The November Contest
Arena: Beach
Referee: Hypotenuse Man
Appeal Stage One
Fresh on the heels of the September Contest, and taking place during the Grand Festival and the October Contest (which presents an interesting little time/space paradox, but I won't get into that here...), the November Contest is taking place. However, unlike the aforementioned contests, this one is in a slightly different location: the beach. It's a beautiful Halloween day - the sun is shining, the seagulls are cawing, and the pelicans are eating pigeons
. A small wooden stage has been built in a relatively calm part of the beach, far enough out of the way of the hustle and bustle. The crowd mumbles as the judges take their seats at their desk and summon the first contestant.
Silencer and Kaiza
The enthusiastic Silencer makes his way onto the stage. A fresh face in contests, but well-known in the battling field, Silencer doesn't look the least bit daunted as he releases his chipper Shellder, Kaiza, into the water. He doesn't even need to give his commands, apparently having already briefed Kaiza - the Shellder immediately jumps up and dives under the water's surface. The crowd waits silently, the air thick with anticipation. Suddenly, the water around where Kaiza disappeared begins to get turbulent... a fierce whirlpool begins to form, creating a spinning vortex going deep into the water. The whirlpool abruptly stops and inverts, creating a pillar of water up in the air, with Kaiza, mentally manipulating the water, sitting smugly on top. The crowd oohs and aahs as Silencer recalls his Pokemon and leaves the stage.
Ultimate Charizard and Blastoise
Immediately taking Silencer's place is a veteran to the battling world, a composed young man going by the name of Ultimate Charizard. He wordlessly releases his Pokemon, a Blastoise (ironically enough). He quietly gives his orders to the turtle, who nods in comprehension. UC stands back as Blastoise dives forward, withdrawing completely into his shell. Before he can hit the ground, however, Blastoise sticks his cannons back out and fires a high-pressure blast of water at the ground, turning the sand into so much mud. The Hydro Pump propels him into the air, but Blastoise cuts the water short abruptly, prompting a gasp from the audience. Still withdrawn, he slams into the ground hard, creating a fierce tremor that rips through the ground, causing a good bit of the crowd to scream and flee. Ultimate Charizard smiles sheepishly as his Blastoise gets back up and dusts himself off.
Chris 2.0 and Nobaru
Once the contest has moved to a considerably less earthquaked part of the beach ("I said I was sorry!" yells Ultimate Charizard), the familiar face of the moderator Chris 2.0 takes the stand. With a flair for the dramatic, he throws out a pitch-black Pokeball, revealing a somber Absol, Nobaru. Nobaru immediately leaps into action, summoning a huge pillar of water that surrounds the Absol. The water glows eerily as Nobaru prepares his next move. Closing his eyes, he releases a brilliant burst of light... but when he opens his eyes, he realizes that the pillar of water has already collapsed - Absol couldn't focus on keeping the Water Pulse intact while using Flash. He scowls and summons a gust of stiff wind, but the overall effect is lost.
Dragonis and Silent Bob
As Chris 2.0 disappointedly walks away from the stage, a relative newcomer steps up – Dragonis. He tosses his Pokeball to the ground, revealing a sharp burst of light first, followed by a Mr. Mime – but instead of a normal Mr. Mime’s red, this one was green. And also named Silent Bob. Dragonis steps back after giving his commands, and Silent Bob nods, focusing entirely on his task. He sits down in a lotus position and focuses his mind, levitating slightly off of the ground as a side effect. The audience oohs quietly as they await Silent Bob’s next move. Suddenly, the Mr. Mime jumps out of his trance and sends a bolt of lightning racing through the air: with nary a moment of downtime, he shuts his eyes and presses his hands to his temples, exerting his psychic force on the Thunderbolt. He manages to catch it, and begins to try and form it into the shape of a dragon. However, electricity is a tricky little thing to try and manipulate, and Silent Bob can scarcely get the shape he wants before he loses control and the Thunderbolt fizzles in the air.
