb, Twistedspoon, Silverpowder, Spell Tag, Dragon Fang, Blackglasses, and Metal Coat suck. They one increase moves by only 10%. Dragonclaw isn't an item. Gyarados has horrible Special Attack. Hyper Beam is only good on Slaking. Too many attackers. 3x weakness to Rock. Your team needs serious help. I give it a 2/10. An Umbreon could tear your team apart.