Blademaster and Sir Grodus
Blademaster eagerly takes Dragonis’ place, announcing to the crowd that his Pokemon will be reenacting the legendary Independence Day. The crowd applauds politely as a Metang (infinitely inferior to the ref’s own King Ramses, of course *cough*) floats out from behind the trainer and over to the sand. Sir Grodus glows a dull blue and shuts its eyes as the sand below it begins to take form. It takes a bit of effort, but soon enough, Sir Grodus is floating above a fairly accurate scale replica of the White House. Grodus floats to the side and waves its arms slightly: a golden, translucent shield appears between the castle and the surf, the waves lapping gently at the shield. Although the shield fades into transparency quickly, the sun filters through it, creating sparkles behind the castle for a near-looking display. The serenity, however, lasts shortly. Sir Grodus hovers over the castle, making eerie spaceship-esque noises, before shutting its eyes once more and focusing. Out of nowhere, Grodus fires a brilliant concussive orange beam straight into the castle, exploding it in an impressive shower of sand.
Kevvaelli and Mistral
Hank the janitor sweeps the sand off of the stage and steps aside, just in time for the next competitor – a simultaneous newcomer and relative veteran (*blinks* that shouldn’t be possible…) named Kevvaelli. He doesn’t say a word, instead choosing to release a Pokemon into the ocean. His Pokemon, a Chinchou named Mistral, descends into the water, spinning rapidly – her motion creates a giant whirlpool trailing after her. Barely a moment passes before the Mistral bursts free from the whirlpool, jetting into the air a bit. As she lands, the orbs on Mistral’s antennae light up and spark, sending several small electrical tendrils snaking across the ocean. However, the sparks aren’t very bright, disappointing the audience somewhat.
Houndoom_Lover and Grand-Sama
Kevvaelli recalls his Chinchou and steps down. Another newcomer walks onstage (that seems to be a theme this month), a perky trainer by the name of Houndoom_Lover. She releases her Pokemon – not a Houndoom as one might expect, but a Snubbull, who tries his best to look fierce but only manages to look somewhere between “cute” and “hey, it’s frowning at me.” However, Grand-Sama’s intimidation factor gets jacked up a few points as the Snubbull roars loudly, prompting everyone in the audience as well as the judges to cover their ears – not because the Roar itself was overly loud, but because of the frightened shrieks of some of the audience members. However, the audience is soothed by the pleasant ringing of a translucent, majestic bell, tolling in front of Grand-Sama, the Snubbull focusing quietly to keep the bell going. To finish off, Grand-Sama waggles his fingers back and forth, creating a hypnotic mesmerizing rhythm. Suddenly, a giant drill materializes in front of the Snubbull, and Grand-Sama, forced to attack, chooses the nearest appropriate target: the ground. The Drill Peck starts sharply and drills a deep hole in the ground, dragging Grand-Sama behind it and leaving him at the bottom. He whines mournfully as his trainer and a few of the audience members look down at him.
River and Kablooie Louie
After Houndoom_Lover manages to extract Grand-Sama from the hole he managed to get himself stuck in and the judge’s Dugtrio fills the hole back up, a veteran contest battler takes the stage amidst a smattering of applause: it’s River and her Pokemon for this round, Kablooie Louie, the ever-grinning Electrode. River scarcely has to say a word before Louie begins to roll in place, kicking up some sand. After building up enough speed, the Electrode zooms out onto the water faster than any motorboat, spraying an impressive amount of water in the air. Louie comes to a slow stop as water falls back to the ocean around him. He floats there (it’s true! Me and my roommate figured out that Voltorbs and Electrodes should float… at least in the ocean), charging up energy, before releasing a giant bolt of electricity into the air. It arcs back down into the ocean at the same time as Louie glows a brilliant white. The two attacks let loose at the same time: the Thunder hits the water and Louie explodes, sending several good-sized shockwaves traveling back to shore, as well as providing an impressive lightshow to boot. The ref’s Poliwrath swims Louie back to shore as River leaves the stage.
Negrek and… Negrek
Another new contestant walks onstage (wow, it really is a theme, isn’t it?) and throws out his Pokeball, revealing a grey Slugma. His name was Negrek (this sentence applies to both the trainer and the Pokemon, incidentally). Negrek slowly slithers out onto the sand, leaving a slight trail of ooze behind him. Shutting his eyes, Negrek enters a moment of silent focus: the fruit of his labor is evident as a wind begins to pick up around him. As according to orders, the wind focuses on the sand around the Slugma. He emits tiny flames from his mouth and the wind picks them up, already superheated anyway. Before long, the extreme heat has transformed the top layer of sand around Negrek into a shiny layer of glass. Negrek continues on to emit a brilliant burst of light, illuminating the glass and blinding the audience… or at least that’s what the trainer wanted to happen. In reality, Negrek just sits there, confused as to why his trainer had him use an attack that he cannot possibly learn. However, he shakes it off and Hardens his skin, looking for all the world like a small Slugma statue, but Negrek’s rhythm has been thrown off too much already.
Weasel Overlord and Astarte
The final competitor is no stranger to the contest world – a rather esoteric individual by the name of Weasel Overlord. Snickering slightly, she cries havoc and lets slip the dogs of war – in this case, her Houndoom, Astarte. Astarte stalks across the stage, glaring at the audience, as she silently sends a prayer to the skies. Soon enough, it is evident that her prayer worked: the sunlight becomes intensely hot, and many spectators pull out parasols and bottles of water. Astarte continues on by breathing out a stream of fire that collects in a circle around her. The flames lick higher and higher, completely obscuring the Houndoom from view. The audience watches in suspense, wondering what will happen next. Suddenly, a magnificent yellow-green beam of condensed light shoots straight up from the center of the Fire Spin, firing way into the distance as the fire dies down. Astarte looks on smugly as the audience cheers.
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Finish!
-Scores-
Silencer: This appeal flowed well and made good use of the arena. I was impressed by the manipulation of Surf in that manner; most trainers just use it as a wave. Creativity is always welcomed.
Score: 7.2
Ultimate Charizard: This was a simple appeal, which is not a bad thing. It perfectly displayed Blastoise’s strength and tankiness. There wasn’t much to look at, but it was by no means bad.
Score: 7.0
Chris 2.0: This appeal started out well, but, as I’m sure you could tell, it fell apart in the middle. Water Pulse isn’t a trapping move, so after it’s used, it’s not going to stay around. I liked the concept, though; if you can get the same sort of an idea to work in a future contest, go for it.
Score: 4.5
Dragonis: I don’t think you weren’t here for it, but in the February contest, we had an almost identical appeal – and it did even worse because the user wasn’t a Psychic. As it is, electricity is hard to manipulate. If you had just shaped it into a dragon, it probably would have gone okay, but asking Mr. Mime to make it do aerial maneuvers at the same time was asking a bit much. Incidentally, Meditate just seemed tacked on, like it didn’t serve much purpose: it made for a very slow start.
Score: 4.2
Blademaster: An excellent appeal, if only for the creativity factor. Metang is built for those kinds of references, and this was a brilliant out-there appeal that we just don’t get very often. My only complaint is that, while Light Screen served well functionally, it wasn’t much to look at.
Score: 8.1
Kevvaelli: Hmm… I feel like we already saw the better part of this appeal with Silencer, and so I had to dock you points for that. Thunder Wave was an interesting touch, but it simply isn’t a strong enough attack to attract attention. Mistral would have to be decently far out in the ocean to make this appeal work, and so the Thunder Wave would have been hard to see (particularly if it’s blue, like it is commonly shown).
Score: 6.5
Houndoom_Lover: Ehhh… this didn’t work at all. Sorry. The Roar and Heal Bell didn’t flow well together, and Metronome felt really tacked on. The randomizer’s choice of Drill Peck also worked against you – hopefully you can see why using a random move like Metronome can be bad more often than not. My apologies.
Score: 2.0
River: I really enjoyed this. It took advantage of Electrode’s best traits – going fast and blowing up. Seeing it ‘walk’ on water was nifty too. The shock waves worked really well in the ocean, as well.
Score: 8.7
Negrek: I applaud your creativity, and this appeal would have been awesome if Slugma could learn Flash. That was the only thing standing in your way of a good score. As it was, without the Flash, this appeal fell apart in a big way.
Score: 3.5
Weasel Overlord: You’re good at this, you know? This was a cool appeal, and the sort of thing that makes me kinda want abilities in ASB – Flash Fire would have made this even better. I digress, though; the timing was great on this one, as was the diversity of the attacks. A great way to finish round 1.
Score: 8.7
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Okay, so that makes Houndoom_Lover and Negrek our unlucky departures from this round. Sorry guys, better luck next month.
Everyone else, send me a PM with your Pokemon and your appeal.